Son's Best Friend's Dad (comic)

Son’s Best Friend’s Dad  (or Black Friend’s Dad if you went with that title)


Characters: Kate Howard: A tall willowy mom with an overly large bosom. She is approaching forty years old, but very fit and desirable. She is the hot mom on the block all the boys have crushes on. She has long straight black hair along the lines of Angelina Jolie. Her eyes are bright blue or green. Maybe she even has a few streaks of gray hair.

Tyson Brown: 18 yr old high school senior. He is lean and muscular. A good looking kid. His penis is huge.

Jerome Brown: Tyson’s dad. He is in his 50s. Where Tyson was lean and muscular, Jerome is bulky and muscular, bigger in all respects including cock length and width. He can look like an older Tyson, maybe very close in the face, but Jerome has a white goatee.
If you prefer, you can make him uglier, with a beer gut and a missing tooth. He’s got sweat pants on and a stained white tee shirt.

John and Jack Howard: Kate’s husband and son. Jack is a football player with a good build.

Shawna: Tyson’s girlfriend. 18yr old black girl with a killer ass and body. Maybe she has some unique trait like really big nipples.

Becca: Jack’s girlfriend. A cheerleader. Blonde or redhead with a great body.

Note: This comic should closely tie in with the first and several scenes take place in the same rooms. When Kate is in a short robe, it should be the one from the first comic. When she is climbing the stairs, the same pictures should be on the wall, etc.

Cover: Something derivative of the first cover. Kate is scrambling back on her bed wearing sexy see thru lingerie while the shadow of a big man or the shadow of a big cock falls across her body.
Title: Son’s Best Friend’s Dad
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaoscomics


Page 1: 3 panels, horizontal top and 2 square at bottom.

Panel 1: Kate standing in the driveway of her rich 2 story house. She is waving bye as a car backs out of the driveway. Her husband and son are in the car. They can just be shadowy figures. Kate’s in a short robe. Her hair is messed up as she’s just woken up.

Kate: “Bye, catch lots of fish.”

Panel 2: Side view of Kate racing up the stairs, her robe  is undone and flapping behind her. Her breasts and lower body are visible. The same pictures are on the wall from the last comic.

Panel 3: Kate standing nude in in her bedroom in front of an open door to her bathroom. The shower is running behind her. The shower is the same from the first comic. She is holding a cell phone, texting on it.

Jagged lines coming from phone show what she’s texting: They’ve left for the weekend. Can’t wait to see you again, stud.

Page 2:  3 panels, vertical on left and 2 square on right.

Panel 1: Kate under the shower. Her hair is wet. She’s soapy. Her breasts are wet, nipples hard. Her eyes are closed, head back under the spray. One hand is over her pussy, her finger teasing her clit.

Kate (thinking): Can’t stop thinking about Ty’s cock.

Kate (thinking): I feel like a teenager again.

Kate (thinking): That big black cock has awakened something inside me.

Panel 2: Kate nude and wet with a towel around her head. She’s looking at the cell phone again.

Jagged line from phone: On my way. Gonna fuck you all weekend long, Mrs. H.

Kate (thinking): Crude. Not like Ty at all. Boy must be eager. I’d better hurry.

Panel 3: Kate in her bedroom. She is now dressed in sexy lingerie. Maybe a sheer bra and panty with a matching garter belt and stockings. She could be clipping one of the stockings on. Her hair is dry and straight now. She could also be wearing a simple sheer teddy or something similarly sexy.

Kate (thinking): Not sure why I bothered. I don’t expect to be wearing this for long.

Page 3:

Panel 1: Kate walking down the stairs in her lingerie.

Noise: DING DONG!

Kate (thinking): Dammit! I told him to use the back door. What if the neighbors see?”

Panel 2: Rear view of Kate approaching her front door. Through a window, the dark outline of a man can be seen, but not identified.

Kate (thinking): Quit worrying girl. Tyson’s here so often, no one’s gonna be suspicious.

Panel 3: Kate opening her front door. Her visitor can’t be seen. She’s smiling.

Kate: “Well hello, stud!”

Kate: “OH SHIT!”

Page 4 Pinup

Panel 1: Angled side view. Kate is rearing back from the door in horror. Standing in the doorway is Jerome. He is holding a bottle in a brown paper bag up near his lips as he’s just taken a sip. He looks big and mean. His large frame fills her doorway.

Kate: “Mr…B…B..Brown, what are you doing here?”

Jerome: “I’m here for the whore been fucking my son.”

Page 5  4 horizontal panels.

Panel 1: Close up of their upper torso’s talking. Her arms are crossed hiding her breasts.

Kate: “I don’t know what you mean.”

Jerome: “Don’t lie to me slut.

Panel 2: View over Kate’s shoulder of Jerome holding out Ty’s cell phone. The picture on screen is of Kate 20 yrs ago licking her husband’s small white penis.

Jerome: “Can’t say I blame seducing my boy seeing how pathetic your hubby’s prick is.”

Panel 3: View of Kate over Jerome’s shoulder. She looks mad.

Kate: “Tyson stole that from my bedroom and tried to blackmail me into sex, but I refused.”

Jerome: “You as big a lying whore as my ex wife.”

Panel 4: Another upper torso side view. Jerome is holding the cell phone out again. Kate is rearing back from it in horror.

Jagged lines from cell phone: “Fuck me Ty. I love your big cock.”

Kate (thinking): Ty! What have you done?”

Page 6: 2 horizontal and 2 square.

Panel 1: View from over Jerome’s shoulder. Kate looks dejected. Her head hanging down, arms hanging.

Kate: “What do you want? Money?”

Jerome: “I’m giving ya what you want. A weekend fuckin some dark meat.”

Jerome: “Now get that white ass upstairs.”

Panel 2: Kate going up the stairs followed by Jerome. The scene is similar to the first comic where Ty followed her up the stairs past the family pictures on the wall. Jerome has the bottle in the bag up near his lips.

Jerome: “This is yo lucky day. Tyson’s just a boy, he don’t know how to treat a woman like you yet.”

Jerome: “I’m gonna show you what a real man has to offer.”

Panel 3: View over Ty’s shoulder of Kate still looking dejected. Her bra is off revealing her breasts, but she’s still got her panties and garter ensemble on.

Jerome: “Dems some big ass white titties.”

Kate: “What do you want?”

Jerome: “Lets give you a little taste of some cock.”

Panel 4: Close up side view of Jerome’s crotch and Kate’s face staring at it. She’s kneeled and pulled down his sweats. He is wearing white briefs. They are old, yellow stained and have holes in it. The briefs are bulging obscenely from his cock and balls. Kate’s eyes are wide. His shirt is off.

Page 7: 4 even squares

Panel 1: Close up side view of Jerome’s crotch. She’s pulled down his underwear under his balls. His cock is sticking out and hanging down. Kate is bent under the tip sticking her tongue out and touching it.

Jerome (off panel): “That’s it girl. Get to work.”

Kate (thinking): Jesus! He’s as big as Ty and it’s still growing.

Panel 2: Same view only now his cock is sticking straight out and her lips are closed around part of the head. One of her hands is hefting his giant scrotum.

Kate: Mmmmmmm!

Kate (thinking): Stop it Kate. Fight it. You can’t be enjoying this.

Panel 3: Same view. Kate is sucking his cock. Motion lines show her head bobbing.

Noise: Slurp! Slurp! Slurp!

Jerome (off panel): “That’s it girl. Now ya getting into it.”

Kate (thinking): So big! Stop it! So good! Stop it Kate! I hope his sperm tastes as good as his son’s.”

Panel 4: Same view. Kate’s lips are wrapped around the head. Her cheeks are bulging out and sperm is shooting out around her lips. One hand is stroking his cock.

Noise: Gulp! Gulp!

Kate (thinking): So good! So hot! It’s fucking delicious.

Page 8 Vertical left panel and 2 squares on right.

Panel 1: Full image of Kate kneeling. She’s nude but for panties and the garter/nylons. Her head is back, mouth open. One hand holds the base of Brown’s cock and it is shooting sperm across her face. Her other hand could be pinching one of her nipples or between her legs pushing inside her panty or threw it.

Jerome (off panel): “Here’s the last of it.”

Kate: “Gimme. I want it all.”

Panel 2: Kate in the bathroom before a mirror wiping her face. Jerome is beside her, standing, peeing in a toilet.

Jerome: “You suck a mean dick, Kate.”

Kate: “Uh… thanks I guess.”

Panel 3: View of Kate’s torso standing by the bed. Her face doesn’t need to be in the panel, but can. Jerome is sitting on the bed before her. His hand is in the hem of her panties, pulling it out and the sides are tearing. Her garter and nylons are intact.

Kate: “What now Jerome?”

Jerome: “That’s Mr. Brown to you, slut. Now lets get you out of these things.”

Kate: “YIKES!”

Noise: Rip!

Page 9  4 square, one horizontal rectangle.

Panel 1: Close up view of Kate’s lower body, legs spread. Jerome is now kneeling between her legs. His hard cock is rearing up over her pubes and belly.

Jerome (off panel): “You want this, slut?”

Kate (thinking): I’m so ashamed, but I do want it.

Kate (off panel): “Yes, Mr. Brown.”

Jerome: “Then put it in.”

Kate: “You need to wear a condom.”

Panel 2: Close up of Jerome’s hard cock. Kate’s hand is holding the base. Her other hand has just slid one of her husband’s condoms down over the tip. The condom covers less of Jerome’s cock head then it did Ty’s in the first comic.

Jerome (off panel): “That little thing covers yo husband? Pathetic.”

Panel 3: Close up of Kate’s crotch. Her arm is reaching over her thigh, grabbing the end of Jerome’s cock and guiding it to the entrance of her pussy.

Jerome (off panel): “Don’t normally wear the damn things. XXXL Titanic sized rubbers are too fuckin expensive.”

Panel 4: Same view only the end of the cock has slipped inside her.

Kate (off panel): “OH GOD!”

Jerome: “Besides, I like seeding my pussies.”

Panel 5: Side view of them on the bed. Kate is on her back. Jerome is holding himself above her. Her legs are bent back and up so that his cock and balls are visible. He’s mostly inside her. What is visible is dripping with her juices.

Kate: “OW! My cervix!”

Jerome: “Knock knock.”

Kate: “It’s pushing into my WOMB!”

Page 10:  horizontal, 2 squares in center, horizontal.

Panel 1: Side view. Jerome is above Kate. He’s leaning down and they are kissing. Jerome’s hand is squeezing her breast.

Kate (thinking): So full. His big cock is making me cum.

Jerome (thinking): Dayumn! This cunny is milking my cock. This is some grade A white pussy.

Panel 2: View from Kate’s perspective down her belly at Jerome between her legs. He’s kneeling now cupping her knees. Maybe motion lines show he’s fucking her hard. Maybe drops of her arousal are shooting out around their crotches.

Noise around pussy: Squish! Squish!

Kate: “Aaaaahhhh!”

Kate (thinking): Another one. How many was that? Five? Six? And another one’s already coming.”

Panel 3: Rear view of Jerome’s ass with Kate’s legs around his hips. Motion lines show his ass is moving.

Noise: Wham! Wham! Wham!

Kate (from around his side): CUMMING! OHMYGOD! FUCK ME!”

Panel 4: Elevated view of Kate’s body from Jerome’s perspective. Showing his dripping cock partially inside her, her belly. She’s pinching her own nipples. Her head is turned on the side, eyes, closed, mouth open.

Kate: “So good. So good. So good.”

Page 11:  horizontal, 2 square, horizontal.

Panel 1: Tighter view of Kate’s torso. She’s leaning up a little, teeth gritted like she’s in some pain. An X-ray shows Jerome’s cock head in her womb. The condom is on, but has not filled yet.

Kate and Jerome running together: “Cumming!”

Kate: “Pull it out!”

Panel 2: Close up Xray of his cock. The condom is ballooning up.

Kate: “Oowww! Pull it out!”

Jerome: “It’s stuck in yo cervix.”

Panel 3: Another close up only the balloon now fills her womb.

Kate: “It hurts. Please?”

Panel 4: Similar view to the first panel. He’s withdrawn half his cock. The condom has popped. Her womb is full of sperm. The head is still spurting sperm as he withdraws it. The ripped bottom of the condom is still around his cock.

Kate: “That’s better. YES! I’m cumming again.”

Page 12 3 horizontal panels

Panel 1: Side view of Kate on her back. Jerome is kneeling between her legs. His cock is rearing up, spraying her body with semen.

Noise: Spurt! Spurt!

Kate (thinking) So good. I feel strange.

Panel 2: Elevated view from Jerome’s persepctive. An aroused sperm covered Kate is still laying on the bed, but she’s leaned up and is stroking his cock. Her mouth is open tongue out and a stream of sperm is shooting onto her tongue.

Noise around cock: Splooge!

Kate: “My womb is sloshing.”

Jerome: “Rubber broke. I seeded that pussy good.”

Panel 3:  Low view on bed of Kate’s pussy, legs spread, a river of sperm is flowing from her pussy. She’s sitting up slightly, looking down towards her crotch. Horrified.

Kate: “NO! You seeded me! You came in me? Your sperm is in me!”

Kate: “NO! Your sperm is in me. Yes! SEEDED! YES! I’m….”

Page 13: Pinup

Panel 1: God view or elevated side view showing her crotch of Kate. She is on her back, but her feet are flat on the bed, knees bent lifting her crotch up. She’s screaming. A steady stream of sperm is falling from her pussy. She is having a big orgasm and squirting a stream of her cum from her crotch almost like she’s peeing. Jerome is still kneeling, maybe back a little further and maybe her cum is striking his now slightly deflated cock.

Kate (screaming in big jagged letters): CCUUMMIINNGG!!”

Noise by pussy: SQUIRT!

Jerome: “Dayumn gurl! You is a squirter.”

Page 14   3 vertical panels.

Panel 1: Kate in the shower, soaping around her breasts and crotch.

Kate (thinking): I feel so alive. I should be satisfied, but instead I just want more of Mr. Brown’s big black cock.

Panel 2: Kate in the shower and Jerome is coming in through the glass door or pulling back the shower curtain. His cock is hard and sticking straight out. Her eyes are staring at it.

Jerome: “Thought I’d join you.”

Panel 3: Jerome and Kate under the shower. They are mashed together at an angle kissing passionately. The angle is such that his cock is sticking straight out, it is soapy and her hand is stroking it. Her front breast is visible and his hand is squeezing it. Her other breast is mashed to his chest.

Page 15 horizontal top and 2 square bottoms

Panel 1: Side view of them in the shower fucking. If it is a glass shower, her breasts are mashed on the glass and her hands are holding the top of the shower while Jerome takes her from behind. He is pulling her hair with one hand, her hair wrapped in his fist. Motion lines show his hip movement.

Noise (around crotches): Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!

Panel 2: Front view of the same scene. If glass, her tits are flat circles pressed against the glass, nipples in the center. Her legs are spread and his balls are visible dangling behind her. His hand is still in her hair.

Noise (under legs): Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!
Kate: “Cumming, Mr. Brown!”

Jerome: “Me too.”

Panel 3: Close up angled side view of her rear. Her legs are still spread. Her pussy is leaking sperm. Jerome’s hips and crotch are visible, cock hard shooting more semen over her ass and lower back.

Page 16: horizontal top, two square on bottom.

Panel 1: Bathroom scene. Kate is in a towel standing before a mirror. Jerome’s nude body from the rear is visible standing in front of a toilet peeing.

Noise: tinkle!

Panel 2: View from Jerome’s perspective looking down at his dick peeing in the toilet bowl. Kate’s hand is on his shaft. Urine is hitting the water. His cock is as big and plump as it is when hard, but it is soft.

Kate (off panel): “Here let me help you.”

Jerome (off panel): “What’s this?”

Kate (off panel): “Sorry Mr. Brown, I can’t seem to keep my hands of your cock.”

Panel 3: Side view close up of his cock above the toilet. She’s shaking it for him after he finished peeing. It’s getting hard again. An artsy idea would be for his cock to be hard and sticking out but with ghost images of it softer and shaking above and below the erection. Motion lines show it shaking.

Noise: flop! flop! flop!

Jerome: “Shake it good girl.”

Kate: “Jesus, it’s getting hard again!”

Jerome: “Back to yo marital bed then.”

Page 17 horizontal top and 4 square beneath

Panel 1: Side view of the couple on the bed having sex doggy style. Kate in on all fours. Jerome is behind her. Half his shaft is in her. Motion lines show his hips moving.

Kate: “Fuck me! Fuck me! FUCK ME!”

Panel 2: View down from Jerome’s perspective of her ass and his shaft fucking her. His hands are squeezing her cheeks and hips. Her sphincter is tight.

Jerome: “I see Ty never broke in dis ass.”

Panel 3: Same view, more or less of his shaft might be visible. His hand has moved over and his thumb has pushed into her anus.

Kate (off panel): Cumming!”

Jerome (off panel): Feel good slut? Imagine how good my cock would feel shoved up that white ass?”

Kate: “It’s too big, but anything for you Jerome.”

Panel 4: Side view showing just Kate’s lower half with Jerome still fucking her from behind. He is spanking her.

Noise: SMACK!

Kate (off panel): “OW!”

Jerome: “That’s Mr. Brown to you.”

Panel 5: View from Jerome’s perspective. He’s pulled his cock out, it’s wet and glistening. He’s holding it and pushing the tip down against her anus which is slowly opening. A red hand print is on her ass where he spanked her.

Jerome: “You ain’t a true slut until you’ve had my cock in every hole.”

Page 18 horizontal, 2 squares, horizontal.

Panel 1: Full side view of them on the bed. Kate is not on all fours now. Her head is down on the bed, facing the viewer and her ass is in the air. Jerome is behind her with most of his shaft still visible. Maybe it is bent trying to force it’s way into her. Her face looks strained. The handprint is still visible

Kate: “Aargh! It hurts so bad.”

Jerome: “Do you want to be my slut or should I pull out?”

Kate: “Please fuck my ass, Mr. Brown.”

Panel 2: Side view of her ass with half his cock in it. His balls are swinging, maybe slapping her labia. The handprint is still visible.

Kate (off panel): “UNH! It’s ripping me in two.”

Panel 3: High view of her ass, stretched wide and most of his cock pushing into it. The handprint is still visible, maybe faded more.

Kate (off panel): “Oh god it hurts! It hurts so…. GOOD!”

Panel 4: Front view of Kate down her body. She is mostly up on her knees, reaching around to hug Jerome. Their faces are close like they’re about to kiss. He has reached around and is squeezing her breasts. His testicles might be visible between her legs.

Kate: “I love it. Fuck my ass. So full of black cock.”

Jerome: “Yo ass is resized now, just like yo pussy. You’ll never be satisfied with little white dicks again.”

Page 19 horizontal, 2 square, horizontal

Panel 1: Full side view. She is on all fours again, but looks like she’s more into it. Her arms are stretched out forwards like she’s pushing back into his thrusts. Her breasts are dangling and swinging. He’s grabbing her hips, half his cock is visible. Motion lines show his hips and cock is moving. Maybe his balls are slapping against her labia.

Noise: Whap! Whap! Whap!

Kate: “I’m your slut now, Mr. Brown.”

Jerome: “That you is, baby.”

Kate: “Ohmygod! I’m cumming!”

Kate (thinking): Cumming just from having his cock in my ass.

Panel 2: Close up of Kate’s rear from the side. Jerome is fucking her ass. She is squirting again and her orgasm is splattering off his testicles.

Noise: SPLAT!

Panel 3: Similar view maybe more angled from the side. She may or may not still be squirting. He is cumming now. Sperm is splattering out around her ass hole. His shaft is coated with it. More semen may be leaking down over her pussy and dripping off her clit.

Panel 4 God view from his perspective. He’s pulled his cock out and it is still shooting a stream of sperm from her hair to her back. Her anus is visible, open and leaking sperm.

Page 20 2 vertical panels

Panel 1: The side of the bed. Jerome is on it under the covers. He’s awake and looking at Kate, nude, carrying a tray with breakfast on it.

Header: The next morning.

Kate: “I brought you breakfast.”

Jerome: “Nothing for you?”

Panel 2: Sam view. He’s sitting up eating, the tray on his chest, The covers are now pulled down and Kate is kneeling between his legs or bent over the side of the bed. His cock is in her hands, maybe bent a little, but hardening. Her mouth is near the head.

Kate: “I’m just gonna have a protein shake.”

Page 21:  2 square, large horizontal on bottom.

Panel 1: Side view of her head. She’s holding the base of his cock, licking the crown.

Panel 2: Front view close up of her head, now with half his cock down her throat. She’s looking at the viewer.

Noise: SLURP!

Panel 3: View from Jerome’s perspective. The tray is visible, food gone. Maybe there’s a half glass of orange juice, a half eaten toast, etc. His hand is holding the fork. Kate has pulled back from his cock. Her mouth is open and he shooting sperm into her mouth and all over her face.

Kate and Jerome word balloons merging together: “Delicious!”

Page 22 horizontal and 4 squares.

Panel 1: Full room view. Jerome is sitting on a couch, nude. His legs are spread, cock soft, but huge and dangling over the edge of the couch. He is holding a remote aimed at the viewer or a TV. Kate is in the background in a kitchen dressed holding a brown grocery bag.

Kate: “I got your beer.”

Jerome: “Good. Get yo clothes off and bring me one.”

Panel 2: Close up of Jerome’s front in the same pose. Now Kate’s back is visible as she kneels between his legs sucking him. He is holding the remote in one hand and drinking from a beer in his other hand.

Panel 3: Side view of Jerome on the couch. Kate has stood, is straddling him. She has one hand on his cock and is guiding it into her pussy.

Panel 4: Same view only now Kate is sitting in his lap. She is staring at him.

Kate: “I love you.”

Jerome: “No, this ain’t love. This is just great fucking.”

Panel 5: Close up of their upper torsos. Kate’s back is arched and Jerome has clamped his teeth down over one of her hard nipples. She looks ecstatic.

Kate: “Then fuck me.”

Kate: “Cumming!”

Noise off to the side: DING DONG!

Page 23  3 horizontal rectangles.

Panel 1: Kate’s nude body from the rear. She is standing near her front door. A shadow of a male figure is visible through a window on the door or a window near the door.

Noise by door: DING DONG!

Kate: “Oh my god! Who could that be? My dad? One of the neighbors?”

Jerome (off panel): “Open the door.”

Kate: “My robe’s upstairs.”

Jerome (off panel): “Open the door, NOW!”

Panel 2: View over Ty’s shoulder of a nude Kate standing in the open door. She looks nervous.

Kate: “TY! What are you doing here?”

Ty: “Dad told me to come by.”

Kate: “Well get in here before the neighbors see me.”

Panel 3: Room view of Jerome sitting on the couch, cock still hard. He’s got a beer in one hand. Kate is standing between him and Ty. Ty is still clothed.

Kate: “What’s Ty doing here?”

Jerome: “I wanted to show him what a slut you are.”

Jerome: “Now come suck my cock.”

Page 24: vertical left panel, 2 square on right.

Panel 1: Full view of Kate and Jerome. He’s still sitting. She’s kneeling between his legs. She is holding the base of his cock. Her head is turned sideways licking the crown. He is staring at the viewer.

Jerome: “Still think you’re in love with THIS?”

Jerome: “She ain’t nothing but a whore for a big black cock, boy.”

Panel 2: Kate’s head, now sucking the end of Jerome’s cock at the bottom. Behind her pulling his shirt over his head is Ty.

Jerome (off panel): Now come fuck this whore while she sucks me.”

Panel 3: View from Ty’s perspective of his cock rearing up as he grabs her ass cheeks.

Page 25: 2 horizontal and 2 square.

Panel 1: Side view of Kate on all fours sucking off Jerome who is still sitting on the couch or if you prefer, he’s kneeling in front of the couch. Ty is kneeling behind her, hands on hips fucking her from behind. Motion lines show her head bobbing and Ty’s hips moving.

Noise where Ty is fucking her: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!

Noise where she is sucking Jerome: Suk! Suk! Suk!

Kate (thinking): So good! So good! So good!

Panel 2: Nearly identical side view, but with xrays showing both cocks blowing their loads.

Kate (thinking): I’m cumming again and again!

Panel 3: Close up of her face. She’s either sucking the end of Jerome’s cock with her cheeks bulging out and sperm dribbling down her chin (noise: gulp gulp) or he’s pulled out and is blasting a load over her face (noise: Splat!)

Panel 4: Rear view of Kate’s ass. Ty has pulled out and is shooting a wad across her ass cheeks or back. Her pussy is open and sperm is pouring out.

Page 26 vertical panel and 2 squares.

Panel 1: Full view of Kate kneeling in the shower. She’s got a hard cock in each hand, motion lines show her stroking one while licking the end of the other.

Panel 2: Upper head shot of Kate now sucking the head of the other cock while stroking the former cock.

Panel 3: Pulled back view of her upper torso with both cocks going off. One is blasting her face, the other her tits.

Noise: Splat!

Page 27  horizontal panel, 2 square, horizontal panel

Panel 1: Bedroom scene. Jerome is on his back. Kate is lowering herself over his cock. Ty is kneeling behind them. His cock is sticking straight out.

Jerome: “Take her ass, boy. I broke it in for ya.”

Panel 2: Rear view of Kate’s ass with Jerome’s cock buried in her pussy. Ty’s cock head is pressing against her anus.

Panel 3: Same view only now, half Ty’s cock has pushed in.

Panel 4: Side view of Kate sandwiched between the two men.

Kate (thinking): TWO COCKS!

Kate (thinking): Feels so good. I love it.

Kate: “CUMMING!”

Page 28:  2 horizontal panels

Panel 1: View of the side of the bed. Ty is laying on his side facing the viewer. Behind him on the other side of the bed is Kate riding Jerome hard. Her tits are bouncing.

Kate: “I can’t stop fucking you.”

Kate: “I love you Mr. Brown.”

Kate: “I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!”

Panel 2: Same side view of the bed only now Kate is laying on her back while Ty holds himself over her fucking her. Jerome is asleep on the other side.

Kate: “Fuck me Ty. Fuck me.”

Kate: “Cumming so hard. I love it.”

Kate: “I love you to. I LOVE YOU!”

Ty: “Shut up, slut.”

Page 29  horizontal top and 2 square bottom.

Panel 1: Above view of the bedroom. It’s dawn, maybe light is shining through a window. Jerome is propped up on the bed and Kate is leaning over his hips sucking his cock. Ty is getting dressed.

Jerome: “Where you goin?”

Ty: “To see Shawna. I’m tired of waiting.”

Panel 2: Shawna walking around the side of her house. She is in a lovely summer dress and heels as she’s just left church.

Shawna (thinking) That was a great sermon today.

Shawna (thinking) Time for a quick dip in the pool, then I have to study for tomorrows test.

Panel 3: Back view of Ty’s back. His lower half is in the pool. He’s nude, but you can’t see. Shawna is standing on the side of the pool.

Shawna: “TY?”

Ty: “Surprise.”

Page 30 horizontal top and two square on the bottom.

Panel 1: View over Ty’s shoulder watching Shawna pull the sun dress off over her head. She’s wearing a bikini under it. Maybe it’s white or something that looks good on her black skin.

Ty: “Where are your parents?”

Shawna: “Church brunch. I need to study for the exam. You do too. So we can’t swim too long.”

Panel 2: Side view of Shawna and Ty kissing, her arms around his neck. His on her hips. Their upper torsos only, their bottoms being in the water.

Panel 3: Shawna rearing back, looking down at Ty’s crotch. She’s near the edge of the pool. Ty’s cock is now rearing up erect above the waterline.

Shawna: “Ty, you’re poking me… HOLY CRAP! You’re nude?”

Page 31:  4 even squares.

Panel 1: Shawna now sitting on the edge of the pool. Her legs are spread and Ty is between them. Her hand is stroking his cock. One of his hands might be on the string to her bikini. Shawna is looking at the cock in her hand.

Noise: Stroke! Stroke!

Shawna: “I knew it was big… but to actually see it…”

Panel 2: Side view of Shawna sitting on the edge. He’s angled so that you can still see her stroking his cock. Her bikini top is off and Ty is now sucking one nipple and squeezing the other. Her head is thrown back, eyes closed, moaning (Aah! Oooh!” around her mouth)

Shawna: “Oh Ty! What’s gotten into you?”

Panel 3: God view down between them. She is stroking his cock with both hands right between her tits. He is untying the strings on her panties.

Shawna: “This is so hot!”

Ty: “Let me put it in you.”

Shawna: “Not until I’m married…”

Shawna: “Oh screw it. Put it in, but just the tip.”

Panel 4: God view down. She’s sitting on the edge, the head of his cock is in her. Blood is trickling out along the cement or in the water from their crotches.

Shawna: “OW! My hymen!”

Ty: “Might as well go deeper then.”

Shawna: “Yeah, do it. I love you. You love me right?”

Ty: “Course I love ya baby.”

Page 32 horizontal, 2 square, horizontal

Panel 1: God view of Shawna laying on her back on the edge of the pool. Ty is standing in the water, holding her legs fucking her hard. She might be squeezing her breasts together.

Shawna: “YES! Do me. Do me with your penis.”

Ty: “Tell me to fuck you with my big black cock.”

Shawna: “FUCK ME TY! Fuck me with your big black cock.”

Panel 2: Side view of them fucking in the same place, but Shawna is sitting up with her arm wrapped around Ty’s neck, their faces are close, staring in each others eyes.

Shawna: “Oh Oh My vagina is spasming around your cock. Aaaahhh!”

Ty: “Yo pussy is cumming all over my cock.”

Panel 3: God view of them again with an xray showing Ty filling her womb with sperm.

Shawna: “NO! Not in me.. FUCK! I’m cumming again!”

Panel 4: Very intimate view of Ty laying over Shawna on the cement beside the pool. Maybe one of her legs is bent and you can see sperm pouring from her pussy. If his cock is visible, its huge and floppy and leaking some sperm. Another position would be to have them both laying on their backs on the cement, lower legs in the water. The angle would be from above their crotches looking up their bodies.

Shawna: “I’m going to want to do that a lot from now on.”

Ty: “Fine by me, babe.”

Shawna: “We still got time. Lets go to my bedroom.”

Ty: “What about exams?”

Shawna: “Fuck studying.”

Page 33 2 vertical rectangles, 2 squares, horizontal rectangle.

Panel 1: Side view of Kate on her knees sucking of Jerome.

Kate (thinking): Gotta hurry, John and Jack will be home soon.

Panel 2: View down from Jerome’s perspective of Kate with her lips wrapped around his cock head. Her cheeks are bulging and some sperm is leaking out around her mouth.

Noise: Gulp! Gulp!

Jerome (off panel): “Come with me.”

Panel 3: Close up of Kate looking up while licking sperm off the tip of Jerome’s cock.

Kate: “Leave my husband and son? Why would I do that?”

Panel 4: Similar close up picture of Kate with Jerome’s huge, but spent cock in hand. She has some sperm on her lips and chin. Her eyes are wide open in surprise.

Jerome (off panel): Because I’ll fuck you every day.”

Panel 5: Outside view of John and Jack’s backs in the driveway. They are walking up to their house. It should be a nice expensive 2-story house. They have come back from their trip (carrying a fishing rod, tackle box, fishing hat, etc.)

John: “Where’s your mom? She always greets us.”

Jack: “Her car’s gone.”

Page 34 2 horizontal and 2 square.

Panel 1: A run down single wide trailer sized for 2 bedrooms, 1 bath, living room and kitchen. A stark contrast to the expensive house previous. The yard can be over grown.

Header: 6 weeks later.

Panel 3: Side view of Kate riding Jerome while he lays on his back in bed.  The door to the hallway is open behind them. Kate can be a little more slutty looking from here on out. Maybe a nipple is pierced, maybe a spade tattoo on her breast, etc.

Noise by crotches: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!

Kate: “I’m cumming!”

Jerome: “Me too!”

Panel 4: View from Jerome’s perspective looking up at her breasts. He’s squeezing them. Some milk is shooting out of her nipples. Her breasts are slightly bigger, nipples too.

Kate: “Can’t believe I’m pregnant at my age.”

Jerome (off panel): Can’t wait for these to fill up with milk.

Panel 5: Side view of Kate’s upper torso with Jerome’s hands on her tits. Ty is visible dressed and walking past the open door.

Kate: “Ty, wait up.”

Page 35 horizontal, 2 squares, horizontal

Panel 1: View of their living room maybe over Ty’s rear shoulder as he’s leaving the house. Kate is standing in the room nude, sperm dripping from between her legs. Jerome is behind her also nude, huge cock dangling.”

Kate: “Ty, let me make you some breakfast.”

Jerome: “Answer your mother.”

Ty: “She’s not my mother.”

Panel 2: Ty and Shawna walking down a school hall past lockers and other students. Shawna is no longer a good church girl, but is dressed like a slut, belly showing, short skirt.

Shawna: “Shit! Here comes Jack.”

Panel 3: Jack punching Ty. Motion lines show his arm moving. Ty’s head is turned where Jack punched him. Becca is in the picture in a cheerleading skirt and top. Shawna is looking shocked at what just happened.

Jack: “That’s for my mom, asshole.”

Panel 4: Becca pulling Jack away by the arm. Shawna is also holding Ty’s arm. He is rubbing his chin. Both men look mad.

Becca: “Come on honey, lets go.”

Ty: “That mother fucker.”

Page 36  4 even panels

Panel 1: View from behind Ty looking down the hall at Becca.

Ty: “Becca wait up.”

Becca: “Ty, Sorry about Jack. I wish I knew what happened between you.”

Ty: “Can we go somewhere and talk?”

Header: Later that day

Panel 2: Side view of Ty talking to Becca. He’s taller and looking down at her. She’s looking up at him. She might be holding school books across her chest. There’s a curtain behind them as they are in the auditorium.

Becca: “You two need to make up.”

Ty: “I want to, but he’ll never forgive me for fucking his mom.”

Becca: “You did WHAT?”

Panel 3: View down between them. Ty has pulled his cock out. It’s huge and floppy, but not completely hard.

Ty: “Yeah, one look at this and she went all cock crazy.”

Becca: “Oh my god!”

Panel 4: Side view of just their torsos. Ty’s cock is hard now. Becca’s hand is holding the shaft.

Becca: “It’s so big!”

Page 37 horizontal panel and 4 squares.

Panel 1: Jack facing Shawna in the school hall. Jack’s cell phone is out and he’s looking at it.

Shawna: “Seen Ty? I can’t find him.”

Jack: “He just texted me. Wants to meet in the auditorium.”

Shawna: “He wants to be friends again.”

Panel 2: Jack storming away. Shawna is following him.

Jack: “Well I want to kick his ass.”

Shawna: “Wait up.”

Panel 2: View over Jack’s shoulder of Becca giving Ty a blow job. She’s now on her knees, still in her cheerleading skirt, but the top is off showing her boobs or it could just be pulled up above her breasts.

Noise: Slurp!

Jack: “Where are you asshole…OH NO! BECCA!”

Ty: “This is for punching me muthafucker.”

Panel 3: Front view of Ty showing Becca from the rear, her skirt is riding up showing off her pussy and she is fingering herself with fluid drops flying out. Ty is looking at Jack who looks broken. Jack might be crying. Shawna has now appeared glancing over Jack’s shoulder.

Shawna: “What’s going on?”

Ty: “FUCK! Shawna get out of here.”

Shawna: “TY! You cheating piece of shit.”

Panel 4: Shawna and Jack walking down the hall. Shawna looks mad. Jack might too or her could still look devastated. They could both be crying. Maybe a thought bubble coming from Jack shows a close up of Becca sucking Ty’s cock.

Jack (thinking): I can’t compete with that thing.

Panel 5: View down from Ty’s perspective. Becca is looking up at him, holding his cock.

Becca: “Don’t worry, I’ll be your girlfriend now.”

Ty (off panel): Shut up and keep sucking.

Page 38  4 square

Panel 1: Side view of Jerome laying on his bed, holding his erect cock up. Kate is wearing sexy lingerie dancing for him.

Jerome: “Who the fuck is banging on my door?”

Panel 2: Side view of Ty laying on his bed with Becca sitting in his lap impaled on his cock.

Ty: “Can Jack make you cum like that?”

Becca: “Jack’s never made me cum.”

Noise running through both panels: BANG! BANG! BANG!

Panel 3: Angled side view of Shawna in her new sexy/slutty outfit standing in the doorway of the trailer looking down at Jerome’s erect cock sticking out from his body. He has opened the door. Kate might be visible behind Jerome still in her lingerie.

Jerome: “WHAT?”

Shawna: “Where’s Ty? I know he’s…JESUS!

Shawna (thinking): That thing’s bigger then Ty’s.

Jerome: “I like your new look. Why don’t you come in.”

Panel 4: Kate with her arm wrapped around Shawna’s shoulders. A fraction of Jerome’s body might be visible, but his cock is in the scene still rock hard. Shawna looks upset, but is staring at his cock.

Shawna: “Your Jack’s mom!”

Kate: “Yes dear, but I’m with Mr. Brown now. What’s wrong?”

Shawna: “It’s Ty. I caught him with another woman.”

Kate: “I’m sorry honey.”

Jerome: “Let’s head to the bedroom.

Page 39 horizontal, 2 square, horizontal

Panel 1: Bedroom scene. They are standing. Shawna and Kate are facing each other. Jerome is behind Shawna. He has lifted her top up and her boobs have popped out pointed at Kate.

Shawna: “Mr. Brown! What are you doing?”

Jerome: “We’re gonna make ya feel better.”

Jerome: “Get in there Kate.”

Kate: “You want me to…?”

Panel 2: Side view of Kate kissing Shawna. Kate’s hand is on Shawna’s black breast. Jerome is kneeling, pulling down Shawna’s skirt or shorts.

Noise around lips: Mmmmmmm!

Panel 4: Angled view of a nude Shawna sitting on the edge of the bed. Jerome is in front of her and she is sucking his cock. Kate is kneeling on the bed behind Shawna, taking her bra off or pulling her lingerie off over her head.

Panel 3: Side view of the bed. Shawna is on top of Kate and they are kissing. Kate is nude now.

Kate (thinking) She’s so soft.

Shawna (thinking) This is different, but nice.

Page 40 2 square, horizontal, 2 square, horizontal.

Panel 1: Close up view of Shawna’s dripping pussy above Kate’s dripping pussy. Jerome’s cock is poised to penetrate Shawna.

Panel 2: Similar view only with Jerome’s cock pushing in and his balls slapping against Kate’s.

Panel 3: Side view of the women’s upper torsos. Shawna is still on top. She’s rearing up in surprise. Kate is sucking one erect brown nipple.

Shawna: It’s so big, Mr. Brown. I’m cumming!”

Panel 4: Another pussy above pussy shot. Jerome has pulled his cock out and is pointing it down at Kate’s. Shawna’s is splayed open from just being penetrated.

Panel 5: The same picture only Jerome’s cock is now pushing into Kate’s pussy.

Panel 6: Side view of the women’s upper torsos. Kate is under Shawna, but arching her back, eyes closed, mouth open. Shawna is bent down, squeezing one of Kate’s breasts and her head is near the nipple about to lick it.

Shawna: “Please Mr. Brown, put it back in me.”

Kate: “I’m cumming!”

Page 41 2 horizontal, 2 square

Panel 1: God view of the bed. Shawna is on her back. Jerome is kneeling between her legs, fucking her. Kate is on the left side on her side facing Shawna. Kate can be kissing her neck while squeezing her breast or sucking one nipple.

Noise: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!

Shawna: “Fuck me! Fuck me! FUCK ME!”

Jerome: “Here it comes gurl.”

Shawna: “Seed me, Mr. Brown.”

Panel 2: Angled down view of Shawna’s body. Jerome has pulled out and is blasting sperm over her breasts and face. Her pussy is visible leaking a river of sperm. Kate is holding her head over Shawna’s breast, mouth open and tongue out trying to catch sperm in her mouth.

Panel 3: Close up of Shawna’s torso. Her face looks dazed, maybe she’s grinning with satisfaction. Kate is licking sperm off her body around her breast. Her belly has strands of sperm on it and there’s a pool of it in her navel.

Jerome (off panel): “Lick it all up, Kate.”

Panel 4: Same view or closer up view of Shawna’s belly with Kate lapping up sperm from her navel. Noise around belly: Lap lap lap

Jerome (off panel): “I said lick ALL of it.”

Page 42   horizontal and 2 vertical

Panel 1: View from Shawna’s perspective down her breasts and body. Kate is now between her legs, lapping up sperm from her pussy while staring up at her. Jerome may be visible seated in a chair behind her.

Panel 2: Long view of Kate now on the left side again, looking towards where Brown is, but he is not in the scene. She’s leaning into Shawna, still on her back. Kate might have sperm all over her chin. The women look close and intimate.

Panel 3: Ty’s back is on the side. He is pushing a nude Becca towards the bed with the two women.

Ty: “You wanna be my girlfriend, go join them.”

Becca: “But Ty?”

Shawna in the background: “What’s that slut doing here?”

Page 43:  2 vertical and 1 horizontal

Panel 1: God view of Shawna on her back with both white women leaning into her on their sides. One could be fingering Shawna, while Shawna is fingering another woman. Two could be kissing each other while one sucks Shawna’s nipples.

Panel 2: Side view of Becca and Shawna on their knees, breasts touching and kissing each other. Kate may or may not be in the picture. She could be kneeling to, saying Kiss and make up or part of her body could be visible laying near them.

Panel 3: Side view of Becca on Shawna in the 69 position. Kate is holding Jerome’s cock by the base, guiding it into Becca’s pussy while Shawna licks it from the underside. Becca is sucking Ty’s cock head just above Shawna’s pussy.

Page 44:  2 squares, 2 vertical rectangles, 2 squares

Panel 1: Close up of Becca’s crotch with most of Jerome’s cock in it. Shawna’s head is bent down licking his balls.

Panel 2: Close up of Ty’s cock slipping into Shawna’s pussy. Becca’s head is cock, mouth open, moaning.

Becca: “It’s so big, Mr. Brown!”

Panel 3: View of Becca’s ass with Brown, fucking her from behind. Kate is kneeling beside him. They might be kissing. Kate could also be spanking Becca with a red hand welt on one ass cheek saying “That’s for cheating on my son, slut.”

Panel 4: View of Ty’s chest rising above Becca’s head. If Kate is spanking her, Becca might be saying OW! Quit spanking me.

Panel 5: Close up of Becca’s crotch. Jerome’s cock head is out, exploding semen all over it. Sperm is pouring out from her pussy into Shawna’s open mouth.

Panel 6: Close up of Becca’s head, mouth open. Ty has pulled out of Shawna is shooting sperm all over Becca’s face and into her mouth. Shawna’s pussy is leaking sperm.

Page 45  Large top panel and 2 equal horizontal panels.

Panel 1: Full view of the bed with Jerome kneeling. Shawna and Becca are kneeling in his arms. They can be running their hands over his chest and one or both have their hands on his cock. Kate is on the far side on her back, legs spread. Her hand is on Ty’s cock, pulling him into her.

Jerome: “I’ll take these young things. You spend some time with your mother.”

Ty: “She’s not my mother.”

Panel 2: Jerome laying on his back. Becca is sitting on his face. Shanwa is riding his cock. The women are facing each other, touching each others breasts.

Becca: “I’m cumming!”

Shawna: “Me too.”

Panel 3: Side view of Kate now on all fours getting it from behind by Ty. Motion lines show him fucking her hard.

Kate: “Gimme that black cock, Ty.”

Noise: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!

Page 46  horizontal, 2 square, horizontal

Panel 1: Outside view of the trailer. Ty is leaving with his arms around both teen girls. Shawna is in her slut outfit and Becca her cheerleader uniform.

Panel 2: Close up of Jerome’s erect cock sticking straight up. Kate is holding it and licking the crown.

Kate: “That was interesting.”

Panel 3: Kate squatting over Jerome’s cock guiding it in.

Kate: “I think I love my new life.”

Panel 4: Side view of Kate laying low on Jerome. Their faces are close staring in each others eyes.

Kate: “And I love you, Mr. Brown.”

Jerome: “I love you to, slut. And fuck it, call me Jerome.”

THE END