The Business Trip
Comic script copyright 2017 by Stormbringer
Characters:
Faith Mitchell- Great looking big breasted blonde. She is
dressed sexy business professional in a white blouse with a hint of a black bra
beneath and a black skirt and black high heels.
Claude Harris- Faith’s boss. Big bald black man built like a
football player. He’s older but the only sign is a white-haired goatee. He’s in
a white shirt and tie.
Synopsis: A well-dressed white woman and black man are
dining out celebrating a successful sales presentation. The black man is flirty
and it is revealed the woman is a newlywed and he has a sexual relationship
with his secretary. Her bra snaps forcing her to remove it. As they leave to
walk to a hotel, it’s pouring a freezing rain soaking both of them and sticking
to her breasts. A mix up at the hotel leaves them sharing a room and he says
he’ll take the couch. Both freezing, she takes a shower to get warm while
wearing panties and invites him in to join her saying they can stand back to back.
He comes in nude and she can’t help being impressed by his cock. She says they
can share a bed if he stays on his side. He awakes with her hand on his cock
telling him she can’t get it out of her head. He asks her to suck it, but she
doesn’t do that and gives him a hand job until deciding she has to try it out
and rides him. She tells him it’s a one time thing, but they do it doggy and
hour later and he wakes up to her giving him a blow job. They go down to
breakfast and return to fuck again before check out. He sees the bill was
slipped under the door and sees that it was her that canceled the extra room
and she confesses to getting tired of waiting for him to make a move on her.
Cover: Faith sitting across from Claude at a small table.
Her legs are crossed, her shoe dangling from her toes. They’re clinking wine
glasses.
Claude: “Great job today, Faith.”
Faith: “And to you for sealing the deal, Mr. Harris.”
Noise by glasses: clink!
Title: The Business Trip
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaoscomics
Page 1: 4 square
panels
Panel 1: Same scene
as cover. A waiter is setting their food in front of them. Claude is staring at
his phone.
Claude: “Please call me Claude when we’re off.”
Faith: “I prefer to keep it professional.”
Claude: “I’m looking at your honeymoon pics.”
Faith: “I didn’t know we were friends?”
Claude: “We’re not, your pics aren’t private.”
Panel 2: Close up of his screen. He’s holding the phone out
for her to see. The screen shows her in a tiny bikini standing by a black
islander with a steel drum.
Claude: “My favorite. You look good with a black man ”
Faith: “Remember I’m off the market. Besides, you’re dating
June.”
Claude: “We don’t date, just hook up.”
Panel 3: Close up of Faith sitting up and looking surprised.
The slightly visible bra strap over one shoulder has snapped and her cup is
askew on her breast.
Noise by strap: Snap!
Faith: “Damn!”
Claude: “What is it?”
Faith: “My bra strap just broke. Excuse me.”
Panel 4: Faith standing in a bathroom stall. Her blouse is
open down the middle. Her breasts and nipples are visible through the top.
She’s holding up the broken black bra.
Faith (thinking): Ruined and that’s my only bra.
Page 2 4 square panels
Panel 1: Faith taking her seat at the table. Nipples visible
under the blouse and there are gaps between the buttons. Harris is staring at
her tits.
Faith: “No comments please, Mr. Harris.”
Claude: “My lips are sealed, but I can’t close my eyes.”
Faith: “Sigh! Let’s walk to the motel, see if our rooms are
ready.”
Panel 2: The two standing at the door to the restaurant.
It’s pouring rain.
Claude: “Wait for it to let up?”
Faith: “I’m tired. Let’s run to that awning.”
Panel 3: Close up of the two from the front running in the
rain. The blouse is clinging to her tits. His white dress shirt is showing off
his skin.
Faith: “EEK! The rain is freezing.
Panel 4: They’re under the awning dripping wet. She has tied
her blouse up between her tits and her belly is bare. More of her breasts are
visible and her nipples hard. Maybe her eyeliner has run but it looks sexy not
messy.
Claude: “We can buy you a new bra tomorrow.”
Faith: “It’s so hard to find one that fits.”
Claude: “It’s hard alright.”
Faith: “Half a block more. Run!”
Page 3 top half, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: Front view of a dripping Faith, arms folded under
her breasts as if she’s cold. Claude is in the background at the motel front
desk.
Noise around Faith: shiver
Claude: “You’re holding our luggage.”
Panel 2: They’re in the elevator. Claude is carrying two
suitcases in each hand or they are sitting on the floor beside them.
Claude: “Bad news, but there was a mix up. They only had one
room.”
Faith: “What? We can’t share a room.”
Claude: “I’ll take the sofa. I promise to behave.”
Panel 3: Inside the room. Claude is opening his shirt
revealing a well-muscled torso. Faith is hunched over, shivering.
Claude: “Better get out of those wet clothes.”
Faith: “Jesus! They got the A/C on full blast.”
Page 4 4 square
Panel 1: Faith bent down over the A/C unit. She has stripped
to a skimpy black panty, but still has the tied up blouse on. Claude is behind
her at the entrance to the bathroom. He is down to tight crotch hugging and
bulging underwear.
Claude: “I’ll run a hot shower for you,”
Panel 2: Front view of Faith. Her top is off and her hands
are cupping over her nipples. She’s still in the panty. Claude is facing her.
His crotch might be bulging a little more. He’s hugging himself looking cold.
Faith: “Don’t you dare tell anyone about this.”
Claude: “Just hurry and warm up. I’m freezing too.”
Panel 3: Faith in the shower holding the curtain back and
looking out. He’s just outside the door, leaning on the wall.
Faith: “If you’re that cold, get in with me.”
Claude: “You sure?”
Faith: “I kept my panty on. We’ll stand back to back.”
Panel 4: Frontal view of Faith looking surprised as Claude
yanks the curtain back. His penis is sticking out, but bent down.
Faith: “Mr. Harris! I meant for you to keep your briefs on.”
Claude: “They were dry. No sense getting them wet.”
Page 5 2 vertical
panels
Panel 1: The two standing back to back in the shower. She’s
soaping her breasts.
Faith: “Wow! June said you were big, but I didn’t believe
her.”
Claude: “You should see it hard.”
Faith: “Can I?”
Panel 2: Under the shower facing each other. She’s sudsy,
her hair under the shower head. His cock is hard now and sticking straight out.
She’s looking down at her hand on his shaft.
Faith: “It’s twice as big as Tim’s penis.”
Claude: “That’s not a penis, it’s a big black cock.”
Faith: “June’s a lucky girl, Mr. Harris.”
Claude: “Best secretary I ever had.”
Page 6 4 square
Panel 1: They’re standing on both sides of the bed. Claude
is still nude with his cock sticking out. Faith has wrapped a towel around her
torso and is pulling the sheets back.
Faith: “We can share. Just stay on your side.”
Claude: “Thanks, but I sleep nude.”
Faith: “Me too. The lights will be off. Just no bragging about
sharing a bed with me.”
Panel 2: Claude sitting up in bed. One arm is out, turning
the lamp on. Faith has pulled the covers down and is holding his cock up
looking closely at it.
Header: Thirty minutes later.
Claude: “Faith?
Faith: “I thought you were asleep.”
Faith: “I can’t stop thinking about it.”
Claude: “Why doncha suck it?”
Faith: “I don’t do that, but can I jerk it off?”
Panel 3: Close up of his cock standing up. Faith is laying
between his legs. Both hands are jerking him off with motion lines around his
shaft.
Faith: “How can any woman take one this big, Mr. Harris?”
Claude: “They love it. See for yourself.”
Panel 4: Frontal view of faith squatting over his cock and
guiding it in.
Faith: “This is so wrong, but I gotta know.”
Claude: “You about to find out what a real man’s cock feels
like.”
Page 7 4 square
Panel 1: Angled side view of Faith sitting in his lap. Her
breasts are thrust out, nipples hard. Her eyes are closed just enjoying the
feeling. Her hands are on his chest.
Faith: “It feels really good. Mmmm, stop doing that.”
Claude: “Doing what?”
Faith: “Flexing your coc… ahhhhh…fuck… you’re making me CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Angled side view. She’s leaning up and he’s sucking
one nipple. Her head is thrown back in ecstasy. Half his cock is in her. Her
phone is on the night stand with vibration lines around it.
Noise around crotches: fuk fuk fuk
Noise around phone: buzz!
Claude: “looks like Tim is calling.”
Faith: “I’ll call him back, I’m about to… CUM!
Panel 3: Frontal view of her rearing up in his lap. One
black hand is squeezing her tit. An X-ray shows his cock cumming inside her.
Claude: “Gonna seed you. Is it safe?”
Faith: “Yes! Give me your CUM-MING!!!”
Faith: “That was amazing, but it’s a one time thing. I love
Tim.”
Panel 4: Side view of Claude fucking her doggy style. She’s
moaning. His hand is on one ass cheek (thumb in her ass).
Header: One hour later
Faith: “Fuck me! OHMYGAWD! What are you doing to my ass? I
love it.”
Claude: “Fuck Tim. This is my pussy now, gurl.”
Page 8 2 square left,
half page right (arrows show panels going top left to right to bottom left)
27 Close up of her rear end. His hand on one cheek, thumb in
her anus. His cock is half in her pussy and semen is spraying out around his
shaft.
Claude: “Here’s another load.”
Faith: “YES! CUMMING! Your pussy Mr. Harris.”
28 Angled view up their bodies. He’s on his back, hands
behind his head. She’s laying half on him with a leg thrown over his stomach.
Her pussy is just above his cock, leaking sperm. His cock is floppy, slick and
still dripping.
Claude: “So want that promotion?”
Faith: “Tim won’t like it.”
Claude: “Two weekends a month with me, the Vegas conference
and a raise.”
Faith: “Tim will like the extra money, but all I want is to
get a raise out of your cock.”
Claude: “All the raises you want. Let’s get some sleep.”
29 Frontal view of Faith looking at him while sucking his
cock.
Claude: “Good morning. Thought you didn’t suck cock.”
Page 9 2 square tops,
half bottom
Panel 1: Same view. His cock is out of her mouth erupting a
large load. Some is on her face and more on her chin or dripping out the sides
of her mouth.
Faith: “I thought it was time to learn. I loved it.”
Claude: “Let’s get breakfast and fuck again before
checkout.”
Faith: “Anything you want Mr. Harris.”
Panel 2: They’re returning to the hotel room. There is a
slip of paper under the door as they enter. Faith has a pull over dress on,
dark nylons and heels. He’s dressed in slacks and a tee shirt.
Claude: “You didn’t eat much breakfast?”
Faith: “Already had a full belly. June was so right about
you.”
Claude: “I asked her to talk my prowess up to you.”
Faith: “What? You had her put ideas in my head?”
Claude: “I confess. Let me get the room bill and back to
bed.”
Panel 3: His hand holding the bill with squiggles for
writing on it and BILL on the top. She is in the background nude but for a
garter, the nylons, and heels.
Claude: “What the? Cancel double rooms, request single room
as per Faith Mitchell.”
Faith: “Been waiting for you to make a move for years.
You’re all talk Mr. Harris.”
Faith: “Now come fuck me with that big black cock.”
Claude: “Yes, ma’am.”
THE END
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