Characters
Dixie Meriwether: Blonde in the confederate flag bikini. Tall at nearly 6’ with big DD breasts. Pierced navel with confederate flag pin (google confederate flag belly button ring). Tramp stamp of a confederate flag on back. Age 26. She is tanned, toned, and lithe. Her large breasts make her appear top heavy.
Rose Clark: Reddish brown haired woman in American flag bikini. She’s fair skinned. Pierced navel with sparkly diamond stud.. Shorter then Dixie, but wears high heeled sandals to appear the same height. DD breasts look bigger on her smaller frame. Age 27
Amir: Deshawn’s dad. He is heavier then his son with a beer gut, but muscular arms. His cock is about the size of Gage’s, but Amir has an unusually round knobby head.
Deshawn: Big and well muscled with a military style flat top and blue tribal tattoos. Somewhat brutish looking. He is circumcised and the longest of the group at 14” His cock head is an elongated serpent head.
Jamon: Big Jamaican bartender and roommate. He isn’t attractive. His skin is very dark and he has long dreadlocks. He also has a gold tooth. His cock is as long as Mark’s and as thick as Gages. He is uncircumcised. He is thinner and wiry, but all muscle.
Siobhan: Classic Irish red head with redder hair then Rose and paler skin with freckles. Her tits are almost as big as the flag girls. Her areolas are bigger then the girls, but fainter.
Marley: Lead singer of Rasta with Meatballs. He’s average looking and build. He has dreads and maybe one of those multicolored Rasta hats. His teeth are yellowed. Penis 13” uncircumcised. Very dark skinned.
Sammy: Band member. Short and thin. Mid thirties. Average looking. Slicked back hair and a mustache. Shortest cock of the bunch, but it’s thick and stubby, a fat 9” uncircumcised. His balls remain very big and he cums a lot. Coal black.
Reno: Band member. Best looking of the band. Fit and muscular, but not as big as Gage. He is bald, but has black sideburns that meet as a mustache, but no beard. 14” uncircumcised penis as big as Deshawn’s. The pee slit is bigger and his balls are the biggest. He’s a heavy cummer. Very dark skinned.
Unnamed band member: Unimportant.
Mark: Handsome young and muscular. Shaved bald. Perfectly streamlined 12” cock.
Gage: Big and tough looking. He looks like a weightlifter. He has a flat top hair cut. His cock is darker and slightly smaller at 11”, but thicker.
Jake: Rose’s fiance
Billy Ray: Dixie’s older husband at 42. Redneck. He wears a baseball cap and maybe a jean vest with a confederate flag on it. The cap might have the flag too. He has a big mustache but no beard.
Rod: Captain of the Big Rod. He is dark brown. He is bald, big and muscular.
Cover: Rose and Dixie in their bikinis sitting together on the couch in the guys apartment surrounded by all five of the black roommates. The men are staring at them, grasping their crotches, maybe one behind them is pulling his shirt off. They all have bulges. holding hands looking scared. If you went with sensationalist tags on the first cover add some more: Robbed! Stranded! No cash! No change of clothes!
What will they do for a place to stay?
Title: The
FLAG GIRLS
Get fucked 2
Story by Stormbringer
Page 1 2 square top panels and a large horizontal panel on the bottom.
Panel 1: Top down view of Jamon’s camaro from above the front windshield. Jamon is driving. Dixie is in the passenger seat. Rose is in back. The girl’s are in their bikinis. Jamon has a tee shirt on. Rose might have her cowboy hat on. They could all be wearing sunglasses.
Jamon: “Come to me for drinks and food, mon.”
Dixie: “Thanks!”
Jamon: “You can pay me back when yo money gets her, mon.”
Panel 2: Gage in uniform holding his hand out, keys dangling from them. Jamon and the girls are standing around him. A jeep is in the parking lot behind them.
Gage: “Good news. Your replacement jeep is here.”
Dixie: “Great.”
Rose: “Money and clothes and we can get out of here.”
Panel 3: The girls dancing, maybe two fisted with drinks. Generic young partiers surrounding them. The stage is in the background with Rasta with Meatballs singing. Maybe a guy in the background is taking their picture.
Page 2: horizontal panel, 2 squares, 2 squares.
Panel 1: Long side view of Dixie and Rose sitting at the bar. Siobhan is waiting on them. Her shirt is tied up to show her belly. BLACK is visible on the shirt. She’s wearing short shorts that hug her ass. Her navel is pierced with a spade.
Dixie: “Sorry, can Jamon wait on us?”
Siobhan: “He’s tied up, but I know your situation. I’ll pass the tab to him.
Rose: “Can we get a couple club sandwiches?”
Panel 2: close up side view. Siobhan setting two sandwiches in front of the girls.
Dixie: “What’s your shirt say?”
Panel 3: View between the two girls of Siobhan pulling her shirt down. It reads BLACK OWNED.
Dixie: “What’s that mean?”
Siobhan: “It means I only fuck black men.”
Siobhan: “I’m sure you got your share of some BBC last night.”
Panel 4: View from Siobhan’s rear as she leans over the bar talking to Rose and Dixie. The girls are looking at each other.
Dixie: “I don’t think BBC means British Broadcasting Corp.”
Siobhan: “No, it means you’re into big black cock.”
Panel 5: Close up of Rose and Dixie at the bar. One is holding the sandwich. They are looking at each other wide eyed.
Dixie: “We walked around last night advertising we were black owned.”
Rose: “Last night we were black owned.”
Page 3 4 even squares
Panel 1: View over Dixie’s shoulder of Siobhan giving her a fresh beer. Jamon is in the background busy serving people.
Dixie: “Can I ask how you became black owned?”
Siobhan: “Jamon’s not much to look at, but he’s masculine, self assured, arrogant. He doesn’t ask, he tells, and you obey. It all started a year ago….”
Panel 2: These panels are flash backs. Maybe they have cloud lines instead of straight bordering them. Siobhan standing looking up at angrily at Jamon. She is wearing a tight tank top that shows off her belly. He’s got a tight white tank that leaves his arms bare.
Header: We hired Jamon a year ago. The first day he looked down at mean and said, “I’m going to fuck you.” I was dating and in love with a charter captain. I told Jamon I was spoken for and if he spoke to me like that again, I’d charge him with sexual harassment.
Panel 3: Siobhan leaning over the bar waiting on someone. Jamon is behind her reaching up for a hanging glass with his crotch pressed against her ass.
Header: By the second day, he was running things like he was the boss. He kept brushing past me. I could feel that monster cock pressed against my ass. My pussy started getting wet.
Panel 4: The tiki bar is closed, panels dropped to enclose it. Siobhan is nude sitting on a beer cooler while Jamon is nude fucking her. Most of his cock is in her.
Header: On the third day, we closed the bar and he fucked me while my boyfriend sat on his boat waiting for me to get off. And you know what?”
Header: “What?”
Header: I did get off. I got off a lot. I got off so many times, I dumped my boyfriend and went home with Jamon. I thought we were starting a relationship. Instead, he shared me with his roommates and two days later I was wearing the gear.
Page 4: horizontal top and two vertical.
Panel 1: View between the two seated flag girls. Siobhan is standing up holding her hands apart to show how big Marley’s cock is. A small thought bubble coming from Dixie shows an image of her kissing Rose.
Siobhan: “Jamon’s cock make you do things you never thought you would.”
Dixe: “Yes, it does.”
Siobhan: “Tonight my body belongs to Rasta with Meatballs. The leads cock is this big.”
Panel 2: The girls walking side by side carrying beers. They are near boats and a dock. Dixie’s cheeks are blushing.
Dixie: “Jamon broke her down in three days.”
Rose: (SNORT! Around her face): “You broke down a minute after seeing Mark’s cock.”
Dixie: You didn’t last much longer.”
Panel 3: View over the girl’s shoulders down the dock. Boats are docked in births. Rod is standing on one several boats down, arms crossed wearing a white tee shirt and white shorts. He is staring at them. On the back of the boat near the motor is the boat’s name BIG ROD
Rose: “There’s another one checking us out.”
Dixie: “Hmmm, I bet the man matches the boat.”
Rose: “What? Oh BIG ROD.”
Noise: ha ha ha coming from their mouths
Page 5: horizontal, 2 squares, horizontal.
Panel 1: The side of the pool. Rose is in it leaning against the wall. Dixie is seated on the side, legs in the water. Mark is visible seated in a lifeguard chair. A man in a bathing suit is leaning over them. Dixie is holding up her hand showing her ring. Rose has her hand up showing her ring.
Dixie: “Married.”
Rose: “Engaged.”
Panel 2: Dixie leaning back with a drink in her hand as a handsome guy leans to closely into her. Her other hand is up showing her ring.
Dixie: “Sorry, I’m married.”
Panel 3: Dixie and Rose hugging each other tightly cheek to cheek. Between two guys shoulders.
Rose: “Sorry we’re lesbians.”
Guys together: “DAYUMN!”
Panel 4: The backs of Rose, Dixie, Gage, and Mark seated at the bar while Jamon waits on them. It’s darker now, maybe the sun is setting.
Dixie: “I think we’re too drunk to drive.”
Mark: “We’ll drive you back. We can pick up some pizzas on the way.”
Jamon: “Ja mon, I’ll drive the jeep back for ya.”
Page 6 horizontal and 4 squares
Panel 1: Long view of the apartment. Dixie, Gage, and Rose are on the couch. Mark is in a comfy chair at the end of the coffee table. He’s close to Dixie. Jamon is coming in the front door. The group is drinking and eating pizza. There’s an open pizza box on the coffee table. Both girls have taken off their bikini tops and put their BBC shirts back on.
Jamon: “Looks like I’m late for the party.”
Rose: “You got a lot of catching up to do.”
Panel 2: Jamon squeezing down the side of the couch squeezing Dixie between him and Gage. He’s holding up a joint.
Jamon: “Fasta way to feel good, mon.”
Panel 3: Front view of the couch going Jamon, Dixie, Gage, Rose. Smoke is just under all fours noses. Gage is trying to pass it to Rose.
Dixie: “No thanks.”
Rose: “No, I’ve never done drugs.”
Jamon: “It’s a religion to me. It brings me closer to god.”
Panel 4: Close up of Jamon and Dixie. She’s taking it up to her mouth for a hit.
Dixie: “What the hell! It’s been seven years, but why not?”
Panel 5: Close up of Gage and Rose. Dixie’s arm is in the pic holding the joint to Rose.
Dixie (off panel): “Good stuff. Try it Rosie. ”
Rose: “I couldn’t. Jake worked an anti-drug campaign in college. He’d disapprove.”
Dixie (off panel): Taking a hit would be the last thing he’s disapprove of this weekend.”
Page 7: 2 square panels, and 2 horizontal panels with the bottom the biggest.
Panel 1: Front view of Dixie, Gage and Rose. Rose is putting the joint up to her lips.
Dixie: “One hit Rosie. One more new thing to try this weekend. God I’m hungry. Is there any pizza left.”
Rose: “Alright, I’ll try it.”
Panel 2: Close up of Rose’s upper torso, leaning back, eyes close, exhaling smoke.
Panel 3: View over Rose’s shoulder of her leaning forward looking down the couch. Jamon is now kissing Dixie while squeezing one of her nipples. Gage is bent down and sucking on the other nipple.
Rose (thinking): I must be hallucinating!
Panel 4: Long group view of the couch. Jamon is standing at the end of the couch now. His pants are down and Dixie is sucking his cock. Her top is completely off. Gage is next to her. He has pulled his pants down and Dixie is jerking him off. Maybe motion lines around her hand. Mark is now squatting in front of Rose. Her shirt is pulled up and he is sucking one nipple. Rose is looking towards Dixie.
Rose (thinking): She can’t really be thinking of doing two guys at once?
Page 8 horizontal panel, 2 squares, horizontal panel.
Panel 1: God view down of the couch. Jamon and Gage are now seated. Dixie is kneeling between them now sucking Gage’s cock. Her hand is on Jamon’s cock jerking is. Rose is seated, spread legged. Her panties are gone (maybe they are visible beside her or on the floor. Mark is kneeling between her legs and the tip of his cock is in her pussy.
Jamon: “Get on da floor slut. I wanna fuck dat white pussy.”
Rose: “Oh god Mark. Stop! Not here.”
Mark: “Why babt?”
Rose: “I don’t want them watching.”
Panel 2: Mark leading Rose by the hand at the top of the stairs near the bathroom. They are both naked and his cock is sticking straight out.
Mark: “Let’s use Jamon’s room. He’s got a big bed.”
Rose: “Sorry. I didn’t know Dixie was such a slut. Fooling around with two guys.”
Mark: “Think of the possibilities?”
Panel 3: Angled God view looking up Rose’s body as she lies on a big bed. Mark is kneeling, pushing his cock head into her. There’s a table by the bed with an alarm, lamp, and a bong. There’s also a picture of Bob Marley on the wall.
Rose: “You’re as big as two guys anyway.”
Mark: “Two white guys.”
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie on all fours. Jamon is giving it to her from behind. She is sucking Jamon’s cock.
Noise around crotches: Fwap! Fwap! Fwap!
Noise around her mouth: Slurp! Slurp! Slurp!
Dixie (thinking): This is so fucked up and I like it.
Page 9 2 square, large horizontal in the middle, smaller at bottom.
Panel 1: Night time view outside the front of the condo of two motorcycles pulling into the front of the house.
Panel 2: God view of Dixie’s back. Jamon has buried his cock and an X-ray shows him cumming. Dixie’s hand is on Gage’s cock while her face is sideways against it, her mouth open as she screams.
Dixie: “AAAHHH! CUMMING!”
Panel 3: Elevated view from ceiling showing the full room. Dixie is on her knees sucking Gage. Her pussy is open and sperm is pouring out. Jamon is laying back against the couch, his big banana cock splayed out on the floor. Amir has entered the room, holding or setting his helmet down. Deshawn is lifting the helmet over his head.
Amir: “Would ya look at dat slut? Room for one more?”
Deshawn: “Make that two more.”
Gage: “Naw, we got this one.”
Jamon: “Mark took another whore upstairs mon. Go bother him.”
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie’s upper torso, boobs hanging down. An X-ray shows his cock cumming down her throat.
Dixie (thinking): Yummy!
Page 10 horizontal panel, vertical panel, and two squares.
Panel 1: Side view of Rose and Mark. Rose is on her back, Mark kneeling holding her up by her knees so that her hips are off the ground as he fucks her. Amir is visible entering the room, with Deshawn’s head behind Amir’s.
Rose: “CUMMING!”
Rose (thinking): That’s my third one.
Noise around crotches: Fwap! Fwap! Fwap!
Mark: “I want you to ride me.”
Panel 2: View from Mark’s perspective of Rose lowering herself over his cock. Amire and Deshawn are undressing behind her.
Rose: “I’m gonna fuck that black cock. I’m gonna fuck it good, Mark.”
Mark: “That’s it. Get into it slut. Fuck that black cock.”
Rose (thinking): Shit! I’m gonna cum again.
Panel 3: Close up view of her ass from an angle showing Mark’s cock buried in her, his testicles, her orgasm leaking out all over it. Her anus is thrust up, tight and puckered and Amir’s cock head is approaching it.
Rose (off panel): YES!! CUMMING!
Panel 4: Same view, only maybe a little more pulled back and Amir’s cock head has pushed through her anus.
Rose: “AAH! OW! AAARGH! OHMYGOD!! Can’t stop CCUUMMIINNGG!!”
Page 11: horizontal, 2 squares, horizontal
Panel 1: Side view of Rose sandwiched between Mark and Amir getting it good and loving it. Her mouth is open as she screams in orgasm.
Noise around both her crotch and ass: FWAP! FWAP!
Rose: “AAAAHHHH!”
Rose (thinking):Feels like Jamon’s cock in my ass. So good. Cumming again and again.
Panel 2: Amir and Rose’s upper bodies. He’s reached around her and is squeezing her tits. Her eyes are closed. She’s turned her head to meet his lips and they are kissing.
Panel 3: Rose’s upper torso leaning forward. Amir’s arms are still reaching around squeezing her tits. Her eyes are still closed. Her mouth is open in an orgasmic scream. Deshawn’s black cock head is almost in her mouth.
Rose: “OH GOD! CUMMING!
Panel 4: Side view like in panel 1 only Deshawn is now kneeling above Mark’s head and she has all three cocks in her. Her eyes are now open staring down Deshawn’s shaft.
Noise around mouth: Thmmpph!
Noise around crotches: Fwap! Fwap!
Rose (thinking): So good. I must be a bigger slut then Dixie.
Page 12 2 square, large horizontal in middle and smaller on bottom
Panel 1: View from Gage’s shoulder. He’s on his back leaning up and sucking one of Dixie’s nipples. She’s half mounted on his cock. Jamon is stroking his cock behind her. Her eyes are closed with pleasure.
Dixie: “Oh! Oh! Oh gawd! I’m cumming!
Panel 2: View from rear of Jamon’s cock slipping into her stretched anus as she rides Gage.
Dixie: “OW! Take it slow Jamon.”
Panel 3: Side view of Dixie on all fours over Gage. He’s sucking one nipple. Both cocks are deep in her.
Jamon: “Ya lovin dis, slut?”
Dixie: “YES! I love it.”
Jamon: “What better den one big black cock, mon?”
Dixie: “TWO! OH GOD! Two big black cocks. Gonna cum. Fuck me. Fuck my pussy. Fuck my ass with your big nigger cocks. JEEZUS! CUMMING!”
Panel 4: View from the side, she’s practically collapsed on Gage. Jamon is leaning over her. An X-ray shows them both cumming inside her.
Dixie: “AAH! AH! AAHH! UUNNGGHH!!
Page 13 4 equal panels.
Panel 1: Side view of Rose’s upper torso. She’s kissing the head of Deshawn’s cock. Showing it to be the longest yet. She’s looking up his muscular body at the tribal tattoos.
Rose (thinking) This thing is a monster!
Panel 2: Rose’s torso sitting in Mark’s lap. An X-ray shows him cumming in her. Her face is turned to the side and about half Deshawn’s cock is down her throat. Amir’s arms are around her squeezing her tits.
Rose (thinking): Cumming again.
Panel 3: God view down. X-ray shows Amir now flooding her ass. She’s still sucking Deshawn and Mark is still under her.
Panel 4: View from the rear. She’s still sitting on Mark. Her ass is a hole leaking sperm all over Mark’s balls. She’s still sucking Deshawn. Amir is now standing where she can see him. His cock is still rampant hard from just cumming. Sperm is dripping from the tip.
Rose (thinking) Look at the tip of that thing?
Rose (thinking) Where have I seen these men before?
Page 14 vertical panel on left, 3 squares on right.
Panel 1: Close up of Rose’s head with Deshawn’s cock down her throat angled to see her face. Amir is standing right beside her and she’s looking up at him. His cock is now bent down or hanging. Amir is grinning.
Rose (thinking): Wait a sec… Oh shit! These are the men who…”
Panel 2: Close up of Rose’s head with Deshawn’s cock sticking out. He’s cumming and her cheeks are bulging out. Sperm is flying out around her lips.
Rose: “GACK!”
Panel 3: Side view of Rose sucking Deshawn. An x-ray shows the head of his cock in her mouth squirting semen and it’s running down her throat.
Noise around throat: Gulp! Gulp! Gulp!
Panel 4: Side view of Rose with both hands on his shaft. Her mouth is open. The head is no longer in her mouth, but it is still shooting sperm into her mouth. Spots on her nose and around her lips are coated in semen.
Rose (thinking): His seed is so delicious.
Page 15 4 squares
Panel 1: Angled view up of Rose with her tongue out, jerking the remaining sperm out of Deshawn’s cock. Her tongue is out to catch a large glob of semen falling from the tip.
Rose: “You’re the men who robbed us.”
Deshawn: “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”
Panel 2: View of Rose’s back. She’s now standing. Amir and Deshawn are on one side. Mark is standing between them.
Mark: “What’s going on?”
Rose: “These men robbed our jeep.”
Amir: “Fuck you bitch. You and your racist friend think we stole from ya just cause we’re black.”
Panel 3: Same group view, but over Mark’s shoulder.
Mark: “These are our roommates. The loud one is Amir and muscle boy is his son, Deshawn.”
Rose: “They robbed us.”
Amir: “BULL SHIT!”
Deshawn: “We gave you a hard time, but we didn’t rob you.”
Panel 4: Group view of their upper torso’s talking.
Mark: “Their tires were slashed, money and luggage stolen.”
Amir: “So they whored out their bodies for a place to sleep?”
Rose: “NO!”
Mark: “No, we offered to let them stay. The whoring part is a bonus.”
Rose: “Mark?”
Page 16 3 squares, horizontal rectangle, 2 squares
Panel 1: Amir pushing Rose down on the bed. His cock is swollen, but hanging.
Amir: “On your back, bitch. I’m gonna fuck dat white pussy now.”
Panel 2: Amir kneeling between Rose’s legs. He’s grabbing his cock by the base and smacking it down on her pubic hair to make it hard. Right now it’s huge, but floppy.
Noise: SLAP! SLAP!
Panel 3: Close up of his now hard cock pushing into her.
Rose (off panel): “YES!!”
Panel 4: Side view of Amir kneeling, lifting Rose’s ass off the bed as he fucks her hard.
Noise: WHAM! WHAM! WHAM!
Rose (thinking) This crude obnoxious jerk is making me cum
Rose: “Fuck me! Fuck me with that big black cock.”
Panel 5: Close up X-ray of his cock filling her womb with sperm.
Noise: Sploosh!
Panel 6: View from Rose’s perspective. Her crotch is raised up. Amir is stepping aside and Deshawn is bending his cock down to fuck her.
Page 17 horizontal rectangle, vertical rectangle, 2 squares right.
Panel 1: God view of Rose. Deshawn is buried deep in her pussy, x-ray shows him cumming while Mark is kneeling above her head and his cock is laying over her face. She is licking or kissing it.
Noise: Sploosh!
Header: In 24 hours, Rose had doubled the number of men she’d been with.
Panel 2: Rose vertically sandwiched between Gage and Deshawn. Gage is in her pussy, Deshawn her ass. She’s pressed hard against Gage and is kissing him.
Header: The night became a blur of fucking and sucking.
Panel 3: View above Rose’s head of Jamon titty fucking her. His sperm is shooting out from the head. He’s squeezing her breasts together and the end of his cock it rising up hard and rampant.
Noise: SQUIRT!
Panel 4: Rose’s upper torso laying on the bed. Her head is sideways eyes closed and she’s asleep. Two random roommates black cocks are squirting all over her belly and tits.
Noise: Zzzzzz around her mouth,
Noise: Squirt and Sploosh around their cocks. Maybe a splat where their semen is falling.
Header: It was too much for the young woman and she fell fast asleep, satisfied, but exhausted.
Page 18 horizontal top panel and 3 vertical panels.
Panel 1: View of the front of the couch. Dixie is spread out on it. She’s yawning (Yawn! By her mouth). Her legs are spread. She is a complete mess. Dried sperm is around her crotch, belly, breasts, mouth. Maybe strands of hair is sticking up from crusted sperm.
Dixie (thinking): What a night? God I’m a mess. Better go get a shower.
Panel 2: Front view of Dixie in the shower. She’s cleaning her boobs while her head is thrown back under the spray.
Panel 3: Dixie walking down the stairs with a towel around her waist. Her hair is wet.
Panel 4: Dixie down by the couch. She’s dropped the towel and is holding her bikini top in one hand and her BBC tee shirt in the other about to dress. Deshawn is behind her coming down the stairs nude. His cock is plump but dangling.
Deshawn: “Good morning.”
Page 19 2 vertical, horizontal, 2 squares.
Panel 1: Dixie turned to face Deshawn. She’s looking at his cock which has now risen.
Deshawn: “I’m Deshawn. I see you cleaned up for me.”
Dixie: “Dixie. How do you want me?”
Deshawn: “Ride me.”
Panel 2: View from Deshawn’s perspective of Dixie squatting over him and holding his cock in position. They are near the couch and coffee table.
Dixie: “You have got one big black cock, Deshawn.”
Panel 3: Side view of Dixie seated in his lap. His hand is coming off her ass and there’s a red hand print on one cheek from where he spanked her.
Dixie: “It’s so good! You have the biggest blackest nigger cock in the world.”
Deshawn: “Don’t you forget it.”
Noise around ass: Slap!
Panel 4: View from above Deshawn’s shoulder showing him squeezing her tits and they are kissing. Amir is behind her, stroking his cock.
Amir: “Open her ass up, Shawn.”
Panel 5: View of her ass with Deshawn reaching around and spreading her cheeks as Amir is bending his cock down towards her anus. Dixie’s head is turned looking behind her.
Deshawn: “There ya go, pop.”
Dixie: “Pop!”
Deshawn: ‘He’s my dad.”
Amir: “And a proud father I am.”
Page 20 2 squares, vertical, 2 squares
Panel 1: Close up of her rear end with Deshawn’s shaft visible in her pussy and the big head of Amir’s cock spreading her rectum open.
Noise: OW! OW! OW!
Panel 2: Front view from Deshawn’s perspective of Dixie rising up and he’s squeezing her tits. Amir is looking over her shoulder and her head is turned towards Amir.
Dixie: “OW! That thing’s as big as a golf ball.”
Panel 3: View of the three some near the couch with Mark now seated in the chair, eating cereal. He’s got his lifeguard uniform on and is watching the action. Dixie is screaming.
Dixie: “Shit! Shit! I’m cumming!”
Amir: “This hot bitches ass is fucking milking the spunk outta my cock.”
Amir: “I hate the racist tramp stamp though.”
Mark: “I shot my load all over it. Covered it up.”
Amir: “HA HA! Good idea.”
Panel 4: Rose in her bikini in the kitchen. The living room and the action is visible behind her.
Mark: “Hey Rosie! Watcha doin?”
Rose: Looking for something to eat. I’m starving.”
Mark: “Well I gotta nice thick protein shake for ya. Give me one for the road.”
Panel 5: “Side view of Mark sitting and still eating the cereal. Rose is kneeling before him yanking his shorts down and his cock has sprung up.
Page 21 horizontal panel, 2 squares, horizontal panel, 2 squares.
Panel 1: Pulled back group shot showing Rose blowing Mark and Deshawn on the ground with Dixie riding him and Amir plowing her ass. Mark is untying Rose’s top.
Noises: Slurp! Slurp! (around Rose) Ah! Ah! Aaaaah! (around Dixie’s mouth) Fap! Fap! Fap! (around Dixie’s ass.
Amir: “Shit! Here it comes.”
Panel 2: Close up of Dixie’s rear. She’s still on Deshawn. Amir’s cock is spraying all over her confederate flag tattoo. Her anus is a sperm filled hole and his semen is trickling out.
Noise: Splat! (around tattoo) Plop! (around her anus)
Amir (off panel): “Lets drown that Southern pride in a sea of black cum.”
Panel 3: Close up of Mark’s crotch with Rose sucking half his cock. Her hand is holding the base. His hands holding the cereal bowl and spoon are above her head.
Noise: Slurp! Slurp! Slurp!
Panel 4: Close up of Dixie now on her back with Deshawn kneeling between her legs and lifting her ass off the floor. Amir is standing over her head, his cock is sticking out, but limp and it’s dripping semen on her face. Xray shows Deshawn cumming in her pussy.
Panel 5: Close up of Rose sucking Mark. Only the head is in her mouth and her cheeks are bulging with sperm squirting out around her lips.
Noise: Gulp! Gulp! Gulp!
Panel 6: Close up of Dixie’s body from over her thigh. Her pussy is open and leaking sperm. Deshawn’s cock is blasting a huge load over her chest and breasts.
Noise: Spurt! Spurt! Spurt!
Page 22 horizontal panel, 3 small squares, and larger horizontal panel
Panel 1: God view of Dixie. She’s got sperm all over her face, chests, and breasts. Dehawn’s cock is visible with him holding it. It is hosing sperm into a big pile just under her breasts and between her ribs. Her confederate belly button piercing is glistening.
Panel 2: Close up of her belly. His sperm is sliding down to her navel. The end of the glob has reached her pin.
Deshawn (off panel): “Going.”
Panel 3: Same picture. The river of sperm is pooling in her belly. The pin is covered, but visible.
Deshawn (off panel) “Going.”
Panel 4: Same picture, but now there’s just a pool of sperm on her belly. The image could be pulled back to show more of her stomach then the other two images.
Deshawn (off panel): “Gone.”
Panel 5: Pulled back view of room. Amir on the couch. Deshawn still kneeling by her. Dixie on floor holding her belly in with the pool of sperm. Rose is kneeling topless, but her bottoms are on. Mark’s legs may be visible in the chair near Rose.
Deshawn: “Drowned that racist flag.”
Dixie: “Dammit! It’s not racist.”
Deshawn: “It’s about slavery.”
Amir: “Leave her alone. Lets disagree, but respect her heritage.”
Dixie: “Thank you.”
Page 23 horizotal panel, 2 squares, horizontal panel
Panel 1: View of Dixie on her back with Rose and Deshawn still kneeling beside her. Amir is in the picture on the couch. Deshawn’s hand is on Rose’s shoulder.
Amir: “Rose, why don’t you clean up that mess on Dixie’s belly?”
Rose: “Where do you keep the paper towels?”
Deshawn: “Just use your mouth.”
Panel 2: Dixie’s torso, breasts to crotch. Deshawn’s hand is on Rose’s head or shoulder and her face is in the pool of sperm on Dixie’s belly.
Noise: Splash!
Panel 2: Close up side view of Rose’s face, her tongue is out lapping up sperm on Dixie’s belly.
Noise: Lap! Lap! Lap!
Panel 3: Close up of Dixie’s breasts, her nipples are hard and covered in sperm. Rose is lapping near her nipple.
Noise: Lap! Lap! Lap!
Panel 4: God view of angled down view of Dixie’s entire body. Rose’s mouth is right over her navel, cheeks hollow as she’s sucking all the sperm out.
Noise: Slooorrp!
Page 24 vertical panel, 2 squares, horizontal panel.
Panel 1: Rose sitting up kneeling above Dixie’s belly. She’s licking her lips. Dixie’s belly is clean. Amir is visible behind her on the couch.
Amir: “How’d it taste?”
Rose: “Good. It was cold and it’s better hot, but still good.”
Panel 2: Close up of Dixie’s belly with her flag pin clean and glistening. Rose’s bikini crotch visible still kneeling.
Rose (off panel): “Look Dix, all clean.”
Panel 3: Amir and Deshawn going upstairs.
Deshawn: “Come on, Pop. We gotta get to Miami.”
Panel 4: Living room shot. Mark at the door and the two girls heading to the stairs.
Mark: “I gotta get to work. See ya there.”
Dixie: “We’re going to take a nap first.”
Rose: “See ya later this afternoon.”
Page 25 full sized left vertical panel, right side is a top square and a larger vertical on bottom.
Panel 1: Dixie and Rose laying in bed together, facing each other, nipples touching. It’s intimate. Dixie has her arms out and her hand is on Rose’s hip. The cover on the bed is going up over their legs and crotch, but their breasts and upper torso’s are exposed.
Noise around Rose: Yawn!
Dixie: “Tomorrow the banks will be open and we can get our money.”
Rose: “Thank god. Then we can go home.”
Dixie: “Hell no! We’re here to party until Friday.”
Rose: “Off to Key West then.”
Dixie: “Yeah Key West. If that’s what you want.”
Rose: “One more night with these guys then. No telling what they have planned for us.”
Panel 2: Side view of their heads. Dixie has climbed on top of Rose. Rose looks confused.
Rose: “What are you doing?”
Dixie: “You didn’t get to orgasm this morning.”
Rose: “So? I had plenty last…”
Panel 3: God view of Rose laying on her back, writhing and aroused, still looking surprised. Dixie’s head is between her legs..
Rose: “DIXIE! OH SHIT! YYEESS!”
Rose: “CUMMING!”
Page 26 horizontal panel, vertical panel on left, 2 squares on right.
Panel 1: Side view of Dixie on Rose. They are kissing. Dixie has one hand squeezing Rose’s breast.
Panel 2: Upper view of them facing each other laying side by side again. Dixie looks happy. Rose looks confused.
Rose: “What’s gotten into you?”
Dixie: “Big black cock. I feel like my sexuality has been awakened.”
Dixie: “To be honest, I kind of wanted to try that in college.”
Rose: “You did? I’m not sure I’m ready to return the favor.”
Dixie: “That’s okay Rosie. I’m quite happy the way things are going.”
Panel 3: Upper view of them facing each other, closer now, embracing. Their eyes are closed.
Noise: Zzzzzz!
Panel 4: Upper view of their jeep with the girls in it driving down the overseas highway.
Page 27 An x through the page splits it into 4 panels. The images can be anything you’d like showing them drinking and partying.
Panel 1: The girls dancing to Rasta with Meatballs. They might be onstage with the band while a crowd dances in the sand under them.
Header: Another busy day on Islamorada. The Flag Girls were as popular as ever.
Panel 2: The flag girls at the bar surrounded by men. They are toasting shots.
Header: Men kept drinks in their hands.
Panel 3: View from the bottom of the pool of both girls swimming
Header: They swam.
Panel 4: Both girls sitting in inner tubes with drinks in their hands on the clear blue bay water with palm trees visible.
Header: And sunned themselves.
Page 28 4 squares
Panel 1: Angled down view of the girls sleeping on cots by the pool. Mark is standing between them in his red lifeguard trunks.
Noise from both girls: Zzzzzz!
Mark: “Wakey wakey. Sun’s going down and it’s time for a shift beer.
Panel 2: View of their backs sitting at the bar. Gage, Mark, and the Flag girls. Jamon or Siobhan are serving them. They have drinks on the bar.
Gage: “I’ll drive the jeep back. You seem pretty drunk.”
Noise around Rose: HIC!
Rose: “Thanksh.”
Dixie: “This place slowed down.”
Mark: “Gone home to Miami until next weekend.”
Panel 3: Gage and the 2 girls by the jeep. Mark is walking away.
Gage: “See ya at home.”
Mark: “I’ll stop off and get us some Chinese take out.”
Panel 4: Inside living room. Gage watching Dix and Rose head upstairs.
Dixie: “We’re gonna take a quick shower to get the sweat and lotion off us.”
Page 29 2 vertical panels and 3 squares on the bottom.
Panel 1: Rose standing in the bathroom taking off her bikini watching Dixie shower nude. Dixie’s very tan with white marks around her nipples where her cups go.
Rose: “I’m nervous about tonight.”
Dixie: “Relax. What’s the worse that can happen? More great sex?”
Panel 2: Dixie drying her nude body with a towel while Rose showers. Rose shows signs of a tan too, with cup marks around her breasts.
Dixie: “I do declare Miss Clark, but your fair skin is starting to tan.”
Rose: “Won’t catch up with you. At the rate you tan, you’ll be as dark as our hosts.”
Panel 3: Rose and Dixie in their BBC shirts and bikni bottoms with Mark and Gage eating out of white Chinese food boxes.
Rose: “One more day and we can pay you back.”
Gage: “Don’t worry about it.
Panel 4: The four sitting in the couch and chair area. All have beers. Gage is passing Rose a joint.
Mark and Dixie are laughing about something.
Gage: “Wanna hit?”
Rose: “Sure, why not?”
Rose (thinking): Maybe this will loosen me up for whatever sexual depravity they have planned.”
Panel 5: The four sitting around drinking and smoking.
Dixie: Where’s everyone?”
Gage: “Sunday Jamon stays with Siobhan.”
Mark: “Amir and Shawn will be in Miami overnight.”
Page 30 horizontal panel, 3 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Group shot. Dixie is standing, stretching. Mark is standing holding his hand out for her. Rose is still seated, smoking. Gage is standing near Rose, holding his hand out and she’s placed hers in his hand.
Dixie: “I’m beat. Where am I sleeping?
Mark: “I’ll show you where you’re sleeping.”
Dixie (thinking) Damn! I was hoping for another cock or two. Maybe Rose will pass out and Gage can join us.
Panel 2: View looking up or down the stairs. Mark has Dixie over his shoulder and Gage is behind them carrying Rose in his arms.
Panel 3: Mark tossing Dixie on the bed.
Panel 4: Mark and Dixie, standing facing each other. She is pulling his shirts over his head. He is pulling her top off and her tits have sprung free.
Page 31: vertical panel with 2 squares to the right. 2 squares on the bottom
Panel 1: Side view of Dixie on squatting and pulling down Mark’s shorts. His hard cock has sprung up.
Noise (around cock): Boing!
Dixie: “Gimme that big black cock.”
Panel 2: Close up of Dixie running her tongue around Mark’s cock head.
Panel 3: Close up of Dixie swallowing half Mark’s cock.
Panel 4: View from Mark’s perspective of Dixie looking up at him. She’s stroking his shaft.
Dixie: I can’t wait to get this big nigger cock in my pussy again.”
Mark: “No!”
Panel 5: Side view of Mark sitting on the bed. His legs are spread and Dixie is in between them. Her breasts are near his face. They are looking at each other.
Dixie: “What’s wrong?”
Mark: “None of that black cock white pussy nigger shit tonight.”
Mark: “Tonight, we’re just a man and a woman loving each other’s bodies.”
Page 32: horizontal panel, 3 vertical.
Panel 1: Side view of Gage sitting on the bed nude, his cock sticking up. Rose is in her bikini backing into him. He is leaning down, his teeth pulling the bikini string around her back and the cups are falling down off her breasts.
Rose: “Oh god!”
Panel 2: View over Gage’s shoulder of their reflection in the mirror. Gage is standing behind her, reaching around and covering her tits with his hands. He is kissing her neck.
Gage: “I see you’re starting to get a tan.”
Rose: “Funny, my breasts look darker then the rest of me.”
Panel 3: Same view only her panties are falling off. Gage’s hand is covering her pubic mound and some fingers are in her. Some fluids are shooting out. He’s looking over her shoulder at their reflection. His other hand is squeezing her nipple. Her eyes might be closed or she’s looking up.
Gage: “I see you’re ready for me.”
Rose: “Yyess! Hurry up and fuck me.”
Gage: “Not tonight.”
Panel 4: View up from the ground. Gage is sitting on the bed. He is pulling Rose back into his cock, the head starting to spread her lips open. Her back is arched, breasts thrust out and nipples hard
Rose (thinking) Oh god! What’s he doing to me?”
Page 33: 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: View from Mark’s perspective of Dixie laying on the bed. The tip of his cock is pushing into her. He’s kneeling between her legs. I have an idea to put a little red heart around Dixie’s head to show she’s falling in love with more hearts in the next panels.
Mark: “You’re so beautiful.”
Mark: “Your pussy feels so good around my cock.”
Mark: “I wish I could take you every night.”
Dixie: “Ooh Mark! I wish you could too.”
Dixie (thinking) OH GOD! I’m CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Side view of Mark over her. One hand is squeezing her nipple. His head is buried in her neck. Her face is turned to the viewer. Two hearts are around Dixie’s head.
Dixie: (thinking): NO! Not like this. Fuck me! Don’t make love to me. Oh god! Billy Ray, I’m so sorry. He’s so much better then you.”
Dixie: “I’m cumming for you, Mark.”
Panel 3: View above Dixie’s shoulder of Mark rearing up slightly, making an orgasm face. His cock partially sticking out of her and sperm is shooting out. Multiple hearts coming off Dixie.
Mark: “UNH!”
Dixie: “That’s it. Seed me. SEED ME! I love it. I love you. I LOVE YOU! AAAHHHH!”
Page 34 2 horizontal panels. The top is the biggest.
Panel 1: View from off Gage’s hip of his hard cock sticking out, dripping Rose’s arousal. It is aiming towards Rose, who is on her back on the bed. Her legs are spread open and her pussy is splayed open from already having Gage in her.
Rose: “Hurry up and get that big black cock back in me.”
Panel 2: Side view of Gage on Rose. He’s looking down at her.
Rose: “You feel so good in me. Hurry up and fuck me. Fuck me hard.”
Gage: “No. You’re so beautiful. I want this to last all night.”
Rose: “Please. Fuck my white pussy with that big black nigger cock.”
Page 35 3 horizontal panels and 2 squares at the bottom.
Panel 1: View over Rose’s head or shoulder. It shows her breasts, nipples hard. Some of Gage’s cock sticking out of her pussy. Gage’s chest is in the picture and she’s pounding his chest with her fists. Rose now shows one or two little hearts around her head.
Noise around her fist: Wham!
Rose: “Fuck me dammit! Please fuck me you bastard.”
Gage: “I love being in you.”
Rose (thinking) He’s so much better then Jake. I’m cumming for him.”
Panel 2: Same angled view or view from the side only Rose is now leaning up with her arm around his neck and they are kissing intimately. Rose now has several hearts around her head.
Panel 3: Side view of Gage mounted on Rose looking deep into her eyes. Rose now has hearts all around her head.
Rose: “Please stop.”
Gage: “I can’t stop. Unh! I think I… so tight. I think I lov.. Gonna cum. I think I love y..”
Rose: “I LOVE YOU TOO!”
Gage: “I think I love your white pussy.”
Panel 4: View down over Gage’s shoulder of Rose’s face, eyes wide open in shock.
Rose: “Noooooo!”
Panel 5: Close up X-ray view of his cock seeding her womb.
Rose (off panel): Nooo….YYEESS!!”
Page 36 4 square panels all four show hearts around the women’s heads.
Panel 1: View down Mark’s stomach of Dixie sucking his cock.
Noise: Slurp! Slurp!
Header: Fucking big black cock had possessed their bodies.
Panel 2: View over Gage’s shoulder of Rose riding him. His hands are pinching her nipples.
Noise around crotches: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!
Header: Making love to big black cocks had possessed them emotionally.
Panel 3: Front view of Mark sitting on the bed. Dixie is reverse cowgirl. His hands are reaching around squeezing her breasts and her head is turned into his kissing him.
Noise around crotches: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!
Header: This was the night the Flag Girls truly became sluts for big black cock.
Panel 4: Side view of Rose sitting in Gage’s lap. Her legs are wrapped around him and they are kissing.
Header: Though neither was ready to admit it.
TO BE CONTINUED
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