Recession Blues: Wife Forced To Strip
Synopsis: A Married couple having financial difficulties consider the
possibilities of having the wife strip for a living after she wins an
amateur night contest at a strip club. Later, after accepting a job,
the black bouncer throws out a client being aggressive towards the
wife during a lap dance. The black bouncer then asks for his own lap
dance as a reward and the wife ends up having sex with him. In the end
it's revealed that the aggressive client was a plant and that the club
owner is secretly video taping the wife with the black bouncer in an
effort to blackmail her.
Characters: (Descriptions are left up to the artist)
Ann- The wife. She has an amazing body worthy of a porn star.
Tom- The Husband. He should be rather average and nondescript.
The Club Owner- He should be older and possibly a little sleezy looking.
Jacen- The black bouncer. Over muscled and hung.
The aggressive client- He should be easy to identify.
Minor characters that appear and could be fleshed out or shadowy include;
white businessmen, other club customers, and at least two other strippers.
Settings: A bedroom, kitchen or dining room table, stage with a pole
for stripping, Table in the club with a view of the stage, a lap
dance area, the entrance to the club both inside and outside, and a
parking lot with a car.
Splash Page: Recession Blues: Wife Forced To Strip
art by (artist's name)
Story by Stormbringer
Wife nude or in bra and thong dancing on stage with a pole nearby.
White businessmen are watching her dance and a muscular black man
stands in the distance arms crossed.
Page 1- 3 Panels (long vertical at top and two equal squares at bottom)
Top Panel- Married couple sitting a table. He's holding papers or
envelopes. A newspaper sits nearby. They both look upset.
Tom (husband): "That's it, we're officially broke."
Panel 2- Close up of Tom's face.
Tom: "This last bill wiped out our savings. If I don't find a job
soon, we're in trouble."
Panel 3- Close up of Ann's face
Ann (wife): "I've had no luck looking either. I guess professional
dancer wasn't the best career choice."
Page 2- Same scene and panels as page 1( 1 long vertical and 2 square).
Panel 1- Tom's holding the newspaper.
Tom: "Hey, the strip club is hiring dancers."
Ann: "Very funny."
Panel 2- Close up of Tom reading the newspaper.
Tom: "I‘m not kidding? They're holding an amateur night. Top prize is $500."
Ann(off panel): "$500! Let me see that."
Panel 3- Close up of Ann's face reading the newspaper.
Ann: "That would pay the rent, but I couldn’t dance nude."
Tom (off panel): "It's better then being homeless."
Page 3- Full page panel. Tom and Ann or holding hands outside a strip
club. Ann is dressed sexily. Several people are in line. A black
bouncer (Jacen) is at the door. A poster on the building's wall
advertises amateur night $500 prize.
Ann: "Just remember, we're only here to check out the place."
Tom: "Looks like a decent enough place."
Jacen(thinking): Damn! Look at the body on that slut."
Page 4- Full page panel inside the club by the front door. Tom and Ann
are inside. A white man in a suit is talking to them. Jacen is
standing behind them.
Club owner: "I hope you're here for the contest."
Ann: "I don't know."
Tom: "She's never done anything like this before. We'd just like to
check the place out first."
Club owner: "Judging from the competition, you got a great shot at
winning. Go grab a seat. Drinks are on me if you decide to compete."
Jacen(thinking): "Her tits and ass are amazing".
Page 5- Two large horizontal panels
Panel 1- Tom and Ann at a table with two beers. Beyond them a stripper
is dancing on stage. Her body isn't as nice as Ann's.
Announcer(off panel) "Let's here it for Samantha."
Tom: "Go easy on the drinks. They cost a fortune."
Ann: "This place isn't so bad. It's clean and mostly full of white businessmen."
Tom: "She's no competition. Your tits are better."
Panel 2- Same scene, but with a different stripper.
Announcer(off panel) Missy won last months competition.
Tom: "She won! Her ass is too flabby."
Ann: "Men are just throwing money at her."
Tom: "Strippers in high class joints make thousands over a weekend."
Page 6- Two vertical panels
Panel 1- The club owner is leaning over the table talking to Ann and Tom.
Owner: "Made up your mind yet?"
Ann: "Yes, I'll give it a try."
Tom: "You will?"
Ann: "It doesn't look so bad."
Panel 2- Owner leading Ann off.
Owner: "Don't worry about your wife. Nobody messes with my girls.
Jacen over there is also a cop and has been known to break some arms.
Page 7- 3 Vertical Panels
Panel 1- View of the empty stage.
Announcer(off Panel): "Now lets get a big round of applause for Ann."
Panel 2- View of Ann on stage. She's wearing a loose sundress
Announcer(off panel) "This is Ann's first contest."
Panel 3- View of Ann dancing, she's holding up the sundress showing her panties.
Page 8- 3 Vertical Panels
Panel 1- View of Ann dancing, she's facing away from the audience
still holding up the dress showing off the thong in her ass.
Multiple off panel word balloons express the audience’s pleasure.
Whistle, clapping, hot damn!, take it off, take it off, etc.
Panel 2- Rear View of Ann in sexy bra and panties. The dress lies at
her feet. She's wearing a garter.
Panel 3- Ann's turned around and is holding her hair up showing her
body clad in the underwear
Page 9- 2 vertical panels and two square panels.
Panel 1- View of Ann holding one arm hiding her breasts and holding up
her bra with the other.
Panel 2- View of Ann hanging on the pole now revealing her breasts.
Hands are reaching out towards her holding money.
Panel 3- View of Tom at his table drinking a beer. He looks amazed and
is smiling.
Tom(thinking): I can't believe I'm watching my wife strip.
Panel 4- Same view of Tom.
Tom(thinking): She looks so hot. The crowd loves her. I bet she's made
a hundred bucks already.
Page 10- 3 vertical panels
Panel 1- Rear view of Ann bending down sliding her panties down her legs.
Panel 2- Front view of Ann dancing completely nude.
Panel 3- Front view of Ann on the pole.
Page 11- 3 Horizontal panels.
Panel 1- Ann on her hands and knees, big breasts dangling. A man is
shoving money into her garter.
Panel 2- Ann on her hands and knees smacking her ass.
Panel 3- Ann on her back, thrusting her hips up like she's fucking.
Page 12- Full page pinup of Ann holding the dress across her front,
scooping money off the stage. Shadowy customers are standing
applauding.
Announcer(off panel) "Lets hear it for Ann and judging from the
applause, I think we have tonight’s winner of the $500 prize."
Page 13- 4 square panels.
Panel 1- View of Tom sitting at his table. Ann is standing beside him
again dressed in the outfit she arrived in.
Tom: "My god honey, you were amazing."
Panel 2- View of the table with Ann now seated and drinking a beer.
Ann: "I haven't counted my tips, but there's at least $200."
Panel 3- View of the table with the club owner standing over them.
He's handing Ann an envelope.
Owner: "Here's the $500, congratulations."
Ann: "Thank you."
Panel 4- Same view with the owner leaning over the table.
Owner: "I've never seen the crowd act like that. I'm always hiring
dancers. Just say the word and you're hired."
Tom: "Thanks, but we need to discuss this."
Page 14- 4 square panels.
Panel 1- Close up of Ann's face.
Ann: "I just made $700 for a nights work.
Panel 2- Close up of Tom's face.
Tom: "No, you just made $700 for a fifteen minute dance."
Ann(off panel): "That's a lot of money."
Panel 3- Close up of Ann's face. She looks thoughtful
Ann: "I think I should take the job at least until you find a job."
Tom(off panel): "Seriously?"
Ann: "Yes. We need the money and it's made me horny as hell. Take me
home and fuck me."
Panel 4- Close up of Tom's face looking pleasantly shocked.
Tom: "Lets go!"
Page 15- Pinup Panel showing the clubs exit with Tom and Ann, the club
owner, and Jacen standing arms folded, muscles bulging.
Owner: "So you'll do it. Great. Give me a call and we'll set up a
dance schedule."
Ann: "I'm looking forward to it."
Owner: "I'm giving you the best money making hours and if you thought
you made money tonight, you'll triple it with lap dances."
Jacen(thinking): This white slut has the hottest body I've ever seen."
Page 16- 2 Vertical Panels.
Panel 1- Tom and Ann are holding hands walking outside the club.
Ann: "What's a lap dance?"
Tom: "It's a private dance. No touching allowed and men often pay $50
bucks for one."
Panel 2- Tom and Ann are kissing by their car.
Tom(thinking) Ann’s hot and bothered tonight. She must have a bit of
an exhibitionist streak.
Ann(thinking) God, I'm so horny. All those men staring at me. I want
to be fucked right now.
Page 17- One pinup panel of Ann riding Tom in bed.
Ann: "Fuck me! Fuck me!"
Page 18- One pinup panel of Ann dancing on stage
Caption: Two months later...
Caption: Ann is working four days a week and making several thousand dollars.
Caption: Tom has finally found a decent paying job and wants Ann to
quit so that they can start a family.
Caption: Tom and Ann's sex life has never been better, but now they
are fighting, have opposite schedules, and their sex life is starting
to suffer.
Page 19- 4 square panels.
Panel 1- Ann dressed sexily and Jacen by the door of the strip club.
Ann: "Ready? I locked everything up."
Jacen: "Yep. I'll walk you to your car."
Panel 2- Ann and Jacen walking through parking lot.
Jacen: "You alright? You seem upset."
Ann: "Been fighting with Tom. He finally found a job and wants me to quit."
Jacen: "The boss would hate to lose you."
Panel 3- Ann and Jacen by her car.
Ann: "Tom wants to start a family. I told him we'd take it slow and
see what happens. Getting pregnant would force me to quit."
Jacen(thinking): I'd like to put a baby in that belly.
Jacen: "Well good luck with that."
Ann- "Thanks."
Panel 4- Ann behind the wheel of her car.
Ann(thinking): Of course, we have to actually have sex to get pregnant.
Ann(thinking): Tom hasn't touched me since he started his new job and
he knows how horny I get at work. It's been nine days and counting."
Page 29: 2 long vertical panel, and 2 square panels.
Panel 1- Ann nude on top of her bed shaking her sleeping husband.
Ann: “Wakey, wakey, sleepy head.”
Tom: “Snore”
Ann: “Damnit! Out cold again.”
Ann: “Guess I’ll have to take care of myself.”
Panel 2- Erotic shot of Ann nude on the bed with her fingers in her pussy.
Ann(thinking): “This isn’t a stiff dick, but it’ll have to do.”
Ann(thinking): “What’s wrong with you Tom? I danced for dozens of men
tonight who would kill for a chance to fuck me.”
Panel 3- Close up of Ann’s face looking orgasmic.
Ann: “Oh god! Here it cums.”
Panel 4- Close up of Ann’s pussy spread open with a finger in it. It’s
wet and dripping.
Page 21: One vertical panel and 2 square panels.
Panel 1- Tom and Ann in bed under covers. Tom is nudging Ann.
Tom(whispering): “Ann, wake up, honey. She’s out like a light.”
Tom(thinking) “I got a morning stiffy that won’t go down. Guess I’ll
have to take care of it in the shower.
Panel 2- Tom at breakfast table with a bowl of cereal, reading a
newspaper. Ann is pajamas or a robe is approaching.
Tom: “You’re up early.”
Ann: “I’ve decided you’re right. I’m giving my two weeks notice at the
club. I’ll find another job”
Panel 3-Tom and Ann hugging by the table.
Tom: “Oh, that’s great news. Thanks honey. I love you.”
Ann: “I love you too. Just be awake when I get home, ok. I’m between
cycles and should be at my most fertile.”
Tom: “Wake me if I’m asleep.”
Ann: “I tried that last night.”
Page 22: 2 vertical panels
Panel 1- Ann dressed sexily and Jacen in his police uniform outside the club.
Jacen: “You’re looking chipper tonight.”
Ann: “I’m putting in my notice. Tom and I are going to try to start a family.”
Jacen: “Well, I wish you luck. It’s been nice knowing you.”
Jacen(thinking): The boss is going to be pissed.
Ann: “You to Jacen. Thanks for watching out for me.”
Panel 2- The boss is at a table watching a girl strip. Ann is standing
over him topless in panties.
Heading: Later that night, Ann gives her notice.
Boss: “You sure nothing will change your mind Ann?”
Ann: “Sorry sir, It’s been an experience, but it’s time to move on.
Boss: “Well, I hate to lose you. You’re one of my top draws.”
Ann: “Thanks, it’s nice to be appreciated.”
Page 23- 4 square panels)
Panel 1: Ann talking to a patron sitting a table alone. He is distinct
looking. She is still topless.
Aggressive customer: “How about a private dance?”
Ann: “Sure honey, that’s fifty bucks.”
Aggressive customer: “No problem.”
Ann: “Follow me.”
Panel 2: The customer following Ann to the rear of the club where
there are areas for private lap dances.
Ann(thinking): The place is clearing out. Hopefully this will be my
last dance of the night.
Panel 3: Ann peeking into a private room with the customer behind her.
Ann: “Lets see if this rooms free.”
Panel 4: Ann looks horrified to see another stripper in the room
giving a customer a blow job.
Ann(thinking) Oh my god! She’s blowing that guy.
Ann: “This ones occupied.”
Customer: “I see.”
Page 24- 3 vertical panels
Panel 1- Ann is dancing topless straddling the customers’ lap.
Ann(thinking): Some of the girls must be prostituting themselves. This
place is sleazier than I thought.
Panel 2- Ann still dancing, but the customer has pulled his hard dick out.
Ann: “Hey! You can’t take that out in here.”
Panel 3- Ann’s client is mauling her breasts and Ann looks horrified.
Aggressive customer: “I want some of what that other customer was
getting. Come suck my dick. I don’t care what it costs.”
Ann: “HELP!”
Page 25- 1 vertical panel and 2 square panels.
Panel 1- View from the customers vantage of his hands squeezing Ann’s
tits and of her looking horrified, but an angry Jacen is looming over
the background.
Jacen: “Hands off asshole!”
Panel 2- Jacen is leading the customer past Ann. Jacen has the rude
man’s arm roughly pulled behind his back.
Jacen: “Your out of here.”
Aggressive customer- “You’re hurting me.”
Panel 3- Jacen shoving the man outside the club.
Jacen: “If I see you back here again, I’ll break your arm.”
Page 26- 4 square panels
Panel 1- Ann’s dressed to go home near the stage. Jacen is standing
beside her. The place is empty.
Jacen: “You alright?”
Ann: I had a really bad night. I’m not coming back.”
Jacen: “I’m sorry to hear that, but it happens to all the girls.
That’s why I’m here.
Panel 2- Ann still talking to Jacen.
Ann: “It’s not just that. I saw one of the girls giving a blow job tonight.”
Jacen: “So? That’s how they make some extra money on the side.”
Ann: “But you’re a cop? Shouldn’t you arrest them?”
Jacen: “It’s a victimless crime.”
Panel 3- Ann is kissing Jacen on the cheek.
Ann: Anyway, thanks for saving me.”
Jacen: “That’s what I’m here for.”
Ann: “I wouldn’t have taken this job if you weren’t here to protect
me. I owe you one.”
Jacen: “Wanna pay me back now?”
Ann: “What do you mean?”
Jacen: “I’d sure love a lap dance.”
Panel 4- Ann looking surprised.
Jacen: “Come on. Why not?”
Ann: “Alright, one last dance before I retire. I’ll go change.”
Page 27- 4 vertical panels
Panel 1- Ann stripping off her clothes.
Ann(thinking): No more dances after tonight unless it’s for Tom.
Panel 2- Ann standing naked.
Ann(thinking): At least I feel safe with Jacen
Panel 3- Ann putting on a small bikini or bra and panties.
Ann(thinking): I’ve never danced for a black man before. Oh well, lets do this.”
Panel 4- Ann peeping around a wall.
Ann: Jacen, you back here?”
Jacen(off panel): “Right here.”
Page 28- full page pinup of Jacen sitting nude, his long banana cock
is hanging down between his legs.
Ann is staring at him looking aghast.
Ann: “You’re nude?”
Jacen: “Damn thing gets stuck in my pants when it gets hard.”
Ann(thinking): That is one big black dick. It’s more then twice as big as Tom’s.
Jacen: “What’s the matter. Never seen a black cock before?”
Ann: “N-no.”
Jacen: “Wait until it gets hard.”
Ann: “It gets bigger?”
Jacen: “Oh yeah!”
Page 29- 3 vertical panels
Panel 1- Ann dancing in front of Jacen. His cock is starting to swell.
Jacen: “Ann, you have the hottest body of anyone I’ve ever seen.”
Ann: “Thanks, you to. I’ve never seen so many muscles on a man.”
Panel 2- Ann pulling her top off. Jacen’s cock is now at half mast.
Jacen: “Now you see why I have to take my pants off.”
Ann: “I see alright. That is one big dick.”
Jacen: “Dicks are for little white men. Black men have cocks, big black cocks.”
Panel 3- Ann slipping her panties off. Jacen’s cock is now fully hard.
Ann: “Do women have trouble taking it?”
Jacen: “Taking what?”
Ann: “Your big black cock.”
Jacen: “Once my cock gets in them, they always come back for seconds.”
Page 30- 4 square panels
Panel 1- View of Ann’s lower torso, straddling Jacen’s lap. He’s
holding his cock up just inches from her pussy.
Ann(thinking): What would something that big feel like?
Panel 2- Side view of Ann bending forwards and shaking her breasts in
Jacen’s face.
Jacen(thinking): Damn! This bitch is fine.
Ann(thinking) I wish Tom had a dick that big.
Panel 3- Ann’s still bending over Jacen, but now he’s grabbed one
breast and is sucking her nipple.
Ann: “Jacen, stop that!”
Ann(thinking): It feels so good.
Panel 4- Ann standing back up. Jacen had one hand on her breast.
Jacen: “Sorry, but I can’t resist big white tittys.”
Ann: “No touching.”
Jacen” I think somebody liked it. Your nipples are hard.”
Ann: “Are we about finished?”
“Jacen: “A little longer.”
Page 31- 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1- View from Jacen’s perspective of Ann’s ass. He’s holding his cock up.
Jacen: “Shake that white ass. Now spread your legs a little and back up.”
Panel 2- View of Ann’s front with Jacen’s cock visible between her
legs poking her pussy.
Ann: “Oh fuck!”
Ann(thinking): His big black cock is rubbing against my pussy lips.”
Ann: “It’s poking at me Jacen. No touching.”
Jacen: “Just let it rub on you a little. What’s the harm?”
Jacen and Ann(thinking with the balloon running together): It’s feels so good!
Page 32- 3 horizontal panels
Panel 1- Close up of Ann’s pussy with Jacen’s cock head pressing
against it. She’s dripping on him.
Jacen: “Your pussy’s so wet, Ann.
Jacen: “It’s giving off a lot of heat to.”
Jacen: “Why don’t you let me put just the head inside?”
Panel 2- View from Jacen’s perspective of his hands on her hips and
his cock head slipping inside.
Ann: “I don’t think that’s such a good- Oh my god!”
Jacen: “Feels good, baby.”
Ann: “It’s so big, Jacen. Ok, but just the head.”
Panel 3- A close up of Ann’s pussy with the head buried in it.
Jacen: “Your tight white pussy is gripping it like a vise.”
Ann: “Oh my god. It feels so big inside me.”
Jacen: “Work that pussy up and down.”
Page 33- 2 square panels and one vertical panel
Panel 1- Close up of Ann’s pussy with about a third of Jacen’s cock in it.
Jacen: “You’re so wet, you’re sliding down my cock.”
Ann: “You’re as deep as Tom.”
Jacen: “Shit baby, that even half my black cock.”
Jacen: “Lets see if you can take it all. We won’t fuck or nothing.”
Ann: “Alright, I wanna see how much I can take.”
Panel 2- View from Jacen’s perspective of about half his cock inside her.
Jacen: “That’s about half, baby.”
Ann: “Oh god, my pussy’s so stretched out.”
Panel 3- Long front view of Ann sitting in Jacen’s lap with his cock
buried in her. She’s screaming. His hands are on her hips.
Header: SLAM!
Ann: Ow! It’s too deep. Your cock is in my womb.”
Jacen: “Just let your pussy get used to it.”
Page 34- 4 square panels
Panel 1- Close up of Ann’s pussy with Jacen balls deep.
Jacen: “Getting better?”
Ann: :Yes, it’s starting to feel good.”
Jacen: “Try working that pussy a little.”
Panel 2- View from Jacen’s perspective of half his cock in Ann. Motion
lines are around their crotches.
Ann(thinking): Oh shit! I’m going to cum.”
Jacen: “That’s good Ann. You took it all. If you want you can quit now.”
Panel 4- Close up of Ann’s pussy leaping off Jacen’s cock.
Jacen: “What the?”
Page 35- 4 vertical panels
Panel 1- Ann has turned around and is straddling him, guiding his cock
back into her pussy.
Jacen: “I thought you were going to leave me hanging.”
Ann: “No, I just wanted a better angle.”
Panel 2- Ann is sitting in Jacen’s lap with her head thrown back.
Jacen is licking one of her nipples.
Ann: “I’m cumming!”
Panel 3- Ann is sitting in Jacen’s lap. They are now kissing passionately.
Ann(thinking): I’ve never cum like that with Tom before.
Panel 4- Ann is sitting in Jacen’s lap, staring at him.
Ann: “Your cock is incredible.”
Jacen: “Glad you like it. Wanna move someplace more comfortable?”
Ann: “Sure.”
Page 36- 4 horizontal panels
Panel 1- Ann is leading Jacen by his cock onto the stage.
Panel 2- Ann is laying down on the stage. Jacen is kneeling between
her legs, holding his cock.
Panel 3- Ann is on her back, legs spread, leaning up with her hand on his cock.
Jacen: “You put it in baby.”
Panel 4- Ann’s hand is still on his shaft, but the tip is now in her pussy.
Ann: “Oh god! So big!”
Jacen: “Lie down slut, I’m gonna fuck this tight pussy hard now.”
Page 37 Full page pinup of Jacen kneeling with Ann’s legs in his arms
and half his cock in her pussy/ Motion lines indicate he’s fucking
her.
Ann: “Fuck me hard Jacen. I love your big black cock.”
Jacen: “My big black cock loves that tight white pussy.”
Ann: “I’m cumming again! Oh god fuck me.”
Jacen: “Here it cums. Gonna bust a nut in this pussy.”
Ann: “Oh no! Pull out! Pull it out!”
Jacen: “Too late.”
Page 38- 2 square panels and one horizontal
Panel 1- Close up of Jacen’s cock buried in her pussy. Sperm is shooting out.
Ann: “I’ll get pregnant!”
Jacen: “Here it cums, bitch.”
Jacen: “Gonna put a black baby in that belly.”
Ann: “No! I’m cumming again. Oh yes!”
Panel 2- Close up of Ann’s pussy with most of Jacen’s cock pulled
out. It’s covered in cum.
Ann: “Oh god! Fuck me. Fuck me. Knock me up.”
Panel 3- Long view of Ann’s body. Jacen has pulled his cock out and is
blasting a large load on her belly and breasts. She’s squeezing her
breats together as sperm falls on them.
Ann: “So good. So much cum for me.”
Page 39- 2 horizontal patterns.
Panel 1- Ann is laying on her back, rubbing his semen on her breasts
and nipples. It’s all over her body.
Ann: “Tom’s cum doesn’t even fill a teaspoon.”
Jacen: “Tom ain’t a real man, slut.”
Panel 2 Jacen is either laying on his back or rearing back on his
knees. His cock is still rampant and stickign out.
Jacen: “Now come clean my cock off.”
Page 40- Ann is now kneeling between Jacen’s legs, licking around his
cock head.
Ann: “I don’t even do this for Tom.”
Jacen: “A real man would make you suck it.”
Ann: “A real man wouldn’t have to make me. I wanna suck your cock, Jacen.”
Jacen: Then suck that black cock , slut.”
Page 40- 4 square panels
Panel 1- Close up of Jacen’s cock with about a third in Ann’s mouth.
Ann(thinking): What am I doing?
Ann(thinking): One glance at a big black cock and I’ve become a complete slut.”
Ann(thinking): God! What if he knocked me up? It would still be worth it.
Panel 2- Side view of Jacen’s cock with about half in Ann’s mouth. Ann
looks strained.
Jacen: “Swallow that black cock.”
Ann: “Gacckk!”
Ann(thinking): Try not to choke. Show this cock how much you appreciate it.
Panel 3: Ann’s lips are kissing his pubic hair. She’s swallowed it all.
Jacen: “That’s it slut. Deepthroat that black cock.”
Ann(thinking): Can’t hold it much longer. I’m going to gag.
Panel 4: Close up of Jacen’s cock, hard and glistening. Ann is kissing
the side of the head.
Ann: “It’s too big.”
Jacen: “Try jerking it off while sucking the head.”
Page 41- 4 square panels
Panel 1- Ann licking around his cock head while motion lines show her
hand jerking the shaft.
Panel 2- Ann’s swallowed the head while motion lines show her hand
jerking off the shaft.
Jacen(off panel): “That’s it, starting to feel it.”
Panel 3- View from Jacen’s perspective of Ann looking at him while
sucking and jerking his cock.
Jacen(off panel): “Here it cums.”
Panel 4- Same view from Jacen’s perspective only now Ann’s cheeks are
bulging out and sperm is squirting out around the sides of her lips.
Ann(thinking): He’s cumming faster then I can swallow it.
Jacen: “That’s it baby, you’re a born cock sucker.”
Page 42- Full page shot of Ann holding her head back while jerking
Jacen’s still spurting cock off. Cum is flying on her face.
Jacen: “Milk that cock slut.”
Ann(thinking): His cum even tastes good.
Page 43- Two horizontal shots.
Panel 1- Jacen is laying on his back resting. Ann is laying between
his legs, fondling his now soft, but swollen cock.
Ann: “That was incredible.”
Jacen: “Keep working here and I’ll fuck you every night.”
Ann: “Maybe I could work my two weeks off. You’ll have to where a
condom though.”
Jacen: “Nope, it’s bareback or nothing.”
Panel 2- Same image, only Jacen’s cock is hardening.
Ann: “It’s getting hard again. You are a real man.”
Jacen: “Told you. I think I got one more in me. Get on all fours.”
Page 44- 3 horizontal panels
Panel 1- Ann on all fours, big breasts dangling, sperm is dripping
from her pussy. Jacen is kneeling behind her, lining his cock up.
Ann: “I’m leaking all over the stage.”
Panel 2- God view of Jacen’s cock entering Ann from behind. His hands
are squeezing her ass cheeks near her anus.
Ann: “Oh god fuck me again, Jacen.”
Panel 3- God view of Jacen’s cock mostly buried. His thumb has pushed
into her anus.
Ann: “Ow! What are you doing?”
Jacen: “I’m priming it, slut.”
Ann: “Not my ass. That’s gross. Priming it for what-CUMMING!
Page 45 1 horizontal panel and 3 square panels
Panel 1- Side view of Jacen fucking Ann doggy style.
Ann: “I love your cock Jacen. Fuck me. Finger my ass. Anything you want.”
Jacen: “Anything?”
Panel 2- Close up of Ann’s ass. Jacen has pulled his cock out.
Panel 3- Close up of Ann’s ass with Jacen’s cock head pressing down on her anus.
Ann(off panel): Not my ass. It’s too big!”
Panel 4- Close up of Ann’s ass. His cock has slipped partially inside.
Ann(off panel): It hurts Jacen!”
Jacen: “So fucking tight.”
Page 46- 4 vertical panels
Panel 1- View from off stage of Ann getting her ass fucked doggy style
Ann: “Your ripping me in two. I can’t take it.”
Panel 2- Same view only panning back from further away.
Jacen: “Unclench your ass cheeks and you’ll get used to it.”
Panel 3- Same view only from further away. A battery half full symbol
is in the upper right of the picture and REC is in the lower right.
Ann: “I like it. Fuck my ass. I love it. Fuck my ass with your big black cock.”
Panel 4- Small view of Ann and Jacen on the screen of a camcorder
filming the action from the back of the club. A hand is holding the
camera facing the couple.
Page 47- 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1- A darkened table in the club. The club owner is sitting in a
chair holding the camcorder aimed at the stage. Beside him sit’s the
aggressive customer that Jacen threw out.
Owner: “That black bastard better not have knocked her up.”
Other man: “Yeah, Jacen can’t control himself.
Owner: “Fucker likes knocking ‘em up. Fertile bastard has an unusually
high sperm count.”
Panel 2- View of Ann and Jacen on stage over the shoulders of the two
men. The owner is still filming.
Other man: “A baby might ruin that perfect body, boss.”
Boss: “I’ll get her a trainer if I have to. A baby would get the
husband out of the ways to.”
Boss: : “Now shut up while I record a message.”
Page 48- 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1- Side view of Jacen fucking Ann’s ass. Battery Low is flashing
in the top right and REC is on in the bottom right.
Header: My dear Ann. If you’re watching this you’ve chosen to leave my employ.
Header: None of my girls leave my employ unless I say so.
Header: So unless you’d like copies of this dvd sent to your husband,
your family, and released on the internet. I trust you’ll be more
agreeable.
Panel 2- Same side view only Jacen’s cock is buried and his head is
thrown back. Cum is spurting up from Ann’s ass.
Jacen: “Fuck!”
Ann: “Fill my ass, Jacen.”
Header: And by agreeable, you’re going to work seven nights a week from now on.
Header: But look on the bright side, think of all the extra money
you’ll make when you start spreading your legs for our clientele.”
Header: And you only have to give me 60% of it.
Page 49 2 vertical panels.
Panel 1- View of the two men’s faces, still holding the camera up.
Boss: “Done recording.”
Other man: “You really not going to release this video on the net?”
Boss: “Fuck no. It’ll be on our website tomorrow. People pay big bucks
just to see Jacen fuck. Wait until they get a load of Ann.
Panel 2- Close up of the Boss’s face still recording. He’s grinning evilly.
Boss: “Once she realizes there’s no way out, I’ll get her on a live webcam.
Boss: “She’ll get used to being on the internet. She‘ll even grow to
love it when I partner her up with Jacen and his brothers.”
Other man: “They’re about done. We should get out of here.”
Page 50- 2 vertical panels
Panel 1- God view of Ann on all fours. Jacen has pulled his cock out
and is shooting several wads across her back.
Jacen: “Who owns this pussy?”
Ann: “You do Jacen.”
Panel 2- God view of Ann kneeling at Jacen’s feet. She’s looking up
at him lovingly and playing with his now floppy cock.
Ann: “Your cock’s amazing. I can’t get enough of it.”
Jacen: “You’re pretty amazing yourself.”
Ann: “I think you just changed my life.”
Jacen: “Ann, you have no idea.”
THE END
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