Monday, November 23, 2015
Tuesday, November 17, 2015
Flag Girls 4 comic script
Here's the script for Flag Girls part 4. It's not worth reading unless you're into these things. The story is more entertaining. There'll be one more part ending with the girls leaving the keys. I'll run it by Kaos to see is she wants to do the epilogue too. The driving off from the Keys is a perfect ending point, but some interesting things do happen in the epilogue.
The Flag Girls Get Fucked 4
Characters
Dixie Meriwether: Blonde in the confederate flag bikini. Tall at
nearly 6’ with big DD breasts. Pierced navel with confederate flag
pin (google confederate flag belly button ring). Tramp stamp of a
confederate flag on back. Age 26. She is tanned, toned, and lithe.
Her large breasts make her appear top heavy.
Rose Clark: Reddish brown haired woman in American flag bikini.
She’s fair skinned. Pierced navel with sparkly diamond stud..
Shorter then Dixie, but wears high heeled sandals to appear the
same height. DD breasts look bigger on her smaller frame. Age 27
Amir: Deshawn’s dad. He is heavier then his son with a beer gut,
but muscular arms. His cock is about the size of Gage’s, but Amir
has an unusually round knobby head.
Deshawn: Big and well muscled with a military style flat top and
blue tribal tattoos. Somewhat brutish looking. He is circumcised
and the longest of the group at 14” His cock head is an elongated
serpent head.
Jamon: Big Jamaican bartender and roommate. He isn’t attractive.
His skin is very dark and he has long dreadlocks. He also has a
gold tooth. His cock is as long as Mark’s and as thick as Gages.
He is uncircumcised. He is thinner and wiry, but all muscle.
Siobhan: Classic Irish red head with redder hair then Rose and
paler skin with freckles. Her tits are almost as big as the flag
girls. Her areolas are bigger then the girls, but fainter. She has
a black spade belly button pin.
Marley: Lead singer of Rasta with Meatballs. He’s average looking
and build. He has dreads and maybe one of those multicolored Rasta
hats. His teeth are yellowed. Penis 13” uncircumcised. Very dark
skinned.
Sammy: Band member. Short and thin. Mid thirties. Average looking.
Slicked back hair and a mustache. Shortest cock of the bunch, but
it’s thick and stubby, a fat 9” uncircumcised. His balls remain
very big and he cums a lot. Coal black.
Reno: Band member. Best looking of the band. Fit and muscular, but
not as big as Gage. He is bald, but has black sideburns that meet
as a mustache, but no beard. 14” uncircumcised penis as big as
Deshawn’s. The pee slit is bigger and his balls are the biggest.
He’s a heavy cummer. Very dark skinned.
Unnamed band member: Unimportant.
Mark: Handsome young and muscular. Shaved bald. Perfectly
streamlined 12” cock.
Gage: Big and tough looking. He looks like a weightlifter. He has
a flat top hair cut. His cock is darker and slightly smaller at
11”, but thicker.
Jake: Rose’s fiance
Billy Ray: Dixie’s older husband at 42. Redneck. He wears a
baseball cap and maybe a jean vest with a confederate flag on it.
The cap might have the flag too. He has a big mustache but no
beard.
Rod: Captain of the Big Rod. He is dark brown. He is bald, big and
muscular maybe with a gut
Cover: View up from the bottom of the ocean. Rose and Dixie are
swimming nude above the viewer. They are wearing masks, snorkels,
and flippers. Fish and/or other sea life are swimming around them.
Rose and Dixie in their new spade bikinis. The bottom shows a
poker table with chips. Several black hands are holding cards. One
may be holding up one card, the Queen of Spades. Maybe a nice
touch would be to make the cards all spades. The girls are serving
the guys, holding beers out for them or a bag of chips.
Sensationalist tags: Take a ride on the BIG ROD!
Title: The Flag Girls Get Fucked 4
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaosgal.
Page 1: Large to horizontal with 2 smaller squares on bottom.
Panel 1: Wide shot of the kitchen. Dixie is entering the room
nude. Gage is sitting on the far end of a table wearing his
security tee shirt and shorts. Jamon is sitting on the right the
table. There are plates of pancakes and bacon in front of both.
Jamon’s chair is pushed back and he is angled facing the viewer
with a nude Rose on her knees sucking his cock. His shirt is
pulled up and his shorts down around his legs.
Dixie: “Smells good!”
Jamon: “OH FUCK!”
Noise around blow job: SLURP!
Panel 2: Close up of food plate with Dixie’s hand reaching for a
slice of bacon. Gage’s hand is hitting her hand.
Noise: SMACK!
Panel 3: Front view of Gage seated with Dixie leaning over him
holding her hand.
Gage: “You cane at when the laundry’s done.”
Page 2: horizontal top with smaller square on tight. Large
horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Nude Dixie bent in front of a washing machine filling it
with sheets.
Panel 2: Close up of Dixie’s ass with the tattoo. Gage’s hard
black cock is resting on her crack. His hands are on her hips.
Panel 3: Dixie sitting on washing machine while Gage lines his
cock up with her pussy.
Gage: “Gotta bust a nut before work.”
Gage: “You want this black cock?”
Dixie: “You know I want that big nigger cock, stud.”
Noises around washing machine: Whrrr! Whrrr!
Page 3: Two vertical top panels with a long horizontal on bottom
Panel 1: Dixie sitting on machine her legs wrapped around his
waist. Gage is fucking her and you can see his cock in her. Her
head is thrown back.
Noises around machine: Whrr! Whrr!
Noises around cock: “Fwap! Fwap!
Dixie: “Your big nigger cock is making me cum!
Gage: “Cum on that black dick, slut.”
Panel 2: Same shot only Gage is leaning over her sucking one erect
nipple. She is still screaming. Maybe an xray shows him cumming in
her.
Dixie: “OHGAWD!”
Dixie: “CCUUMMIINNGG!!”
Panel 3: Dixie sitting back on the machine, legs spread and sperm
dripping out of her pussy. Gage is pulling his shorts up. His cock
is still sticking out semi erect and leaking.
Dixie: “Mmmm, that was some fuck, lover.”
Gage: “Thanks. Get this cleaned up before you leave.”
Dixie: “Yes sir!”
Page 4: horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: Dixie strolling with a purpose back into the kitchen.
Rose is in the same position, but now she is sucking Mark’s cock.
He is eating pancakes from a plate.
Dixie (thinking): Need some paper towels.
Noise around Rose’s mouth: Slurp! Slurp!
Panel 2: Kitchen table with Dixie now on the opposite side eating
from a plate. Rose is sitting back in the blow job chair. Her
hands are on her belly and it might be bulging out some from the
two loads of sperm she’s swallowed. Rose isn’t eating.
Dixie: “Finally, I’m starved!
Rose: “None for me, my belly’s full.”
Panel 3: The two girls by the front door dressing in their spade
bikinis.
Dixie: “Let’s go.”
Page 5 vertical left side, 2 squares on right.
Panel 1: Front view of the girls in their bikinis walking through
the resort. A few men might be ogling them.
Dixie: “Lets go look at the fish and then lay out.”
Rose: “Maybe take a little nap.”
Dixie: “YAWN! Sounds great. Neither of us have slept much.”
Panel 2: View over Dixie’s shoulder of her looking down into the
clear water and some fish swimming around.
Panel 3: Backsides of Dixie and Rose standing on the dock. They
are looking at the back of the boat. The name BIG ROD is between
their legs on the back of the boat. Standing on the deck above is
Rod. His shirt is open. His boat appeared in Part 2.
Rod: “Allo ladies.”
Dixie and Rose: ‘Hello.”
Page 6 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Side view of Rod helping the women on his boat.
Rod: “No business today. Let me take you for a ride.”
Rod: “I know a reef for snorkeling.:
Rod: “Your new bikinis are tres bien.”
Panel 2: Side view of the boat moving through the water. Rod is at
the wheel. Dixie and Rose are behind him. The islands may be in
the background.
Dixie: “I’m Dixie, this is Rose.”
Rod: “Rodolph, but call me Rod.”
Rose: “You’re Haitian?”
Rod: “Oui!”
Page 7 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: The back of the boat. Rod is passing out snorkeling gear.
He is shirtless now.
Rose: “Very kind of you.”
Rod: “Well I do expect to get paid.”
Dixie: “Umm… we didn’t bring much…
Rod: “You sluts can start blowing me, then snorkel before I fuck
you.”
Panel 2: Close up of Rod’s crotch. He’s pushing his shorts under
his balls. His cock is a big one, cut, streamlined, and a s thick
as Gage.
Panel 3: The girl’s upper torso’s. Both are looking down. Rose is
licking her lips.
Dixie: “What makes you think we’ll suck that thing?”
Page 8 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: View over Rod’s shoulder. One hand is pinching Rose’s
nipple trough her spade covering. The other hand is untying
Dixie’s top.
Rod: “You know what the outfit means, non?”
Dixie: “Our bodies belong to the black man.”
Rose: “They can take any hole they want.”
Rod: “Tres bien.”
Panel 2: Nude Rod sitting in fishing chair or captain’s chair. A
nude Dixie is sucking his cock. Rose is behind her stripping her
bikini off.
Noise: Slurp!
Panel 3: Close up of Rod’s cock and balls, rampant and wet. Dixie
is licking around the head while Rose is on the other side licking
above his balls.
Noises around tongues: Lap lap lap
Page 9 4 square panels with a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Side view of Rod’s cock with Dixie swallowing about half.
Noise: GACK!
Panel 2: Flipped side view of Rod’s cock with Rose swallowing
slightly less.
Noise: “ACK!”
Panel 3: Side view of Dixie again sucking it. His hands are in her
hair now. Motion lines show movement.
Noise: Suk suk suk
Dixie (thinking) Ha! Rose can’t swallow as much as me
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie still. Her lips are wrapped around the
head and her cheeks are bulging out. Sperm is flying out around
her mouth.
Noise: Gulp gulp gulp
Panel 5: Side view of his cock straight out and Rose’s head. Her
tongue is out, mouth open. She is stroking his cock rapidly with
motion lines showing she’s jerking him. Some sperm is shooting out
over her tongue and into her mouth.
Rose (thinking): Greedy slut didn’t leave enough for me.
Page 10 large horizontal top panel and two square bottom
Panel 1: Rod standing with his cock sticking out and down,
somewhat deflated. It’s dripping sperm to the deck. The girls are
on either side. Rose might be giving Dixie a mean stare. Dixie is
reaching down and hefting a testicle.
Dixie: “Jesus, these things hold a lot of cum. I never swallowed
so much.
Rose (thinking): Bitch!
Rod: “Go swimming and I’ll recharge.”
Panel 2: View down of the backs of the girls heads in the water,
with mask straps and snorkels. The water is clear and fish might
be visible.
Panel 3: Side view of Rose under water. Bubbles are coming up from
her snorkel. She’s holding a starfish or conch shell.
Page 11: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: View down of a nude Dixie and Rose swimming with bubbles
coming out the snorkels. Dixie is pointing at a large manta ray.
Panel 2: View up of a nude Rose and Dixie swimming along the
surface.
Page 12 2 square top and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Dixie underwater kneeling on the sand. She’s holding up a
shell
Dixie (thinking) Where’s Rose?
Panel 2: Side view of Dixie climbing up the ladder over the side
of the boat.
Panel 3: Angled down view of the deck of the boat with Rose on
all fours getting fucked from behind by Rod. Dixie’s head has
appeared above the side of the boat watching them.
Noise: Slap slap slap.
Rose: “Fuck me! Fuck me! I’m cumming!
Page 13 4 even panels
Panel 1: Side view of the ladder with Dixie falling backwards,
hands out in a dive.
Panel 2: View over Dixie’s shoulder of Rose treading water, a
white trail of semen is leaking out from her pussy.
Panel 3: Dixie on the ladder, Rod is on deck. She’s reaching out
and stroking his cock.
Dixie: “Is it my turn yet?”
Panel 4: A dripping wet Dixie kissing Rod while stroking his cock.
Page 14 large horizontal top. 2 smaller horizontal bottoms
Panel 1: Similar angled down view of the deck, but with Dixie now
riding Rod’s cock. He is mauling her breasts. Rose’s head is above
the ladder. Her mask is pulled up on her hair.
Dixie: “Cumming! CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Side view of them in the same position. Dixie is leaning
forwards so that he can suck her nipples.
Panel 3: Rear end view of her riding his cock. Her fluids are
shooting out.
Noise: Fuk fuk fuk
Page 15 vertical left panel and two squares on the right.
Panel 1: View from Rod’s head of Dixie in his lap. Her head is
thrown back. An xray shows him erupting in her pussy. A dripping
nude Rose stands behind her.
Panel 2: Rose floating on her back in the water. She’s trying to
scoop sperm out from her pussy.
Rod (off panel): “Get cleaned up.”
Panel 3: Side view of Rose on all fours, scrubbing the sperm off
the deck with a big sponge. Rod’s feet and legs are in the
picture.
Rod: “Swab that deck good, girl.”
Rose: “Yes, sir.”
Page 16 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: View over Rose’s shoulder. Rod is steering. Dixie is
standing nude beside him. He has an arm wrapped around her waist
and is sucking one nipple.
Rose (thinking) Still mad the slut didn’t share that big load with
me.
Rose (thinking) Rod’s got some tasty sperm.
Rose (thinking) Maybe he’ll let me suck his cock again?
Dixie: “You haven’t fucked my ass yet?”
Panel 2: View from the same and, but Rose is now steering the
boat. Dixie is bent over the railing. Rod is lining his cock down
to her ass cheeks while looking behind him and talking to Rose.
Rod: “Just aim the boat for those two islands.”
Page 17 vertical left side with two squares on the right and a
horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Down view from Rod’s perspective. His cock head is
pushing into her anus. He has both hands on her waist, thumbs
pressing into her flag tattoo.
Dixie: “Fuck my ass!”
Panel 2: Close up of her rear end with more of his cock stretching
out her ass.
Panel 3: Close up of her face looking strained.
Dixie (thinking) Damn! He’s ripping me open.
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie holding the railing, breasts dangling
while Rod fucks her ass from behind.
Dixie: “Fuck that ass, Rod. Give me that big black cock!”
Page 18: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: View from the rear of the boat of Dixie getting her ass
fucked. Rose is steering looking over at them. A sailboat or the
islands are close by. An X-ray shows him cumming.
Rose: “Ugh guys… we’re getting close.
Rod: “I’m nuttin her ass now.”
Panel 2: Rose on all fours scrubbing up their sperm again while
Dixie stands behind her putting her bikini on and Rod is pulling
his shorts up.
Rod: “Clean that up good, Rose.”
Page 19 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Side view of the boat back at dock. Rose and Dixie are
climbing off. Rod is watching them.
Rod: “Hurry back, Dixie.”
Panel 2: Split view of Dixie and Rose in a shower. They aren’t
showering together. A thin divider separates them. Both women are
rubbing soap over their bodies.
Dixie: “I hope you don’t mind, but Rod wants to party with me some
more.”
Rose: “That’s fine. I’ll find Gage.”
Rose (thinking) Funny, I miss being crammed into the shower with
her.
Page 20 large top half and two square bottoms.
Panel 1: The girls standing in the shower changing area. They are
in various stages of putting their bikinis on.
Dixie: “I’m not sure how long Rod will want me, even black men
have limits.”
Rose: “I’ll get a ride with one of the boys.”
Panel 2: The girls upper torsos. They are kissing on the lips,
friendly, not passionate.
Noise: Smack!
Panel 3: Rose in front of the security room abut to go in.
Rose (thinking) I’m no lezzie, but it feels good touching Dix.
Rose (thinking) These black men have awakened something in me.
Rose (thinking) Let’s see if Gage is here.
Page 21 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Rose in the empty security office. She’s bent over a
computer screen that shows Rod holding Dixie on the back of the
boat. She is topless and they are kissing. She is stroking his
cock. The door to the conference room is cracked open and noises
are coming out
Noise from conference door: “Fuck me! Fuck me! FUCK ME! I’m
CUMMING!
Noise from door: “Me too slut!”
Panel 2: Siobhan sitting on the edge of a conference table leaning
back against a pile of luggage (the stolen luggage). Her legs are
wrapped around Gage and his cock is still buried in her with sperm
dripping down his balls. Rose is in the open door behind them,
They are both looking at her.
Siobhan: “Hi Rose!”
Gage: “Yeah hi. You want something?”
Rose: “Sorry, I… Hey, that’s my LUGGAGE!”
Page 22 horizontal top and two square bottoms.
Panel 1: Gage standing facing the viewer. His cock is plump,
sticking out and dripping. Siobhan is beside him smiling. She’s
still sitting on the edge, legs spread and a river of semen
pouring from between her legs.
Gage: “Cops caught the thief red handed. It’s all here.”
Rose (off panel): “This is great! Wait.. How long you have it?”
Gage: “Just a few hours. Saw you leave on the boat, then Siobhan
distracted me.”
Panel 2: Rose standing by Gage with Siobhan still seated.
Gage: “Glad to help. Now why are you looking for me?”
Gage: “Tell the truth. Siobhan’s a spade girl too”
Rose: “I wanted to suck you off.”
Panel 3: Gage pushing Rose’s head down between Siobhan’s legs.
Gage: “I’m a bit spent, but here’s a fresh load of cum.”
Rose: “GAGE! WAIT!
Page 23 4 small squares and a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of Rose’s face smashed in Siobhan’s pussy. Her
nose is between Siobhan’s pussy lips and Gage’s hand is still on
her head.
Panel 2: Close up of Rose pulled back. Her tongue is out and
wiggling between Siobhan’s folds. Sperm is on Rose’s tongue.
Gage’s hand isn’t holding her head down any more.
Rose (thinking): Her pussy’s keeping his sperm hot!
Panel 3: Same close up with Rose fingering her while pulling
Siobhan’s clit out between her legs.
Panel 4: Same close up with Rose’s tongue stuck straight out
between Siobhan’s labia.
Siobhan (off panel): Fuck my pussy with your tongue.”
Panel 5: View of the back of Rose’s head between Siobhan’s spread
legs and up Siobhan’s body. Siobhan is moaning and maybe pulling
Rose’s hair out like reins.
Siobhan: “CUMMING!”
Rose (thinking): There’s some more sperm!
Page 24 horizontal top and bottom with two squares in the middle
Panel 1: Side view of Siobhan lying back on the table with Rose
bent down between her legs. Gage is behind them stroking his erect
cock. Siobhan might be squeezing her own breasts.
Siobhan: “Rose is loving this, Gage. She‘s good too.”
Rose (thinking): Damn! I am loving this.
Gage: “Fuck this is hot!”
Panel 2: Close up of Gage pushing his cock into Rose’s pussy.
Fluid is squirting out around it.
Noise: Squish!
Panel 3: Close up of Rose’s head rearing up above Siobhan’s bush.
Her face is wet and messy. Her eyes are closed.
Rose: “YES! FUCK ME!”
Panel 4: Side view of the threesome. Gage is going hard into her
pussy.
Noise: Fuk fuk! Fuk!
Noise: “Slurp slurp slurp
Page 25 horizontal top and two vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: God view down of Rose’s back. Gage is buried in her pussy
with an xray showing his cumming. Her face is still in Siobhan’s
pussy.
Gage: “Take every drop of that nut!”
Siobhan and Rose running together: “CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Rose kneeling on the floor between Rose and Gage. She
licking sperm off Gage’s spent cock. Siobhan is wearing spade
panties and pulling a halter that reads Black Owned down over her
tits.
Panel 3: Rose still kneeling. Siobhan is pulling up scandalously
short shorts while bending over and kissing Rose on the lips.
Siobhan: “Thank you!”
Page 26 4 even panels
Panel 1: Rose still kneeling nude on the floor of the conference
room. Siobhan is gone. Gage is dressed in his security uniform.
Gage: “Get this mess cleaned up. I’m late for my rounds.”
Panel 2: Rose on all fours scrubbing up sperm off the floor.
Rose (thinking) I’ve turned into some sort of cum cleaning lady.
Panel 3: Rose standing nude before her luggage. She’s going
through her wallet over a purse.
Rose: “Thank god, everything’s here.”
Panel 4: Rose wearing her spade bikini under the shower again.
Page 27 2 vertical panels and two smaller square bottom panels.
Panel 1: Rose seated at the bar while Siobhan sets a margarita in
front of her. Rose is holding up a bill.
Rose: “Look, I’ve got money.”
Panel 2: Side view of Rose in her bar stool while Dixie comes up
taking a seat by her.
Dixie: “These black men are amazing. Rod fucked me twice more and
I just sucked him off.”
Panel 3: Close up of Dixie’s upper torso. She’s got a big wad of
sperm on her lip. Rose’s finger is scooping it up.
Rose: “You got a bit…”
Panel 4: Close up of Rose’s upper torso sucking the sperm off her
finger.
Rose: “Yummy!”
Page 28 top and bottom panels.
Panel 1: Back shot of the flag girls at the bar facing each other.
Siobhan is between them, setting a margarita down in front of Dix.
Dixie: “No decrease in volume until his last load.”
Siobhan: “You talking abut Rodolph? That nigger’s got some good
tasting jizz.”
Dixie: “He sure does.”
Rose: “They all do.”
Panel 2: Back view of Siobhan’s side of the bar. Her ass cheeks
practically pop out of her short shorts. Rose and Dixie’s upper
torsos are above the other side of the bar.
Siobhan: “The bigger balls produce thicker tastier pudding.”
Siobhan: “If you ever go back to white men and I don’t know why
you would, you’ll find their little teaspoon of runny semen tastes
like crap.”
Siobhan: “Ten bucks for the drink.”
Rose: “I got it.”
Page 29 2 vertical panels, horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of the flag girls facing each other on the
stools.
Dixie: “Where’d ya get the money?”
Rose: “Gage found our luggage!”
Panel 2: The flag girls in the clothes they showed up wearing
pushing a shopping cart down a supermarket alley.
Dixie: “Let’s fix the boys a nice dinner.”
Panel 3: Gage and Mark arriving home to find the flag girls nude
holding plates of food (chicken and potatoes)
Gage: “Something smells delicious.”
Mark: “Something looks delicious too.”
Page 30 horizontal top on left and smaller vertical top on right,
half page bottom
Panel 1: Gage and mark seated and eating while Rose and Dixie blow
them under the table.
Noises: slurp slurp slurp
Panel 2: Side view of a nude Rose at the sink doing the dishes.
Panel 3: Full view of the living room. Dixie is between Mark and
Gage, she’s nude. They’re dressed, but she may have pulled out
their cocks and is stroking them. They are watching tv. Rose is
strolling towards them. The front door has been thrown open and
Amir is standing there staring at Rose and looking delighted.
Amir: “Fuck yeah! That’s what I like coming home to.”
Page 31 horizontal top on left and smaller vertical top on right,
half page bottom
Panel 1: Side view of the stairs with Amir climbing them and Rose
thrown over his shoulder. Deshawn is following them.
Panel 2: Rose kneeling before Amir, pulling his pants down and his
cock is springing up, not fully hard.
Panel 3: Rose on all fours on a bed. Amir is fucking her from
behind. She’s sucking on Deshawn’s cock.
Noise: Slurp slurp.
Noise: Fuk fuk fuk
Amir: “So baby, how’d ya like a ride down to Key West tomorrow?”
To be continued….
The Flag Girls Get Fucked 4
Characters
Dixie Meriwether: Blonde in the confederate flag bikini. Tall at
nearly 6’ with big DD breasts. Pierced navel with confederate flag
pin (google confederate flag belly button ring). Tramp stamp of a
confederate flag on back. Age 26. She is tanned, toned, and lithe.
Her large breasts make her appear top heavy.
Rose Clark: Reddish brown haired woman in American flag bikini.
She’s fair skinned. Pierced navel with sparkly diamond stud..
Shorter then Dixie, but wears high heeled sandals to appear the
same height. DD breasts look bigger on her smaller frame. Age 27
Amir: Deshawn’s dad. He is heavier then his son with a beer gut,
but muscular arms. His cock is about the size of Gage’s, but Amir
has an unusually round knobby head.
Deshawn: Big and well muscled with a military style flat top and
blue tribal tattoos. Somewhat brutish looking. He is circumcised
and the longest of the group at 14” His cock head is an elongated
serpent head.
Jamon: Big Jamaican bartender and roommate. He isn’t attractive.
His skin is very dark and he has long dreadlocks. He also has a
gold tooth. His cock is as long as Mark’s and as thick as Gages.
He is uncircumcised. He is thinner and wiry, but all muscle.
Siobhan: Classic Irish red head with redder hair then Rose and
paler skin with freckles. Her tits are almost as big as the flag
girls. Her areolas are bigger then the girls, but fainter. She has
a black spade belly button pin.
Marley: Lead singer of Rasta with Meatballs. He’s average looking
and build. He has dreads and maybe one of those multicolored Rasta
hats. His teeth are yellowed. Penis 13” uncircumcised. Very dark
skinned.
Sammy: Band member. Short and thin. Mid thirties. Average looking.
Slicked back hair and a mustache. Shortest cock of the bunch, but
it’s thick and stubby, a fat 9” uncircumcised. His balls remain
very big and he cums a lot. Coal black.
Reno: Band member. Best looking of the band. Fit and muscular, but
not as big as Gage. He is bald, but has black sideburns that meet
as a mustache, but no beard. 14” uncircumcised penis as big as
Deshawn’s. The pee slit is bigger and his balls are the biggest.
He’s a heavy cummer. Very dark skinned.
Unnamed band member: Unimportant.
Mark: Handsome young and muscular. Shaved bald. Perfectly
streamlined 12” cock.
Gage: Big and tough looking. He looks like a weightlifter. He has
a flat top hair cut. His cock is darker and slightly smaller at
11”, but thicker.
Jake: Rose’s fiance
Billy Ray: Dixie’s older husband at 42. Redneck. He wears a
baseball cap and maybe a jean vest with a confederate flag on it.
The cap might have the flag too. He has a big mustache but no
beard.
Rod: Captain of the Big Rod. He is dark brown. He is bald, big and
muscular maybe with a gut
Cover: View up from the bottom of the ocean. Rose and Dixie are
swimming nude above the viewer. They are wearing masks, snorkels,
and flippers. Fish and/or other sea life are swimming around them.
Rose and Dixie in their new spade bikinis. The bottom shows a
poker table with chips. Several black hands are holding cards. One
may be holding up one card, the Queen of Spades. Maybe a nice
touch would be to make the cards all spades. The girls are serving
the guys, holding beers out for them or a bag of chips.
Sensationalist tags: Take a ride on the BIG ROD!
Title: The Flag Girls Get Fucked 4
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaosgal.
Page 1: Large to horizontal with 2 smaller squares on bottom.
Panel 1: Wide shot of the kitchen. Dixie is entering the room
nude. Gage is sitting on the far end of a table wearing his
security tee shirt and shorts. Jamon is sitting on the right the
table. There are plates of pancakes and bacon in front of both.
Jamon’s chair is pushed back and he is angled facing the viewer
with a nude Rose on her knees sucking his cock. His shirt is
pulled up and his shorts down around his legs.
Dixie: “Smells good!”
Jamon: “OH FUCK!”
Noise around blow job: SLURP!
Panel 2: Close up of food plate with Dixie’s hand reaching for a
slice of bacon. Gage’s hand is hitting her hand.
Noise: SMACK!
Panel 3: Front view of Gage seated with Dixie leaning over him
holding her hand.
Gage: “You cane at when the laundry’s done.”
Page 2: horizontal top with smaller square on tight. Large
horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Nude Dixie bent in front of a washing machine filling it
with sheets.
Panel 2: Close up of Dixie’s ass with the tattoo. Gage’s hard
black cock is resting on her crack. His hands are on her hips.
Panel 3: Dixie sitting on washing machine while Gage lines his
cock up with her pussy.
Gage: “Gotta bust a nut before work.”
Gage: “You want this black cock?”
Dixie: “You know I want that big nigger cock, stud.”
Noises around washing machine: Whrrr! Whrrr!
Page 3: Two vertical top panels with a long horizontal on bottom
Panel 1: Dixie sitting on machine her legs wrapped around his
waist. Gage is fucking her and you can see his cock in her. Her
head is thrown back.
Noises around machine: Whrr! Whrr!
Noises around cock: “Fwap! Fwap!
Dixie: “Your big nigger cock is making me cum!
Gage: “Cum on that black dick, slut.”
Panel 2: Same shot only Gage is leaning over her sucking one erect
nipple. She is still screaming. Maybe an xray shows him cumming in
her.
Dixie: “OHGAWD!”
Dixie: “CCUUMMIINNGG!!”
Panel 3: Dixie sitting back on the machine, legs spread and sperm
dripping out of her pussy. Gage is pulling his shorts up. His cock
is still sticking out semi erect and leaking.
Dixie: “Mmmm, that was some fuck, lover.”
Gage: “Thanks. Get this cleaned up before you leave.”
Dixie: “Yes sir!”
Page 4: horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: Dixie strolling with a purpose back into the kitchen.
Rose is in the same position, but now she is sucking Mark’s cock.
He is eating pancakes from a plate.
Dixie (thinking): Need some paper towels.
Noise around Rose’s mouth: Slurp! Slurp!
Panel 2: Kitchen table with Dixie now on the opposite side eating
from a plate. Rose is sitting back in the blow job chair. Her
hands are on her belly and it might be bulging out some from the
two loads of sperm she’s swallowed. Rose isn’t eating.
Dixie: “Finally, I’m starved!
Rose: “None for me, my belly’s full.”
Panel 3: The two girls by the front door dressing in their spade
bikinis.
Dixie: “Let’s go.”
Page 5 vertical left side, 2 squares on right.
Panel 1: Front view of the girls in their bikinis walking through
the resort. A few men might be ogling them.
Dixie: “Lets go look at the fish and then lay out.”
Rose: “Maybe take a little nap.”
Dixie: “YAWN! Sounds great. Neither of us have slept much.”
Panel 2: View over Dixie’s shoulder of her looking down into the
clear water and some fish swimming around.
Panel 3: Backsides of Dixie and Rose standing on the dock. They
are looking at the back of the boat. The name BIG ROD is between
their legs on the back of the boat. Standing on the deck above is
Rod. His shirt is open. His boat appeared in Part 2.
Rod: “Allo ladies.”
Dixie and Rose: ‘Hello.”
Page 6 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Side view of Rod helping the women on his boat.
Rod: “No business today. Let me take you for a ride.”
Rod: “I know a reef for snorkeling.:
Rod: “Your new bikinis are tres bien.”
Panel 2: Side view of the boat moving through the water. Rod is at
the wheel. Dixie and Rose are behind him. The islands may be in
the background.
Dixie: “I’m Dixie, this is Rose.”
Rod: “Rodolph, but call me Rod.”
Rose: “You’re Haitian?”
Rod: “Oui!”
Page 7 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: The back of the boat. Rod is passing out snorkeling gear.
He is shirtless now.
Rose: “Very kind of you.”
Rod: “Well I do expect to get paid.”
Dixie: “Umm… we didn’t bring much…
Rod: “You sluts can start blowing me, then snorkel before I fuck
you.”
Panel 2: Close up of Rod’s crotch. He’s pushing his shorts under
his balls. His cock is a big one, cut, streamlined, and a s thick
as Gage.
Panel 3: The girl’s upper torso’s. Both are looking down. Rose is
licking her lips.
Dixie: “What makes you think we’ll suck that thing?”
Page 8 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: View over Rod’s shoulder. One hand is pinching Rose’s
nipple trough her spade covering. The other hand is untying
Dixie’s top.
Rod: “You know what the outfit means, non?”
Dixie: “Our bodies belong to the black man.”
Rose: “They can take any hole they want.”
Rod: “Tres bien.”
Panel 2: Nude Rod sitting in fishing chair or captain’s chair. A
nude Dixie is sucking his cock. Rose is behind her stripping her
bikini off.
Noise: Slurp!
Panel 3: Close up of Rod’s cock and balls, rampant and wet. Dixie
is licking around the head while Rose is on the other side licking
above his balls.
Noises around tongues: Lap lap lap
Page 9 4 square panels with a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Side view of Rod’s cock with Dixie swallowing about half.
Noise: GACK!
Panel 2: Flipped side view of Rod’s cock with Rose swallowing
slightly less.
Noise: “ACK!”
Panel 3: Side view of Dixie again sucking it. His hands are in her
hair now. Motion lines show movement.
Noise: Suk suk suk
Dixie (thinking) Ha! Rose can’t swallow as much as me
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie still. Her lips are wrapped around the
head and her cheeks are bulging out. Sperm is flying out around
her mouth.
Noise: Gulp gulp gulp
Panel 5: Side view of his cock straight out and Rose’s head. Her
tongue is out, mouth open. She is stroking his cock rapidly with
motion lines showing she’s jerking him. Some sperm is shooting out
over her tongue and into her mouth.
Rose (thinking): Greedy slut didn’t leave enough for me.
Page 10 large horizontal top panel and two square bottom
Panel 1: Rod standing with his cock sticking out and down,
somewhat deflated. It’s dripping sperm to the deck. The girls are
on either side. Rose might be giving Dixie a mean stare. Dixie is
reaching down and hefting a testicle.
Dixie: “Jesus, these things hold a lot of cum. I never swallowed
so much.
Rose (thinking): Bitch!
Rod: “Go swimming and I’ll recharge.”
Panel 2: View down of the backs of the girls heads in the water,
with mask straps and snorkels. The water is clear and fish might
be visible.
Panel 3: Side view of Rose under water. Bubbles are coming up from
her snorkel. She’s holding a starfish or conch shell.
Page 11: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: View down of a nude Dixie and Rose swimming with bubbles
coming out the snorkels. Dixie is pointing at a large manta ray.
Panel 2: View up of a nude Rose and Dixie swimming along the
surface.
Page 12 2 square top and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Dixie underwater kneeling on the sand. She’s holding up a
shell
Dixie (thinking) Where’s Rose?
Panel 2: Side view of Dixie climbing up the ladder over the side
of the boat.
Panel 3: Angled down view of the deck of the boat with Rose on
all fours getting fucked from behind by Rod. Dixie’s head has
appeared above the side of the boat watching them.
Noise: Slap slap slap.
Rose: “Fuck me! Fuck me! I’m cumming!
Page 13 4 even panels
Panel 1: Side view of the ladder with Dixie falling backwards,
hands out in a dive.
Panel 2: View over Dixie’s shoulder of Rose treading water, a
white trail of semen is leaking out from her pussy.
Panel 3: Dixie on the ladder, Rod is on deck. She’s reaching out
and stroking his cock.
Dixie: “Is it my turn yet?”
Panel 4: A dripping wet Dixie kissing Rod while stroking his cock.
Page 14 large horizontal top. 2 smaller horizontal bottoms
Panel 1: Similar angled down view of the deck, but with Dixie now
riding Rod’s cock. He is mauling her breasts. Rose’s head is above
the ladder. Her mask is pulled up on her hair.
Dixie: “Cumming! CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Side view of them in the same position. Dixie is leaning
forwards so that he can suck her nipples.
Panel 3: Rear end view of her riding his cock. Her fluids are
shooting out.
Noise: Fuk fuk fuk
Page 15 vertical left panel and two squares on the right.
Panel 1: View from Rod’s head of Dixie in his lap. Her head is
thrown back. An xray shows him erupting in her pussy. A dripping
nude Rose stands behind her.
Panel 2: Rose floating on her back in the water. She’s trying to
scoop sperm out from her pussy.
Rod (off panel): “Get cleaned up.”
Panel 3: Side view of Rose on all fours, scrubbing the sperm off
the deck with a big sponge. Rod’s feet and legs are in the
picture.
Rod: “Swab that deck good, girl.”
Rose: “Yes, sir.”
Page 16 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: View over Rose’s shoulder. Rod is steering. Dixie is
standing nude beside him. He has an arm wrapped around her waist
and is sucking one nipple.
Rose (thinking) Still mad the slut didn’t share that big load with
me.
Rose (thinking) Rod’s got some tasty sperm.
Rose (thinking) Maybe he’ll let me suck his cock again?
Dixie: “You haven’t fucked my ass yet?”
Panel 2: View from the same and, but Rose is now steering the
boat. Dixie is bent over the railing. Rod is lining his cock down
to her ass cheeks while looking behind him and talking to Rose.
Rod: “Just aim the boat for those two islands.”
Page 17 vertical left side with two squares on the right and a
horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Down view from Rod’s perspective. His cock head is
pushing into her anus. He has both hands on her waist, thumbs
pressing into her flag tattoo.
Dixie: “Fuck my ass!”
Panel 2: Close up of her rear end with more of his cock stretching
out her ass.
Panel 3: Close up of her face looking strained.
Dixie (thinking) Damn! He’s ripping me open.
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie holding the railing, breasts dangling
while Rod fucks her ass from behind.
Dixie: “Fuck that ass, Rod. Give me that big black cock!”
Page 18: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: View from the rear of the boat of Dixie getting her ass
fucked. Rose is steering looking over at them. A sailboat or the
islands are close by. An X-ray shows him cumming.
Rose: “Ugh guys… we’re getting close.
Rod: “I’m nuttin her ass now.”
Panel 2: Rose on all fours scrubbing up their sperm again while
Dixie stands behind her putting her bikini on and Rod is pulling
his shorts up.
Rod: “Clean that up good, Rose.”
Page 19 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Side view of the boat back at dock. Rose and Dixie are
climbing off. Rod is watching them.
Rod: “Hurry back, Dixie.”
Panel 2: Split view of Dixie and Rose in a shower. They aren’t
showering together. A thin divider separates them. Both women are
rubbing soap over their bodies.
Dixie: “I hope you don’t mind, but Rod wants to party with me some
more.”
Rose: “That’s fine. I’ll find Gage.”
Rose (thinking) Funny, I miss being crammed into the shower with
her.
Page 20 large top half and two square bottoms.
Panel 1: The girls standing in the shower changing area. They are
in various stages of putting their bikinis on.
Dixie: “I’m not sure how long Rod will want me, even black men
have limits.”
Rose: “I’ll get a ride with one of the boys.”
Panel 2: The girls upper torsos. They are kissing on the lips,
friendly, not passionate.
Noise: Smack!
Panel 3: Rose in front of the security room abut to go in.
Rose (thinking) I’m no lezzie, but it feels good touching Dix.
Rose (thinking) These black men have awakened something in me.
Rose (thinking) Let’s see if Gage is here.
Page 21 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Rose in the empty security office. She’s bent over a
computer screen that shows Rod holding Dixie on the back of the
boat. She is topless and they are kissing. She is stroking his
cock. The door to the conference room is cracked open and noises
are coming out
Noise from conference door: “Fuck me! Fuck me! FUCK ME! I’m
CUMMING!
Noise from door: “Me too slut!”
Panel 2: Siobhan sitting on the edge of a conference table leaning
back against a pile of luggage (the stolen luggage). Her legs are
wrapped around Gage and his cock is still buried in her with sperm
dripping down his balls. Rose is in the open door behind them,
They are both looking at her.
Siobhan: “Hi Rose!”
Gage: “Yeah hi. You want something?”
Rose: “Sorry, I… Hey, that’s my LUGGAGE!”
Page 22 horizontal top and two square bottoms.
Panel 1: Gage standing facing the viewer. His cock is plump,
sticking out and dripping. Siobhan is beside him smiling. She’s
still sitting on the edge, legs spread and a river of semen
pouring from between her legs.
Gage: “Cops caught the thief red handed. It’s all here.”
Rose (off panel): “This is great! Wait.. How long you have it?”
Gage: “Just a few hours. Saw you leave on the boat, then Siobhan
distracted me.”
Panel 2: Rose standing by Gage with Siobhan still seated.
Gage: “Glad to help. Now why are you looking for me?”
Gage: “Tell the truth. Siobhan’s a spade girl too”
Rose: “I wanted to suck you off.”
Panel 3: Gage pushing Rose’s head down between Siobhan’s legs.
Gage: “I’m a bit spent, but here’s a fresh load of cum.”
Rose: “GAGE! WAIT!
Page 23 4 small squares and a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of Rose’s face smashed in Siobhan’s pussy. Her
nose is between Siobhan’s pussy lips and Gage’s hand is still on
her head.
Panel 2: Close up of Rose pulled back. Her tongue is out and
wiggling between Siobhan’s folds. Sperm is on Rose’s tongue.
Gage’s hand isn’t holding her head down any more.
Rose (thinking): Her pussy’s keeping his sperm hot!
Panel 3: Same close up with Rose fingering her while pulling
Siobhan’s clit out between her legs.
Panel 4: Same close up with Rose’s tongue stuck straight out
between Siobhan’s labia.
Siobhan (off panel): Fuck my pussy with your tongue.”
Panel 5: View of the back of Rose’s head between Siobhan’s spread
legs and up Siobhan’s body. Siobhan is moaning and maybe pulling
Rose’s hair out like reins.
Siobhan: “CUMMING!”
Rose (thinking): There’s some more sperm!
Page 24 horizontal top and bottom with two squares in the middle
Panel 1: Side view of Siobhan lying back on the table with Rose
bent down between her legs. Gage is behind them stroking his erect
cock. Siobhan might be squeezing her own breasts.
Siobhan: “Rose is loving this, Gage. She‘s good too.”
Rose (thinking): Damn! I am loving this.
Gage: “Fuck this is hot!”
Panel 2: Close up of Gage pushing his cock into Rose’s pussy.
Fluid is squirting out around it.
Noise: Squish!
Panel 3: Close up of Rose’s head rearing up above Siobhan’s bush.
Her face is wet and messy. Her eyes are closed.
Rose: “YES! FUCK ME!”
Panel 4: Side view of the threesome. Gage is going hard into her
pussy.
Noise: Fuk fuk! Fuk!
Noise: “Slurp slurp slurp
Page 25 horizontal top and two vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: God view down of Rose’s back. Gage is buried in her pussy
with an xray showing his cumming. Her face is still in Siobhan’s
pussy.
Gage: “Take every drop of that nut!”
Siobhan and Rose running together: “CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Rose kneeling on the floor between Rose and Gage. She
licking sperm off Gage’s spent cock. Siobhan is wearing spade
panties and pulling a halter that reads Black Owned down over her
tits.
Panel 3: Rose still kneeling. Siobhan is pulling up scandalously
short shorts while bending over and kissing Rose on the lips.
Siobhan: “Thank you!”
Page 26 4 even panels
Panel 1: Rose still kneeling nude on the floor of the conference
room. Siobhan is gone. Gage is dressed in his security uniform.
Gage: “Get this mess cleaned up. I’m late for my rounds.”
Panel 2: Rose on all fours scrubbing up sperm off the floor.
Rose (thinking) I’ve turned into some sort of cum cleaning lady.
Panel 3: Rose standing nude before her luggage. She’s going
through her wallet over a purse.
Rose: “Thank god, everything’s here.”
Panel 4: Rose wearing her spade bikini under the shower again.
Page 27 2 vertical panels and two smaller square bottom panels.
Panel 1: Rose seated at the bar while Siobhan sets a margarita in
front of her. Rose is holding up a bill.
Rose: “Look, I’ve got money.”
Panel 2: Side view of Rose in her bar stool while Dixie comes up
taking a seat by her.
Dixie: “These black men are amazing. Rod fucked me twice more and
I just sucked him off.”
Panel 3: Close up of Dixie’s upper torso. She’s got a big wad of
sperm on her lip. Rose’s finger is scooping it up.
Rose: “You got a bit…”
Panel 4: Close up of Rose’s upper torso sucking the sperm off her
finger.
Rose: “Yummy!”
Page 28 top and bottom panels.
Panel 1: Back shot of the flag girls at the bar facing each other.
Siobhan is between them, setting a margarita down in front of Dix.
Dixie: “No decrease in volume until his last load.”
Siobhan: “You talking abut Rodolph? That nigger’s got some good
tasting jizz.”
Dixie: “He sure does.”
Rose: “They all do.”
Panel 2: Back view of Siobhan’s side of the bar. Her ass cheeks
practically pop out of her short shorts. Rose and Dixie’s upper
torsos are above the other side of the bar.
Siobhan: “The bigger balls produce thicker tastier pudding.”
Siobhan: “If you ever go back to white men and I don’t know why
you would, you’ll find their little teaspoon of runny semen tastes
like crap.”
Siobhan: “Ten bucks for the drink.”
Rose: “I got it.”
Page 29 2 vertical panels, horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of the flag girls facing each other on the
stools.
Dixie: “Where’d ya get the money?”
Rose: “Gage found our luggage!”
Panel 2: The flag girls in the clothes they showed up wearing
pushing a shopping cart down a supermarket alley.
Dixie: “Let’s fix the boys a nice dinner.”
Panel 3: Gage and Mark arriving home to find the flag girls nude
holding plates of food (chicken and potatoes)
Gage: “Something smells delicious.”
Mark: “Something looks delicious too.”
Page 30 horizontal top on left and smaller vertical top on right,
half page bottom
Panel 1: Gage and mark seated and eating while Rose and Dixie blow
them under the table.
Noises: slurp slurp slurp
Panel 2: Side view of a nude Rose at the sink doing the dishes.
Panel 3: Full view of the living room. Dixie is between Mark and
Gage, she’s nude. They’re dressed, but she may have pulled out
their cocks and is stroking them. They are watching tv. Rose is
strolling towards them. The front door has been thrown open and
Amir is standing there staring at Rose and looking delighted.
Amir: “Fuck yeah! That’s what I like coming home to.”
Page 31 horizontal top on left and smaller vertical top on right,
half page bottom
Panel 1: Side view of the stairs with Amir climbing them and Rose
thrown over his shoulder. Deshawn is following them.
Panel 2: Rose kneeling before Amir, pulling his pants down and his
cock is springing up, not fully hard.
Panel 3: Rose on all fours on a bed. Amir is fucking her from
behind. She’s sucking on Deshawn’s cock.
Noise: Slurp slurp.
Noise: Fuk fuk fuk
Amir: “So baby, how’d ya like a ride down to Key West tomorrow?”
To be continued….
Monday, November 16, 2015
Saturday, November 14, 2015
Wednesday, November 11, 2015
Monday, November 9, 2015
This week in Stormbringer
1) This is my busy season at work and I don't expect to get much done until after Christmas, but I had to call out one day and found some time to write Sunday so I actually ended up finishing the next chapter in Coxville Curse 3. It's a Bobbie Sue story and takes place the night of the Pool Party. I will be posting it as soon as I get the chance to do a good read through edit.
2) Kaos posted an update to Flex 3. Check out that last pic of Candace tonguing Marissa's ass while she rides Flex. The end draws nigh (5-6 more weeks).
3) A new artist contacted me about drawing some stories to be posted at johnpersons. I sent him my pinups and short comics list too (the same I sent to Kaos and the basis of the pinups posted on the free side of her site. I'll post an update here if anything comes of this.
4) New pic added to Reunion Revenge at blacknwhite. This one is winding down too.
5) Literotica is tops when it comes to getting stories read. Sister Nancy has reached 11,000 reads in a month. The Unwanted Houseguest is 18,000 reads shy of a million after 14 years.
2) Kaos posted an update to Flex 3. Check out that last pic of Candace tonguing Marissa's ass while she rides Flex. The end draws nigh (5-6 more weeks).
3) A new artist contacted me about drawing some stories to be posted at johnpersons. I sent him my pinups and short comics list too (the same I sent to Kaos and the basis of the pinups posted on the free side of her site. I'll post an update here if anything comes of this.
4) New pic added to Reunion Revenge at blacknwhite. This one is winding down too.
5) Literotica is tops when it comes to getting stories read. Sister Nancy has reached 11,000 reads in a month. The Unwanted Houseguest is 18,000 reads shy of a million after 14 years.
Friday, November 6, 2015
Pit knockoffs
There a strange industry out there on the web of people who just knock off the Pit's work or mix and match his art. I'm not sure I care for it. I've caught people submitting my work as their own over the years or changing up my stories and I always complain to the website to have them removed. Here's some samples of the better Pit rip offs.
Monday, November 2, 2015
Sunday, November 1, 2015
License to Fuck Covers
Thought I'd share these pics of three covers for my Dick Bigg comic. Blacknwhitecomics originally asked me if I'd do some scripts for them and requested a James Bond spoof. I'm a Bond fan and was pretty proud of the way the story came out. Blacknwhite did the two covers by different artists for it, but never went beyond that. Rabies picked up the mantle and drew the entire comic at johnpersons. Some day, I hope to write a follow up.
Some pics that have nothing to do with me
Thought I'd share a few pics I stumbled upon. Two are by Eric Logan III who draws for dirtycomixs.org
The other is by an unknown artist, but has shades of the Pit. I liked what I saw of Logan so much, I contacted the website with hopes they might be interested in illustrating The Queen of Hearts in exchange for a plug. They were interested, but had a big back log of projects in the works and didn't know when they might get to it. They did offer me a writing gig for them, but I'm in the same boat with little time for my own projects. The girl in the Logan pics is Jenny Poussin who pops up in a lot of IR art including JohnPersons.
The other is by an unknown artist, but has shades of the Pit. I liked what I saw of Logan so much, I contacted the website with hopes they might be interested in illustrating The Queen of Hearts in exchange for a plug. They were interested, but had a big back log of projects in the works and didn't know when they might get to it. They did offer me a writing gig for them, but I'm in the same boat with little time for my own projects. The girl in the Logan pics is Jenny Poussin who pops up in a lot of IR art including JohnPersons.
This week in Stormbringer
1) I finished and submitted the Doctor Bitch Comic for Kaos. It won't appear any time soon on her sight. She's still got Gardeners 2 and 3, Son's Best friend's dad, and the first three parts of the Flag Girls on deck as well as another author has submitted some work to her. The script has been posted on the wall and as a page under Comic scripts.
2) I'll be working on the second part of Coxville Curse 3 now before beginning the remainder of the Flag Girls scripts for her.
3) I just posted some random pics that I came across and liked. If any artists or websites object to me sharing random pics, let me know and I will pull them. Also, and artists or websites that want me to post samples, feel free to contact me. I'm getting about 500 views a day here. Once people discover this site, I hope those numbers will go up. I was getting 5000 views on my updates section at asstr every week (still no word from them, but as soon as I do, I'll be updating there again.) I'll also be plugging some stories and authors that I've read and enjoyed on occasion.
4) Blacknwhite updated Reunion Revenge with one pic.
5) Kaos has updated Flex Appeal 3.
6) I've decided to separate my recent Sister Nancy story from the Coxville Curse 3 proper given it's length of 22 pages and that it goes back in time to the night of the fog. I'm classifying it as a separate prologue to CC3 and have posted it with the Coxville stories.
2) I'll be working on the second part of Coxville Curse 3 now before beginning the remainder of the Flag Girls scripts for her.
3) I just posted some random pics that I came across and liked. If any artists or websites object to me sharing random pics, let me know and I will pull them. Also, and artists or websites that want me to post samples, feel free to contact me. I'm getting about 500 views a day here. Once people discover this site, I hope those numbers will go up. I was getting 5000 views on my updates section at asstr every week (still no word from them, but as soon as I do, I'll be updating there again.) I'll also be plugging some stories and authors that I've read and enjoyed on occasion.
4) Blacknwhite updated Reunion Revenge with one pic.
5) Kaos has updated Flex Appeal 3.
6) I've decided to separate my recent Sister Nancy story from the Coxville Curse 3 proper given it's length of 22 pages and that it goes back in time to the night of the fog. I'm classifying it as a separate prologue to CC3 and have posted it with the Coxville stories.
Doctor Bitch Comic Script
Doctor Bitch
Characters:
Katherine “Kat“: A standard hot bodied Kaos drawn woman in her late thirties. Kat has long brown hair. When working, her hair is pulled back in a pony tail. She wears glasses and dresses business professional, but her clothing hugs her hot body. At home, her hair is down and she loses the glasses. She’s an uptight bitch do to sexual frustration and her facial expression shows it. She always looks mad.
Horse: Age 19 Horse is a dark skinned hulking brute. He has a broad flat nose maybe crooked like it was broken in the past. Not attractive. He is extremely muscular and close to seven feet tall. His cock matches his size, enormous, dark, and uncircumcised, a big brutish weapon like it‘s weilder. His IQ is borderline deficient. His motivations are very base and carnal (food, drink,, fucking, etc.) He never smiles and always looks angry even when fucking.
Dunnell “Big D” Jackson: Age 19 Big, muscular, and handsome. His skin is a lighter brown. Big D is the opposite of Horse, smart, handsome, and a smooth talker. He is the brains of the two. He is nearly a perfect specimen of manliness in looks and physicality, but is dwarfed by his hulking friend. His cock is smooth streamlined perfection, circumcised and huge, but small compared with Horse.
Bernard: Kat’s husband. Older then Kat. Not very impressive to look at. Possibly chubby and balding.
Cover: Kat standing between a nude Horse and Dunnell both erect. She is wearing an open white lab coat and semi-nude underneath. You can see lacy panties, but no bra. Breast flesh is visible, but no nipples. She might have a doctor’s mask over her mouth and wearing rubber gloves. She has a stethoscope in her ears and one hand is holding the end up to Dunnell’s chest listening to his heart. Her other hand is stroking Horse. She’s smiling at the viewer.
Header: Doctor Bitch
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaos comics
Page 1: top horizontal, 2 square bottom panels.
Panel 1: Steering wheel with a feminine hand pressing down on the horn. Her other hand is up giving the finger to the car in front. Through her windshield is the rear window of a car in front of her car. A handicapped tag is dangling from the rearview mirror in the front car.
Noise: HONK! HONK!
Kat (thinking): Stupid handicapped drivers.
Kat: “Learn to parallel park, ASSHOLE!”
Panel 2: Side view of Kat driving a BMW or other nice car. She’s biting her nails.
Kat (thinking): I feel dirty just driving through this neighborhood.
Panel 3: The rear end of her car pulling into an alley. The break lights are on. The building next to her has a sign that reads, Homeless Shelter. A homeless man or two might be standing by the door.
Noise: SCREECH!
Page 2: Pinup with multiple scenes.
Panel 1: Kat dressed business professional, black skirt, white blouse, heels, hair pulled back, glasses on, standing beside her car. It’s hard not to notice how stacked her body is beneath the dress. She looks mad. Image balloons radiate out from her as she remembers her bad day.
Kat (thinking) What a shitty day.
Image balloon 1: Her pool guy grabbing his vacuum by the pool walking away. Her back may be visible watching him. He’s saying: “Do it yourself then. I quit.” He’s thinking, “BITCH!”
Kat (thinking) First the pool guy.
Image balloon 2: Kat watching her gardener get into his van. It might be neat to make him the father from the Wife and the Black Gardeners, but his van just says Stanford Landscaping without the son added on yet.
He’s saying: “Hire someone else then, I’m too old for this shit.” He’s thinking: “BITCH!”
Kat (thinking) Then that negro gardener quit on me
Image balloon 3: Kat talking to her husband. He’s pleading, she looks mad. Kat’s saying “But those homeless are nasty, dear.” He’s saying: “Yeah, but it’s a great tax deduction and I can’t do it.”
Kat (thinking) And my stupid husband talks me into giving physicals to a bunch of nasty homeless.
Page 3 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Kat carrying a doctor’s bag in a hallway talking to a brown bearded hipster type man.
Man: “Thanks for coming doc. What can I do to help?”
Kat (thinking) Worthless hipster do-gooder.
Kat: “Just have them strip to their underwear and line up at the door.”
Kat: “You can do whatever it is you do around here. Just stay out of my way.”
Man (thinking) What a BITCH!
Panel 2: Kat in an exam room. She’s got an open white lab coat on and is wearing a stethoscope. She’s pulling rubber gloves on.
Kat (thinking) God! What is that smell?
Panel 2: View over Kat’s shoulder. She has a mask on. She’s at the open door to the exam room. A line of homeless men are standing waiting. They are in varying races and degrees of hygiene such a bad missing teeth., scruffy beards, etc. If you show a full body shot, about half are naked and half in dirty underwear.
Kat: “Whoever’s first come in. Let’s get this over with.”
Page 4 4 even square panels.
Panel 1: Old white man entering room. He’s wearing ratty yellow stained underwear.
Kat (off panel): “Name and medical history.”
Panel 2: Close up of his upper torso. She’s listening to his heart with the stethoscope.
Kat (thinking) God, he smells.
Panel 3: Kat feeling his back while he bends forwards.
Kat (thinking) This is a nightmare.
Panel 4: Close up of his crotch. His underwear is pulled down. One gloved hand is cupping his testicles. His penis is erect, but not very impressive.
Kat: “Turn your head and cough.”
Noise: COUGH!
Kat (thinking) Haven’t seen an erection on Bernard in months.
Page 5 Top 2 square panels. Slightly smaller bottom square and larger 4th square.
Panel 1: Skinny old black man with missing teeth coming into the room. His penis is limp, but bigger then the previous man. He’s giggling. He he he coming from his mouth.
Kat (off panel): “Name.”
Kat (thinking) Great! A negro. As if this day couldn’t get any worse.
Panel 2: Kat listening to his heart. He keeps giggling.
Kat (thinking) I’m never doing this again.
Panel 3: Close up of just his crotch. Her gloved hand is cupping his large balls. His penis is semi-erect and large.
Kat (thinking) Holy Shit! That’s big!
Kat: “Cough!”
Panel 4: Close up of his now fully erect penis. She’s still cupping his balls. His penis is pointing right at her masked mouth. Her eyes are wide in surprise.
Kat (thinking) Why can’t Bernard be this big?
Man (off panel) “Never had no pretty white woman touch ol’ jumbo before.”
Page 6 horizontal top half, 2 square bottom
Panel 1: Side view of the line standing at the open door. Them men are applauding and hooting and hollering. The old black man is strolling out proudly sporting his erection. Kat is at the door.
Kat: “Next!”
Panel 2: Kat’s gloved hand cupping a small white penis.
Panel 3: Same image only different man. This penis is really pathetically small.
Kat (thinking off panel): This guy makes Bernie look big.
Page 7 5 panels top horizontal and then 4 even squares.
Panel 1: Close up side view on a hard black cock. She’s cupping his balls. The side of her face may be in it with the tip of the cock close to her masked mouth. The pee slit could be dripping a little. The cock is long and the thickest we’ve seen so far.
Kat (thinking) Now that’s a penis!
Panel 2: Close up of her cupping the balls of a small semi hard white penis.
Panel 3: Close up of her cupping a large black cock.
Kat (off panel thinking) The black ones are all bigger and harder!
Panel 4: Close up of her cupping a small uncircumcised white penis
Kat (thinking off panel) Boring! I wonder how big the next black one will be?
Panel 5: Close up of her cupping a large black one. The biggest yet. Wavy lines or something are coming off it to show it stinks. He’s semi-hard.
Kat (thinking off panel) God this one stinks, but look at it grow!
Page 8 2 top square panels and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Kat still cupping the stinky cock, but it’s fully hard now.
Kat (off panel): Cough!
Panel 2: Close up of the face of an ugly old black man. He’s grinning showing yellowed missing teeth. He’s got a scruffy white beard. He may be wearing a knit cap and have stink lines coming off him. His eyes are leering downward.
Panel 3: View from old black man’s perspective looking down. His penis is visible still hard with stink lines and her hand on his balls. Dominating the picture is her cleavage. A button on her blouse is open revealing her cleavage and a black bra.
Kat (off panel thinking) Why do they keep getting erections?
Page 9 horizontal top panel and 2 square bottom panels
Panel 1: Front view of Kat with the open door behind her and Big D coming in the room. Kat is looking down at a clip board. D is wearing a white tee shirt a white briefs straining to contain his big cock. His musculature is visible under the tee.
Kat (thinking) All but one of these guys has been bigger then Bernie’s limp little prick.
Kat: “Name?”
Big D: “Big D.”
Panel 2 Side view of Kat now facing Big D. She looks impressed.
Kat: “Real name?”
Big D: “Dunnell Jackson.”
Big D (thinking) Damn! Look at those tits.”
Panel 3: View over her shoulder of D pulling his tee shirt off over his head.
Kat (thinking) He certainly looks healthy.
Page 10 horizontal top and horizontal bottom with two small squares in the middle.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat standing behind D. He is bending down and her hands are examining his back.
Kat: “Looks good, now pull your underwear down.”
Panel 2: Close up view of D’s ass as he’s pulling the underwear down his thighs. His balls and dangling penis may be visible between his legs.
Panel 3: Close up view of D’s cock. He is flaccid but still huge. His cock dangles down over his balls.
Panel 4: View over Kat’s shoulder of D’s lower body. She is in her exam chair staring at his crotch.
Page 11 2 square top, horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of his crotch. Her hand is lifting his cock out of the way and he’s now half-erect. Her other gloved hand is cupping his balls.
Kat (off panel) So big I have to move it out of the way!
Panel 2: Same view only now his cock is fully hard. She’s still holding it.
Kat (off panel) “T-turn your head and cough.”
Panel 3: Kat’s upper torso. Her mouth still covered with the mask. She’s staring down to shaft of D’s hard cock.
Kat (thinking) This is the most perfect penis I’ve ever seen.
D: “Eleven inches if you’re wondering.”
Kat (thinking) Guess that’s why they call him BIG D!
Page 12 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1 Kat talking to a still nude D. He is fully erect and has his arms crossed. She may be looking down at his penis.
Kat: “I wasn’t wondering, nor did I ask.”
D: “Why so bitchy?”
Kat: “Not that it’s any of your damn business, but my pool and lawn men just quit on me…”
Panel 2: Close up of Kat’s face. She’s pulled the mask down off her mouth.
Kat: “Tuesdays are my only day off and I’m here with you instead of sunbathing by my pool…”
Panel 3 Kat’s upper torso. She’s pulling her rubber gloves off. One bare hand is scratching the half gloved one.
Kat: “I’m not having a good day. You can get dressed and go.”
Noise around hand: Itch! Itch!
Page 13 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: Kat’s upper torso. Horse’s dark looming presence is behind her.
Kat (thinking) I’d never cheat on Bernard, especially with a negro…
Kat (thinking) But what would a penis that big feel like.
Horse: “Ready.”
Kat (thinking) I thought I was done.
Kat: “Name?”
Horse: “Horse.”
Panel 2: Kat now facing Horse. He towers over her. She looks scared. She has forgotten to put her gloves back on or pull the mask up. He’s already nude
Word beside Kat: Shiver!
Kat: “Real name?”
Horse: “Just Horse.”
Page 14 2 square top and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Over Kat’s shoulder view of Horse’s chest.
Kat (thinking) His muscles have muscles!
Panel 2: Over shoulder view of Horse’s crotch. He’s bigger then Big D. The fat head is peeking out from the foreskin. His balls are gigantic. The enormous cock is so heavy it angles downward.
Kat (thinking) Dear god! It’s a huge black snake, a python or a hooded cobra!
Panel 3: Side view of Horse bending forwards while she runs her hands down his back, D is standing in the doorway still nude and erect. Kat is looking at him.
Kat: “What are you still doing here?”
D: “Just waitin for my homie.”
Page 15 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Close up of Horse’s enormous cock. She is holding it just under the foreskin. The head is dribbling precum and it’s falling on her hand. Her other hand is cupping his testicles, but his balls are so big only one fits in the palm of her hand. His cock looks bigger and is angling up more.
Kat (thinking) Shit! Forgot my gloves.
Kat (thinking) What the hell? He’s getting bigger!
Panel 2: Close up side view of Horse’s fully hard cock and Kat’s face. The head is still dribbling pre-cum and its close to her mouth as she leans forwards reaching out and has a ball in each hand.
Kat: “Turn your head and cough.”
Page 16 2 horizontal
Panel 1: The back of Kat’s head. She’s still sitting and D has moved to stand beside Horse. One man’s cock is one either side of her head, still erect and sticking out.
D (from left side): “Well doc, see anything wrong with us?”
Panel 2: Side view of Kat now standing. Horse and Dunnell are dressing, but keeping their cocks out as long as possible. They are pulling on their shirts first. She is still staring at their cocks.
Kat: “You both seem healthy. You don’t look homeless at all.”
D: “We just lost our construction jobs and got evicted on the same day.”
Horse (thinking) Bitch needs to get fucked. I can smell her pussy.
Page 17 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: The three talking. The men are dressed now, but if their crotches are visible, their big bulges are straining.
D: “We built houses, did yard work, cleaned pools.”
Horse (thinking) We never did no yards or pools!
Kat: “Good luck getting on… wait did you say yard work?”
Panel 2: Kat standing at the door of the office while Horse and D are leaving.
D: “Sure, lawns, pools, almost anything.”
Kat: “Would you guys do mine until I can find someone full time? I’ll see you’re well compensated.”
Page 18 horizontal top and 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Kat and D’s upper torso’s talking. She’s removed the lab coat and mask.
D: “That would be great. Help us get on our feet.”
Kat: “Here’s my address, come by Wednesday and I’ll leave the shed unlocked.”
Panel 2: Rear view of Horse and Dunell watching her leave the shelter.
Horse: “I wants to FUCK her.”
D: “Just follow my lead and you just might.”
Panel 3: Kat’s head and her rear view mirror in her car. She biting her nails. It’s the hand that got Horse’s precum on it.
Kat (thinking) Glad that’s over with.
Kat (thinking) At least my lawn and pool problem’s solved. Might even be another tax deduction.
Page 19 4 squares
Panel 1: Close up of Kat’s hand and mouth and nose. She’s still biting her nails. Some of Horse’s precum is visible on her hand between her thumb and fingers.
Nose: Sniff! Sniff!
Panel 2: Side view of Kat driving. She’s licking her hand.
Kat (thinking) What is this? Kind of salty? Tastes really good.
Panel 3: Side view of Kat holding the back of her hand up in front of her face and seeing some precum. She is wide eyed and horrified.
Kat (thinking) Oh shit! I’m gonna vomit.
Panel 4 Front view of Kat at a store counter. She’s got a bottle that reads mouth wash in one hand and a bill in her other hand.
Kat: “Keep the change.”
Header: END PART 1
This is a good place to stop with a part 1 if you’d like or you can ignore the cover for part 2 and carry on with the story.
Cover: Something similar to the first cover only Kat is only wearing her skimpy bikini while she examines Horse and D. She still has the stethoscope around her neck. Her nipples are hard through the bikini top. She might have her mask and gloves on.
Header: Doctor Bitch: Part 2
Header: Story by Stormbringer
Header: Art by Kaoscomics
Page 1 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Katherine in a skimpy bikini reclining poolside while drinking a margarita.
Kat (thinking) Six days at the hospital and seven nights with my lame ass husband.
Kat (thinking) Tuesday, the only day of the week I don’t hate.
Panel 2: Kat floating on her back in the pool. Her bikini is wet now and mostly see thru. Her hair floats out behind her. Two image balloons come from her head showing erect black cocks pointing at her mouth. They aren’t Horse and D’s, but two of the others.
Kat (thinking) Missed this last week. Stupid husband.
Kat (thinking) Now I see black cocks every time I close my eyes. Stupid homeless negroes.
Page 2 vertical left panel and 2 square right.
Panel 1: Kat drying herself with a towel by the cot.
Kat (thinking) This is all Bernard’s fault. Stupid limp dicked husband and his tax deductions.
Panel 2: Kat’s upper torso on the cot.
Kat (thinking): Sun and margarita’s are so relaxing…
Kat: “Snore!”
Panel 3: Kat in her bikini standing in the exam room. She wearing her mask, gloves, and a stethoscope.
Kat: “Next.”
Page 3 1 vertical panel and 2 squares
Panel 1: Kat in her bikini standing behind the skinny old man that called his cock Jumbo. She’s reaching around with one hand and motion lines show her jerking off his hard cock. Her other hand is holding the stethoscope to his back listening to his heart.
Kat: “Heart rate’s a little fast.
Panel 2: Side view of black man’s crotch. She’s behind him fingering his ass while reaching around and jerking his huge penis. Stink lines come off it.
Kat: “Lets check your prostrate.”
Panel 3: Over shoulder view of a small white penis. The man’s hand is grabbing the base of the limp little thing.
Kat: “Get that pathetic thing away from me, Bernard.”
Page 4 2 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Kat’s back sitting on the stool looking at Horse and Dunnell on either side of her. They are both naked and erect.
Big D: “Like our tongue depressors, Doc?”
Horse: “Open up and say AH!”
Panel 2: Same view only this is back to reality. Kat’s back is sitting up on her cot. Horse and D are standing in the same positions as her dream. D is bare chested. Horse wears a stained tee shirt with holes in it. Both have jeans or slacks on.
Kat: “AAAAHHH!!”
Page 5 horizontal top and two vertical rectangle bottoms.
Panel 1: Full body view of Kat on the cot staring in alarm at the viewer. The dreams have aroused her. Her nipples are hard and straining at the tight bikini. Her legs are slightly spread and her bikini bottoms are wet with arousal causing them to cling to her girl parts. Horse and Dunnell aren’t visible.
Horse (off panel): “Sorry to scare you, doc. That must have been some dream you were having.”
Kat: “W-what are YOU doing here?”
Panel 2: Kat standing talking to Horse and D. Her nipples are still straining. She looks mad. D looks cocky and Horse looks angry as usual.
Dunnell: “We’re here to mow your lawn.”
Kat: “NO! You’re supposed to be here tomorrow.”
Kat (thinking): Stupid negroes.
Dunnell: “Nope. You said Tuesday and you’d meet us by the pool.”
Panel 3: Front shot of Kat looking angry. Her arms are crossed and making her breasts squeeze together.
Kat (thinking): Did I? Well there goes my free day.
Kat: “Well you’re here now. I’ll show you the shed.”
Page 6 4 even panels
Panel 1: View over both black men’s shoulders of Kat’s back. She is pointing at a shed. Her bikini is clearly a thong and her ass is visible.
Kat: “Everything you need is in there.”
Kat: “I’ll be inside.”
Panel 2: Kat standing in her kitchen pouring herself a margarita.
Kat (thinking): So embarrassed. Bernard hasn’t even seen me in this bikini.
Kat (thinking): Those two negroes couldn’t take their eyes off me.
Kat (thinking): Better go change.
Panel 3: Kat standing in front of a full length mirror. She’s posing and looking at her body.
Kat (thinking): Those two black boys sure got an eye full.
Kat (thinking): Why should I change. Let them stare.
Kat (thinking): Bernard hasn’t stared at me like that in years.
Panel 4: Kat in the kitchen again pouring another margarita. She’s still in the bikini.
Kat (thinking): Gonna need some more courage to tease those negroes.
Kat (thinking): What harm could there be in a little teasing?
Page 7 smaller horizontal top and two vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Kat sitting up in her cot sipping from the margarita. Horse is on the other side of a bush clipping the hedges. His upper torso is visible. D is in the background on a riding mower or pushing a mower.
Kat (thinking): I can’t believe I’m doing this. It’s so exciting.
Kat (thinking): When Dunnell gets closer, I’ll take a shower.
Panel 2: Kat under an outdoor pool shower. It isn’t enclosed the pipes run up a wall. This is a front shot with her breasts thrust out and her head back so the water is soaking her hair. The wet bikini has turned see thru again.
Kat (thinking): Get a good view boys. You can look but not touch.
Panel 3: More of a side view of Kat under the shower. Her hands are bracing against the wall. Her head is down, wet hair dangling, breasts thrust out, back arched and ass thrust out.
Kat (thinking): God, I’m so turned on.
Kat (thinking): Why haven’t I teased men before?
Page 8 horizontal top. 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Long shot of a wet Kat walking along the side of her pool. Behind her are Horse still trimming a hedge and D with the lawnmower. Both are staring hard at her.
Kat: “Come on boys, I’m not paying you to sit around.”
Panel 2: Close up of D’s crotch showing his penis swollen and straining at his pants.
Panel 3: Side view of Horse. His cock is straining too. He’s grabbing the shaft through his pants.
Horse (thinking): Snotty racist white BITCH! GONNA FUCK YOU GOOD!
Page 9 vertical left panel and 2 square right.
Panel 1: Long view of Kat on her cot. She’s pouring suntan lotion on her belly and rubbing it in with one hand.
Kat (thinking): Stupid negroes can’t stop staring.
Panel 2: Kat’s upper torso. She’s rubbing lotion on her exposed breast flesh. She’s yawning with a YAWN! By her mouth.
Kat (thinking) Bet they wish they could rub oil on me.
Kat (thinking) sun and booze made me tired. Can’t stay awake…
Panel 3: Kat asleep on the cot with a SNORE! By her mouth. Maybe there’s a bubble showing she’s dreaming about hard black cocks again or black hands rubbing lotion on her body.
Page 10 horizontal top, small square bottom left and larger rectangle on right.
Panel 1: Side view of the back of the cot and lots of Kat’s body. Horse and D are standing near the foot. D is sweaty. Horse is pulling his tee shirt off over his head.
D: “Hey doc… doc…. DOC!”
Kat: “Wha.. What?”
Panel 2: Kat’s upper torso. She’s awake and looks alarmed again at seeing the black men.
Kat: “What?”
Panel 3: Another view of all three. One or both black men may be unbuttoning their pants. Their cocks are still straining.
D: “We’re done, but it was hot work. Could we cool off in the pool.
Kat: “I’d rather you just used the shower.”
Kat (thinking) Sweaty negroes in my pool…YECH!
Horse: “NO! Fuckin hot. Pool better.”
Kat: “Fine, but be quick about it.”
Page 11 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat on the cot, but leaning up. Her eyes are wide in shock. Horse has dropped his pants to the ground. Big D is pushing his down under his balls. Both their cocks are fully erect.
Kat: “Hold on. What do you think you’re…”
D: “Sorry no suits. You’re a doctor, you see cocks like this every day.”
Kat (thinking) YES! COCKS! That’s the proper term for something so big.
Kat: “No, I don’t see this every day.”
Panel 2: Rear view of Kat sitting on the edge of the pool. Good shot of her ass in the thong. Horse and Dunnell are horse playing in the pool beyond her. The water stops mid thigh and their hard cocks are visible bobbing before them.
Page 12 2 vertical panels, left isn’t as wide as the right.
Panel 1: Sexy side view of Kat sitting on the edge of the pool, feet dangling in the water.
Kat (thinking) COCKS are big and black. Penises are small and white.
Kat (thinking) Why do I feel like I’m the one being teased?
Panel 2: Shot of Kat slipping off the edge and into the water. Dunnell has walked up to her. His penis is just above the water level aiming towards her.
Kat (thinking) How are they still hard? Bernie shrivels up in the water.
D: “Ma’am, you don’t want to dehydrate. You should hop in and join us.”
Kat: “Okay and call me Katherine.”
Page 13 horizontal top. Thin vertical bottom left and larger horizontal right.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat kneeling in the water. The bottom of the pic is an underwater scene and you can see her full body as well as D’s thighs and legs. Above the waterline, her head is level with his crotch and the tip of his cock is pointed right at her mouth.
Kat (thinking) Better stand up before that thing pokes me in the mouth.
Panel 2: Angled down frontal view like from D’s perspective of Kat standing in the water but leaning back against the wall. Her wet aroused body is on display and her bikini is see thru again. His cock is hard and in the picture pointing towards her crotch. She’s looking down her wet body at his cock.
Kat: “I should get out.”
D: “Nonsense, join us for some fun.”
Panel 3: Far off scene of all three frolicking in the water. Splashing each other and looking like they’re having fun.
Page 14 Horizontal top and three vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Kat and D’s heads and shoulders above the waterline talking to each other. She’s smiling and laughing with ha ha ha! Around her mouth.
D: “You have a beautiful body, Kat.
Kat: “Thanks I guess and it’s Katherine.”
D: “It’s not fair that you get to wear clothes when we’re naked.
Kat: “HA! Well you need to find suits then. I’m not stripping.”
Kat (thinking) Haven’t laughed in a long time.
Panel 2: View over D’s still waterline shoulder looking up Kat’s body as she poses. She’s wet and dripping again. Her hands are on her hips.
D: “Stand up and let me get a good look at that hot body.”
Panel 3: Same shot only now Kat has turned around showing her thong covered ass.
Kat: “You like?”
D: “Fuck yeah and I think you like showing off your body.”
Panel 4: Same shot only Kat has turned back around. This time her arms are up with her wrists crossed above her head and she’s arching her back to thrust her breasts out. Horse’s hulking presence is right behind her.
D: “Sexy slut. Put your hands over your head.”
Kat: “Like this?”
Page 15 vertical left top with larger horizontal right and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Horse standing behind Kat in the pool. He has grabbed her wrists above her head with one beefy hand and is ripping her bikini top off with the other exposing her breasts. She looks horrified.
Kat: “What the… STOP! Dunnell help me!”
Panel 2: Kat’s body stretched out more with Horse still holding her wrists and now squeezing one breast with his other beeft hand. D has grabbed her legs under one arm and is ripping off her thong panty with the other exposing her trim bush.
Panel 3: Angled down or god view of Kat stretched out right above the water with Horse now pinching and pulling a hard nipple. D is still holding her legs and running a hand over her flat belly. She still looks horrified.
D: “You ever seen a better body then this, bro?”
Horse: “Grunt!”
Kat: “Let me go, you assholes.”
D: “Okay!”
Page 16 horizontal top, vertical left bottom panel and horizontal right.
Panel 1: Underwater view of Kat having been dropped in the water by the two men. Their legs and feet might be in the picture and their cocks may be above the water line. Her body is slightly bent at the ass. Bubbles are floating all around her.
Panel 2: Naked Kat now standing with water flying off her. D has pulled her against his chest with one hand around the small of her back. He has one hand on her breast.
Kat: “L-let me go! I’ll scream!”
D: “No one can hear you.”
Panel 3: All three standing in the water. Kat is sandwiched between the two men. Horse has come up from behind and pulled her ass against him with his huge cock between her thighs sticking out between her legs. She’s looking like she’s enjoying it. Her head might be cocked with him kissing her neck. D is still standing in front of her squeezing a breast with one hand and pinching a nipple with the other.
Kat: “Ahh! Oh! Oh god! Mmmmmm. Please stop. Oh yessss!”
Page 17 vertical left panel 2 square on the right.
Panel 1: Side view Kat ass out and leaning forward. Horse is fingering her from behind. D is kissing her passionately with his far hand holding the back of her head and his other hand squeezing her breast so that the nipple sticks out between his fingers. Her hand is reaching down and gripping his cock with stroke lines around it.
Noise (around kiss): Mmmmmm!
Panel 2: Close up of her pussy and ass with Horse’s finger in her and fluid flying out. Possibly motion lines show him moving his finger.
Noise (around finger): Squish! Squish!
Action (around ass cheeks): Hump! Hump!
Horse (off panel): “I wants to eat this white pussy.”
Panel 3: View over Horse’s shoulder of Kat laying on the edge of the pool. He’s still in the water. He is holding her knees open displaying everything and bending down to lick her.
Kat: “Please stop. I can’t cheat on my husband.”
Horse: “This ain’t cheating.”
Kat: “Please! Oral sex is disgusting.”
Page 18 horizontal top and bottom with 2 squares in the middle
Panel 1: View down Kat’s belly of Horse’s face buried in her pussy. His nose is on her mound and he’s looking up at her.
Kat (off panel): “Oh God! Stop. This is disgus…”
Panel 2: Close up of Kat’s face. Her eyes are wide in surprise, lips parted.
Kat: “OH MY!”
Panel 3: Close up of her pussy and Horse’s face. He has a long tongue wiggling between her labia. Her clit is long and distended with arousal.
Action: Lick! Lick!
Panel 4: Long side view of Kat laying on the cement with her back arched and legs spread over Horse’s shoulders. His head is still in her pussy. She might be pinching one of her own nipples.
Noise around Horse’s head: Slurp! Slurp! Slurp!
Kat (thinking) Ohmygod! So good! So good!
Kat (thinking) Something’s happening!
Kat (thinking) I think I’m gonna cum…
Page 19 2 horizontal tops and 2 square bottoms..
Panel 1: Looking down view of Kat’s lower body with Horse’s head still between her legs, but not eating her out. D’s hand is on Horse’s shoulder stopping him.
D: “Stop Horse.”
Kat: “Nnnoooo!”
D: “Sorry Katherine. We got carried away. We’ll get going.”
Panel 2: Kat’s front. She’s still sitting on the edge of the pool, but sitting up now. Her legs are still spread and her pussy is splayed open still dripping fluid. She looks flushed and desperate.
Kat: “Wait! No, don’t stop. I was so close to….”
Panel 3: Close up of her crotch with Horse’s tongue in it again.
Action: Lick! Lick!
Panel 4: Close up of her crotch with Horse fingering her while licking her clit.
Page 20 4 even squares.
Panel 1: View of Kat sitting on the ledge with Horse in the water licking and fingering her. Dunnell is standing behind Horse leaning into Kat. He’s grabbing one breast and whispering in her ear. Her head is thrown back in pure pleasure.
D: “If we get you off, you should get us off.”
Kat: “I c-can’t do t-that. C-can’t cheat.”
D: “It’s only cheating if we fuck you.”
Kat: “C-can’t.”
Panel 2: Front view of Kat sitting on the ledge, legs spread. The boys aren’t in the picture. She’s wide eyed and looks desperate. Her pussy is splayed open and dripping.
D (off panel): “Let’s go Horse.”
Kat: “Please! Don’t stop. I’ll- I’ll do it.”
Panel 3: Side view of Kat once again getting fingered and licked by Horse. Dunnell is leaning into her and they are kissing while he squeezes a nipple.
Kat (thinking) It’s happening! It’s happening!
Kat (thinking) I’m finally gonna….
Panel 4: View looking up Kat’s body from Horse’s perspective. His finger is in her pussy. She is squirting fluid. D is leaning in flickering one nipple with his tongue. She looks wild and ecstatic.
Kat: “CUMMING!”
Header: END PART 2
This is a good place to stop with a part 2 if you’d like or you can ignore and carry on with the story.
Cover: Dunnell sitting on an examine table wearing a hospital gown, but it is pulled up and his cock is rearing up fully erect. Kat is now naked, but wearing a mask and stethoscope. She is listening to his heart beat while stroking his cock.
Header: Doctor Bitch: Part 3
Header: Story by Stormbringer
Header: Art by Kaoscomics
Page 1 top and middle rectangles with 2 spilt rectangles at bottom
Panel 1: God view looking down on Kat. She’s laying on her back on the cement. Horse is still in the water stooping with his head still buried in her pussy. Dunnell’s feet are above her head.
Kat: “Oh my god, thank you!”
Kat (thinking with balloon connected with the above): I’ve never orgasmed before.
Kat: “Oh! OH! OH GOD!”
Kat (thinking with balloon connected with the above): He’s not stopping!
Dunnell: “Flip her over on her knees.”
Panel 2: Kat on all fours with Dunnell now kneeling in front of her, his hard cock aimed at her face. Horse is leaning up a little more with his face still buried in her pussy.
Kat: “Oh god, his tongue…”
Dunnell: “Horse can eat pussy for hours. Now it’s your turn.”
Kat: “I’ve never… Please? It’s debasing…”
Dunnell: “Shut up bitch! We get you off, you get us off.”
Panel 3: Close up of Kat’s rear. Horse is fingering her pussy while licking her rectum.
Panel 4: Close up of D’s cock and Kat’s head. She’s kissing the tip of his cock.
D (off panel): “Give it a kiss. Show me you love my black cock.”
Page 2 2 smaller rectangles on top and large bottom pic
Panel 1: Close up of Kat’s head with her mouth open wide. She’s having another orgasm. D’s cock head is poised right on her lips.
Kat (thinking): Cumming again!
Kat: “YYYEEESSS!!!”
Panel 2: Same image with D’s cock thrust into her mouth and her cheek is bulging out. She looks surprised and her eyes are crossed.
Noise around her mouth: Oooomph!
Panel 3: View from D’s perspective. Kat is grabbing his cock , her mouth is above the cock head maybe with a strand of spittle connecting them. Down her back, above her ass cheeks, Horses head has popped up.
Horse: “Yo D, you gonna luv dis pussy.”
Horse: “Da bitch is a real creamer.”
Kat: “Just don’t ejaculate in my mouth.”
Page 3 6 vertical rectangles
Panel 1: Kat licking around the head of D’s cock.
D (off panel) “Lick around the head.”
Panel 2: Closer view of the end of D’s cock with Kat tonguing his urethra.
D (off panel) “Yeah bitch! Lick my pee slit.”
Panel 3: Full view of D’s cock with Kat holding it up while licking his testicles.
D (off panel) “Lick my balls.”
Panel 4: Full shot of Kat’s slit with Horse’s tongue licking her distended clit.
Panel 5: Full shot of Kat’s slit with Horse’s tongue lapping up the length of her slit. Perhaps there’s a ghost image of his tongue showing movement.
Action word: Lap! Lap!
Panel 6: Full shot of Kat’s slit with Horse holding his long tongue rigid. Her labia is parting around it.
Action word: Hump! Hump!
Page 4 top is two even squares. The bottom is a larger left panel and a more vertical right.
Panel 1: Full view of D’s cock with Kat holding it against her cheek. She’s panting.
D (off panel): “Suck it.”
Kat: “Wait. I’m close again,”
Noise around her mouth: Pant! Pant!
Panel 2: Side view of her head with half his cock down her throat.
D (off panel) “Swallow dat cock and I’ll let you cum again, bitch.”
Panel 3: Close up view of D’s cock with Kat having swallowed more of the shaft.
D (off panel): “Let her cum, Horse.”
Panel 4: Close up of Kat’s slit with one of Horse’s fingers in her and his tongue tip teasing her slit. She’s squirting fluid out.
Page 5 2 top vertical rectangles and a bottom horizontal rectangle
Panel 1: Close up of D’s cock with the tip in Kat’s mouth. Her eyes are closed.
Kat (thinking): This isn’t so bad. The faster I suck Dunnell, the faster Horse licks me.
Panel 2: Same image or side view only she’s swallowed more then half D’s cock.
Kat (thinking): It feels natural doing this for such a… REAL man!
Panel 3: Full length side view of Kat on all fours. She’s swallowed all D’s cock. Horse’s head is still between her thighs and he’s bringing his hand towards her, holding two fingers together.
Noises: Suck! Suck! And Lick! Lick!
Kat (thinking) WOW! I swear his cock’s getting bigger!
Page 6 Large horizontal top and 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Same side view as last time. Her body is X-rayed showing D cumming down her throat and filling her belly as well as Horse’s two fingers curled up inside her and she’s squirting again.
Kat (thinking) Oh shit! He’s cumming!
Panel 2: Close up of D’s cock and her face. Only the end is in her mouth. Her cheeks are bulging out and sperm is shooting out of her mouth around his shaft.
Kat (thinking) It tastes so… GOOD!
Panel 3: Full length shot of his cock with his hand on the shaft. Her mouth is open tongue out. Her face is covered in a blast of semen and more is shooting over her tongue.
D (off panel): “GAWD DAMN!”
Page 7 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: Kat sitting up on her knees. She’s holding D’s maybe semi-deflated cock. It’s leaking sperm onto her outstretched tongue. Her face and tits have sperm on them.
Kat (thinking) Black sperm tastes so good, I want more.
Panel 2: Same pose. Kat is still holding D’s cock, but now she’s looking away from the viewer at Horse standing there. His monster cock is erect. It might be dripping pool water. There should be water around his feet too.
Horse: “My turn, bitch.”
Kat (thinking): There’s more sperm for me.
Kat: “Wait, I have an idea.”
Page 8: Horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat’s garage. There are steps going up to a door on the second level. She’s leading the way. Horse is following with his rock hard cock. D is behind horse. His cock sticks out, but angles down, deflated.
Kat: “We have a guest apartment above the garage.”
Panel 2: View of the living room. Kat is visible through a door looking in a mirror. Horse is standing near a couch. D is relaxing in a recliner.
Kat: “Let me clean up first.”
Horse: “Hurry up!”
Panel 3: Kat looking at her reflection in the mirror. She’s using a cloth to wipe sperm off her breasts.
Kat (thinking) This is more sperm then Bernard’s ever produced in 12 years of marriage.
Page 9 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: Side view of Kat standing before Horse. She has to look up at him. He looks angry as usual. She’s grabbing the end of his cock.
Action noise: Shiver! Shiver! Around Kat.
Horse (thinking): You belong to me now, bitch!
Horse: “Suck ma big black cock.”
Kat (thinking): He’s more beast then man.
Kat (thinking): My knees feel week. Must obey him.
Panel 2: Same side view only Kat has fallen to her knees. Her mouth is stretched wide open trying to accommodate his huge cock head.
Kat (thinking) This beast gave me more pleasure then my husband ever has.
Kat (thinking) He deserves the same from me.
Page 10 2 top squares and the bottom horizontal rectangle
Panel 1: View from Horse’s perspective looking down. Kat is looking up at him. Her jaw is stretched wide around his cock head.
Noise: Slurp! Slurp!
Panel 2: Side view of Kat’s upper torso including stomach. She is licking his wet cock head. One hand is cupping one of his huge testicles. One of his nuts is bigger then her hand.
Kat (thinking) How much sperm do these things hold?
Noise (around belly) Growl!
Panel 3: Horse now sitting on the couch while Kat is on her knees between his legs. Both hands are on the shaft with motion lines around them. The head is in her mouth.
Horse: “Suck dat nigga cock, ho.”
Noise: Slurp! Slurp!
Page 11: Two top squares and bottom horizontal rectangle.
Panel 1: Close up side view of Horse’s crotch on the couch. Kat is now using her breasts around the shaft. As big as her breasts are the tip still rises above them and she’s licking the head.
Horse (off panel): Use dem titties on mah cock.”
Panel 2: Horse’s point of view of Kat titty fucking him. She’s looking up at him. Maybe he’s pinching one hard nipple and pulling on it.
Panel 3: Rear end view of Kat. D is spreading her ass cheeks while bringing his tongue close to her pussy. She’s still sucking Horse.
Page 12 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Side view of all three. Horse on couch. Kat is now mostly on all fours. One hand is holding herself up. The other hand has bent his cock down. She’s swallowed at least half his cock. D is on his hands and knees licking her pussy. If his cock is in the image, it’s rock hard again.
Horse: “Swallow dat nigga cock.”
Noise around her throat: Gak!
Noise around her pussy: Lap! Lap!
Panel 2: Same side view only D is now on his knees lining the head of his cock up with her pussy. The tip is pushing against her. She’s not sucking Horse, but her mouth is still close maybe linked by saliva. She’s turned a little to look back at D.
Kat: “Watch it! My pussy is off limits to anyone’s penis but my husband.”
D: “It ain’t cheating unless I cum in you. How about I just put the head in?”
Page 13 6 even panels
Panel 1: Close up of Kat’s head with a good chunk of Horse’s cock shoved down her throat. Her cheeks are bulging. Horse has his hand on her head.
Horse: “Getting close.”
Kat (thinking) Oh shit! He’s pushing it in!
Panel 2: Close up of her slit with her labia spread wide around D’s cock head as it enters her.
Panel 3: Close up of Kat’s head with mostly just the tip of Horse’s cock in her mouth. He’s cumming and her cheeks are bulging. Her eyes are crossed and sperm is flying out the sides of her mouth.
Noise: GAK!
Panel 4: Close up of her slit with half his cock inside her.
D (off panel): Gonna feed some more to this white pussy. Any objections?
Panel 5: Close up of Kat’s face, mouth open. Horse’s cock blasting sperm all over her.
Panel 6: Close up of Kat’s slit with D buried to the hilt.
D (off panel): “This pussy is TIGHT!.”
Page 14 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Side view of all three. D is fucking her doggy style now with motion lines showing movement, fluid squirting out around their crotches. Kat is still getting blasted in her face and breasts by Horse’s cock.
Noise around his cock: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!
D (thinking): Two weeks without sex and he’s practically drowning her in sperm.
Panel 2: God view looking down on the threesome. D’s wet cock is seen penetrating her. Kat’s head is in Horse’s lap with his spent limp cock lying over her shoulder trickling sperm down her back.
Noise around his cock: FWAP FWAP FWAP!
Kat: “Your so BBIIGG!”
Kat (thinking) And so GOOD!
Kat: “Fuck me! FUCK ME!”
Kat (thinking) I’M CUMMING!
Page 15 Pinup
Panel 1: Sexy pinup of D laying on his back while Kat rides his cock. He’s reaching up and squeezing her tits. Her face is still messy. She looks overly aroused. Horse doesn’t need to be in the picture or he could be in the background sitting on the couch stroking his cock back to life.
Noise around cock: FUK FUK FUK!
D: “Do you like my cock?”
Kat: “I love it! You’re so much bigger then my husband.”
D: “Only black cock can satisfy a slut like you, Kat.”
Kat: “YES! Only black cock! Fuck me! Not a slut. Fuck me!”
D: You’re Doctor Katherine with your hubby, but Kat the slut with us.”
Kat: “CUMMING! Can’t stop cumming! I’m your slut BIG D!”
Page 16 horizontal top and 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat on her back on the carpet and D holding himself above her as they fuck
D: “Getting close slut.”
Kat: “Pull it out, I’m not protected.”
D: “A real slut would beg me to seed her pussy.”
Kat: “Seeded? Seeded? Seed… my pussy. Seed me Big D!”
Panel 2: God view of her torso with an X-ray showing D filling her womb with sperm.
Kat and D merging together: “CUMMING!”
Panel 3: Close up of their crotches. His still rampant cock is above her slit, shooting off a little strand of semen. More semen connects his cock head to her pussy. Her labia is spread wide and sperm is pouring out to pool on the carpet. Maybe her hand is on her mound with a finger on her clit.
Kat: “So much cum for me.”
Page 17 2 square top panels, horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Their upper torsos with D on top, kissing her passionately.
Kat (thinking) Shouldn’t have let him cum in me, but that was my biggest orgasm yet.
Panel 2: Side view of their upper torsos. They’ve broken the kiss. D looks sad.
D: “Sorry.”
Kat: “Don’t be. That was amazing. You can fuck me anytime.”
D: “It won’t be the same.”
Panel 3: Angled view of Kat’s spread legs with an even larger pool of sperm on the carpet. Dunnell’s knees are visible. His cock is sticking out and angled down still dripping some sperm.
Kat (off panel): “I better get this cleaned up.”
D (off panel): “Leave it, it’ll be easier on you.”
Page 18 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: View from Kat’s perspective down her body of Dunnell standing up. Horse’s upper body may be visible over his head.
Kat: “What do you mean?”
Panel 2: Same image only Dunnell has stepped out of the way and Horse’s huge body is visible with his hand stroking his monster cock.
Kat: “WHOA! No way I could take that. Let me suck you again.”
Page 19 horizontal top and bottom with 2 small horizontals in the middle.
Panel 1: God view of Kat’s body laying on the carpet. Horse is on his knees bending his down to aim at her sperm filled pussy. His foreskin covers half his cock head. She looks frightened.
Kat: “Dunnell, help me!”
Panel 2: God view close up of his cock head, the tip fully emerged from the foreskin pushing into her pussy. The head is covered in D’s semen.
Panel 3: Side view of her pussy with the entire head of his cock in her. She’s spread wide open by him.
Panel 4: Side view of Kat on her back. Her back is arched. Her head is thrown back, mouth open. Horse is on his knees. His hands are pushing her legs up and about a third of his cock is in her.
Kat: “UUUNNNHHHH!!!”
Horse: “D, Get something to clean her face off.”
Page 20 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: God view of her on her back. D’s hand is using a cloth to wipe sperm off her face. Horse’s cock is now buried. Maybe there’s a cock shaped bulge under her belly.
Horse: “Resizing dis pussy good.”
Kat (thinking) This isn’t physically possible!
Panel 2: Side view of Kat on her back. Horse is arching his back, his tongue is out licking one hard nipple. D is kneeling on the other side of her head.
D: “He used to just rip women apart.”
D: “But I taught him patience.”
Words around Kat’s body: Shudder!
Panel 3: Same side view only Horse is now sucking one big nipple between his lips.
D: “I open women up for him.”
D: “And he ruins you for all other men.”
Kat: “FFFUUUCCCKKK… MMEE!”
Page 21 horizontal top and bottom with 2 rectangles in the middle
Panel 1: God view down. Kat’s body is almost completely obscured. Her legs are wrapped around his hips and her head is sticking over one shoulder. She’s screaming in pleasure.
Kat: “FFUUCCKK ME! FUCK ME! SO BIG! SO GOOD!”
Noise around his ass: THWAP THWAP THWAP!
Panel 2: Close up of their heads kissing passionately or their mouth are close with her tongue teasing his overly large one.
Noise is kissin: SMACK!
Panel 3: Close up of her spread open pussy with just the head in her. His huge shaft and balls are dripping.
Motion lines show it’s moving in and out of her.
Noise: Slam Slam Slam!
Panel 4: Side view of Horse on top of Kat fucking her. He’s straightened out and her head is under his chest. She’s kissing it submissively.
Kat (thinking) Can’t stop cumming!
Kat (thinking) You own my pussy now my master.
Page 22 6 even panels
Panel 1: Close up of her head facing the viewer. She’s still crushed beneath Horse’s chest. She looks in pain.
Kat: “Owww! It’s getting bigger!”
Panel 2: Side view x-ray of his cock exploding in her womb. His ejaculate is like a fire hose.
Panel 3: Close up of her head again.
Kat: “AAAHHHH!
Kat (thinking) This is my biggest cum yet.
Panel 4: Close up of his cock buried in her crotch and sperm is squirting out all around their crotches.
Panel 5: Side X-ray view of his cock filling her. It is now plump, but smaller. Her womb is filled white with sperm.
Noise around her ass: Hump Hump!
Kat (off panel): “More… I want more.”
Panel 6: Same X-ray view only his cock has reversed course and is hard again.
Kat (off panel): “YES! FUCK ME FUCK ME!
Page 23 vertical and horizontal rectangles on the top and bottom
Panel 1: View from Horse’s perspective. He’s now on his back. Kat is lowering herself over his cock. Sperm still leaks from her pussy.
Horse: “Ride me.”
Panel 2: Angled down view of Kat fully impaled sitting in his lap. Her hands are on his chest. He is pinching one nipple.
Kat: “Fuck me! I love your cock! I love your… you! I LOVE YOU!”
Noise around crotches: FWAP FWAP FWAP!
Panel 3: Rear end view of her taking his shaft. Sperm still flows down his shaft and flies around their crotches.
Panel 4: Angled rear view of Kat’s ass as she rides Horse. She’s looking over her shoulder at the viewer. D’s hand is on his hard cock lining it up with her anus.
D: “Can I at least fuck her ass?”
Page 24 2 top squares, vertical left bottom panel and horizontal bottom right.
Panel 1: Close up of her rear with Horse’s cock in her pussy and her anus stretching around D’s cock head.
Kat: “OW! It’s too big!
D: “You’ll love it when I’m done.
Panel 2: Same view only more of D’s cock is in her.
Panel 3: View from Horse perspective looking at Kat sitting on his cock. D is behind her reaching around and squeezing her tits. Her head is turned and they are kissing.
Kat: “It’s good. Fuck my ass. Fuck my pussy.
Panel 4: Side view of all three
Noise around both their cocks: Fwap Fwap Fwap!
Page 25 Horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Side view of all three with X-rays showing both men cumming. All three faces look orgasmic.
Kat: “CUMMING SO HARD!
Horse: “UUNNHH!
D: “GAWD DAMN!
Panel 2: Angled view of her ass. She’s still on Horse, but D has pulled out. Sperm is running out the gaping hole on her anus. His rampant cock is still shooting a blast over her ass cheeks.
Noise: SPLURT!
Panel 3: View from Horse’s perspective. Kat is sitting in his lap. She has leaped off his cock. It’s sticking straight up between her legs blasting sperm up over her breasts and face. Her head might be down trying to catch some in her mouth.
Noise: SPLOOGE!
Page 26 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Bernard sitting at the dinner table. He’s reading the paper. Kat is setting a plate filled with food in front of him. She’s wearing a sheer nighty that shows her tits and a panty. She’s smiling.
Bernard (thinking) Something’s wrong with Katherine. The miserable bitch seems… pleasant!
Kat: “Honey, I’m switching to the nigh shift at the hospital.”
Bernard: “But we’ll hardly see each other.”
Kat: “I know, but the hospital needs me…”
Kat (thinking) …and I’ll have my days free to fuck Horse.
Panel 2: Same dinner scene with Them both seated and eating.
Bernard: “I see those black boys showed up to mow the lawn.”
Kat: “Yes dear. They’re homeless and I’m letting them stay in the garage apartment. I hope you don’t mind, but they can take care of a lot of our NEEDS.”
Bernard: “Mind? You’re a genius! That has to be a huge tax right off.”
Kat: “I think I’ll run some leftovers to them after dinner.”
Bernard: “Just put a coat on and dear, don’t run them off any time soon. See that they stay happy.”
Kat: “I’ll try, honey.”
THE END
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Characters:
Katherine “Kat“: A standard hot bodied Kaos drawn woman in her late thirties. Kat has long brown hair. When working, her hair is pulled back in a pony tail. She wears glasses and dresses business professional, but her clothing hugs her hot body. At home, her hair is down and she loses the glasses. She’s an uptight bitch do to sexual frustration and her facial expression shows it. She always looks mad.
Horse: Age 19 Horse is a dark skinned hulking brute. He has a broad flat nose maybe crooked like it was broken in the past. Not attractive. He is extremely muscular and close to seven feet tall. His cock matches his size, enormous, dark, and uncircumcised, a big brutish weapon like it‘s weilder. His IQ is borderline deficient. His motivations are very base and carnal (food, drink,, fucking, etc.) He never smiles and always looks angry even when fucking.
Dunnell “Big D” Jackson: Age 19 Big, muscular, and handsome. His skin is a lighter brown. Big D is the opposite of Horse, smart, handsome, and a smooth talker. He is the brains of the two. He is nearly a perfect specimen of manliness in looks and physicality, but is dwarfed by his hulking friend. His cock is smooth streamlined perfection, circumcised and huge, but small compared with Horse.
Bernard: Kat’s husband. Older then Kat. Not very impressive to look at. Possibly chubby and balding.
Cover: Kat standing between a nude Horse and Dunnell both erect. She is wearing an open white lab coat and semi-nude underneath. You can see lacy panties, but no bra. Breast flesh is visible, but no nipples. She might have a doctor’s mask over her mouth and wearing rubber gloves. She has a stethoscope in her ears and one hand is holding the end up to Dunnell’s chest listening to his heart. Her other hand is stroking Horse. She’s smiling at the viewer.
Header: Doctor Bitch
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaos comics
Page 1: top horizontal, 2 square bottom panels.
Panel 1: Steering wheel with a feminine hand pressing down on the horn. Her other hand is up giving the finger to the car in front. Through her windshield is the rear window of a car in front of her car. A handicapped tag is dangling from the rearview mirror in the front car.
Noise: HONK! HONK!
Kat (thinking): Stupid handicapped drivers.
Kat: “Learn to parallel park, ASSHOLE!”
Panel 2: Side view of Kat driving a BMW or other nice car. She’s biting her nails.
Kat (thinking): I feel dirty just driving through this neighborhood.
Panel 3: The rear end of her car pulling into an alley. The break lights are on. The building next to her has a sign that reads, Homeless Shelter. A homeless man or two might be standing by the door.
Noise: SCREECH!
Page 2: Pinup with multiple scenes.
Panel 1: Kat dressed business professional, black skirt, white blouse, heels, hair pulled back, glasses on, standing beside her car. It’s hard not to notice how stacked her body is beneath the dress. She looks mad. Image balloons radiate out from her as she remembers her bad day.
Kat (thinking) What a shitty day.
Image balloon 1: Her pool guy grabbing his vacuum by the pool walking away. Her back may be visible watching him. He’s saying: “Do it yourself then. I quit.” He’s thinking, “BITCH!”
Kat (thinking) First the pool guy.
Image balloon 2: Kat watching her gardener get into his van. It might be neat to make him the father from the Wife and the Black Gardeners, but his van just says Stanford Landscaping without the son added on yet.
He’s saying: “Hire someone else then, I’m too old for this shit.” He’s thinking: “BITCH!”
Kat (thinking) Then that negro gardener quit on me
Image balloon 3: Kat talking to her husband. He’s pleading, she looks mad. Kat’s saying “But those homeless are nasty, dear.” He’s saying: “Yeah, but it’s a great tax deduction and I can’t do it.”
Kat (thinking) And my stupid husband talks me into giving physicals to a bunch of nasty homeless.
Page 3 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Kat carrying a doctor’s bag in a hallway talking to a brown bearded hipster type man.
Man: “Thanks for coming doc. What can I do to help?”
Kat (thinking) Worthless hipster do-gooder.
Kat: “Just have them strip to their underwear and line up at the door.”
Kat: “You can do whatever it is you do around here. Just stay out of my way.”
Man (thinking) What a BITCH!
Panel 2: Kat in an exam room. She’s got an open white lab coat on and is wearing a stethoscope. She’s pulling rubber gloves on.
Kat (thinking) God! What is that smell?
Panel 2: View over Kat’s shoulder. She has a mask on. She’s at the open door to the exam room. A line of homeless men are standing waiting. They are in varying races and degrees of hygiene such a bad missing teeth., scruffy beards, etc. If you show a full body shot, about half are naked and half in dirty underwear.
Kat: “Whoever’s first come in. Let’s get this over with.”
Page 4 4 even square panels.
Panel 1: Old white man entering room. He’s wearing ratty yellow stained underwear.
Kat (off panel): “Name and medical history.”
Panel 2: Close up of his upper torso. She’s listening to his heart with the stethoscope.
Kat (thinking) God, he smells.
Panel 3: Kat feeling his back while he bends forwards.
Kat (thinking) This is a nightmare.
Panel 4: Close up of his crotch. His underwear is pulled down. One gloved hand is cupping his testicles. His penis is erect, but not very impressive.
Kat: “Turn your head and cough.”
Noise: COUGH!
Kat (thinking) Haven’t seen an erection on Bernard in months.
Page 5 Top 2 square panels. Slightly smaller bottom square and larger 4th square.
Panel 1: Skinny old black man with missing teeth coming into the room. His penis is limp, but bigger then the previous man. He’s giggling. He he he coming from his mouth.
Kat (off panel): “Name.”
Kat (thinking) Great! A negro. As if this day couldn’t get any worse.
Panel 2: Kat listening to his heart. He keeps giggling.
Kat (thinking) I’m never doing this again.
Panel 3: Close up of just his crotch. Her gloved hand is cupping his large balls. His penis is semi-erect and large.
Kat (thinking) Holy Shit! That’s big!
Kat: “Cough!”
Panel 4: Close up of his now fully erect penis. She’s still cupping his balls. His penis is pointing right at her masked mouth. Her eyes are wide in surprise.
Kat (thinking) Why can’t Bernard be this big?
Man (off panel) “Never had no pretty white woman touch ol’ jumbo before.”
Page 6 horizontal top half, 2 square bottom
Panel 1: Side view of the line standing at the open door. Them men are applauding and hooting and hollering. The old black man is strolling out proudly sporting his erection. Kat is at the door.
Kat: “Next!”
Panel 2: Kat’s gloved hand cupping a small white penis.
Panel 3: Same image only different man. This penis is really pathetically small.
Kat (thinking off panel): This guy makes Bernie look big.
Page 7 5 panels top horizontal and then 4 even squares.
Panel 1: Close up side view on a hard black cock. She’s cupping his balls. The side of her face may be in it with the tip of the cock close to her masked mouth. The pee slit could be dripping a little. The cock is long and the thickest we’ve seen so far.
Kat (thinking) Now that’s a penis!
Panel 2: Close up of her cupping the balls of a small semi hard white penis.
Panel 3: Close up of her cupping a large black cock.
Kat (off panel thinking) The black ones are all bigger and harder!
Panel 4: Close up of her cupping a small uncircumcised white penis
Kat (thinking off panel) Boring! I wonder how big the next black one will be?
Panel 5: Close up of her cupping a large black one. The biggest yet. Wavy lines or something are coming off it to show it stinks. He’s semi-hard.
Kat (thinking off panel) God this one stinks, but look at it grow!
Page 8 2 top square panels and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Kat still cupping the stinky cock, but it’s fully hard now.
Kat (off panel): Cough!
Panel 2: Close up of the face of an ugly old black man. He’s grinning showing yellowed missing teeth. He’s got a scruffy white beard. He may be wearing a knit cap and have stink lines coming off him. His eyes are leering downward.
Panel 3: View from old black man’s perspective looking down. His penis is visible still hard with stink lines and her hand on his balls. Dominating the picture is her cleavage. A button on her blouse is open revealing her cleavage and a black bra.
Kat (off panel thinking) Why do they keep getting erections?
Page 9 horizontal top panel and 2 square bottom panels
Panel 1: Front view of Kat with the open door behind her and Big D coming in the room. Kat is looking down at a clip board. D is wearing a white tee shirt a white briefs straining to contain his big cock. His musculature is visible under the tee.
Kat (thinking) All but one of these guys has been bigger then Bernie’s limp little prick.
Kat: “Name?”
Big D: “Big D.”
Panel 2 Side view of Kat now facing Big D. She looks impressed.
Kat: “Real name?”
Big D: “Dunnell Jackson.”
Big D (thinking) Damn! Look at those tits.”
Panel 3: View over her shoulder of D pulling his tee shirt off over his head.
Kat (thinking) He certainly looks healthy.
Page 10 horizontal top and horizontal bottom with two small squares in the middle.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat standing behind D. He is bending down and her hands are examining his back.
Kat: “Looks good, now pull your underwear down.”
Panel 2: Close up view of D’s ass as he’s pulling the underwear down his thighs. His balls and dangling penis may be visible between his legs.
Panel 3: Close up view of D’s cock. He is flaccid but still huge. His cock dangles down over his balls.
Panel 4: View over Kat’s shoulder of D’s lower body. She is in her exam chair staring at his crotch.
Page 11 2 square top, horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of his crotch. Her hand is lifting his cock out of the way and he’s now half-erect. Her other gloved hand is cupping his balls.
Kat (off panel) So big I have to move it out of the way!
Panel 2: Same view only now his cock is fully hard. She’s still holding it.
Kat (off panel) “T-turn your head and cough.”
Panel 3: Kat’s upper torso. Her mouth still covered with the mask. She’s staring down to shaft of D’s hard cock.
Kat (thinking) This is the most perfect penis I’ve ever seen.
D: “Eleven inches if you’re wondering.”
Kat (thinking) Guess that’s why they call him BIG D!
Page 12 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1 Kat talking to a still nude D. He is fully erect and has his arms crossed. She may be looking down at his penis.
Kat: “I wasn’t wondering, nor did I ask.”
D: “Why so bitchy?”
Kat: “Not that it’s any of your damn business, but my pool and lawn men just quit on me…”
Panel 2: Close up of Kat’s face. She’s pulled the mask down off her mouth.
Kat: “Tuesdays are my only day off and I’m here with you instead of sunbathing by my pool…”
Panel 3 Kat’s upper torso. She’s pulling her rubber gloves off. One bare hand is scratching the half gloved one.
Kat: “I’m not having a good day. You can get dressed and go.”
Noise around hand: Itch! Itch!
Page 13 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: Kat’s upper torso. Horse’s dark looming presence is behind her.
Kat (thinking) I’d never cheat on Bernard, especially with a negro…
Kat (thinking) But what would a penis that big feel like.
Horse: “Ready.”
Kat (thinking) I thought I was done.
Kat: “Name?”
Horse: “Horse.”
Panel 2: Kat now facing Horse. He towers over her. She looks scared. She has forgotten to put her gloves back on or pull the mask up. He’s already nude
Word beside Kat: Shiver!
Kat: “Real name?”
Horse: “Just Horse.”
Page 14 2 square top and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Over Kat’s shoulder view of Horse’s chest.
Kat (thinking) His muscles have muscles!
Panel 2: Over shoulder view of Horse’s crotch. He’s bigger then Big D. The fat head is peeking out from the foreskin. His balls are gigantic. The enormous cock is so heavy it angles downward.
Kat (thinking) Dear god! It’s a huge black snake, a python or a hooded cobra!
Panel 3: Side view of Horse bending forwards while she runs her hands down his back, D is standing in the doorway still nude and erect. Kat is looking at him.
Kat: “What are you still doing here?”
D: “Just waitin for my homie.”
Page 15 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Close up of Horse’s enormous cock. She is holding it just under the foreskin. The head is dribbling precum and it’s falling on her hand. Her other hand is cupping his testicles, but his balls are so big only one fits in the palm of her hand. His cock looks bigger and is angling up more.
Kat (thinking) Shit! Forgot my gloves.
Kat (thinking) What the hell? He’s getting bigger!
Panel 2: Close up side view of Horse’s fully hard cock and Kat’s face. The head is still dribbling pre-cum and its close to her mouth as she leans forwards reaching out and has a ball in each hand.
Kat: “Turn your head and cough.”
Page 16 2 horizontal
Panel 1: The back of Kat’s head. She’s still sitting and D has moved to stand beside Horse. One man’s cock is one either side of her head, still erect and sticking out.
D (from left side): “Well doc, see anything wrong with us?”
Panel 2: Side view of Kat now standing. Horse and Dunnell are dressing, but keeping their cocks out as long as possible. They are pulling on their shirts first. She is still staring at their cocks.
Kat: “You both seem healthy. You don’t look homeless at all.”
D: “We just lost our construction jobs and got evicted on the same day.”
Horse (thinking) Bitch needs to get fucked. I can smell her pussy.
Page 17 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: The three talking. The men are dressed now, but if their crotches are visible, their big bulges are straining.
D: “We built houses, did yard work, cleaned pools.”
Horse (thinking) We never did no yards or pools!
Kat: “Good luck getting on… wait did you say yard work?”
Panel 2: Kat standing at the door of the office while Horse and D are leaving.
D: “Sure, lawns, pools, almost anything.”
Kat: “Would you guys do mine until I can find someone full time? I’ll see you’re well compensated.”
Page 18 horizontal top and 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Kat and D’s upper torso’s talking. She’s removed the lab coat and mask.
D: “That would be great. Help us get on our feet.”
Kat: “Here’s my address, come by Wednesday and I’ll leave the shed unlocked.”
Panel 2: Rear view of Horse and Dunell watching her leave the shelter.
Horse: “I wants to FUCK her.”
D: “Just follow my lead and you just might.”
Panel 3: Kat’s head and her rear view mirror in her car. She biting her nails. It’s the hand that got Horse’s precum on it.
Kat (thinking) Glad that’s over with.
Kat (thinking) At least my lawn and pool problem’s solved. Might even be another tax deduction.
Page 19 4 squares
Panel 1: Close up of Kat’s hand and mouth and nose. She’s still biting her nails. Some of Horse’s precum is visible on her hand between her thumb and fingers.
Nose: Sniff! Sniff!
Panel 2: Side view of Kat driving. She’s licking her hand.
Kat (thinking) What is this? Kind of salty? Tastes really good.
Panel 3: Side view of Kat holding the back of her hand up in front of her face and seeing some precum. She is wide eyed and horrified.
Kat (thinking) Oh shit! I’m gonna vomit.
Panel 4 Front view of Kat at a store counter. She’s got a bottle that reads mouth wash in one hand and a bill in her other hand.
Kat: “Keep the change.”
Header: END PART 1
This is a good place to stop with a part 1 if you’d like or you can ignore the cover for part 2 and carry on with the story.
Cover: Something similar to the first cover only Kat is only wearing her skimpy bikini while she examines Horse and D. She still has the stethoscope around her neck. Her nipples are hard through the bikini top. She might have her mask and gloves on.
Header: Doctor Bitch: Part 2
Header: Story by Stormbringer
Header: Art by Kaoscomics
Page 1 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Katherine in a skimpy bikini reclining poolside while drinking a margarita.
Kat (thinking) Six days at the hospital and seven nights with my lame ass husband.
Kat (thinking) Tuesday, the only day of the week I don’t hate.
Panel 2: Kat floating on her back in the pool. Her bikini is wet now and mostly see thru. Her hair floats out behind her. Two image balloons come from her head showing erect black cocks pointing at her mouth. They aren’t Horse and D’s, but two of the others.
Kat (thinking) Missed this last week. Stupid husband.
Kat (thinking) Now I see black cocks every time I close my eyes. Stupid homeless negroes.
Page 2 vertical left panel and 2 square right.
Panel 1: Kat drying herself with a towel by the cot.
Kat (thinking) This is all Bernard’s fault. Stupid limp dicked husband and his tax deductions.
Panel 2: Kat’s upper torso on the cot.
Kat (thinking): Sun and margarita’s are so relaxing…
Kat: “Snore!”
Panel 3: Kat in her bikini standing in the exam room. She wearing her mask, gloves, and a stethoscope.
Kat: “Next.”
Page 3 1 vertical panel and 2 squares
Panel 1: Kat in her bikini standing behind the skinny old man that called his cock Jumbo. She’s reaching around with one hand and motion lines show her jerking off his hard cock. Her other hand is holding the stethoscope to his back listening to his heart.
Kat: “Heart rate’s a little fast.
Panel 2: Side view of black man’s crotch. She’s behind him fingering his ass while reaching around and jerking his huge penis. Stink lines come off it.
Kat: “Lets check your prostrate.”
Panel 3: Over shoulder view of a small white penis. The man’s hand is grabbing the base of the limp little thing.
Kat: “Get that pathetic thing away from me, Bernard.”
Page 4 2 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Kat’s back sitting on the stool looking at Horse and Dunnell on either side of her. They are both naked and erect.
Big D: “Like our tongue depressors, Doc?”
Horse: “Open up and say AH!”
Panel 2: Same view only this is back to reality. Kat’s back is sitting up on her cot. Horse and D are standing in the same positions as her dream. D is bare chested. Horse wears a stained tee shirt with holes in it. Both have jeans or slacks on.
Kat: “AAAAHHH!!”
Page 5 horizontal top and two vertical rectangle bottoms.
Panel 1: Full body view of Kat on the cot staring in alarm at the viewer. The dreams have aroused her. Her nipples are hard and straining at the tight bikini. Her legs are slightly spread and her bikini bottoms are wet with arousal causing them to cling to her girl parts. Horse and Dunnell aren’t visible.
Horse (off panel): “Sorry to scare you, doc. That must have been some dream you were having.”
Kat: “W-what are YOU doing here?”
Panel 2: Kat standing talking to Horse and D. Her nipples are still straining. She looks mad. D looks cocky and Horse looks angry as usual.
Dunnell: “We’re here to mow your lawn.”
Kat: “NO! You’re supposed to be here tomorrow.”
Kat (thinking): Stupid negroes.
Dunnell: “Nope. You said Tuesday and you’d meet us by the pool.”
Panel 3: Front shot of Kat looking angry. Her arms are crossed and making her breasts squeeze together.
Kat (thinking): Did I? Well there goes my free day.
Kat: “Well you’re here now. I’ll show you the shed.”
Page 6 4 even panels
Panel 1: View over both black men’s shoulders of Kat’s back. She is pointing at a shed. Her bikini is clearly a thong and her ass is visible.
Kat: “Everything you need is in there.”
Kat: “I’ll be inside.”
Panel 2: Kat standing in her kitchen pouring herself a margarita.
Kat (thinking): So embarrassed. Bernard hasn’t even seen me in this bikini.
Kat (thinking): Those two negroes couldn’t take their eyes off me.
Kat (thinking): Better go change.
Panel 3: Kat standing in front of a full length mirror. She’s posing and looking at her body.
Kat (thinking): Those two black boys sure got an eye full.
Kat (thinking): Why should I change. Let them stare.
Kat (thinking): Bernard hasn’t stared at me like that in years.
Panel 4: Kat in the kitchen again pouring another margarita. She’s still in the bikini.
Kat (thinking): Gonna need some more courage to tease those negroes.
Kat (thinking): What harm could there be in a little teasing?
Page 7 smaller horizontal top and two vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Kat sitting up in her cot sipping from the margarita. Horse is on the other side of a bush clipping the hedges. His upper torso is visible. D is in the background on a riding mower or pushing a mower.
Kat (thinking): I can’t believe I’m doing this. It’s so exciting.
Kat (thinking): When Dunnell gets closer, I’ll take a shower.
Panel 2: Kat under an outdoor pool shower. It isn’t enclosed the pipes run up a wall. This is a front shot with her breasts thrust out and her head back so the water is soaking her hair. The wet bikini has turned see thru again.
Kat (thinking): Get a good view boys. You can look but not touch.
Panel 3: More of a side view of Kat under the shower. Her hands are bracing against the wall. Her head is down, wet hair dangling, breasts thrust out, back arched and ass thrust out.
Kat (thinking): God, I’m so turned on.
Kat (thinking): Why haven’t I teased men before?
Page 8 horizontal top. 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Long shot of a wet Kat walking along the side of her pool. Behind her are Horse still trimming a hedge and D with the lawnmower. Both are staring hard at her.
Kat: “Come on boys, I’m not paying you to sit around.”
Panel 2: Close up of D’s crotch showing his penis swollen and straining at his pants.
Panel 3: Side view of Horse. His cock is straining too. He’s grabbing the shaft through his pants.
Horse (thinking): Snotty racist white BITCH! GONNA FUCK YOU GOOD!
Page 9 vertical left panel and 2 square right.
Panel 1: Long view of Kat on her cot. She’s pouring suntan lotion on her belly and rubbing it in with one hand.
Kat (thinking): Stupid negroes can’t stop staring.
Panel 2: Kat’s upper torso. She’s rubbing lotion on her exposed breast flesh. She’s yawning with a YAWN! By her mouth.
Kat (thinking) Bet they wish they could rub oil on me.
Kat (thinking) sun and booze made me tired. Can’t stay awake…
Panel 3: Kat asleep on the cot with a SNORE! By her mouth. Maybe there’s a bubble showing she’s dreaming about hard black cocks again or black hands rubbing lotion on her body.
Page 10 horizontal top, small square bottom left and larger rectangle on right.
Panel 1: Side view of the back of the cot and lots of Kat’s body. Horse and D are standing near the foot. D is sweaty. Horse is pulling his tee shirt off over his head.
D: “Hey doc… doc…. DOC!”
Kat: “Wha.. What?”
Panel 2: Kat’s upper torso. She’s awake and looks alarmed again at seeing the black men.
Kat: “What?”
Panel 3: Another view of all three. One or both black men may be unbuttoning their pants. Their cocks are still straining.
D: “We’re done, but it was hot work. Could we cool off in the pool.
Kat: “I’d rather you just used the shower.”
Kat (thinking) Sweaty negroes in my pool…YECH!
Horse: “NO! Fuckin hot. Pool better.”
Kat: “Fine, but be quick about it.”
Page 11 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat on the cot, but leaning up. Her eyes are wide in shock. Horse has dropped his pants to the ground. Big D is pushing his down under his balls. Both their cocks are fully erect.
Kat: “Hold on. What do you think you’re…”
D: “Sorry no suits. You’re a doctor, you see cocks like this every day.”
Kat (thinking) YES! COCKS! That’s the proper term for something so big.
Kat: “No, I don’t see this every day.”
Panel 2: Rear view of Kat sitting on the edge of the pool. Good shot of her ass in the thong. Horse and Dunnell are horse playing in the pool beyond her. The water stops mid thigh and their hard cocks are visible bobbing before them.
Page 12 2 vertical panels, left isn’t as wide as the right.
Panel 1: Sexy side view of Kat sitting on the edge of the pool, feet dangling in the water.
Kat (thinking) COCKS are big and black. Penises are small and white.
Kat (thinking) Why do I feel like I’m the one being teased?
Panel 2: Shot of Kat slipping off the edge and into the water. Dunnell has walked up to her. His penis is just above the water level aiming towards her.
Kat (thinking) How are they still hard? Bernie shrivels up in the water.
D: “Ma’am, you don’t want to dehydrate. You should hop in and join us.”
Kat: “Okay and call me Katherine.”
Page 13 horizontal top. Thin vertical bottom left and larger horizontal right.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat kneeling in the water. The bottom of the pic is an underwater scene and you can see her full body as well as D’s thighs and legs. Above the waterline, her head is level with his crotch and the tip of his cock is pointed right at her mouth.
Kat (thinking) Better stand up before that thing pokes me in the mouth.
Panel 2: Angled down frontal view like from D’s perspective of Kat standing in the water but leaning back against the wall. Her wet aroused body is on display and her bikini is see thru again. His cock is hard and in the picture pointing towards her crotch. She’s looking down her wet body at his cock.
Kat: “I should get out.”
D: “Nonsense, join us for some fun.”
Panel 3: Far off scene of all three frolicking in the water. Splashing each other and looking like they’re having fun.
Page 14 Horizontal top and three vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Kat and D’s heads and shoulders above the waterline talking to each other. She’s smiling and laughing with ha ha ha! Around her mouth.
D: “You have a beautiful body, Kat.
Kat: “Thanks I guess and it’s Katherine.”
D: “It’s not fair that you get to wear clothes when we’re naked.
Kat: “HA! Well you need to find suits then. I’m not stripping.”
Kat (thinking) Haven’t laughed in a long time.
Panel 2: View over D’s still waterline shoulder looking up Kat’s body as she poses. She’s wet and dripping again. Her hands are on her hips.
D: “Stand up and let me get a good look at that hot body.”
Panel 3: Same shot only now Kat has turned around showing her thong covered ass.
Kat: “You like?”
D: “Fuck yeah and I think you like showing off your body.”
Panel 4: Same shot only Kat has turned back around. This time her arms are up with her wrists crossed above her head and she’s arching her back to thrust her breasts out. Horse’s hulking presence is right behind her.
D: “Sexy slut. Put your hands over your head.”
Kat: “Like this?”
Page 15 vertical left top with larger horizontal right and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Horse standing behind Kat in the pool. He has grabbed her wrists above her head with one beefy hand and is ripping her bikini top off with the other exposing her breasts. She looks horrified.
Kat: “What the… STOP! Dunnell help me!”
Panel 2: Kat’s body stretched out more with Horse still holding her wrists and now squeezing one breast with his other beeft hand. D has grabbed her legs under one arm and is ripping off her thong panty with the other exposing her trim bush.
Panel 3: Angled down or god view of Kat stretched out right above the water with Horse now pinching and pulling a hard nipple. D is still holding her legs and running a hand over her flat belly. She still looks horrified.
D: “You ever seen a better body then this, bro?”
Horse: “Grunt!”
Kat: “Let me go, you assholes.”
D: “Okay!”
Page 16 horizontal top, vertical left bottom panel and horizontal right.
Panel 1: Underwater view of Kat having been dropped in the water by the two men. Their legs and feet might be in the picture and their cocks may be above the water line. Her body is slightly bent at the ass. Bubbles are floating all around her.
Panel 2: Naked Kat now standing with water flying off her. D has pulled her against his chest with one hand around the small of her back. He has one hand on her breast.
Kat: “L-let me go! I’ll scream!”
D: “No one can hear you.”
Panel 3: All three standing in the water. Kat is sandwiched between the two men. Horse has come up from behind and pulled her ass against him with his huge cock between her thighs sticking out between her legs. She’s looking like she’s enjoying it. Her head might be cocked with him kissing her neck. D is still standing in front of her squeezing a breast with one hand and pinching a nipple with the other.
Kat: “Ahh! Oh! Oh god! Mmmmmm. Please stop. Oh yessss!”
Page 17 vertical left panel 2 square on the right.
Panel 1: Side view Kat ass out and leaning forward. Horse is fingering her from behind. D is kissing her passionately with his far hand holding the back of her head and his other hand squeezing her breast so that the nipple sticks out between his fingers. Her hand is reaching down and gripping his cock with stroke lines around it.
Noise (around kiss): Mmmmmm!
Panel 2: Close up of her pussy and ass with Horse’s finger in her and fluid flying out. Possibly motion lines show him moving his finger.
Noise (around finger): Squish! Squish!
Action (around ass cheeks): Hump! Hump!
Horse (off panel): “I wants to eat this white pussy.”
Panel 3: View over Horse’s shoulder of Kat laying on the edge of the pool. He’s still in the water. He is holding her knees open displaying everything and bending down to lick her.
Kat: “Please stop. I can’t cheat on my husband.”
Horse: “This ain’t cheating.”
Kat: “Please! Oral sex is disgusting.”
Page 18 horizontal top and bottom with 2 squares in the middle
Panel 1: View down Kat’s belly of Horse’s face buried in her pussy. His nose is on her mound and he’s looking up at her.
Kat (off panel): “Oh God! Stop. This is disgus…”
Panel 2: Close up of Kat’s face. Her eyes are wide in surprise, lips parted.
Kat: “OH MY!”
Panel 3: Close up of her pussy and Horse’s face. He has a long tongue wiggling between her labia. Her clit is long and distended with arousal.
Action: Lick! Lick!
Panel 4: Long side view of Kat laying on the cement with her back arched and legs spread over Horse’s shoulders. His head is still in her pussy. She might be pinching one of her own nipples.
Noise around Horse’s head: Slurp! Slurp! Slurp!
Kat (thinking) Ohmygod! So good! So good!
Kat (thinking) Something’s happening!
Kat (thinking) I think I’m gonna cum…
Page 19 2 horizontal tops and 2 square bottoms..
Panel 1: Looking down view of Kat’s lower body with Horse’s head still between her legs, but not eating her out. D’s hand is on Horse’s shoulder stopping him.
D: “Stop Horse.”
Kat: “Nnnoooo!”
D: “Sorry Katherine. We got carried away. We’ll get going.”
Panel 2: Kat’s front. She’s still sitting on the edge of the pool, but sitting up now. Her legs are still spread and her pussy is splayed open still dripping fluid. She looks flushed and desperate.
Kat: “Wait! No, don’t stop. I was so close to….”
Panel 3: Close up of her crotch with Horse’s tongue in it again.
Action: Lick! Lick!
Panel 4: Close up of her crotch with Horse fingering her while licking her clit.
Page 20 4 even squares.
Panel 1: View of Kat sitting on the ledge with Horse in the water licking and fingering her. Dunnell is standing behind Horse leaning into Kat. He’s grabbing one breast and whispering in her ear. Her head is thrown back in pure pleasure.
D: “If we get you off, you should get us off.”
Kat: “I c-can’t do t-that. C-can’t cheat.”
D: “It’s only cheating if we fuck you.”
Kat: “C-can’t.”
Panel 2: Front view of Kat sitting on the ledge, legs spread. The boys aren’t in the picture. She’s wide eyed and looks desperate. Her pussy is splayed open and dripping.
D (off panel): “Let’s go Horse.”
Kat: “Please! Don’t stop. I’ll- I’ll do it.”
Panel 3: Side view of Kat once again getting fingered and licked by Horse. Dunnell is leaning into her and they are kissing while he squeezes a nipple.
Kat (thinking) It’s happening! It’s happening!
Kat (thinking) I’m finally gonna….
Panel 4: View looking up Kat’s body from Horse’s perspective. His finger is in her pussy. She is squirting fluid. D is leaning in flickering one nipple with his tongue. She looks wild and ecstatic.
Kat: “CUMMING!”
Header: END PART 2
This is a good place to stop with a part 2 if you’d like or you can ignore and carry on with the story.
Cover: Dunnell sitting on an examine table wearing a hospital gown, but it is pulled up and his cock is rearing up fully erect. Kat is now naked, but wearing a mask and stethoscope. She is listening to his heart beat while stroking his cock.
Header: Doctor Bitch: Part 3
Header: Story by Stormbringer
Header: Art by Kaoscomics
Page 1 top and middle rectangles with 2 spilt rectangles at bottom
Panel 1: God view looking down on Kat. She’s laying on her back on the cement. Horse is still in the water stooping with his head still buried in her pussy. Dunnell’s feet are above her head.
Kat: “Oh my god, thank you!”
Kat (thinking with balloon connected with the above): I’ve never orgasmed before.
Kat: “Oh! OH! OH GOD!”
Kat (thinking with balloon connected with the above): He’s not stopping!
Dunnell: “Flip her over on her knees.”
Panel 2: Kat on all fours with Dunnell now kneeling in front of her, his hard cock aimed at her face. Horse is leaning up a little more with his face still buried in her pussy.
Kat: “Oh god, his tongue…”
Dunnell: “Horse can eat pussy for hours. Now it’s your turn.”
Kat: “I’ve never… Please? It’s debasing…”
Dunnell: “Shut up bitch! We get you off, you get us off.”
Panel 3: Close up of Kat’s rear. Horse is fingering her pussy while licking her rectum.
Panel 4: Close up of D’s cock and Kat’s head. She’s kissing the tip of his cock.
D (off panel): “Give it a kiss. Show me you love my black cock.”
Page 2 2 smaller rectangles on top and large bottom pic
Panel 1: Close up of Kat’s head with her mouth open wide. She’s having another orgasm. D’s cock head is poised right on her lips.
Kat (thinking): Cumming again!
Kat: “YYYEEESSS!!!”
Panel 2: Same image with D’s cock thrust into her mouth and her cheek is bulging out. She looks surprised and her eyes are crossed.
Noise around her mouth: Oooomph!
Panel 3: View from D’s perspective. Kat is grabbing his cock , her mouth is above the cock head maybe with a strand of spittle connecting them. Down her back, above her ass cheeks, Horses head has popped up.
Horse: “Yo D, you gonna luv dis pussy.”
Horse: “Da bitch is a real creamer.”
Kat: “Just don’t ejaculate in my mouth.”
Page 3 6 vertical rectangles
Panel 1: Kat licking around the head of D’s cock.
D (off panel) “Lick around the head.”
Panel 2: Closer view of the end of D’s cock with Kat tonguing his urethra.
D (off panel) “Yeah bitch! Lick my pee slit.”
Panel 3: Full view of D’s cock with Kat holding it up while licking his testicles.
D (off panel) “Lick my balls.”
Panel 4: Full shot of Kat’s slit with Horse’s tongue licking her distended clit.
Panel 5: Full shot of Kat’s slit with Horse’s tongue lapping up the length of her slit. Perhaps there’s a ghost image of his tongue showing movement.
Action word: Lap! Lap!
Panel 6: Full shot of Kat’s slit with Horse holding his long tongue rigid. Her labia is parting around it.
Action word: Hump! Hump!
Page 4 top is two even squares. The bottom is a larger left panel and a more vertical right.
Panel 1: Full view of D’s cock with Kat holding it against her cheek. She’s panting.
D (off panel): “Suck it.”
Kat: “Wait. I’m close again,”
Noise around her mouth: Pant! Pant!
Panel 2: Side view of her head with half his cock down her throat.
D (off panel) “Swallow dat cock and I’ll let you cum again, bitch.”
Panel 3: Close up view of D’s cock with Kat having swallowed more of the shaft.
D (off panel): “Let her cum, Horse.”
Panel 4: Close up of Kat’s slit with one of Horse’s fingers in her and his tongue tip teasing her slit. She’s squirting fluid out.
Page 5 2 top vertical rectangles and a bottom horizontal rectangle
Panel 1: Close up of D’s cock with the tip in Kat’s mouth. Her eyes are closed.
Kat (thinking): This isn’t so bad. The faster I suck Dunnell, the faster Horse licks me.
Panel 2: Same image or side view only she’s swallowed more then half D’s cock.
Kat (thinking): It feels natural doing this for such a… REAL man!
Panel 3: Full length side view of Kat on all fours. She’s swallowed all D’s cock. Horse’s head is still between her thighs and he’s bringing his hand towards her, holding two fingers together.
Noises: Suck! Suck! And Lick! Lick!
Kat (thinking) WOW! I swear his cock’s getting bigger!
Page 6 Large horizontal top and 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Same side view as last time. Her body is X-rayed showing D cumming down her throat and filling her belly as well as Horse’s two fingers curled up inside her and she’s squirting again.
Kat (thinking) Oh shit! He’s cumming!
Panel 2: Close up of D’s cock and her face. Only the end is in her mouth. Her cheeks are bulging out and sperm is shooting out of her mouth around his shaft.
Kat (thinking) It tastes so… GOOD!
Panel 3: Full length shot of his cock with his hand on the shaft. Her mouth is open tongue out. Her face is covered in a blast of semen and more is shooting over her tongue.
D (off panel): “GAWD DAMN!”
Page 7 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: Kat sitting up on her knees. She’s holding D’s maybe semi-deflated cock. It’s leaking sperm onto her outstretched tongue. Her face and tits have sperm on them.
Kat (thinking) Black sperm tastes so good, I want more.
Panel 2: Same pose. Kat is still holding D’s cock, but now she’s looking away from the viewer at Horse standing there. His monster cock is erect. It might be dripping pool water. There should be water around his feet too.
Horse: “My turn, bitch.”
Kat (thinking): There’s more sperm for me.
Kat: “Wait, I have an idea.”
Page 8: Horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat’s garage. There are steps going up to a door on the second level. She’s leading the way. Horse is following with his rock hard cock. D is behind horse. His cock sticks out, but angles down, deflated.
Kat: “We have a guest apartment above the garage.”
Panel 2: View of the living room. Kat is visible through a door looking in a mirror. Horse is standing near a couch. D is relaxing in a recliner.
Kat: “Let me clean up first.”
Horse: “Hurry up!”
Panel 3: Kat looking at her reflection in the mirror. She’s using a cloth to wipe sperm off her breasts.
Kat (thinking) This is more sperm then Bernard’s ever produced in 12 years of marriage.
Page 9 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: Side view of Kat standing before Horse. She has to look up at him. He looks angry as usual. She’s grabbing the end of his cock.
Action noise: Shiver! Shiver! Around Kat.
Horse (thinking): You belong to me now, bitch!
Horse: “Suck ma big black cock.”
Kat (thinking): He’s more beast then man.
Kat (thinking): My knees feel week. Must obey him.
Panel 2: Same side view only Kat has fallen to her knees. Her mouth is stretched wide open trying to accommodate his huge cock head.
Kat (thinking) This beast gave me more pleasure then my husband ever has.
Kat (thinking) He deserves the same from me.
Page 10 2 top squares and the bottom horizontal rectangle
Panel 1: View from Horse’s perspective looking down. Kat is looking up at him. Her jaw is stretched wide around his cock head.
Noise: Slurp! Slurp!
Panel 2: Side view of Kat’s upper torso including stomach. She is licking his wet cock head. One hand is cupping one of his huge testicles. One of his nuts is bigger then her hand.
Kat (thinking) How much sperm do these things hold?
Noise (around belly) Growl!
Panel 3: Horse now sitting on the couch while Kat is on her knees between his legs. Both hands are on the shaft with motion lines around them. The head is in her mouth.
Horse: “Suck dat nigga cock, ho.”
Noise: Slurp! Slurp!
Page 11: Two top squares and bottom horizontal rectangle.
Panel 1: Close up side view of Horse’s crotch on the couch. Kat is now using her breasts around the shaft. As big as her breasts are the tip still rises above them and she’s licking the head.
Horse (off panel): Use dem titties on mah cock.”
Panel 2: Horse’s point of view of Kat titty fucking him. She’s looking up at him. Maybe he’s pinching one hard nipple and pulling on it.
Panel 3: Rear end view of Kat. D is spreading her ass cheeks while bringing his tongue close to her pussy. She’s still sucking Horse.
Page 12 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Side view of all three. Horse on couch. Kat is now mostly on all fours. One hand is holding herself up. The other hand has bent his cock down. She’s swallowed at least half his cock. D is on his hands and knees licking her pussy. If his cock is in the image, it’s rock hard again.
Horse: “Swallow dat nigga cock.”
Noise around her throat: Gak!
Noise around her pussy: Lap! Lap!
Panel 2: Same side view only D is now on his knees lining the head of his cock up with her pussy. The tip is pushing against her. She’s not sucking Horse, but her mouth is still close maybe linked by saliva. She’s turned a little to look back at D.
Kat: “Watch it! My pussy is off limits to anyone’s penis but my husband.”
D: “It ain’t cheating unless I cum in you. How about I just put the head in?”
Page 13 6 even panels
Panel 1: Close up of Kat’s head with a good chunk of Horse’s cock shoved down her throat. Her cheeks are bulging. Horse has his hand on her head.
Horse: “Getting close.”
Kat (thinking) Oh shit! He’s pushing it in!
Panel 2: Close up of her slit with her labia spread wide around D’s cock head as it enters her.
Panel 3: Close up of Kat’s head with mostly just the tip of Horse’s cock in her mouth. He’s cumming and her cheeks are bulging. Her eyes are crossed and sperm is flying out the sides of her mouth.
Noise: GAK!
Panel 4: Close up of her slit with half his cock inside her.
D (off panel): Gonna feed some more to this white pussy. Any objections?
Panel 5: Close up of Kat’s face, mouth open. Horse’s cock blasting sperm all over her.
Panel 6: Close up of Kat’s slit with D buried to the hilt.
D (off panel): “This pussy is TIGHT!.”
Page 14 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Side view of all three. D is fucking her doggy style now with motion lines showing movement, fluid squirting out around their crotches. Kat is still getting blasted in her face and breasts by Horse’s cock.
Noise around his cock: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!
D (thinking): Two weeks without sex and he’s practically drowning her in sperm.
Panel 2: God view looking down on the threesome. D’s wet cock is seen penetrating her. Kat’s head is in Horse’s lap with his spent limp cock lying over her shoulder trickling sperm down her back.
Noise around his cock: FWAP FWAP FWAP!
Kat: “Your so BBIIGG!”
Kat (thinking) And so GOOD!
Kat: “Fuck me! FUCK ME!”
Kat (thinking) I’M CUMMING!
Page 15 Pinup
Panel 1: Sexy pinup of D laying on his back while Kat rides his cock. He’s reaching up and squeezing her tits. Her face is still messy. She looks overly aroused. Horse doesn’t need to be in the picture or he could be in the background sitting on the couch stroking his cock back to life.
Noise around cock: FUK FUK FUK!
D: “Do you like my cock?”
Kat: “I love it! You’re so much bigger then my husband.”
D: “Only black cock can satisfy a slut like you, Kat.”
Kat: “YES! Only black cock! Fuck me! Not a slut. Fuck me!”
D: You’re Doctor Katherine with your hubby, but Kat the slut with us.”
Kat: “CUMMING! Can’t stop cumming! I’m your slut BIG D!”
Page 16 horizontal top and 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Side view of Kat on her back on the carpet and D holding himself above her as they fuck
D: “Getting close slut.”
Kat: “Pull it out, I’m not protected.”
D: “A real slut would beg me to seed her pussy.”
Kat: “Seeded? Seeded? Seed… my pussy. Seed me Big D!”
Panel 2: God view of her torso with an X-ray showing D filling her womb with sperm.
Kat and D merging together: “CUMMING!”
Panel 3: Close up of their crotches. His still rampant cock is above her slit, shooting off a little strand of semen. More semen connects his cock head to her pussy. Her labia is spread wide and sperm is pouring out to pool on the carpet. Maybe her hand is on her mound with a finger on her clit.
Kat: “So much cum for me.”
Page 17 2 square top panels, horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Their upper torsos with D on top, kissing her passionately.
Kat (thinking) Shouldn’t have let him cum in me, but that was my biggest orgasm yet.
Panel 2: Side view of their upper torsos. They’ve broken the kiss. D looks sad.
D: “Sorry.”
Kat: “Don’t be. That was amazing. You can fuck me anytime.”
D: “It won’t be the same.”
Panel 3: Angled view of Kat’s spread legs with an even larger pool of sperm on the carpet. Dunnell’s knees are visible. His cock is sticking out and angled down still dripping some sperm.
Kat (off panel): “I better get this cleaned up.”
D (off panel): “Leave it, it’ll be easier on you.”
Page 18 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: View from Kat’s perspective down her body of Dunnell standing up. Horse’s upper body may be visible over his head.
Kat: “What do you mean?”
Panel 2: Same image only Dunnell has stepped out of the way and Horse’s huge body is visible with his hand stroking his monster cock.
Kat: “WHOA! No way I could take that. Let me suck you again.”
Page 19 horizontal top and bottom with 2 small horizontals in the middle.
Panel 1: God view of Kat’s body laying on the carpet. Horse is on his knees bending his down to aim at her sperm filled pussy. His foreskin covers half his cock head. She looks frightened.
Kat: “Dunnell, help me!”
Panel 2: God view close up of his cock head, the tip fully emerged from the foreskin pushing into her pussy. The head is covered in D’s semen.
Panel 3: Side view of her pussy with the entire head of his cock in her. She’s spread wide open by him.
Panel 4: Side view of Kat on her back. Her back is arched. Her head is thrown back, mouth open. Horse is on his knees. His hands are pushing her legs up and about a third of his cock is in her.
Kat: “UUUNNNHHHH!!!”
Horse: “D, Get something to clean her face off.”
Page 20 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: God view of her on her back. D’s hand is using a cloth to wipe sperm off her face. Horse’s cock is now buried. Maybe there’s a cock shaped bulge under her belly.
Horse: “Resizing dis pussy good.”
Kat (thinking) This isn’t physically possible!
Panel 2: Side view of Kat on her back. Horse is arching his back, his tongue is out licking one hard nipple. D is kneeling on the other side of her head.
D: “He used to just rip women apart.”
D: “But I taught him patience.”
Words around Kat’s body: Shudder!
Panel 3: Same side view only Horse is now sucking one big nipple between his lips.
D: “I open women up for him.”
D: “And he ruins you for all other men.”
Kat: “FFFUUUCCCKKK… MMEE!”
Page 21 horizontal top and bottom with 2 rectangles in the middle
Panel 1: God view down. Kat’s body is almost completely obscured. Her legs are wrapped around his hips and her head is sticking over one shoulder. She’s screaming in pleasure.
Kat: “FFUUCCKK ME! FUCK ME! SO BIG! SO GOOD!”
Noise around his ass: THWAP THWAP THWAP!
Panel 2: Close up of their heads kissing passionately or their mouth are close with her tongue teasing his overly large one.
Noise is kissin: SMACK!
Panel 3: Close up of her spread open pussy with just the head in her. His huge shaft and balls are dripping.
Motion lines show it’s moving in and out of her.
Noise: Slam Slam Slam!
Panel 4: Side view of Horse on top of Kat fucking her. He’s straightened out and her head is under his chest. She’s kissing it submissively.
Kat (thinking) Can’t stop cumming!
Kat (thinking) You own my pussy now my master.
Page 22 6 even panels
Panel 1: Close up of her head facing the viewer. She’s still crushed beneath Horse’s chest. She looks in pain.
Kat: “Owww! It’s getting bigger!”
Panel 2: Side view x-ray of his cock exploding in her womb. His ejaculate is like a fire hose.
Panel 3: Close up of her head again.
Kat: “AAAHHHH!
Kat (thinking) This is my biggest cum yet.
Panel 4: Close up of his cock buried in her crotch and sperm is squirting out all around their crotches.
Panel 5: Side X-ray view of his cock filling her. It is now plump, but smaller. Her womb is filled white with sperm.
Noise around her ass: Hump Hump!
Kat (off panel): “More… I want more.”
Panel 6: Same X-ray view only his cock has reversed course and is hard again.
Kat (off panel): “YES! FUCK ME FUCK ME!
Page 23 vertical and horizontal rectangles on the top and bottom
Panel 1: View from Horse’s perspective. He’s now on his back. Kat is lowering herself over his cock. Sperm still leaks from her pussy.
Horse: “Ride me.”
Panel 2: Angled down view of Kat fully impaled sitting in his lap. Her hands are on his chest. He is pinching one nipple.
Kat: “Fuck me! I love your cock! I love your… you! I LOVE YOU!”
Noise around crotches: FWAP FWAP FWAP!
Panel 3: Rear end view of her taking his shaft. Sperm still flows down his shaft and flies around their crotches.
Panel 4: Angled rear view of Kat’s ass as she rides Horse. She’s looking over her shoulder at the viewer. D’s hand is on his hard cock lining it up with her anus.
D: “Can I at least fuck her ass?”
Page 24 2 top squares, vertical left bottom panel and horizontal bottom right.
Panel 1: Close up of her rear with Horse’s cock in her pussy and her anus stretching around D’s cock head.
Kat: “OW! It’s too big!
D: “You’ll love it when I’m done.
Panel 2: Same view only more of D’s cock is in her.
Panel 3: View from Horse perspective looking at Kat sitting on his cock. D is behind her reaching around and squeezing her tits. Her head is turned and they are kissing.
Kat: “It’s good. Fuck my ass. Fuck my pussy.
Panel 4: Side view of all three
Noise around both their cocks: Fwap Fwap Fwap!
Page 25 Horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Side view of all three with X-rays showing both men cumming. All three faces look orgasmic.
Kat: “CUMMING SO HARD!
Horse: “UUNNHH!
D: “GAWD DAMN!
Panel 2: Angled view of her ass. She’s still on Horse, but D has pulled out. Sperm is running out the gaping hole on her anus. His rampant cock is still shooting a blast over her ass cheeks.
Noise: SPLURT!
Panel 3: View from Horse’s perspective. Kat is sitting in his lap. She has leaped off his cock. It’s sticking straight up between her legs blasting sperm up over her breasts and face. Her head might be down trying to catch some in her mouth.
Noise: SPLOOGE!
Page 26 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Bernard sitting at the dinner table. He’s reading the paper. Kat is setting a plate filled with food in front of him. She’s wearing a sheer nighty that shows her tits and a panty. She’s smiling.
Bernard (thinking) Something’s wrong with Katherine. The miserable bitch seems… pleasant!
Kat: “Honey, I’m switching to the nigh shift at the hospital.”
Bernard: “But we’ll hardly see each other.”
Kat: “I know, but the hospital needs me…”
Kat (thinking) …and I’ll have my days free to fuck Horse.
Panel 2: Same dinner scene with Them both seated and eating.
Bernard: “I see those black boys showed up to mow the lawn.”
Kat: “Yes dear. They’re homeless and I’m letting them stay in the garage apartment. I hope you don’t mind, but they can take care of a lot of our NEEDS.”
Bernard: “Mind? You’re a genius! That has to be a huge tax right off.”
Kat: “I think I’ll run some leftovers to them after dinner.”
Bernard: “Just put a coat on and dear, don’t run them off any time soon. See that they stay happy.”
Kat: “I’ll try, honey.”
THE END
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