Naughty Pictures
Characters:
Kelly Johnson- age 30, Beautiful young woman with light brown hair that reaches the tops of her breasts. Her breasts are big with small areola, but long fat nipples. Her waist is narrow with her hips flaring out.
James Johnson- age 58 Older, unattractive man. Slightly pudgy or has a paunch.
Ramon- Flamboyantly gay photographer.
Ike- Young muscular black man. Very dark skinned. Shaved head.
Porn store proprietor- Big muscular black man. Thuggish looking. Might have some tribal tats, a do-rag, gold tooth, etc.
Cover: Kelly standing knee deep in a pool posing in her bikini. The fingers of one hand are pulling out the panty strap around her hip while the other hand is pulling out the strap of the top over her shoulder. The bikini is wet and see thru. In the foreground, two black hands hold a camera with a mini picture of her on the screen.
Title: Naughty Pictures
Written by Stormbringer
Illustrated by Kaoscomics
Page 1: 2 Horizontal panels.
Panel 1: James and Kelly sitting beside each other. Both a dressed up, but for a warm climate. She might have a Santa hat on her head. You can tell she has a great body, but she’s not showing off anything. The background is a Christmas scene. Maybe a tree or a fireplace with stockings on it. He is scowling. She has a big smile.
Photographer (off panel): “Scoot a little closer to your father, hon.”
James: “I’m her husband.”
Panel 2: Side view of Kelly’s side sitting by her husband. Before them you can now see the photographer standing at a tripod. Between the photographer and the couple is a board on the wall reading Xmas special 39.99 and Naughty Pictures 69.99 Kelly is glancing at the board.
Photographer: “Terribly sorry, hon.”
Kelly (thinking): Naughty pictures just might put the spark back in our marriage.
Page 2: 2 square and one horizontal.
Panel 1: The backside of a computer with Ramon seated before it and James looking over her shoulder.
James: “There. I look best in that one.”
Ramon: “Will do, hon.”
Panel 2: View over Kelly’s shoulder as she holds a paper ad for the Naughty Pictures. The ad reads: Naughty Pictures: Perfect for anniversaries, birthdays, or just to say I love you. 69.99
Panel 3: Kelly and James walking out a mall. The mall has a sign that reads: Miami South Beach Mall.
Kelly: “Wait dear. I left my phone in there.”
James: “Go get it. I’ll be in the Mercedes.”
Page 3: 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Kelly and Ramon talking over the counter.
Kelly: “I’m curious about the pictures.”
Ramon: “They’ll be ready by Christmas, hon.”
Kelly: “Not those, the…”
Kelly (this balloon is dashes to indicate whispering) “…naughty pictures.”
Panel 2: Same scene different poses. Kelly might have red cheeks to show she’s blushing.
Ramon: “Lingerie, bikinis, wedding gowns, nudes.”
Kelly: “I’m not really comfortable showing off.”
Ramon: “Honey, if ya got it flaunt it and honey, you got it.”
Ramon: “We’ll start slow and see how comfortable you are.”
Page 4: horizontal top, 2 square at bottom.
Panel 1: Kelly filling out paperwork by Ramon.
Ramon: “Name, address, and the date you want me to show up.”
Kelly: “I’m nervous.”
Ramon: “Oh hon, drink some wine before I get there.”
Ramon: “And don’t worry about me, you don’t have anything I want.”
Kelly: “Thanks.”
Panel 2: Ike wearing overalls that say maintenance on them. He’s holding a broom. Is holding the door for her. One the door letters might read Photography studio. She’s walking through the door, head down ignoring the black man.
Ike (thinking): Unh… you’re welcome, BITCH!
Panel 3: Ike sweeping while Ramon looks at a clipboard with the form Kelly just filled out.
Ike: “Who dat?”
Ramon: “Some rich snob wants some sexy pics to make her fat old hubby horny.”
Ramon: “So ya big black stallion, you ready to pose nude for me?”
Ike: “Still straight, Ramon.”
Page 5: two horizontal panels
Panel 1: Nighttime bed scene. Kelly under the covers. James on top her.
Kelly: “Oh James, it’s been so long.”
Panel 2: Kelly on the bed alone. The covers hug the contours of her hot body. James is nude standing on the other side of the bed. His penis is really small and wearing a spent condom. He might be tugging it off.
Header: 4 minutes later.
Kelly: “Mmmm, Lets do that again when you get back from your trip.”
Page 6: 2 square and horizontal bottom. The top two are a dream so maybe dream bubbles rise up from the bottom picture to the top two.
Panel 1: James in a suit and tie standing in the front door looking wide eyed and lascivious at photos. Kelly’s back is visible wearing a robe.
James: “Holy crap. These are HOT!!!!”
Panel 2: Same shot only Kelly’s dropped her robe and her bare back and ass are visible. James is naked (maybe still has a tie on). His penis is erect. Maybe he looks younger and fitter with a slightly larger penis.
James: “Lets make love all week.”
Kelly: “Just what I was hoping you‘d say.”
Panel 3: God view down of Kelly on her back on the bed. The sheets hug her hot body and the outlines of her nipples are visible. Her legs are open and her hand can be seen between her legs.
Kelly (thinking): Gotta resist this urge to touch myself in a sinful way.
Page 7 3 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Kelly under the shower, head back washing her hair.
Kelly (thinking) Today’s the day. So nervous.
Panel 2: View of Kelly’s backside as she stands in front of a full length mirror reflecting her front side.
Kelly (thinking) Even alone I feel exposed when I’m nude.
Kelly: “Still looking good though.”
Panel 3: Kelly nude standing before a closet holding her wedding dress.
Kelly: “Should still fit. I’ve only gained weight in my breasts.”
Page 8 horizontal top, 2 square bottom.
Panel 1: Kelly wearing frumpy sweats standing at a kitchen counter drinking wine. Her hair is done and she’s wearing some makeup.
Kelly (thinking) I should cancel. Stomach feels funny.
Kelly (thinking) God I’m nervous, but a little excited.
Noise: DING DONG!
Panel 2: Kelly opening her front door. Ike is standing there with a tripod and camera. She’s rearing back a little in surprise. He’s grinning. Ike is wearing a tight tee showing off his muscles and drawstring shorts.
Kelly: “Who are you?”
Ike: “Hi Mrs. Johnson. I’m Ike the photographer.”
Panel 3: Ike walking past her into the house.
Kelly: “There must be some mistake.”
Ike: Ramon fell ill. It’s fine, I’m his… partner.”
Kelly (thinking) Oh! He’s queer too.
Page 9 2 square top and rectangle bottom
Panel 1: Ike’s grinning head.
Ike: “Trust me. You’ll love my work.”
Panel 2: Kelly’s head.
Kelly: “I’m not sure this is appropriate.”
Panel 3: Ike and Kelly together talking.
Ike: “You gotta problem with black people.”
Kelly: “NO! I just don’t like exposing myself.”
Ike: “We can cancel, but Ramon won’t be free for another month.
Kelly (thinking) Damn! I need these before then.
Kelly: “Fine then.”
Page 10 horizontal top, 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Kelly pouring herself another glass while Ike watches her.
Ike: “What did ya have in mind?”
Kelly: Just some swimsuit shots and some of me in my wedding dress on our bed.
Ike: “Sounds good. I’ll set up by the pool.”
Panel 2: Kelly with a towel wrapped around her standing by the pool. Steps lead down into the water. She might be throwing back another glass of wine.
Ike(off panel): “Lose the towel, hon.”
Kelly (thinking): Oh god! Here goes.
Panel 3: Same shot with Kelly now walking down into the water. The suit is really lame with little to no cleavage and maybe a skirt around her hips.
Kelly (thinking) I can’t believe I’m doing this.
Page 11 2 horizontal
Panel 1: View over Ike’s shoulder showing the camera on a tripod with Kelly now wet standing in the pool, posing hands in her hair.
Ike: “Perfect. You’re beautiful, hon.”
Panel 2: View of Ike’s back holding a camera. He’s standing in the pool. Kelly is sitting on the edge, leaning back, kicking the water with one foot and smiling.
Kelly: “I hope my husband likes these.”
Ike: *SIGH!*
Kelly: “What’s wrong?”
Ike: “He’d like them better if that suit didn’t remind him of his grandmother.”
Kelly: “I know, but I don’t own anything else.”
Page 12 2 vertical.
Panel 1: Kelly standing by an outside shower. Ike is handing her a box. She looks surprised like event are moving too swiftly.
Ike: “Luckily we come prepared.”
Panel 2: Kelly and Ike divided by the shower wall. She is nude and holding up a tiny bikini top. She has thrown her wet one piece over the divide and Ike is pulling it away.
Kelly: “Hey, photographer, I can’t wear this!”
Ike: “It’s Ike and trust me, hubby won’t be able to keep his hands off you.”
Page 13 Pinup
Panel 1: Kelly emerging from the shower in a bikini that barely covers her nipples. Ike’s camera is in the lower foreground snapping a picture upwards. She might be on the viewfinder. Any future views of her rear show that the bikini is a thong.
Kelly: “I can’t wear this. I feel naked.”
Ike: “You look great.”
Kelly (thinking) Where’d my suit go?
Kelly: “I need some more courage.”
Page 14 horizontal top, 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Kelly and Ike by the pool standing close. She’s got a glass of wine in each hand. One is nearly empty.
Kelly (thinking) Whats-his-name has some muscles.
Kelly: “I bought you a glass.
Ike: “No thanks, I’m underage.”
Kelly: “Fine, I’ll drink yours then.”
Panel 2: Kelly walking down the steps into the pool again. This time in the tiny bikini.
Ike (off panel): “Lets redo the other pics.”
Noise: click click click
Ike: “Beautiful, hon.”
Panel 3: Kelly swimming towards the camera. Ike’s hand is also holding the camera up and her image is in it.
Ike (off panel) “Work the camera girl.”
Kelly (thinking) This is strangely liberating.
Page 15 Pinup
Panel 1: Kelly bursting up out of the water. Droplets flying everywhere. The bikini is wet and practically see thru.
Noises around picture: Click! Click! Click!
Page 16 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: God view or angled down shot of Kelly on her back on a cot. The bikini is still wet and clingy. Her nipples and pubes are visible. One knee is up.
Ike (off panel) : “Bend one knee. Fabulous, hon.”
Kelly (thinking) This is actually fun.
Noises: Click! Click!
Panel 2: Kelly’s upper torso on the cot and Ike’s lower body showing a bulge through his shorts. She’s frowning at the bulge.
Ike: “Damn! My shirt just blew in the water.”
Panel 3: View over Kelly’s shoulder of Ike getting a pool net.
Ike: “Keep an eye on me. I can’t swim.”
Kelly (thinking) “He must spend a lot of time at the gym.”
Page 17 2 square top, one horizontal rectangle on the bottom.
Panel 1: Close up image of Ike’s hand in his shorts holding a small remote device. His thumb is pressing the button.
Noise: Click! Click!
Panel 2: Ike standing on the edge of the pool. The pole is tucked under one arm with the net in the water. His other hand is still in the pocket.
Noise: Click! Click! Real small around the pocket.
Ike (thinking) That’s it. Keep staring at me.
Panel 3: Long shot of a camera on a tripod in the foreground. Kelly is on the cot staring at Ike with the net in the background.
Noise: “Click! Click! Click!
Ike (thinking) The horny housewife can’t stop staring at her pool boy.
Page 18 small horizontal top and 2 larger vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Kelly sitting up on the cot.
Ike (off panel) “You should put some lotion on.”
Kelly: “Yikes! You’re right. I’m not used to showing this much skin.”
Panel 2: Kelly standing in front of the same mirror from page 7. She’s holding a bottle of lotion in one hand and staring in shock at how revealing the bikini is. Everything is still visible through the material.
Kelly (thinking) Alright got the lotion.
Kelly: “HOLY CRAP!”
Kelly: “James hasn’t even seen this much of me.”
Panel 3: Same shot, but Kelly has spun around and is leaning forward looking over her shoulder. Her breasts are straining at the bikini top. Her ass is bare and the thong is visible in the mirror.
Kelly: “Thank god that black guy is a queer.”
Kelly (thinking) Girl you do look good though.
Kelly (thinking) Maybe, I’ll keep this for sunbathing.
Page 19 4 even panels.
Panel 1: Kelly laying on the cot rubbing lotion on her chest and tops of her breasts. Ike’s hands are on the camera in the foreground. Kelly is staring at him frowning.
Noise: Click! Click!
Kelly: “Ummm…”
Ike: “It’s Ike.”
Ike (thinking) Snobby white bitch can’t even remember my name.”
Kelly: “Ike, what are you doing?
Ike: “These will make some sexy shots.”
Panel 2: Kelly’s torso chest to crotch. One hand is rubbing lotion on her belly. The other hand is still working on exposed breast flesh.
Ike (off panel) “Nice Mrs. Johnson. Oil up those big titties.”
Noise: Click! Click!
Panel 3: Kelly leaning forward, maybe holding her hair up. Ike is bent behind her rubbing her back. If his shorts are visible, one hand is in his pocket.
Kelly: Please don’t comment on my breasts.
Ike: “Sure thing Mrs. J, now let me get your back for you.
Panel 4: Mostly the back of the camera on the tripod. Showing Ike rubbing lotion on her back.
Noise: “Click! Click! Click!
Ike (thinking) And so the horny housewife makes her move.
Page 20 2 vertical rectangles on top and a horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Kelly sitting up while kneeling on a towel. She’s posing sexily. Maybe her hands are in her hair.
Noise: Click! Click!
Panel 2: Same view, maybe a little closer in. Her arms are crossed making her breasts look huge.
Noise: Click! Click!
Ike (off panel) Squeeze those big boobs together. Hubby’s gonna love this pose.
Panel 3: Kelly on all fours, big breasts dangling.
Ike (off panel): “Get on all fours.”
Ike (off panel): “Hold on. You need some lotion on your ass.”
Page 21 2 square top, horizontal rectangle bottom.
Panel 1: Close up of Ike’s shorts with Kelly’s ass in the picture. The string is visible. He’s yanked his drawstring shorts down under his cock and balls. He’s squeezing lotion on his shaft.
Panel 2: Close up of his dripping cock above her ass.
Panel 3: Side view of his kneeling behind her. His cock is rearing up above her ass. His far hand is on one cheek. His other hand is in his pocket clicking his remote.
Ike: “Hold the pose while I protect your ass cheeks.”
Ike (thinking) I can always airbrush the panty strings out.
Page 22 Pinup. Something artsy. Like a small image of the camera on a tripod in the center with a series of photographs fanning out around it showing the shots it’s taking. All are of Ike behind her. Kelly’s ass is more up thrust now with her front closer to the ground.
Word balloons ring the photos, but don’t come from the actual person.
“Click!” are around the camera.
Photo 1: Kelly’s front with her ass up thrust behind her. Ike is behind her. His facial expression is like he’s fucking her. One hand is on her ass cheek. The other is holding the base of his shaft pointing his cock down like it’s inside her.
“Hold the pose!”
Photo 2: Same shot only Ike is now squeezing the base of his cock while holding it above her ass. It looks like it’s swollen and about to cum. He’s making an orgasm face. His cock may have some lotion dripping from the head. The lotion also makes it look wet like it’s been inside her.
“Almost covered.”
Photo 3: Front shot with Ike bent down behind her, his tongue sticking out like he’s about to tongue her ass.
“Don’t move, Mrs. Johnson.”
Photo 4: Ike kneeling up close behind her with one hands squeezing her ass. It looks like he’s balls deep in her.
Ike: “I think that’s enough lotion.”
Page 23 horizontal rectangle top. Larger left square bottom and smaller right square.
Panel 1: Kelly and Ike in her kitchen. She’s drinking again. He’s still shirtless.
Ike: “We’ll move it to the bedroom.”
Kelly: “I’ll need a half hour to dry my hair and get ready.”
Ike: “Perfect. I’ll get the cameras set up.”
Panel 2: Ike at a little table with a laptop on it. On screen is one of the pics from earlier. The bed is in the background. There’s a nightstand by the bed. Typical alarm, lamp, etc on it. There’s also a sleeping mask.
Ike (thinking): Video feeds check. Remote, check.”
Panel 3: Kelly emerging from a bathroom door beside her bed. She’s now dressed in her wedding gown.
Ike (off panel): “You make a beautiful bride Mrs. J.”
Page 24 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Wider shot showing Kelly sitting on the bed posing with 2-3 cameras on tripods facing her. Ike may or may not be in the picture squatting and aiming his camera at her. Clicks can be around his camera.
There’s a clear view of a lace white sleeping mask on the nightstand.
Ike: “Lay down and pretend you’re asleep.”
Ike: “Put that sleeping mask on.”
Panel 2: Angled down view of Kelly on the bed wearing the mask. Ike is standing near her head. He’s taking her picture and has yanked his pants down under his cock and balls again.
Noise: Click! Click!
Page 25 4 square panels.
Panel 1: Close up of her face. His hard cock is sticking out above it. The panel could be framed as if in the viewfinder of his camera with a cross for the focus and symbols (like a battery power) near the bottom.
Noise: Click! Click!
Panel 2: Similar scene with her head turned toward him and her mouth is open. His cock head is pointed like it’s going in her mouth.
Ike: “Yawn, like you’re waking up.”
Noise: Click! Click!
Panel 3: Kelly sitting on the bed. Ike is in front of her. His ass is bare, shorts right under it. Most of her is invisible as it looks to the viewer like her head is in his crotch. His head might be turned, making an orgasm face.
Ike: “Sit up, but keep the mask on.”
Panel 4: Kelly sitting on the edge of the bed, mask pulled up on her head. She’s looking at a box with white lingerie in it. Ike’s hands might be handing it to her.
Ike: “Go put this on.”
Page 26 3 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Kelly standing full figure wearing bridal lingerie. White nylons, garter belt. Lacy white bra showing her nipples. Lacy white panty showing her pubes. Crotch-less.
Kelly: “My god! I’m beautiful!”
Kelly (thinking) Maybe I can keep this too.
Ike (off panel) Put the dress back on over it.
Panel 2: Kelly posing standing before the bed. Ike is behind her still bare-chested and unzipping the back of the dress.
Ike: “Let me help you with the zipper.”
Panel 3: Kelly pushing the dress down over her hips. Her belly and bra are visible. Ike is still behind her, head bent like he’s about to kiss her neck. The bottom of the panel shows a video camera view screen. REC is on the image of Kelly in it.
Ike: “I hope Mr. Johnson knows what a sexy wife he has.”
Page 27 2 square and one horizontal rectangle.
Panel 1: Kelly is lingerie sitting on the bed. Feet on the ground. Her legs are slightly parted and her slit is visible through the crotch-less panty. Ike’s hands on the camera might be in the picture.
Ike: “Great now lie down on the bed again.”
Noise: Click! Click!
Panel 2: Sexy angled down shot of Kelly reclining on her bed and smiling at the camera.
Ike: “Lovely, now put the mask back on.”
Noise: Click! Click!
Panel 3: Image like through the video with REC on it. Side view of Kelly with her front leg straight and her far leg arched. Ike is kneeling between them with his cock rearing up above her.
Page 28 4 squares
Panel 1: Close up of her slit.
Panel 2: Close up of the tip of Ike’s cock with a precum bubble on the end. It’s pointed right at her slit through the crotch-less panty. She is clearly wet.
Panel 3: Close up of his cock with the tip nearly touching one hard nipple through the bra.
Panel 4: Close up of his cock and just her lower face (no mask). She’s licking her lips with the tip of his cock really close to them.
Page 29 2 vertical rectangles with a horizontal on bottom.
Panel 1: Kelly without the mask kneeling on the bed. She’s leaning forward and one bra strap is hanging down. The nipple has popped out.
Ike (off panel): “Now let one strap hang off your shoulder.”
Kelly: Oops! My nipple!”
Ike: “Wait that’s hot. Lets show hubby that nipple, no both of them.”
Panel 2: Same pose. No bra. Kelly is hefting one breast. Her hand is over the other, fingers spread to show the nipple between them.
Ike: “Great job Kelly.”
Kelly: “I can’t believe I’m doing this.”
Ike: “How crazy do you want to get?”
Kelly: “I’m not ready to quit yet.”
Panel 3: Zoomed in picture of Kelly’s upper torso with her hefting her breast and licking a nipple. The REC is on the image.
Ike (off panel): Now lick one nipple.
Page 30 horizontal top and 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Wider shot of Kelly in the same pose, maybe arching her back. Ike is standing leaning down looking through the camera. A huge bulge is in his shorts.
Noise: Click! Click!
Ike: “You’re the sexiest woman I’ve ever seen.”
Kelly: “You really think I’m sexy?”
Ike: “Fuck yeah! Look how hard my cock is.”
Panel 2: Close up of Kelly’s upper torso staring intently at Ike’s shorts and the bulge. His hand is on the hem pulling his shorts out some.
Kelly: “That can’t be real.”
Ike: “I’ll prove it.”
Panel 3: Kelly’s upper torso and Ike’s lower torso. He’s yanked his shorts down under his cock and balls. His cock is sticking straight out aimed at her face. She’s staring at it in fear, awe, disbelief.
Kelly: “I don’t believe it.”
Ike: “You can touch it if you want, but hurry so we can finish.”
Page 31 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Kelly leaning forward sitting on the edge of the bed staring at his cock intently. One hand is holding the shaft and another is cupping his balls. Precum is dripping from the head. He has a hand in his shorts pocked holding the remote. Little clicks are around the pocket.
Kelly: “It’s gigantic!”
Ike: “ME! A little more than average.”
Kelly: “You’re three times as big as James.”
Panel 2: Similar shot. He’s still clicking away at the camera. His far hand is now on her head and her head is leaning forward like she’s about to suck him.
Ike: “Poor thing. Bet you wish James had a big cock.”
Kelly: “I’d be happy if he got this hard. His erections are floppy.”
Ike: “Tell ya what, suck on it and maybe I’ll let you fuck me.”
Page 32 4 square
Panel 1: Close up of Kelly’s head, mouth open wide about to take him in her mouth.
Kelly (thinking) Whoa! What the hell do you think you’re doing, girl?
Panel 2: Kelly rearing back from his penis. She’s let go of it.
Kelly: “But… Isaac, aren’t you gay?”
Ike (off panel): “It’s Ike and no, I’m not gay.”
Panel 3: Kelly standing facing Ike. He’s stuffing his cock back in his shorts. She’s holding her arms across her breasts, but maybe she’s failing and one has plopped out.
Kelly: “I think we’re done here.”
Ike: “Sure. Give me a few and I’ll upload the pictures.”
Panel 4: Ike leaning over the laptop. He’s holding a flash drive. The image of his cock pointed at her crotch is on the screen.
Ike (thinking) This will show the bitch.
Page 33 pinup
Panel 1: Kelly standing in her bathroom now totally nude, but for an open robe showing off her body in the mirror. She’s pinching one nipple and maybe has a finger in her pussy teasing her clit.
Kelly (thinking): Can’t believe I almost put his thing in my mouth.
Kelly (thinking): Felt right obeying his orders.
Kelly (thinking): I’ve never even sucked James’ little thingy…
Kelly (thinking): But then James doesn’t have such a big hard cock.
Kelly (thinking): His cock… so big… so black.
Kelly (thinking): This sexy body made it so big and hard.
Kelly (thinking): I’ve never felt so… aroused before.
Page 34 2 square horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Kelly with the robe belted around her waist leaning over the laptop. Ike is in the background by the bed pulling his shorts down.
Kelly: “What’s the meaning of this?”
Kelly: “I don’t want to look at pornographic pictures, you pervert.”
Ike: “Keep looking.”
Panel 2: Close up of her face looking at the laptop screen. It clearly shows her touching Ike’s cock from earlier.
Kelly (thinking): OH GOD! It’s me!
Kelly (thinking): Stupid nigger. I’ll just delete the file.”
Panel 3: Kelly standing by the bed. Ike is laying on it. His cock is hard and laying on his stomach or he is holding it straight up. His other hand holds a small flash drive.
Kelly: “Get off my bed and out of my house.”
Ike: “Suck my black cock.”
Kelly: “NO!”
Ike: “I can see the lust in your eyes.”
Ike: “Suck it or Mr. J sees all the pictures.”
Kelly: “Fuck you. I deleted the pictures.”
Ike: “I have copies on this flash drive.” Merges into a thought bubble. “And in the cloud.”
Page 35 2 squares and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: View from Ike’s perspective of his cock sticking straight up and Kelly letting the robe open and falling off her shoulders.
Kelly: “What do you want from me, you monster?”
Ike: “Give me your body and the drive is yours.”
Panel 2: Same view only closer up. Kelly is on her belly between his legs, licking the crown of his cock.
Kelly (thinking): If I can get him off with my mouth, he’ll be to soft to fuck me.
Kelly: “Just don’t orgasm in my mouth.”
Panel 3: Side view of the bed, showing Ike getting his cock sucked while holding the camera remote. He’s looking at the camera and giving a thumbs up to the viewer. The camera may be visible with REC on it.
Noise (little around remote)” click! click!
Noise (around penis): Slurp! Slurp!
Page 36 4 even squares.
Panel 1: Kelly licking around the head of his cock.
Noise: Lap! Lap!
Panel 2: Kelly hefting his balls and licking one.
Ike: “Lick my balls.”
Kelly (thinking): They’re as big as tennis balls!
Panel 3: Kelly with half his cock down her throat. Motion lines show she’s bobbing her head rapidly.
Noise: Slurp! Slurp!
Ike: “Suck that black cock, slut.”
Kelly (thinking) This isn’t so bad, but I can’t keep this pace up.”
Panel 4: Kelly with the head in her mouth. Her cheeks are bulging and sperm is flying out around her lips. Her eyes are open wide in surprise.
Kelly (thinking) Not in my mouth!
Page 37 vertical side panel and two squares on right
Panel 1: Tall vertical shot from Ike’s perspective of her rearing up while holding his cock. It’s blasting all over her face, chest, and breasts.
Kelly (thinking) It’s a fucking gusher!
Ike (off panel): “GAWD DAMN!
Noise: SPLAAAT!
Panel 2: Side view close up of Kelly’s head coming back down over his still spurting cock. His semen is shooting into her open mouth.
Panel 3: Similar side view only now her lips have clamped over the head.
Noise: Gulp! Gulp! Gulp!
Kelly (thinking) It’s so hot. So good. Gimme more.
Page 38 horizontal top and 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: Elevated wide view of the bedroom. Ike is sitting on the bed. Kelly is standing wiping her face with a towel. A camera and 2 video cameras are on tripods all facing the bed.
Kelly: “Why are you still here? Get your things and go.”
Ike: “We ain’t done. You ever had your pussy eaten?”
Kelly: “Ewww! No.”
Panel 2: View over Ike’s shoulder of Kelly’s open legs as she lies on her back. Her pussy is on display and it is clearly aroused and soaked.
Ike: “You are so wet for me, you little slut.”
Panel 3: Close up of Ike’s head between her legs clearly licking her pussy.
Kelly (off panel): “Aaaaahhhh!”
Page 39 2 square and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: View from Kelly’s perspective of her belly and Ike’s head in her pussy.
Noise: Slurp! Slurp!
Kelly: “OHMYGOD!”
Panel 2: Close up of her pussy with Ike sucking her clit between his lips and one or two fingers working her pussy.
Noise: Splat! Splat!
Kelly (off panel): “AAHH! OOHH! OOHH!”
Panel 3: Full length side view of the bed. Kelly is on her back gripping the sheets. Her ass and hips are raised up into Ike’s face. Alt: This could also be a god view looking down.
Kelly: “AAAAHHHHHHHH!!!”
Ike (thinking) Bitch is a squirter!
Page 40 Horizontal top and 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: God view down of Kelly on her back looking dazed. Her legs are spread open. Ike’s on his knees. His hard cock aimed at her pussy.
Kelly: “What… What just happened?”
Ike: “Mr. Johnson never make you cum before?”
Kelly: “Uh… no.”
Panel 2: Close up of his cock head pushing past her splayed labia.
Kelly (off panel): “How can… how can you be hard again?”
Panel 3: Same picture only the head is now in her.
Kelly (off panel) UNH!
Ike: “Cause I’m a real man…”
Page 41 2 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Side view of her on the bed. He’s holding her legs up so that his cock is visible pushing into her. She’s squeezing her own breasts. Her back is arched.
Ike: “And this is your first real cock.”
Kelly: “OW! It’s too big. It’s too thick.”
Ike: “And this big black cock is gonna give you lots more orgasms.”
Panel 2: God view of her torso breasts still being squeezed. His crotch is visible with his cock buried.
Kelly: “So big… so thick… so deep… so full.”
Kelly (thinking) So good! Gonna cum again.
Ike: “But now the choice is yours, Mrs. J.”
Page 42 horizontal top and 2 square bottom
Panel 1: View up her body from her crotch showing his cock sticking above her still open pussy. Her arousal is dripping off his wet shaft. You can see her head looking alarmed up her body.
Ike: “I’ll leave now and you can have the pictures. Or…?”
Panel 3: God view of her lower body. Her hand has gripped his cock and is guiding it back inside her.
Kelly: “I need to cum again.”
Panel 4: Close up view of his cock balls deep inside her.
Kelly and Ike coming together: “YES!”
Page 43 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Angled down view of Kelly’s torso. Ike is bending down and sucking one elongated nipple between his lips. Her mouth is open looking ecstatic and her eyes are closed. A thought balloon shows her husband having sex with her. Maybe a small identical image to this only Ike is James.
Kelly (thinking): Oh James! You’re so big. Fuck me! Fuck me!
Panel 2: Angled down view up her body. Her head is propped up against a pillow staring at him. He has a hand on her breast.
Ike: “No you don’t. Open your eyes.”
Ike: “I want you to see who’s fucking you.”
Page 44 Horizontal top 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: God view of Kelly on her back with Ike kneeling between her legs. He’s cupping her legs in his arms. Fluid is squirting out around his cock. Motion lines might show him fucking her hard and fast.
Ike: “What’s my name?”
Kelly: “Ah! Ah! Aaahhh… it’s Matt, no Mike. AAHH! It’s Mike.”
Ike: “IKE! SAY MY NAME BITCH!”
Kelly: “IKE! CUMMING! AAAAHHHHH!”
Panel 2: Rear end view of Ike’s ass, balls and cock inside her. Motion lines show him fucking her hard. Her arousal is shooting out.
Noise: Squish! Squish!
Kelly: “Fuck me. FUCK ME IKE!”
Kelly: “CUMMING AGAIN!”
Panel 3: Ike still kneeling, but Kelly is now sitting in his lap embracing him. They are kissing passionately. Motion lines around her ass.
Noise: Squish! Squish!
Page 45 Horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: Side view of Ike now on his back. Kelly is riding him, leaning forward. He might be leaning up and sucking one nipple. She looks lost in ecstasy.
Kelly: “Fuck me. Fuck me Ike. Love big black cock.”
Ike: “Gonna cum.”
Kelly: “No! Don’t cum in me. I’m almost there too.”
Panel 2: View from Ike’s perspective of her riding his cock. He might be squeezing her breasts.
Ike: “Get off or I’m gonna seed that pussy.”
Kelly: “I can’t stop. About to cum.”
Panel 3: Close up of her belly and breast with an x-ray showing his cock spurting inside her.
Kelly: “YYYEEESSS! SEED ME! CUMMING!”
Page 46 Horizontal top, middle, and two squares at bottom
Panel 1: Side view of Kelly collapsed on Ike. Her head is buried over his shoulder. She has passed out. His cock might be visible still in her or it’s plopped out, still semi-hard, rising up above her ass cheeks still dribbling sperm.
Ike (thinking): Bitch passed out.
Panel 2: God view down of Kelly on her back still passed out, looking spent. Ike is slipping out of bed beside her.
Panel 3: The side of Ike’s head looking at a video camera. The display shows Kelly on the bed. It still reads REC.
Ike (thinking): Still got time for another round.
Panel 4: Ike’s black hands holding the sides of a camera aimed at her pussy. The display shows her vagina looking well-fucked with sperm pouring out.
Noise: “Click! Click!
Page 47 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: God view of Kelly on her back, eyes still closed. Ike is kneeling between her legs. His cock is still semi-hard and he’s plopped it on her pubic mound. His arm and hand is visible holding the camera out pointed down at her belly.
Kelly: “Oohhh! You shouldn’t have cum in me.”
Ike: “Warned ya I was close. That’s on you, babe.”
Ike: “Roll over.
Panel 2: Side view of Kelly on all fours. Ike is kneeling behind her, stroking his cock above her ass. It’s getting hard again.
Kelly: “I couldn’t stop. I knew a big one was coming and boy was it.”
Ike: “Ya just needed the seed of a real man to trigger it, Mrs. J.”
Kelly: “I need to get cleaned up.”
Ike: “Not yet.”
Page 48 2 square top and a horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Close up of her rear end. His cock head is just under her anus, pushing between her labia.
Panel 2: Same shot only now the tip of his cock is inside her.
Panel 3: Side view of Ike fucking her from behind. Fluid might be squirting out of her. Motion lines show his hips moving. Her head is thrown back in pleasure.
Kelly: “How can you be hard again?”
Ike: “Your sexy white body keeps this nigger cock hard, slut.”
Kelly: “OH GOD! FUCK ME IKE! I’M CUMMING AGAIN.”
Page 49 almost identical to the last page with 2 square top and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of her rear end. His soaked cock head is now pushing against her anus.
Kelly (off panel): “Gimme more. Put it back in, stud.”
Panel 2: Close up of her his cock head disappearing inside her anus. It’s stretched wide around his shaft.
Kelly (off panel): “WHOA! Wrong hole. It’s too big, Ike.”
Panel 3: Side view of Kelly on all fours. She looks tense. Hands might be gripping the bedspread. Her teeth are gritted. Sweat drops can be flying from her forehead. Ike might be leaning over her more. Motion lines show him fucking her ass. Some of his shaft should be visible.
Kelly: “ASS RIPPING… TOO BIG… OH GOD… GAWD DAMN… OH YEESSSSSS!”
Kelly: “FUCK ME! FUCK MY ASS!”
Page 50 vertical left panel and 2 square right.
Panel 1: Sexy front view of Kelly now rearing up with Ike behind her. His black hands are squeezing her breasts. Her head is turned like she’s about to kiss him. His mouth is near her lips. One of her hands is in her hair sexily.
Ike (whispering): “tell me you love big black nigger cock.”
Kelly: “I LOVE BIG BLACK NIGGER COCK.”
Panel 2: Close up of their upper torsos in the same position only now their lips are kissing.
Panel 3: Close up of her head thrown back, His hand is in her hair pulling it back. He’s whispering in her ear.
Ike (whisper): “keep talking slut.”
Page 51 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Side view of Kelly on all fours. He is still pulling her hair so that her head is thrust up.
Kelly: “FUCK MY ASS IKE! GIMME YOUR BIG BLACK NIGGER COCK!
Ike: “Who would you rather fuck, me or Mr. J?”
Panel 2: Roughly the same image only now it’s framed within the view screen of the video recorder with REC on the corner. Maybe a battery indicator light is on. Ike might be looking at the camera and giving a thumbs up.
Kelly: “YOU IKE! I’D RATHER FUCK YOUR NIGGER COCK!”
Page 52 2 square top, horizontal middle, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Side view close up of her ass. An X-ray shows his cock cumming in her bowels.
Panel 2: Side view close up of her ass. He’s pulled his cock out and ropes of sperm are shooting from the tip.
Panel 3: Side view of her body. Her head might have collapsed onto the mattress but her ass is still up thrust. He is kneeling behind her with his semi-hard cock resting on her ass cheeks. He is holding the camera down taking pictures of his cock.
Noise: Click! Click!
Panel 4: Close up of her anus. It is no longer puckered, but an open hole. A spot of white is in it.
Panel 5: Same view only now the spot of white has turned into a steady flow welling up out of her ass. The image is framed in the viewfinder of his camera. (not the video so there’s no REC)
Noise: Click! Click!
Page 53 vertical left panel. 2 square on right.
Panel 1: Kelly in the shower running soap all over her hot body.
Kelly (thinking) I feel so good. So alive right now.
Kelly (thinking) I wanna have lots more orgasms.
Kelly (thinking) And only big black nigger cock can give them to me.
Panel 2: Ike in the bedroom with a tripod thrown over his shoulder and the laptop case in his hand.
Panel 3: Over the shoulder view of Kelly coming down stairs with a towel around her waist. She’s all wet from the shower.
Ike: “All packed up Mrs. J. The flash drive is on the bed.”
Page 54 Pinup
Panel 1: View over Ike’s shoulder. Kelly is standing at the bottom of the stairs. She is holding her towel open displaying her body for him.
Kelly: “Maybe next month we can take some Valentine’s Day pictures.”
Kelly: “And Ike. This body is yours whenever you want it.”
Ike: “Now that’s what I’m talking about.”
Page 55 2 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Kelly in a changing room. She’s wearing slutty Valentine’s lingerie. Red hearts cover each nipple, but leave most of the breast exposed. The panty might be a big red heart.
Kelly: “I think I’ll take this, but I’ll wear it out.”
Saleslady (off panel through door): “Your husband will love that one.”
Panel 2: Kelly walking out of the lingerie store. She’s dressed a lot more sexy. Midriff showing. Really short skirt.
Kelly (thinking): Gonna surprise Ike. I haven’t been able to stop thinking about him.
Page 56 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: The photography studio. The gay photographer is there. Kelly is talking to him.
Kelly: “Hi. I’d like some pictures taken.”
Ramon: “Not surprised you look like a model.”
Kelly: “But I was hoping Ike could take them.”
Panel 2: Same scene of them talking.
Ramon: “Just me honey. No Ike works here.”
Kelly: “But I remember a black guy here.”
Ramon: “Oh Ike! He was the mall janitor, but quit last month.”
Kelly: “What?”
Ramon: “I remember you now. You wanted some glamour shots done, but Ike said you canceled.”
Page 57 vertical left panel and 2 squares on the right.
Panel 1: Sexy front shot of Kelly walking out of the photography studio. Ramon is behind her calling out. She looks angry.
Ramon: “Hey! What about the pictures?”
Panel 2: Angled down shot of Kelly in the driver’s seat of her car. Maybe she’s wearing a short skirt and it’s run up her thighs to show her panties and there is a wet spot.
Kelly (thinking): Asshole pulled a con on me.
Kelly (thinking): Dammit! I’d still fuck him. So horny.
Panel 3: Distance shot of Kelly’s car with her driving. Behind her car is an obvious porn store. XXX neon sign. DVD Sale signs. Dildo’s.
Kelly (thinking): That place just might solve my problem.
Page 58 4 square.
Panel 1: Side view of Kelly holding a large black realistic looking dildo in the store. She’s wearing big sunglasses and has a scarf in her hair to look incognito. Behind her in the distance in the counter with a black man leaning away from a computer and looking at her in surprise.
Kelly (thinking): No more cheating on James with this stud.
Panel 2: View down over Kelly’s shoulder. She’s holding an IR DVD about BBC and white women.
Panel 3: View over the black guy’s shoulder of his computer screen with Kelly in the background shopping. The screen of his computer shows a scene from Kelly and Ike fucking on the bed.
Proprietor (thinking): It can’t be!
Panel 4: Kelly holding the DVD and dildo approaching the counter.
Kelly (thinking): How low have I sunk shopping in this dive?
Kelly (thinking): If James didn’t control the credit cards I could do this online.
Page 59 2 horizontal
Panel 1: View over the black man’s shoulder of him talking to Kelly. She’s placing the items on the counter. Her cheeks are red with embarrassment.
Kelly: “It’s a gag gift.”
BM: “It won’t work.”
Kelly: “Excuse me?”
BM: “You need a real man to get you off.”
Panel 2: Opposite view over Kelly’s shoulder of the BM standing behind the counter. He is squeezing the outline of his penis, it’s huge and she’s staring at it.
Kelly: “How dare you… OH MY!”
BM: “This is a lot better then some piece of plastic.”
Kelly: “It’s huge!”
BM: “Let’s step in back and I’ll show it to ya.”
Page 60 2 squares on left and a vertical on right.
Panel 1: The BM holding the door to a stock room open for Kelly.
BM (calling out to some one): “Watch the counter while I take a break.”
Panel 2: Stockroom filled with boxes. The BM is setting his cell phone on a rack aimed at a cot. Kelly is in the background pulling her top off. She’s wearing the heart lingerie still.
BM (thinking) Gotta capture this.
Panel 3: Full length view of Kelly in the lingerie standing by the cot. The BM is naked and his cock is sticking straight out while she’s looking down and touching it. It’s bigger then Ike’s.
BM: “Impressed?”
Kelly: “Very!”
Page 61 2 square top and a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Head shot of Kelly licking the underside of his cock.
Kelly: “YUM!”
Panel 2: Head shot of her with the head in her mouth.
Noise: SLURP!
Panel 3: Elevated view above the BM’s head of Kelly riding his cock while he lays on the cot. She’s naked now. Motion lines show her bouncing hard.
Kelly (thinking) God I needed this!
Kelly: “Gimme that big black cock! I’m CCUUMMINNGG!!”
Page 62 left side vertical and 2 squares on right
Panel 1: Vertical framed view through the phone camera with the REC on it. The image is a front view of Kelly getting fucked from behind. The BM is pulling her hair and gritting his teeth. Her head is pulled back and her breasts are thrust out.
BM: “Here it cums slut!”
BM: “Gonna bust a nut in dat white pussy.”
Kelly: “Do it! Seed my pussy.”
Panel 2: Rear end view of her gaping pussy with sperm gushing out. His cock is rampant and shooting a stream of cum over her ass and back.
BM: “Dayumn!
Panel 3: Side view of his wet and dripping cock blasting sperm all over her face and hair. Her mouth is open.
Page 63 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Kelly standing naked while cleaning off his sperm with a towel.
The BM is dressing.
Kelly: “You think we could do this again sometime?”
BM: “Anytime ya crave some dark meat, baby.”
Kelly: “My husband leaves me home alone all week.”
BM: “Lucky for you then that I work mostly nights.”
Panel 2: The two of them back at the counter. She’s taking a business card.
BM: “My cell’s on the card.”
Kelly: “Thanks, you were great.”
BM: “You too. I always wanted to fuck a porn star.”
Kelly: “What?”
Page 64
Panel 1: View over Kelly’s shoulder showing the BM typing into his phone on the left and a magazine displayed on the right. She’s looking at the magazine. It’s a picture of her in the bikini laying on the cot while Ike shirtless is using the pool net behind her. The header reads: Mrs. J and the pool boy.
Kelly: “Oh my god!”
BM: “New local company, Eisenhower’s Interracial Amateurs. I agreed to help get the word out.
Panel 2: View over the BM’s shoulder showing his phone (it might say uploading) and a shocked but aroused Kelly. You can see her hard nipples through her top. A little thought bubble shows her on all fours with Ike’s cock in her mouth and the proprietor fucking her from behind.
BM: “I’m uploading an application there now.”
Kelly (thinking) I’m a porn star!
BM: “How about next time you try two black cocks at once?”
BM: “How’s that sound, Mrs. J?”
Kelly: “It sounds… interesting.”
THE END
I´ll be very happy to see this comic done :)
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