This week

1) Kaos got her 4/4 update in on the two ongoing comics.

2) I didn't get any writing in, but I will Monday and Friday of this upcoming week.

Had a comic idea that could go two ways and I'm curious what readers think would be the better.

The idea is called "The Exchange Student" and is about a family (parents, boy girl twins) meeting a French exchange student at the airport. They are surprised to see he's black and originally from a French African colony. The comic would be multiple 32 page chapters featuring the exchange student stealing the male twins girlfriend, seducing the daughter, and the mother.

Sometimes the simple story is the best.

The more complicated version would be that a black criminal sees the police at the airport and pretends to be the exchange student, surprising the family. They leave and the real exchange student is left at the airport promptly turning around and flying home. The criminal decides to hide out with the family. To tie it in with the Kaosverse, he's smuggling boob job pills and every morning slips some into the mom, daughter, and grandmother's orange juice at breakfast. He takes the son's girlfriend at a party after the son passes out. The daughter catches him masturbating, her bigger breasts making her horny for his cock. He seduces the mom at the pool, her bikini barely fits now. He tells her that in France, most women go topless anyway and unties her top. He offers to oil her up switching to her tits and getting her worked up before saying that half the beaches in France are nude, removing her bikini bottom and his suit which leads to sex. The grandmother is a fitness buff stopping by every morning for breakfast while jogging. He goes with her on the run. She pulls a muscle and he helps her home, massaging her leg and seducing her. The final chapter would be, Sledge and some other characters from the Kaosverse showing up to get the criminal just as the agency handling exchange students calls them to ask why they never picked up the French student. There's a big orgy before the black men leave, possibly taking the daughter with them to work at a Kaos Club and make pornos for them. Maybe the mom too. I might possibly add a black senior taking care of the daughter's new black cravings with Sledge and the gang being so impressed with him, they take him to.

More interesting, exciting, and ties in with the greater Kaosverse. It helps to have read my scripts for The Bikini Conspiracy 2 where I connect the series to her other comics. I'm not sure I'm going to get to this anytime soon as she has more than enough scripts to work with as it is. I also thought out two storylines for her pinups (The pinups she drew from a list I sent her BTW).

The man laid up being sponge bathed by the nurse is called Mr. Brown. I thought it be a perfect follow up to Son's Best friend's Dad where Brown gets in a motorcycle accident and the nurse slowly falls in lust for him, at first jerking him off to satisfy him, moving on to blowing him, and eventually sex as he slowly heals.

The pulled over pinup features the mayor's wife leaving a fundraiser for her husband run for Governor a little drunk and getting pulled over. She's a bitch to the black cop "Do you know who I am? I'll have your badge," etc. He gets her rant on his body camera and makes her blow him (scene from the pinup). He still wont let her drive home and takes her to a nearby run down hotel where he fucks her possibly with a little handcuffed bondage. It ends with the new governor giving him a promotion for being discreet with his wife's DUI, putting him on his wife's protection detail.