Wife and the Black Gardeners 2 (comic)

The Wife and The Black Gardeners 2


Characters:

Mark Stanford- As seen in part 1.

Jerome Stanford- As seen in part 1

Donna Miller- As seen in Part 1.

Bill Miller- Donna’s husband. Good looking and fit, but Jerome towers over him and makes him look small. He’s a good match for his wife.

Janice Silverstein- The Miller’s neighbor. She will be the star of part 3. She is an older woman, mid-sixties, amazingly fit and sexy for her age. She will only appear here briefly as an intro just as Donna appeared in the first part. Her hair is white and she wears black rimmed glasses.


COVER: The Wife And The Black Gardeners 2
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaoscomics

Donna in her skimpy bikini next to a shirtless Jerome posing. Bill’s camera is in the foreground with their images on the display.

Page 1 left side a vertical panel and right 3 squares.

Panel 1: Donna posing in her bikini (the same from Part 1). She has her hands in her hair and is leaning back against a brick wall on her house or a tree in her backyard. The camera is in the foreground with Bill’s finger pressing down on the shutter. Her house isn’t as rich as the wife in part 1. Donna and Bill don’t have a pool, just a small patio with some cots and a green grass lawn maybe with some bushes and a tree. Their yard is surrounded by a wood fence forming the border with their neighbor’s yard. Their house is nice, 2 stories with a basement.

Noise by camera: CLIK!

Bill: “Alright honey, not take your top off.”

Donna: “Ha-ha. No way.

Panel 2: Elevated view of Donna showing the backyard fence and Janice is yoga pants doing yoga in the backyard. Maybe Bill’s side holding the camera is visible.

Bill: Come on, show off that hot bod.”

Donna: “Not outside. Janice is doing her yoga.”

Bill: “Inside then?”

Panel 3: Bill chasing Donna up the steps in their house.

Donna: “Promise you won’t show anybody?”

Bill: “Of course not.”

Bill (thinking) Wait til my buddies see what a hot wife I have.”

Panel 4: Donna in front of her bed, leaning forward squeezing her breasts together. She’s holding her top over her nipples, but the strings are undone and hanging down. The bottom might just show the top of Bill’s camera with his finger on it.

Noise: CLIK!

Bill: “Great. Squeeze them big titties together.”

Page 2: 4 squares

Panel 1: Donna topless standing straight up and holding her boobs up on display for the camera.

Bill (off panel): “Jesus, you are so fucking hot.”

Noise: CLIK! CLIK!

Panel 2: Donna facing away, she’s pulling the sides of her panties up so that the bottoms have slipped into her ass.

Noise: CLIK! CLIK!

Bill (off panel): “Let me see that ass.”

Panel 3: Donna facing front again either wiggling out of her bottoms or pulling the strings and the bottoms are falling down. She only has a thin strip of pubes and she’s dripping showing she’s turned on.

Noise: CLIK! CLIK!

Bill (off panel): “Those look wet!”

Donna: “Why don’t you come find out how wet.”

Panel 4: View down from Bill’s perspective of Donna on her knees sucking his penis or kissing the tip if we want to see how small he is compared to Jerome later. She’s cupping her tits and pinching her nipples. If you want an artsy shot, the whole image could be in the viewer of Bill’s camera.

Noise: CLIK!

Bill: “That’s it baby, give Lil’ Billy a kiss.”

Page 3: 2 horizontal rectangles.

Panel 1: Angled down picture showing Donna spread eagled on her back on the bed. Bill is kneeling between her legs guiding his penis in. There’s a stand behind the bed with a lamp and photo on it.

Bill: “Damn! You are wet.”

Donna: “Looks like showing off my new body turns me on.”

Bill: “Well it sure beats only having sex in the dark.”

Panel 2: Side view of Bill lying on Donna. His head is buried in her neck. Behind them the stand is visible and the photo is clear. It is either a wedding day or beach shot of the two. Donna is much heavier in the picture.

Bill: “Sorry.”

Donna: “It’s okay Bill. I like that I turn you on so much you lose control.”

Page 4 2 small square top panels. 2 vertical bottom

Panel 1: Top view of Donna looking down at a package with a ribbon on it. A note on the package says: For My Beautiful Wife. She can be dressed in anything or have a towel wrapped around her.

Panel 2: Front view of Donna’s upper torso holding up a scandalously small black bikini from the package.

Donna (thinking): You’ve got to be kidding me.

Panel 3: Donna coming out on the little patio. She’s wearing a short robe. Bill is nearby with his camera in hand. He’s wearing shorts and a tee shirt.

Donna: “Seriously Bill?”

Bill: “Aw come on Donna. I’m sure you look sexy as fuck.”

Panel 4: Donna now posing for the camera by the same wall or tree from earlier. Her new bikini is extremely small and a thong. It’s tied behind the neck and back. Bill’s camera is in the picture.

Bill: “Thanks Babe. There’s no one around.”

Noise: CLIK!

Donna: “At least Janice isn’t in her yard.”

Page 5: 1 horizontal top panel and 2 vertical bottom

Panel 1: High view of the street.  Stanford’s truck from Part 1 has pilled up on the road. Mark has gotten out the driver’s side and Jerome the passenger.  Donna’s house and Janice’s are in the scene. Donna and Bill are visible in the backyard or not. You can be as detailed or not as you want in this scene.

Mark: “I’ll start the Silverstein’s.”

Jerome: “I’ll start the Miller’s.”

Panel 2: Donna leaning forward against the wall or tree with her bare ass sticking out.

Noise: CLIK! CLIK!

Panel 3: Donna with her arm across her chest and other hand over her crotch slightly bending forward and screaming. Jerome is walking into the yard near her staring at her body. He is wearing jeans and shoes, but shirtless. He could have a weed eater over his shoulder.

Donna: “YIKES!”

Page 6: 4 square

Panel 1: Donna belting on her robe on the patio. Bill is staring at Jerome.

Jerome: “Sorry Mrs. Miller.”

Donna: “It’s okay Jerome, you startled me, that’s all.”

Bill (thinking) This guy is huge!

Panel 2: The three standing more closely together.

Donna: “Bill, this is Jerome, Mark the gardener’s son.”

Bill: “Nice to meet you.”

Donna: “We’ll go inside so you can get your work done.”

Panel 3: The kitchen inside the house. Donna is leaning against a door or wall. The robe is open showing the bikini. She is squeezing her breast and fingering her pussy, looking wanton and horny. Bill isn’t paying any attention to her. He is staring out the window at Jerome mowing or weed eating the garden.

Donna: “What ya thinking?”

Donna (thinking): Just come fuck me.

Bill: “I was wondering if Jerome would pose for me.”

Bill: “That nigger (or nigga, coon, jungle bunny) is clearly a body builder.”

Panel 4: Shot from the outside. Bill is on the patio walking towards the viewer, looking off in the distance at Jerome who is not visible. Donna is standing in the doorway, robe still open, nipples hard and clearly aroused.

Bill: “Probably got pumped up in jail. Ha ha.”

Donna: “He just got out.”

Bill: “I’m gonna go ask him.”

Donna: “But what about me? Bill… Bill?”

Donna (thinking) Shit! He ain’t listening.

Page 7: horizontal panel, 2 vertical.

Panel 1: Bill looking up at Jerome who is all sweaty now. Bill is showing him his camera

Bill: “Strictly an amateur. I’ve only shot my wife, but I’d love a male subject.”

Jerome: “I’m no fag.”

Bill: “God no. Nothing like that. Just some shirtless shots, flexing your muscles.”

Bill: “I’ll can pay you a hundred bucks.”

Panel 2: The basement. Bill is setting his camera on a tripod. The wall has a pull down beach scene for photography on it. There’s a couch in the basement and stairs going up to the ground floor. There’s also an outside exit to the yard. It might be open and light coming in. Donna is leaning over the stairs in the robe. There is also a desk or stand near the couch and 8x10 pictures are on it, but not necessarily visible in this panel. Perhaps Jerome’s feet are visible descending the steps from outside.

Donna: “What did he say?”

Bill: “He’s gonna pose when he finishes helping his dad.”

Donna: “I don’t want some thug ex-con in my house, Bill.”

Bill: “HE’S WHAT?”

Bill: “Too late. Here he comes.”

Panel 3: Jerome standing inside the basement. He is near the couch and desk with the pictures.  He is still bare chested in jeans and his arms are folded. Donna is still on the steps upstairs or her lower half is visible as she is going upstairs. Bill is attaching the camera to the tripod.

Jerome: “I’m ready.”

Bill (thinking) Shit! He does look like a convict.

Bill: “I’m almost ready.”

Bill (thinking) I’ll just take a few shots, then tell him to leave.

Donna: “I’ll be upstairs.”

Jerome: “Don’t leave on my account  Mrs. Miller.”

Page 8 2 square and a horizontal bottom.

Panel 1 View of Bill bending over his camera and Jerome is in the background holding the 8x10s on the desk. Bill’s head is up with a look of alarm on his face.

Jerome: “Your wife sure is hot, Mr. Millar.”

Panel 2: Close up of Jerome’s hand holding two pictures of Donna from earlier in the comic. One is of her in her bikini in the yard and the other is of her nude with the panties falling down.

Panel 3: View over both men’s shoulders with Jerome holding the picture of Donna looking up at the camera while kissing or blowing Bill’s penis.

Bill: “Wait Jerome, they’re private.”

Jerome: “Oh sorry, Mr. Miller.”

Jerome (thinking) Dayumn that’s a little white prick. Mrs. Miller must be starving for a real man’s cock.

Bill: “Don’t tell my wife you saw these. She’d kill me.”

Page 9 horizontal panel up top and 2 squares on the bottom

Panel 1: Side view of Bill pressing the camera button with Jerome standing before the beach scene flexing both arms.

Noise: CLIK!

Jerome: “Those pictures of your wife sure were hot.”

Bill: “Thanks. She recently lost a lot of weight and likes me taking pictures of her new body.”

Panel 2: Side view of Jerome flexing one arm.

Noise: CLIK!

Bill (off panel): “Alright, that should be good. Thanks for doing this.”

Panel 3: Rear view of Jerome, he’s pulling his jeans down revealing his ass in white briefs. His face is turned sideways.

Jerome: “No, take some more shots man.”

Bill: “What are you doing?”

Jerome: “Let me earn the money you is payin me.”

Page 10 vertical panel and 3 squares on the right.

Panel 1: Jerome standing in all his glory. There is a huge bulge under his white briefs. His hands are behind his head flexing. The camera is visible with Bill taking a picture.

Noise: CLIK!

Panel 2: Sideways view of Jerome, showing how far the bulge sticks out. He’s still flexing.

Noise: CLIK!

Panel 3: View of the back of the camera with Jerome’s bulge and the outline of his coiled cock visible through it on the viewer on the camera.

Bill (off panel thinking) That can’t be real.

Panel 4: Rear view of Jerome. He’s flexing both arms and the muscles in his back are taut. His head is turned sideways.

Noise: CLIK!

Bill (off panel): “That should do it. You can dress and go now.”

Jerome: “I’ve got an idea.”

Page 11 2 horizontal panels

Panel 1: Jerome standing in his underwear holding up the nude picture of Donna before his chest. Bill is standing before him.

Jerome: “Your wife should pose with me.”

Bill: “She wouldn’t go for it.”

Bill (thinking) Is he threatening to show her the pictures?

Jerome: “Ask her man.”

Panel 2: Donna leaning against the kitchen counter drinking a glass of wine. Her robe is open showing off her bikini body. The door to the steps downstairs is open.

Bill (from downstairs): “Honey, can you come down here?”

Donna (thinking) Good, he’s done and that nigger (or nigga etc) convict is out of my house.

Page 12   horizontal panel at top and 4 squares.

Panel 1: Donna descending the basement stairs looking down at Jerome and Bill.

Jerome: “Bill wants you to pose with me.”

Donna: “You’re kidding me.”

Bill: “Uh…yeah, the uh contrast of your skin tones should look good.”

Panel 2: Donna at the bottom of stairs looking at Jerome.

Donna: “No way.”

Jerome: “Why not? You racist or something?”

Donna: “Of course not.”

Jerome: “Then why not pose with me?”

Panel 3: Similar scene only Bill is now visible with Donna standing between them. Donna is looking at Bill.

Donna: “BILL?”

Bill: “Just a few poses, honey.”

Panel 4: View from the camera of Jerome and Donna. Donna looks mad. Jerome is helping pull the robe off her shoulders showing off her bikini again.

Donna: “Alright, but only a few.”

Donna (thinking): Jesus, I hope no one ever sees these pictures.

Panel 5: Jerome flexing. He has one arm around Donna. She’s leaning into him looking uncomfortable. She has one hand on his chest.

Noise: CLIK!

Donna (thinking) YECH! Our bodies are touching.

Donna (thinking) Hmmm, his muscles are so hard.

Page 13 Posing pinup collage.  Feel free to be creative. The central image will be of Donna posing directly in front of Jerome. Both their arms are bent making muscles. Surrounding the central picture are multiple posing pictures with CLIKS! Here and there. You can change up the poses if you prefer.
Pose 1 Main flexing biceps pose.
Pose 2 Donna sitting on Jerome’s shoulder
Pose 3 Donna kneeling holding onto Jerome’s thigh. Her eyes are staring at his bulge in disbelief.
Donna (thinking) That can’t be real
Pose 4 Jerome hugging her from behind. His big hands are palm flat just above her crotch and under her breasts.
Pose 5 Side view of Jerome pulling her to him. His crotch is directly against her ass and she looks like she’s in shock.
Donna (thinking) Holy shit!

Page 14 2 square top, and two vertical rectangles bottom.

Panel 1: Front upper torso view of Donna and Jerome smiling for the camera. Jerome is behind her with his hands on her shoulders.

Jerome: “This wasn’t so bad was it?”

Donna: “No, I actually enjoyed myself.”

Donna: “Told you I wasn’t racist.”

Noise: CLIK!

Panel 2: Same view only from behind. They are staring at Bill holding the camera at them. Jerome has moved his hands. His fingers are pinching both strings tying her bikini on.

Bill: “That should wrap it up. Thanks. I got some great shots.”

Jerome: “I feel like we just got started.”

Panel 3: View over Bill’s shoulder or of his back. Donna is walking towards him. Her top has come off and is in Jerome’s hands.  She looks shocked as she’s just realized what happened.

Donna: “Let’s see some of the shots, hon….AAAAH!

Panel 4: Donna, shoulders up and head scrunched down as she’s holding her arm across her chest (one nipple has popped out) trying to cover herself and make herself look smaller. Jerome is tossing her top away.

Donna: “MY TOP!”

Jerome: “Sorry, looks like it came untied.”

Bill (off panel) “I’ll get your robe.”

Jerome: “Wait. Lets take some tasteful shots of her topless.”

Page 15 4 even squares

Panel 1: View of Bill’s camera aimed at them. Donna looks mad. Jerome is behind her again, pulling her arm off her breasts. Her breasts are visible.

Donna: “Put that camera down.”

Donna: “I can’t believe you think this is a good idea.”

Bill (off panel) “Just a few more, honey.”

Panel 2: Front view of Donna leaning back into Jerome. His black arm is across her breasts and his other hand is flat over her lower belly. She still looks mad.

Noise: CLIK!

Bill (off panel thinking) They do look sexy together.

Panel 3: Front view posing. Jerome has both his hands covering her breasts. Her arms are reaching up around his neck. Both are now smiling for the camera.

Donna (whispering) Quit pressing your crotch against me.

Noise: CLIK!

Panel 4: Donna embracing Jerome. Her arms are around his neck, his hands are on the sides of her bottoms (you may his fingers in the strings tying her bottoms on). Her body is pressed into his, breasts smashed into his chest. They are still both smiling.

Donna (whispering) “I told you to quit pushing your crotch against me.”

Jerome (whispering): “I’m standing still baby. That’s all on you.”

Donna (thinking) SHIT! It is me.

Noise: CLIK!

Page 16 Vertical panel on left side and 2 squares on right.

Panel 1: Donna facing the camera. She looks flushed. Her nipples are super hard. Her bikini bottoms are falling down between her legs as Jerome untied them. Maybe her hand is on her forehead like she has a headache or is pondering something. Behind her Jerome is bent forward pushing his briefs down and his fat cock is springing up but not fully hard, still dangling down. Maybe Bills arm is visible holding the camera down.

Donna: “Alright, I’m done.”

Bill (off panel): “You okay? You look flushed.”

Bill: “Hey! Your panties.”

Donna: “Whoops!”

Jerome: “I got some more poses I’d like to try.”

Donna: “No, we’ve done enough.”

Panel 2: Donna facing Jerome. His cock is rising, but not sticking straight out. She’s looking down at it in disbelief.

Donna: “Oh my god!”

Jerome: “Just a few more tasteful nudes.”

Noise: “CLIK!”

Bill (off panel thinking) I should tell him to put that thing away, but I need to take some pictures of it first.

Panel 3: Side view of Donna now kneeling with Jerome’s hard cock sticking straight out. Only his lower half can be in the picture. His hands are on her shoulder.

Donna (thinking) It’s so big!

Bill (off panel) “How is this pose tasteful? It looks like your about to put your penis in her mouth.

Jerome: “This ain’t no penis Billy. This is a big black cock.”

Page 17 horizontal top panel, 2 squares at the bottom.

Panel 1: View from Jerome’s perspective of his hard cock sticking out. Donna is rearing back a little as it’s close to her face and she is looking up at him. Her nipples are hard and remain hard.

Jerome: “Just some artistic erotic shots like the ones of you with Donna.”

Jerome: “Only these will show your wife with a real man’s cock.”

Panel 2: Side view of Donna’s upper torso and Jerome’s crotch region. She now has one hand on his shaft and is staring at it in awe.

Jerome (off panel): “Act like it’s the biggest cock you ever seen.”

Donna: “It is the biggest. It’s twice Bill’s size.”

Jerome (off panel): “You getting this Billy?”

Noise: CLIK! CLIK!

Panel 3: Close up of Jerome’s cock. She’s still holding it up near the head and is lifting it up towards his stomach. Her other hand is cupping one of his balls. Her face is close to his shaft staring intently at it.

Donna: “Your balls feel so heavy.”

Noise: CLIK!

Page 18 horizontal rectangle, 2 squares, horizontal rectangle.

Panel 1: Close up of Donna’s head and Jerome’s entire shaft. The head is just inches from her mouth. Her lips are pursed like she’s about to kiss it.

Jerome (off panel): Pull it down so that it’s pointed at your mouth.”

Panel 2: Donna’s upper torso. She’s leaning forward, mouth open like she’s about to suck Jerome’s cock.

Jerome (off panel): “Open wide, like you’re about to suck it.”

Noise: CLIK!

Panel 3: View over Bill’s shoulder his camera is up aimed at Donna and Jerome. She is now kissing the tip of Jerome’s cock.

Bill (thinking) This isn’t artistic, it’s pornographic!

Jerome: “Now kiss the tip.”

Bill: “Now hold on a minute.”

Jerome: “She’s already touching it, Billy. Just shut up and take pictures.”

Panel 4: Close up of Donna’s head licking around the tip of Jerome’s cock.

Jerome (off panel): “Lick around the head.”

Page 19 horizontal panel, 2 larger vertical panels with 2 squares on the bottom.

Panel 1: Donna’s upper torso. Her mouth is now open and the tip of Jerome’s cock is in her mouth. Bill is kneeling between the two taking a picture.

Noise: CLIK!

Jerome: “Now suck my cock.”

Bill: “Whoa! That’s enough. Time to quit.”

Panel 2: The three of them standing in a circle talking. Donna is blushing and covering her breasts with an arm and her pussy with her hand. Jerome’s cock is still sticking straight out.

Bill: “Thanks. I got some great shots, but I don’t want any porn pics of my wife with a bla.. Another guy.”

Jerome: “You’re right. Let’s stick to suggestive poses.”

Donna: “We should just call it a day.”

Jerome: “Just a few more. Lie down on the carpet. Didn’t I see some tanning oil?”

Panel 3: Side view of Donna on her back. Jerome is squeezing a bottle of oil over her tits and belly with one hand. His other hand is squeezing her breast as he kneels beside her.

Jerome: “Get up on the stairs and take a shot down Billy.”

Donna: “Mmmmmm.”

Panel 4: Side view of Donna’s upper torso with both Jerome’s hands on her breasts, squeezing and pinching her nipples. His cock is jutting out over her belly.

Donna: “Aaah!”

Panel 5: God view of Jerome now straddling her belly. His cock is between her breasts. He’s squeezing her breasts together, still pinching the nipples.

Donna: “Aaaaaah!”

Page 20 horizontal top and bottom with 2 squares in the middle.

Panel 1: Side view of Donna lying on her back. Jerome is straddling her, titty fucking her while squeezing her breasts together. Motion lines show he’s pumping her breasts.

Noise: CLIK!

Noise (around her breasts): Swish! Swish! Swish!

Jerome: “You squeeze them together.”

Panel 2: Close up of her breasts from her perspective. She’s squeezing them. His cock head is shoving forwards through her breasts. She might be pinching her own nipples.

Panel 3: Close up between her legs. Jerome has just shoved two fingers into her pussy. Juice is flying out.

Noise: SQUISH!

Panel 2: God view of Donna on her back, his cock between her breasts. Her mouth is open.  Jerome is still straddling her, twisting back to finger her pussy.  Her legs are spread wide giving him access. Bill’s camera is in the picture above them. Their image is on the viewfinder.

Noise: CLIK! CLIK!

Bill (off panel): No Jerome, that’s off limits.”

Donna: “NO! Keep fingering me. Oh god!”

Bill: DONNA! You look like your about to…

Page 21 4 squares with a horizontal rectangle on back.

Panel 1: Close up of Donna’s head from the side. Her eyes are closed.

Donna: “AAAHH! CUMMING!”

Panel 2: Another close up of her pussy, showing her fluids shooting out all around his buried fingers.

Panel 3: Side view of her upper torso. His cock is rearing up through her breasts, shooting sperm along her face.

Jerome: “ME TOO! UNGH!”

Panel 4:  God view of her upper torso showing a thick stream of sperm shooting from his cock straight into her open mouth.

Panel 5: Side view of her entire body showing Jerome now sitting up and holding his cock directing his ejaculate into her mouth. She’s still squeezing her breasts, pinching her own nipples.

Noise (around throat) gulp! gulp!

Donna (thinking) His seed is so thick and rich.

Page 22 6 squares


Panel 1: Close up of Donna’s head. Her mouth is open and still filled with sperm. It’s dripping down the sides over her cheeks and chin. Maybe this image is framed through a camera lens.

Jerome (off panel): “Zoom in on her mouth Billy.”

Noise: CLIK!

Panel 2: The three upper torsos now standing. Bill and Jerome are talking. Donna is licking a bit of sperm off her finger.

Donna (thinking): His sperm tastes so good.

Bill: “You didn’t have to cum in her mouth.”

Jerome: “I’m sure it made a great shot. Tell me you got it.”

Bill: “I got it.”

Panel 3: Jerome kneeling. He’s pulling Donna down. Bill is standing nearby looking concerned.

Bill: “What are you doing?”

Jerome: “A few pics that look like Donna riding me.”

Panel 4: View from Jerome’s perspective of Donna sitting on his cock. His hands are on her tits. Hers on on his chest. Her head is back and her eyes are closed. Bill is leaning over Donna’s shoulder taking a picture.

Bill (thinking) I guess this is safe since he just came and all.

Donna (thinking) He’s so big!

Jerome: “Why don’t you oil me up?”

Panel 5: View down over Donna’s shoulder. She’s pouring some oil on his chest. Her other hand is rubbing oil into his muscles. The tip of his cock is sticking out between her legs. It’s leaking some residual sperm.

Panel 6: Side view of Donna lying lower on Jerome’s chest. Her breasts are hanging down, nipples scraping his chest. Their faces are close.

Donna: “Whoops! You’re all slippery now.”

Page 23  vertical panel and 2 squares.

Panel 1: God view of Donna laying across Jerome’s muscular chest. Their heads are turned sideways and they are kissing.

Panel 2: Elevated side view of Donna straddling him. Her head is thrown back. Her hands are on his chest. Nipples pointy and hard. Motion lines show her sliding along his cock.

Noise around their crotches: Swish! Swish! Swish!

Panel 3: Rear view close up of her ass straddling him. Her pussy lips are visible spread around his cock head.


Page 24 horizontal panel up top, vertical on left, and 2 squares on right.

Panel 1: View of Jerome’s head, down his body of Donna sitting up in his lap, she is holding the end of his cock up off his body, still pushing her pussy against this shaft. Her head is back and she’s moaning. Bill is leaning over behind her holding his camera and looking concerned.

Donna: “Oh god. Oh god. OH GOD!”

Bill: “That’s good enough Donna.”

Bill (thinking) I don’t want her to orgasm again.

Jerome: “How about some shots of you lowering yourself over my cock?”

Panel 2: Angled shots of Bill squatting and aiming the camera as Donna squats over Jerome. Her hand is on his cock holding it up.

Noise: CLIK!

Jerome: “That’s good. Lower. Lower.”

Panel 2: Close up of their crotches with his cock head poised just under her dripping labia.

Jerome (off panel): “Lower”

Panel 3: Same close up only now her pussy lips have spread around his cock head.

Donna (off panel from above): “Aaaaghhh! Cumming!”

Bill: “Donna! Get off! It’s in you!”

Page 25: horizontal panel and 2 verticals on bottom.

Panel 1: Jerome on his back, blurred motion shows his cock sticking straight up and falling to his stomach. Bill has his arm under Donna’s breasts and has pulled her off Jerome. Her legs are open and her orgasm is shooting out from her pussy.

Donna: “Noooooo!”

Noise around Jerome’s cock: SLAP!

Panel 2: Bill and Donna standing facing each other having a discussion. Jerome is standing in the distance between them, stroking his cock.

Bill: “Thank god, that thing was going in you.”

Donna: “Damn it Bill. That was going to be a huge orgasm.”

Bill: “You can’t possibly want that black man’s penis in you?”

Donna: “…….no, of course not. Sorry.”

Donna (thinking) Sorry, but I do want it and it’s not a penis Billy, it’s a big black cock.

Bill: “I’ll get rid of him and we’ll go have sex in the bedroom.”

Donna: “Okay.”

Panel 3: The three of them standing around in a circle talking. Jerome is still stroking his hard cock. Donna is staring intently at it. Bill and Jerome are staring into each other’s faces. She’s looking at it lustfully, maybe licking her lips, maybe a thought bubble of her squatting over it with the head in her or his cock shooting sperm into her mouth is coming from her head.

Bill: “We’re done for the day.”

Jerome: “Not until we take some doggy style shots.”

Bill: “No, we have enough.”

Jerome: “Just a few more Billy.”

Donna: “Yeah Billy, just a few more shots.”

Page 26 horizontal panel, vertical one on left, and 2 squares.

Panel 1: Side view of Donna on all fours with Jerome kneeling behind her. His cock is sticking straight out.

Noise: CLIK!

Jerome: “Get some shots from the front.”

Panel 2: God view of Donna’s back. Her ass is sticking up. Jerome doesn’t need to be visible, but his cock is pressed against her pussy so that her labia is opening up for him. Bill or Bill’s hands holding the camera is visible above her head.

Noise: CLIK!

Bill: “Great facial expression Honey.”

Bill: “Jerome, slide your penis between her thighs so that it looks like you’re inside her.”

Panel 3: Close up of Donna’s crotch with more of his cock head in her.

Jerome (off panel): “Sure Billy. Just let me adjust.”

Panel 4: Same close up only half Jerome’s cock has pushed inside her. She’s so aroused, fluids are shooting out all around his cock.

Jerome (off panel): “Whoops!”

Page 27 big horizontal panel, smaller horizontal, and 2 squares.

Panel 1: View from the front of Donna. Her head is rearing up and her eyes are wide in surprise. Jerome is visible above her ass. His hands are on her hips. His face doesn’t have to be in the scene but if it is, he is smirking.

Donna: “FUCK!”

Jerome: “Sorry, I slipped.”

Panel 2: Close up rear view of Donna’s rear with half Jerome’s cock in her. Bill is now kneeling behind them with the camera. He’s looking concerned or angry.

Bill: “It didn’t go in you did it…. Oh SHIT!

Jerome: “Sorry bro. She’s so wet, it slid right in.”

Bill: “Well pull it out.”

Jerome: “Get a few pictures first.”

Panel 3: Close up of Jerome’s penis sticking out of Donna. She’s dripping around it. The image could be through the camera.

Noise: “CLIK!”

Panel 4: Same view only now Jerome has pulled his cock out. It’s swollen and rampant, dripping. Her pussy is splayed open like it was still in her.

Bill (off panel): “It’s soaked.”

Jerome (off panel): “She came all over it.”

Page 28 3 horizontal panels.

Panel 1: God view of Donna’s back with ¾ of Jerome’s cock in her. One black hand is squeezing her ass cheek. Bill is bending down or kneeling looking at it.

Jerome: “Lets see how much she can take.”

Bill: “No.”

Donna: “FUCK! YES!”

Panel 2: Side view of the couple. Jerome’s cock is now buried. Bill is still watching.

Donna: “FUCK! It’s in my womb.”

Jerome: “Dats the whole thing Mrs. Miller.”

Bill: “That’s enough. Take it out.”

Donna: “NO BILL! FUCK NO! FUCK! YES! FUCK ME! FUCK ME JEROME!”

Panel 3: Side view of them showing Jerome fucking her. Motion lines around his hips, her tits shaking. SLAP SLAP around his cock. Bill looking horrified.

Bill: “Donna stop. Tell him to take his penis out.”

Jerome: “For the last time Billy. That ain’t no penis.”

Donna: “It’s a cock, a big black cock and I fucking love it.”

Page 29 2 vertical panels and a row of 3 squares on the bottom.

Panel 1: Front view of Donna rearing up on her knees. Her legs are spread and the base of Jerome’s cock and balls are visible. His black hands are squeezing her tits. He’s leering at the viewer. Her head is back and one arm is reaching behind her to caress his hair. Her eyes are closed in ecstasy.

Jerome: “Get lots of pictures Billy.”

Jerome: “I might not let you watch next time I fuck yo wife.”

Donna: “YES! Next time. Any time. My pussy is yours.”

Panel 2: Same shot. Bill’s camera is now in the picture. Jerome’s fingers are now pinching her nipples. They are kissing passionately. Juice is dripping around their crotches and maybe pooling at the floor.

Noise: “CLIK!”

Bill (thinking) Donna’s behaving like a complete slut.

Panel 3: Jerome now on his back. Donna is stooping over him, guiding his cock into her as she mounts him. Bill is sitting dejectedly on the couch watching them.

Bill: “Donna, it’s not safe for you.”

Donna: “You can’t cum in me, lover.”

Jerome: “I’ll warn ya.”

Panel 4: Side view of Bill sitting.

Bill (thinking) That cheating whore.

Panel 5: Same shot or a close up of Bill’s crotch. It now has a bulge. If his face is in the picture, he’s looking at his bulge.

Bill (thinking) Slut’s loving that big black cock.

Bill: “What the hell!”

Panel 6: Same view of angled view of Bill with his much smaller penis out. He’s jerking it off watching Donna riding Jerome.

Bill: “Give it to her Jerome. Fuck that slut good.”

Page 30 4 equal vertical panels.

Panel 1: View over Jerome’s shoulder of Donna mounted on his cock. One hand is squeezing her breast. Her head is thrown back, mouth open.

Donna: “CUMMING!

Panel 2: Donna mounted on Jerome, leaning down and he’s leaning up. His mouth is clamped around her nipple. His fingers are tugging her other nipple.

Donna: “CUMMING!”

Panel 3: He’s sitting up. Donna’s impaled on his cock. Her legs wrapped around his waist. Her breasts are mashed against his chest and she’s sucking his lower lip into her mouth.

Donna: “cumming!”

Panel 4: Jerome laying back down or sitting up on his elbows. She’s fully impaled rearing back in his lap. An X-ray view shows his cock filling her womb up with sperm.

Jerome and Donna running together: “CUMMING!”

Page 31 2 vertical panels.

Panel 1: View from Bill’s perspective.  His hand is on his penis and he is ejaculating. His ejaculate is nothing compared to Jerome. Donna is in ecstasy on Jerome’s cock. Maybe her hands are in her hair or squeezing her own breasts.

Donna: “HE’S SEEDING ME BILL!”

Panel 2: Same view. Bill’s penis is now a limp noodle. Some sperm is on his hand and maybe a drop on the tip of his penis. Beyond him, Donna is now laying between Jerome’s legs with her hands on his cock. Her tongue is out catching some of him cum. He is still ejaculating sperm into the air.

Page 32 horizontal rectangle, 2 squares, horizontal rectangle

Panel 1: Side view of Bill sitting at a desk staring at a computer. The monitor has scenes of his wife and Jerome on them. Between Bill and the computer is Jerome standing, but all that is visible of him is his hanging cock. It swollen and huge, but not hard. Sperm might still be dripping from the tip.

Jerome (off panel): “You’re really good Billy.”

Bill: “Thanks I guess.”

Jerome (off panel): “I mean it. You could go pro.”

Panel 2: Different angled view of the computer screen showing thumbnails of Donna with Jerome. Jerome is stooping now and he and Bill are staring at the screen.

Donna (off screen behind the computer): “OH GOD! FUCK ME!”

Bill: “What’s that about?”

Jerome: “Oh that’s just my dad.”

Bill: “What?”

Panel 3: Donna on her back, hips raised into Marks’s thrusting cock. He’s nude and kneeling with her knees under his arms.

Panel 4: Similar view of Donna and Mark. Bill and Jerome are in the picture. Jerome’s cock is on the rise again.

Mark: “This is some grade A white pussy.”

Bill: “Seriously Donna?”

Donna: “I love their BLACK COCKS so much.”

Jerome: “She hooked now man. I suggest you get yo camera ready.”

Page 33 horizontal panel taking up the most space, another horizontal panel and 2 squares

Panel 1: Angled shot from below Donna on her back showing her pussy leaking white sperm. Mark’s cock pulled out and above it, shooting more sperm across her belly and breasts. Jerome is kneeling above her head with his hard cock laying across her mouth and she’s licking it.

Panel 2: Donna on all fours now sucking Jerome’s cock. Mark is kneeling behind her with his cock partially limp laying on her ass.

Panel 3: Close up of Donna’s rear end and her sphincter. Mark’s cock head is near it.

Panel 4: Same close up only her sphincter is stretching open around his cock.

Donna (off panel): “HEY! Wrong hole.”

Page 34 3 horizontal panels, smallest in the middle.

Panel 1: God view of Donna’s back with half Mark’s cock sticking out of her ass. It might be bent or bowed like it’s struggling to get in. Jerome is kneeling in front of her, but she’s not sucking him, she’s nuzzling his lower shaft and balls, the main shaft and head are rising up over her head. Bill’s hands holding the camera are in the picture.

Donna: “It’s ripping my ass open.”

Noise: CLIK!

Mark (off panel): “Quit clenching dem cheeks and relax.”

Panel 2: Side view of Donna on all fours with Mark behind her, cock mostly buried. She’s holding herself up on one hand, jerking Jerome off with the other and looking behind her.

Donna: “YES! That’s it. Fuck my ass Mr. Stanford.”

Panel 3: Long shot of Donna sucking Jerome and getting reamed from behind by Mark. Bill is in the picture standing and jerking off with one hand while holding his camera out and taking pictures with his other hand.

Jerome: “Suck that black cock, slut.”

Mark: “Work that white ass.”

Bill (thinking): Yeah slut. Take those black cocks.

Page 35 split diagonally from top right to bottom left.

Panel 1: Mark is sitting back on his knees. He’s pulling Donna up into his chest. His cock is still visible sticking out of her ass. Her pussy lips are on display and open maybe still dripping some sperm from earlier. His hands are squeezing her tits from behind. Jerome is kneeling in front of her, cock sticking up hard and rampant aiming towards her pussy.

Panel 2: Same view only Jerome is now inside her pussy.  She looks like she might pass out from pleasure.

Donna: “CUMMING!”

Page 36: horizontal panel, 2 squares, larger horizontal panel.

Panel 1: Side view of the threesome. Jerome is now sitting back on his knees, arms behind him holding himself up. Donna’s breasts are mashed against his chest. They are kissing. Mark is leaning over her still fucking her ass.

Mark: “Shit! Here it cums.”

Panel 2: Close up on her lower torso. X-ray shows both cocks blowing in her womb and bowels.

Panel 3: Elevated view of Donna’s back and rear. Mark’s cock has pulled out and it blowing seed from her hair to her lower back. Her anus is open and white sperm is trickling out. The lower base of Jerome’s cock might be visible still in her.

Panel 4: Close up of Donna’s upper torso.  Jerome’s cock is free and sticking straight up, shooting sperm up and in her face. His hands are in her hair holding her head down so that she catches his ejaculate all over her face. Her mouth is open trying to catch some. Mark’s cock is visible off to the side shooting sperm on her breasts.

Noise: “CLIK! CLIK! CLIK!

Page 37: horizontal, 2 squares, horizontal.

Panel 1: Long view of the room. Donna is kneeling before the couch, head down on the cusion. Jerome’s got his jeans, but is still nude, big banana cock still hanging between his legs. Mark is dressing.  Bill is standing there with his camera.

Bill: “Thanks for showing me what a slut I have for a wife.”

Jerome: “They all turn slut once they get a taste of some black meat.”

Bill: “Yeah right. Well thanks again.”

Jerome: “What about my hundred bucks?”

Panel 2: Close up of Bill’s torso handing Jerome his camera.

Bill: “Hold this and I’ll get your money.

Panel 3: Bill facing viewer pulling out some bills. Jerome is behind him fiddling with the camera.

Bill (thinking) Am I really paying this guy for fucking my wife?

Panel 4: Bill’s back watching Jerome and Mark leave through the stairs up to the yard. Donna is in the background sitting on the couch.

Jerome: “We’ll be back next week.”

Page 38: Four even panels.

Panel 1: Front view of Donna looking exhausted on the couch. Her legs are spread displaying her pussy which is gushing sperm. Her breasts and face are also covered in cum. Her head might be back, eyes closed with a snore noise coming from her mouth.

Panel 2: Bill standing at his computer looking at his camera.

Bill (thinking): “Hey! Where’s the SD card?”

Panel 3: Jerome sitting at a table looking at a laptop. Mark is standing over him.

Mark: “What ya doin son?”

Jerome: “Looking at our pictures.”

Jerome: “Bill took some great shots.”

Panel 4: View over Jerome’s shoulder of the computer screen with one of the pics from earlier on it.

Jerome: “Let’s see what the internet thinks of these.”

Jerome: “Lots of money in good interracial porn.”

Header at bottom: To Be Continued….