FLEX APPEAL
PART 1
Characters:
Marisa, 27- Like Flex, she is a larger then life character. Great emphasis should be placed on her breasts. They are huge milk laden DD’s. Her nipples should be long and fat, always visible through her clothing and often leaking milk. Her skin is pale white. She is a red head. I didn’t have anyone specific in mind for her, though Karen Gillan would be good. Her crotch is shaved, but for a small red landing strip. She is curvy and shapely with her hips matching her bosom. Her belly is mostly flat.
John, 30- Marisa’s husband. Good looking and fit, but developing a paunch.
Baby Jack- 8 month old baby boy.
Candace, 22- A thin blue eyed blonde model. She was based on Victoria’s Secret model Candace Swanepoel. She wears a cross around her neck and has a diamond stud in her bellybutton. B-cup breasts.
Grant, 30- Candace’s husband. Good looking and fit.
Shane “Flex”- Flex is a larger then life character and should have heroically large proportions. He is not terribly handsome and has dark black skin. He is 6’2” and 320lbs of pure muscle. Flex is a professional weightlifter and built like one. Flex’s cock is huge at over a foot long. It appears carved from granite and is bulging with veins. The head is serpentine with a large flair.
COVER: My idea for the cover page would be to arrange it like a magazine cover for a muscle mag. Perhaps a big FLEX with a smaller appeal under it. Flex is wearing his tiny briefs and flexing while Marisa and Candace are in bikinis on either side of him looking worshipfully at him. Story by Stormbringer and Art by Kaoscomics are also on the page perhaps arranged to look like articles in the magazine.
Page 1: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1- A car driving on a long bridge with clear blue water surrounding it. This is the seven mile bridge and you can google an image of it. Maybe small islands with palm trees are nearby.
Header: The Florida Keys
Panel 2- A view inside the car through the front windshield. John is driving. Marisa is in the passenger seat. A baby in a baby seat can be seen in the back. Marisa is wearing a green blouse and no bra. The top buttons are open and there are gaps showing flesh between buttons. She is wearing black shorts that aren’t visible in this scene.
Marisa: “I love this drive.”
Page 2: 4 square panels.
Panel 1- The back seat with the baby and a bag. 2 magazines are sticking out of the bag. One is Iron Man and one is Flex. Both have Flex on the cover.
Panel 2- View over Marisa’s shoulder of her huge bosom. She is looking at the two magazines.
John (off panel): “I thought I’d get Flex to sign them.”
Panel 3- Close up of Flex’s bulge on the two magazines.
Marisa (off panel) “What is that under his suit?”
Panel 4- Close up of John’s face driving. He is sweating and looks nervous.
John: “He stuffs his suit. Steroids make your dick small.”
Page 3: 2 vertical panels.
Panel 1- Side view inside the front seat of Marisa with John behind her. She is bent over looking at the magazine. The nipple area around her blouse is wet and dripping onto the magazine.
Marisa- “John, I’m leaking!”
John- “But we’re almost there?”
Marisa- “Pull over. I need to feed the baby.”
Panel 2- Marisa and John sitting on a bench with palm trees nearby and clear Caribbean water. She is breast feeding. John is looking at his cell phone.
John: “Grant and Candace are there already. She says the cabins are too small.”
Marisa: “She’s always complaining.”
Page 4: 2 vertical panels
Panel 1- View inside the front seat as Marisa is putting her bra back on. Her nipples are as always swollen and engorged still leaking. John is ogling them as he buckles.
Marisa: “Quit staring.”
Panel 2- Overhead view of their trailers. It is three campers arranged like a triangle. A picnic table and grill are between the three trailers. John and Marisa are walking between the trailers carrying luggage and the baby.
Marisa- “They are small.”
John- “Well they are cheap enough.”
Page 5: 3 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Marisa in her black skirt opening her blouse. She has the bra on, nipples visible and leaking.
John (off panel)- “I’ll hold Jack while you change.”
Panel 2: Marisa in her bikini. The panty hugs her tightly and shows off camel toe. The top is too small, triangular cups barely cover her large areola. Breast flesh sticks out of the sides and bottoms.
Marisa: “Damn! It’s too small. I’m a cow.”
John (off panel)- “You look great honey. Lets go find the others.”
Panel 3: John changing. He’s fit, but has a slight paunch. Marissa isn’t visible, but her hand is holding blue rubber gloves and cleaning supplies.
Marisa: “I should clean first.”
John: “Later, lets find the others and don’t forget to put lotion on.”
Page 6: 2 panels
Panel 1 vertical in the top 1/3 of the page. John and Marisa walking down sandy path. Grant and Candace on beach.
Grant yelling: “Yo guys. Over here.”
Panel 2 taking up bottom 2/3s. Torso shots of all four friends greeting each other. Marisa is holding Jack. Grant’s eyes are wide and he’s obviously staring at Marisa’s big breasts. Candace might be frowning. John could be staring at Candace’s body. Candace is wearing a skimpy thong bikini. The top squeezes her smaller breasts together to create cleavage. She wears a gold cross around her neck and her navel is pierced with a diamond stud.
Grant: “Marisa, You look fantastic!”
Candace: “And that must be Jack.”
Noise in small letters: vroom vroom vroom.
Page 7: Pin up of Marisa and Candace in their bikinis. Candace is holding Jack.
Marisa: “You’re a natural. About time you had your own.”
Candace: “Can’t risk my figure with my modeling career going so well.”
Noise now louder. VROOM VROOM VROOM.
Off panel voice: “Sounds like Flex’s bike.”
Off panel voice: “There he is. He’s alone.”
Page 8: Pinup of Flex in all his glory walking down the beach path. He’s wearing black leather pants and a white tank top showing off his huge muscles and shades. The back of Grant and John’s head are watching him.
Flex: “Wassup my brothers!”
Grant: “Wassup Token.”
Flex: “What was that Minute Man? And you to, Pencil Dick.”
Grant: “Flex it is.”
Page 9: 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: The panel is mostly taken up by Flex’s body. He is tightly hugging Marisa to his chest. One beefy hand is on the small of her back and one is on her ass cheek.
Flex: “Dayum! Isa, you look great. Gimme a hug.”
Marisa (thinking): YECH! I’m touching his black sweaty skin.
Panel 2- Roughly the same shot, but Marisa is now facing sideways. Her oversized nipples have hardened and wet around her bikini top. She has left two wet marks on Flex’s whit tee shirt. She looks aghast.
Marisa: “I’m so embarrassed.”
Page 10: 2 panels.
Panel 1- Top half of page. Group shot. Candace is handing Jack to Marisa. Flex only has eyes for Marisa’s breasts.
John: “Marisa suffers from hyper-lactation.”
Marisa: “It means my breasts over produce milk.”
Flex: “Nothing to be ashamed of.”
Candace: My turn for a hug.”
Panel 2- Bottom half of page. Flex is now embracing Candace, but staring at Marisa.
Flex: “Damn Isa. I can’t get over how good you look.”
Marisa: Where’s Lola?”
Page 11: Full page. Group shot. Both Candace and Marisa are touching Flex’s arm. John now hold Jack. Flex looks sad.
Flex: “She left me. Took the kids and moved out.”
Marisa: “I’m so sorry, Shane.”
Flex: It’s been hard. I been looking forward to this weekend.”
Grant: “We’re happy to have you big guy.”
Page 12 3 horizontal panels
Panel 1- The group standing on a pier watching the sunset with a crowd. Jack is in a stroller. Marisa is in a short green summer dress that hugs her braless breasts. Grant and Candace are holding hands. Candace has short black shorts and a white tank top that shows off her belly and pierced navel.
Panel 2- Group sitting at a patio table drinking and eating. Flex is in the distance talking to a black man on a motorcycle.
John: “If I know Flex, he’s trying to score some pot.”
Marisa: “I should take Jack back.”
Panel 3- Marisa and John embracing.
Marisa: “Stay here with your friends.”
John: “Really? I feel guilty.”
Marisa: “Nonsense. Just wake me when you get back and I don’t care how late it is.”
John: “That’s a promise.”
Page 13- One panel on the top half and 4 square panels.
Panel 1- John looking drunk opening the cabin door. Marisa has turned on the light. She’s looking sexy wearing only panties.
Marisa (thinking) “God! I’m so horny!”
Panel 2- Close up of Marisa on her knees pulling John’s pants down as he lies on the bed. His penis is small and thin with a small head. It is floppy and limp.
Panel 3- Close up of Marisa pulling on his floppy penis.
Marisa (thinking): Please get hard!
Panel 4- Marisa has taken him in her mouth.
Marisa (thinking): Maybe this will work.
Panel 5- Marisa looking at John’s now erect penis.
Page 14- 2 panels.
Panel 1- The top half of the page. Marisa now naked straddling her husbands penis and preparing to lower herself over it.
Marisa (thinking): Finally!
Noise: WAAAAAAAAAAAA
Marisa: “NO!”
Panel 2- View over Marisa’s shoulder showing Jack’s head as he breast feeds and John lying on the bed. His penis has gone limp and he’s passed out.
Marisa (thinking): If things don’t change soon. I’m gonna need to by a dildo.”
Page 15- 2 panels
Panel 1- Marisa standing still breast feeding. She’s near an open window with Grant and Candace’s cabin visible through it.
Candace voice through window: “Come on Grant. Fuck me.”
Candace: “Slow down baby.”
Candace: “Noooo baby, not yet. DAMN!”
Marisa (thinking): “And I guess that’s why they call him the minute man.”
Panel 2- Marisa staring out a different window at Flex. He’s sitting alone at the picnic table smoking a joint
Marisa (thinking): “Surprised he didn’t bring some bimbo back.”
Page 16 Full page
Panel 1- Focus on the women. Candace looking great in her bikini, rubbing lotion into her skin. Marisa is pulling a tee shirt over her head. Her nipples are hard and a wet spot is spreading around them. All three of the men are staring at her breasts.
Page 17- 2 big panels.
Panel 1- Flex standing by the girls. He’s topless and wearing long shorts. The men are in the distance at the water preparing to snorkel.
Flex: “Any of you girls want to oil me up?”
Marisa (thinking): YECH!
Candace: “Sure, I’ll do it.”
Panel 2- Marisa playing with Jack while Candace rubs lotion onto Flex’s chest. He’s got his hands behind his head, biceps bulging and glistening. Candace’s bare ass in the thong is facing Marisa. Flex is staring at Marisa. Marisa’s staring at a monster sized bulge that nearly reaches the hem of his shorts.
Marisa (thinking) How can she stand touching him?
Marisa (thinking) What the hell is that under his shorts? It’s getting bigger!
Page 18- 2 large panels
Panel 1: Marisa still sitting up with Jack. Candace lying on her belly. Her top is untied.
Marisa: “Heard you having fun last night.”
Candace: “Hope we didn’t keep you up.”
Marisa: “It didn’t last long enough to keep me up.”
Candace: “Fuck you!”
Marisa: “Sorry.”
Panel 2- Different view of the women
Marisa: “Truth is a few minutes is better then nothing at all.”
Candace: “Grant can go several times a day, but he has no stamina.”
Marisa: “Have you tried doubling up on condoms?”
Candace: “We tried everything.”
Marisa: “I’ve only had sex several times since Jack was born.”
Page 19- 3 large panels
Panel 1- Another view of the women sunbathing.
Marisa: “John’s never had a high sex drive even before Jack was born.
Candace: “Id go mad if it weren’t for my dildo. I’m glad to have someone to talk to. I tried Lola, but Flex is some sort of horse hung superman.”
Marisa: “John says he stuffs his shorts because steroids made his dick small.”
Candace: “HA! John’s insecure. They walked in on Flex having sex and Grant told me his penis was more then a foot long.”
Panel 2- Women sunbathing. Marisa sitting up looking at cell phone. Flex is watching them down at the edge of the water. John and Grant are in the water or visible snorkeling. Flex’s shorts have a big bulge.
Marisa: “BULL! No man has a penis that big.”
Marisa: “But speaking of Lola. I think I’ll text her.”
Candace: “The big guy is watching us.”
Marisa (thinking): Lola, sorry about you and Shane. Wish you were here.
Panel 3- View over Flex’s shoulder of women. Candace is pushing herself up showing her pert B cups. Marisa’s legs are spread unknowingly and her labia outline is obvious.
Marisa: “You just flashed him!
Candace: “No harm teasing him.”
Marisa: Is that any way for a good church girl to behave?”
Page 20- 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1- Candace on her stomach tying her top.
Candace: “I’m a model. I show skin all the time.”
Candace: “You’re one to talk in that skimpy thing.”
Panel 2- Marisa still looking at phone.
Marisa: “I kinda out grew my bikini.”
Noise: WAAAaaaaaa!
Marisa: “Jack’s hungry again.”
Panel 3- Marisa breast feeding Jack under a towel. Her hand is out and it’s covered in milk.
Marisa: “Damn it!”
Candace: “Jack got bad aim?”
Marisa: “It’s my condition. When he sucks on one, the other often squirts.”
Candace: “What is hyper lactation?”
Page 21- Pinup of Candace and Marisa sitting up. Marisa is still breast feeding. Candace has her arm around Marisa. Heavy dialog page.
Marisa: “My breasts overproduce milk. It leaks and sprays all the time.
Marisa: “Milk leaks through everything I wear.”
Marisa: “The lawyers at the firm took bets on how soon after I arrived at work it would take for wet spots to appear.
Marisa: “It’s horrible. John’s the one with the low sperm count and I took hormone injections to get pregnant.”
Marisa: “They turned me into a cow, made my nipples ultra sensitive, and made me horny all the time.”
Candace: “You poor thing.”
Page 22- 2 panels
Panel 1- The two couple at the blanket eating.
Candace: “Where’s Flex?”
Grant: “Took off after some girls in bikinis.”
Marisa: “Jack should be out for awhile. If Candace will watch him, I think I’ll go for a walk. Come with me John?”
John: “Sorry. We saw a manta ray and Grant and I are gonna try to get pictures of it.”
Marisa: “Fine. I’ll go alone then.”
Panel 2- Marisa walking alone down the waterline of the beach. She looks stunning. Nipples hard and leaking. Maybe Flex is visible sitting in the shadows under a palm.
Marisa (thinking) I wish John had come along. We don’t get any time alone… alone… ALONE.
Marisa (thinking) Oh my god! I’m alone for the first time in I don’t know how long.
Flex (Off panel): “Marisa.
Marisa: “Flex? What are you doing out here?”
Page 23- 3 panels
Panel 1- Flex, standing head down but eyeing her erect nipples. Marisa has reached out to touch his bicep. His cock is straining at his shorts.
Flex: “I had to get away.”
Marisa: “I’m sorry. Are you missing Lola?”
Flex: “Yes!”
Panel 2- Flex has embraced Marisa. Her cheek has pressed into his chest and she looks unhappy. Her breasts are mashed into his stomach and his bulge is pushing against her belly.
Marisa (thinking) YECH! Sweaty black skin.
Flex: “I miss her so much. It’s hard watching you and Candace with John and Grant.”
Marisa (thinking) Damn his penis feels huge and it’s getting bigger.
Marisa: “I’m so sorry Shane.”
Flex: “That’s your fault you know.”
Panel 3- Flex and Marisa have stepped apart. Her bikini top is cocky and part of her areola are showing and a nipples almost popped out. She’s trying to adjust it. Flex’s cock is really straining at his shorts. She’s staring wide eyed at the bulge.
Marisa: “What’s my fault?”
Flex: “Teasing me made my cock hard.”
Marisa: “I did that!”
Flex: “I haven’t had sex in months. How could you be so cruel?”
Marisa: “I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to.”
Flex: “What are you going to do about it?”
Page 24 3 panels
Panel 1 View of their torsos, no heads, just Marisa’s leaking breasts and Flex’s bulging cock.
Marisa: “Go somewhere and take care of it.”
Flex: “No what are you going to do about it?”
Marisa: “I can’t help.”
Flex: “It’s your fault. Lets go somewhere and you take care of it for me.”
Panel 2- Upper torso shot of Marisa and Flex. She looks horrified. She’s turned to leave.
Marisa: “Flex, I’m married to your best friend!”
Marisa: “I’m going back.”
Flex: “If you won’t fuck me, then how about a blow job?”
Marisa: :You’re disgusting.”
Flex: A hand job then?”
Panel 3- Marisa has turned back and isfrowning. He’s smirking.
Marisa: “You want me to jerk you off?”
Flex: “Yea, that’s all I want. Just a hand job. My cock hurts it’s so hard. Please?”
Marisa: “If I do this, you’ll shut up.”
Flex: “I promise.”
Marisa: “Alright, I’ll do it.”
Marisa (thinking) Did I just say that?
Page 25 3 panels.
Panel 1- Marisa walking away from him.
Marisa: “Just this one time and you tell no one.”
Flex: “Where the cabins?”
Marisa: “Too risky. Meet me on the trail to the beach.”
Flex: “Hurry.”
Panel 2- Marisa walking alone across dunes, grass, and palms.
Marisa (thinking): I’ll cut through to the cabin.
Marisa (thinking) What did I just agree too?
Marisa (thinking) I just wanna see what a big penis looks like
Panel 3- Marisa in her cabin at her cleaning supply box. She’s holding blue rubber gloves.
Marisa (thinking) I don’t even like touching his black skin.
Marisa (thinking) These gloves will solve that problem.
Marisa (thinking) I should bring some baby oil and a blanket.
Page 26- 3 panels.
Panel 1 Marisa carrying the stuff. Flex has stepped out from behind some bushes and is grinning.
Flex: “ thought you would chicken out.”
Marisa: :Though about it. What did you tell the others?”
Flex: “That you were enjoying your walk and I had to go back and take a shit.”
Marisa: “Classy.”
Panel 2- Marisa has spread the blanket out. Flex is standing nearby. She is kneeling putting the gloves on.
Flex: “What are those for?”
Marisa: “So I don’t touch your thingy or get any of your semen on me.”
Flex: “Seriously?”
Marisa: “It that or no hand job. And this never happened. And if you tell anyone I’ll kill you.”
Flex: “Just do it.”
Panel 3- Lower view of him pushing his shorts down. Her head is near his bulge rearing back in fear. He’s got his tight speedo under the shorts. The tight material is stretched around his cock showing off it’s size even more then under the shorts. Her blue gloved hand is reaching up for it.
IMPORTANT: DON’T FORGET MARISA IS WEARING THE GLOVES FROM THIS POINT ON
Marisa: “What are you waiting for? Pull it out.”
Flex: “You take it out.”
Marisa: “Fine.”
Page 27- 4 square panels of her unveiling his cock.
Panel 1- Her hands are pulling the speedo out from his body. The head is seen near the top.
Marisa ( thinking) I don’t…
Panel 2- She’s pulling the speedo out and down. The end of his cock is sticking up reaching past his belly button.
Marisa (thinking) … believe it!
Panel 3- She’s pulled the speedo down under his huge balls. His cock is falling.
Panel 4- His cock has fallen straight out and has hit her on the nose.
Marisa: “WOW!”
Page 28 3 horizontal panels
Panel 1- Close up of Flex’s cock and Marisa’s torso. Her gloved hand is out palm up and she is pouring lotion into it.
Flex (off panel): “You’re going to need more then that.”
Panel 2- Same view, but Marisa is now pouring the bottle over Flex’s shaft.
Panel 3- Same view with Marisa now holding the base of his shaft while jerking him.
Marisa (thinking): I can feel it’s heat through the glove.
Page 29 Pinup
Panel 1- Side view or angled view from below of Marisa cupping Flex’s oversized balls while still stroking his cock. One of his testicles is so large it fits in her hand while the other dangles over the side.
Marisa (thinking) I can fit John’s entire scrotum in the palm of one hand.
Marisa (thinking) How much sperm do these things hold?
Page 30 pinup
Panel 1 View from Flex’s perspective of his cock and Marisa kneeling and jerking him off. His meaty hand is in her red hair behind her head.
Flex: “Yeah baby, jerk off that black cock.”
Flex: “You should be naked too.”
Marisa: “Bikini stays on Flex.”
Marisa: “Hands are getting tired.”
Flex: “Try sucking it.”
Marisa: “No way.”
Flex: “Let me see dem titties then.”
Page 31 2 panels
Panel 1: long horizontal picture taking up the top third of Marisa jerking Flex’s cock, her upper torso. Flex’s hand is pulling out the string around the back of her neck and her bikini is falling away revealing her hard leaking nipples.
Flex: “Damn! Dems some big white titties.”
Flex: “Lets lie down.”
Panel 2: Flex is on his back. Marisa is leaning over him jerking his cock. Her big udders are dangling and he has reached out to pinch one nipple. Milk is squirting out.
Marisa: “OH! What are you doing?”
Flex: “Playing with these. It’ll make me cum faster.”
Marisa “Oh god!”
Page 32- 4 square panels.
Panel 1- Marisa’s rear end. Flex is tugging a string on her hip. She is soaked and her skimpy bottom is hugging her genital.
Marisa: “Panties stay on!”
Panel 2- Marisa’s rear, but Flex’s hand is now on her inner thighs feeling her wetness dripping out of her.
Panel 3- Marisa’s rear, but Flex’s finger is lengthwise pushing between her pussy lips.
Panel 4- Marisa’s rear end, but the tip of Flex’s finger is pushing into her pussy through her bikini bottoms.
Page 33- 3 panels 1 large top half and two square bottom half.
Panel 1- Length view of Marisa leaning over Flex. His cock looks bigger now. He is pinching one nipple (milk is squirting out) and still fingering her through her bikini. She looks turned on, eyes lidded, mouth open.
Marisa (thinking) Ohhhh my. I can‘t stop humping his finger.
Marisa (thinking) His cock’s getting bigger. He’s close.
Flex: “Dayum gurl. Yo pussy’s like a furnace.”
Panel 2- Her rear again only now he’s pushing his finger inside her bikini.
Panel 3- His bare finger is now inside her and her fluids are squirting out around it.
Marisa (off panel): “AAAAHHHH!”
Page 34- 3 panels, 2 square at top and one big at bottom
Panel 1- Close up of Marisa’s face, mouth open, jerking his cock, but the head is now near her mouth.
Marisa (thinking): Cumming!
Panel 2- Close up of Marisa’s now soaked pussy. Flex now has two meaty fingers in it.
Panel 3- full shot of Marisa lying over Flex with him fingering her and his cock head now in her mouth. Her eyes are wide with shock.
Page 35 4 squares
Panel 1 Cutaway image showing Flex’s cock half down her throat hosing sperm into her belly.
Panel 2- Close up of Marisa’s face, cheeks bulging out and sperm leaking out of her lips around his cock.
Marisa (thinking) His cum actually tastes good!
Panel 3 Marisa has pulled her head back and his cock is shooting a big blast of sperm all over her face.
Panel 4 Marisa pushing herself off Flex. His cock is still spraying sperm everywhere, hitting her breasts now.
Flex: “Awesome Isa, Let me repay the favor.”
Page 36 1 top third, two square in the middle and one bottom third
Panel 1- Marisa on her back, face still messy. Her knees are bent. Flex is kneeling between them, hands on ankles.
Marisa: “What do you mean?
Flex: “I’m gonna eat dat white pussy.”
Panel 2: Close up of Marisa’s crotch. She’s still wearing her bottoms, but her wet genitals are visible. Flex’s fingers are pulling out the strings tying her panties on.
Flex: “But I’ll need to take these off.”
Marisa: “Go ahead.”
Marisa (thinking) I need this so bad.
Panel 3: Close up of Marisa’s crotch without the panty. Her read hair is shaved into a strip. She’s dripping and her labia and clit are engorged. Her anus is visible.
Flex: “Look at that red haired pussy.”
Panel 4- Full view of Marisa on her back. Back is arched and breasts are thrust upwards. She’s moaning. Flex’s head is between her legs. He is kneeling and his cock is visible still hard and dripping sperm.
Page 37- 2 square in the top third and one large at bottom.
Panel 1- Close up on Marisa’s crotch. Flex is tonguing her anus.
Panel 2- Close up of Marisa’s crotch. Flex’s tongue is working it’s way between the folds of her pussy.
Panel 3- View over Marisa’s shoulder. Jets of milk are shooting up from her breasts. Flex is still eating her pussy and looking up at her. Her belly is undulating.
Marisa: “CCUUMMIINNGG!!”
Page 38- 2 square and one long at bottom.
Panel 1- Flex’s head and tongue. He is licking along the side of her red pubic hair.
Panel 2 Flex’s head and tongue licking her navel.
Panel 3- Full view of Flex laying over Marisa. He’s sucking one nipple. Pinching the other one and milk is shooting out. His erect cock is visible nearing her pussy.
Page 39 2 square top third and one large at bottom
Panel 1- Crotch shot of Flex’s cock head pressing against Marisa’s labia.
Panel 2- Crotch shot of her pussy spread out around the tip of his cock.
Marisa (off panel): “Fuck me.”
Flex (off panel): “What? You want me to fuck you with my big black cock?”
Panel 3- View from between Flex’s legs showing his big dangling balls and half his penis buried in Marisa’s pussy. Her breasts are visible and between them are their lips kissing.
Marisa: “YES! Fuck me.”
Panel 4- God view of Flex’s back with Marisa’s head over one shoulder looking orgasmic and her legs around his waist. His ass is taut and there are motion lines.
Marisa: “AAAARRGHHH!!”
Marisa (thinking): So big. So deep!
Marisa (thinking) )OW! His big cock head is banging on my cervix.
Page 40 2 square and one large
Panel 1- Xray view of Flex’s cock head pushing on her cervix.
Panel 2- Xray view of Flex’s cock pushing through her cervix and into her womb.
Panel 3- Side view of the couple showing Marisa kissing his chest and Flex’s cock buried up to the balls.
Marisa (thinking) He’s balls deep. His cock is in my womb.
Marisa: “CCUUMMIINNGG!!”
Page 41. Big panel top 2/3s, 2 square panels.
Panel 1- View over Marisa’s shoulder of her squirting nipples and Flex now kneeling between her legs, cupping her legs. He’s pulled his cock out and it is hard and rampant rising up over her belly.
Flex: “You wanna keep fucking. Put that cock back where it belongs.”
Panel 2- Close up of her crotch. Her gloved hand holding his shaft. The head is pointed back at her pussy.
Panel 3- His cock has pushed through her hand inside her.
Marisa: “YESSS!!”
Page 42- 2 large panels top and bottom.
Panel 1- Side view of them fucking. Marisa’s nipples look ridiculously swollen.
Flex: “John ever fuck you dis good?”
Marisa: “No, never.”
Flex: “This is how a real man fucks. Whose cock do you like better?”
Marisa: “Yours Flex.”
Flex: “What kind of cock is it?”
Panel 2- Very similar picture only now milk is jetting up from her nipples and her orgasm is shooting from their crotches.
Marisa: “BLACK COCK!”
Marisa: “I LOVE YOUR BLACK COCK!”
Flex: “Your body’s built for big black cock.”
Page 43 2 square on side and one large on right
Panel 1 - Marisa sitting up a little. One gloved hand is caressing his chest.
Panel 2- View over Marisa’s shoulder of her ripping the gloves off.
Panel 3- God view of her now bare hands on his hard chest. Milk is squirting and juices are shooting from their crotches.
Marisa: “CUMMING! AAAHH! Your black cock is making me cum.”
Page 44 full page
Panel 1- Marisa sitting up while he fucks her. She is sucking his lower lip into her mouth. Short jets of milk squirting.
Flex: “Who owns this pussy?”
Marisa: “You do.”
Marisa (thinking) God! I’m cumming again!
Page 45- 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1- Full side view. Motion lines show Flex is fucking her hard. His arms are under her knees lifting her entire crotch off the blanket. Marisa’s back is arched. Nipples squirting, rivulets of milk run down her breasts. She looks ecstatic.
Flex: “You on the pill?”
Marisa: “AAH AAH AH! NO! AAH! NEED TO PULL OUT!”
Flex: “Good.”
Panel 2- God view of them in the same position. Xray view shows his cock buried and filling her womb with sperm. It’s squirting out the sides of their crotches. The milk jets are squirting higher then ever.
Marisa: “PULL OUT!”
Marisa (thinking) I’m cumming so hard around his cock, my pussy is milking the sperm right out of it.
Panel 3- Same view only Flex has pulled his cock out and it is hosing her with cum from her chin to her crotch.
Page 46- Full page
Panel 1- Marisa is kneeling on the blanket. She is dripping with sperm. Flex’s bottom half is standing by her. His cock is plump, semi-hard and sticking out but bending down, sperm dripping from it.
Flex: “Damn Isa! That was great.”
Marisa: “ASS! You came in me!”
Flex: “You said there was no need to pull out.”
Marisa: “I said no, you need to pull out.”
Flex: “What’s done is done. When can we fuck again?”
Page 47 One long panel on left and two square on right.
Panel 1- View from Flex’s perspective. Marisa is milking his cock and getting a final blast of sperm in her mouth.
Marisa: “That was the best ever, but it can never happen again.”
Flex: “No way. I own dat pussy remember.”
Marisa: “I only said that because you seem to get off on dirty talk. This never happened.”
Panel 2- Flex bent over turning Marisa around. His cock is rising again.
Flex: “Turn around.”
Panel 3- Flex fucking her doggy style. She looks in ecstasy again.
Flex: “How about this Isa? Is this happening? You glad I’m fucking you again?”
Marisa: “YES! Fuck me.”
Page 48 1 large panel top half and two small on bottom.
Panel 1- Full view of them fucking doggy style. Flex’s hand has come down on her ass cheek.
Sound: SMACK!
Flex: “This is what it means to own a pussy, bitch. I’m gonna fuck it whenever I want.”
Marisa: “Yes, fuck me whenever you want.”
Panel 2- God view of Marisa’s ass with Flex’s cock half sticking out of it. His hand is spanking her other cheek. There is a red hand print on her other cheek. She’s cumming again and juice is squirting out around their crotches.
Flex: “I wasn’t asking. I was telling.”
Marisa: “AAAHH! CUMMING!”
Panel 3- Similar view only Flex has now stuck his thumb in her rectum.
Marisa: “FLEX?”
Flex: “Shut up.”
Marisa (thinking) His thumb in my ass is making me cum again.
Page 49 2 large horizontal panels.
Panel 1- Side view. Marisa is now laying on her arms with her ass up thrust. He is still fingering her ass. X-ray shows his cock filling her womb again.
Flex: “Here it CUMS!”
Panel 2- God view. Flex has pulled his cock out and is blasting sperm in her hair and down her back.
Page 50- pinup
Panel 1- Marisa kneeling on the messy towel. She is covered in sperm, looking up at him worshipfully. Flex’s lower half is standing near her. He’s pulling up his swim trunks, half his cock is visible.
Marisa: “Please fuck your pussy again.”
Flex: “Now that’s what I’m talking about.”
Flex: “You’re a mess. Get back to the cabin. I’ll keep the others busy.”
Page 51 Large vertical panel on left, two square on right.
Panel 1- Marisa standing still a spermy mess. She hasn’t put her top on, but she’s tying her panties on.
Panel 2- A bikini clad Marisa on the trail looking down the beach. Flex is standing by Candace who is holding the baby. The bottle of baby oil is visible stuck in her panty.
Panel 3- View over Candace’s shoulder of two young men approaching down the trail.
Marisa: “OH NO! Someone’s coming.”
Page 52 pinup.
Panel 1- Marisa is standing before the two men who are staring at her hot body. She is rubbing Flex’s sperm into her belly with one hand and the top’s of her breasts with the other. Her nipples are as always leaking.
Man: “Need any help with that?”
Marisa: “No thanks.”
Man: “I could get your back?”
Other man: “With your fair skin, you need to protect yourself.”
Marisa: “I got it covered.”
Page 53 pinup
Panel 1- Marisa nude and under the shower. Her head is back under the water. One hand is pinching her nipple. One hand with a bar of soap is down between her legs. She’s sudsy and soapy. Image balloons from her mind show several pictures of Flex’s cock.
Marisa (thinking): What have I done?
Marisa (thinking): Can’t stop thinking about him.
Marisa (thinking): I wonder what the rest of this weekend will bring?
End Part 1
Flex 2
Cover: Something similar to Part 1’s cover. Another magazine with Flex and the two women in different poses. Maybe the girls are kneeling this time, hands on his thighs or stomach looking up at him worshipfully.
Page 1: Large rectangle and 2 smaller rectangles on bottom
Panel 1: Marisa emerging from the trailer standing in the doorway in a tight fitting green summer dress. She’s braless and the slight outline of her nipples can be seen. A shirtless Flex is off to the side.
Flex: :Damn Isa, I can’t get over how good you look.
Panel 2: Close up view of Marisa’s breasts with the slight nipple outline.
Panel 3: Same view, only now the nipples are rock hard and starting to leak.
Page 2: 2 rectangles top and bottom
Panel 1: Wide shot of group. Flex is working a hibachi grill wearing only shorts and flip flops. Candace is standing behind the picnic table setting it up with bags of chips, paper plates. She is wearing her bikini top and a wrap around skirt. John is over a small playpen with the baby in it. Grant is relaxing in a chair drinking a beer.
Panel 2: Basically the same shot only the group is seated at the picnic table or in chairs. One might be eating. There is a beer can pyramid on the table. Flex, John, and Grant are on one end of the table playing cards. It is darker out.
Marisa: “I’m going to put Jack down.”
Page 3: Pinup
Panel 1: Marisa in the cabin. Her top is pulled down and one breast is visible. The back of Jack’s head is over the other breast feeding. She’s gazing out the window at Flex playing cards. She is surrounded by image balloons of her having sex with Flex.
1) Marisa’s torso with Flex looking up at her as he sucks one nipple and pinches the other. Milk is shooting from the one he’s pinching.
2) Marisa on her knees using both hands to jerk off Flex’s cock.
3) Marisa’s face, cheeks bulging, sucking his cock.
4) Marisa on all fours as he takes her from behind.
5) Close up of her rear end. His cock is stuffed inside her and he is squeezing her ass cheek. His thumb is inside her ass.
Marisa (thinking): “Can’t stop thinking about him.”
Page 4 3 horizontal rectangles.
Panel 1: Marisa coming out of the cabin. The others including Candace are playing cards. Flex is holding a fat joint.
Marisa: “Jack’s down for the night. Deal me in.”
Flex: “It’s HIGH time we get this party started.”
Panel 2: Picnic table shot. John is taking a hit. They all look drunk. Grant is kissing Candace‘s neck. His hand is on her breast over her bikini top. A smoky haze surrounds them.
Candace: “Lets take this inside, baby.”
Flex: “Lets play quarters.”
John: “Soundsh fun.”
Panel 3 Picnic table shot of Flex sinking a quarter into a shot glass and John tossing his head and drinking his beer. Grant’s cabin is behind them. Marisa is holding a beer.
Candace (from window of cabin): “Fuck me, baby. Fuck me.”
Page 5 3 horizontal rectangles.
Panel 1: John standing up at table. Flex and Marisa are still seated. John’s shorts are tented out from an erection.
Candace (from window): Aah! Aah! Aah!
John: “Weesh should head inshide.”
Marisa: “Let me finish my beer and I’ll be right in.”
Panel 2: Flex and Marisa at table. Flex’s hand is visible on her knee. The cabin is visible.
Candace (from window): Aah aaaah! No! Not yet! Aaargh!
Flex: “Minute man strikes again. Candy could use a little of what you got earlier.”
Marisa: “Shush! I’m leaving.”
Panel 3: Marisa inside cabin. John is nude on the bed. His feet are on the floor wearing socks. He is passed out. His erection is gone and his penis is shriveled and small.
John: SNORE!
Marisa: “So horny. John’s penis is so small. There a hard cock, a big cock, a big black cock right outside.”
Page 6 4 vertical rectangles.
Panel 1 View over Flex’s shoulder. He is on the picnic table bench, but facing away from the table. Marisa is standing in front of him. One strap of her dress is hanging over her shoulder.
Marisa: “One last time.”
Panel 2: Marisa’s pulled her breasts out. The dress is caught on her hips.
Panel 3: Flex leaning forward squeezing both breasts. His tongue is out and milk is shooting on it. Milk is also shooting out from her other breast. Marisa’s head is thrown back.
Marisa: “YYYEEESSS!”
Panel 4: Side view of Marisa leaning forward, breasts dangling. Flex is lifting his hips up. She is pulling his shorts down his knees. His mighty cock has sprung free and is sticking straight up.
Page 7 Pinup
Panel 1: Flex nude sitting on the bench. He looks cocky. He is leaning back against the table, arms spread, maybe holding a beer. His big testicles are dangling under the bench and his huge cock is rearing up perfectly hard. Marisa is kneeling almost between his legs, reaching out for it.
Page 8 4 squares.
Panel 1: Close up of Marisa’s head and Flex’s cock. Her tongue is licking around the head.
Panel 2: Side view of Marisa with half his cock down her throat. Flex is pulling her hair like reins.
Panel 3: View from Flex’s perspective down his chest. Marisa has swallowed most of his cock. She is looking up at him. One of her hands is reaching up and caressing the muscles on his chest.
Marisa(thinking): I want to taste his seed again…
Panel 4: Closeup of Marisa’s head and Flex’s cock. Just the head is in her mouth and she is cupping one big testicle in the palm of one hand.
Marisa(thinking): …but I need this in my pussy even more.
Page 8 large vertical rectangle, 2 square, and horizontal rectangle.
Panel 1: Marisa is now standing straddling Flex’s lap. She has one hand on his shaft and is guiding it into her pussy.
Flex: “I knew you’d be back. You know what they say about black men.”
Marisa: “What’s that?”
Flex: “Once you go black you never go back.”
Panel 2: Close up of Flex’s cock pushing through Marisa’s labia.
Panel 3: Close up of Flex’s cock half way inside her. Her juices are squirting out around it.
Panel 4: View from Flex’s perspective of her sitting in his lap, rearing back. One black hand is pinching her nipple. His cock is completely buried, maybe a cutaway shows it deep inside her.
Marisa: “I don’t know about that.
Marisa: “But once you go Flex, you’ll always want sex.”
Flex: “Now that’s what I’m talking about.”
Page 9 4 squares.
Panel 1: Side view of Marisa in his lap. He is sucking one of her nipples.
Marisa: Aaaaahhh!!
Marisa(thinking): He’s got me cumming again.
Panel 2: Intimate side view of them embracing. Their bodies are pressed tightly together. They are kissing passionately. Her legs are wrapped around his waist.
Marisa(thinking): Cumming again!
Panel 3: Front view of Marisa’s body. She has spun around and is riding him reverse cowgirl. The base of his cock is visible as are his dangling balls. One black hand is on her waist fingers near her belly button. Anther hand is reaching around to squeeze her breasts and milk is squirting out.
Marisa(thinking): Can’t stop cumming.
Flex: “Gonna blow.”
Marisa: “In me. Seed my white pussy again.”
Panel 4: Close up of Marisa’s lower half. A cutaway shows his cock filling her womb with seed.
Page 10 pinup
Panel 1: Marisa is still reverse cowgirl. She is sitting in Flex’s lap, leaning back into his chest. Her head is turned and they are kissing. His cock is still in her, but the base of his shaft is visible. Sperm is pouring out around their crotches, dripping off his balls.
Marisa(thinking): So good… So good…
Flex(thinking): My cock’s done turned her into a cock crazy whore.
Page 11 2 vertical rectangles and 2 squares on the bottom.
Panel 1: Marisa holding her dress over her front talking to Flex. Both are standing. His cock is now a plump, dangling black banana, maybe still dripping some semen. If it’s a wide shot, there’s a pool of semen under and on the bench and there’s one forming between Marisa’s feet.
Flex: “Come to my cabin. I got one or two left in me.”
Marisa: “No. This was it. I can’t risk Jack waking up and I can’t hurt John anymore.”
Flex: “I’ll leave my door unlocked if you change your mind.”
Panel 2: Marisa standing in her cabin. John is still passed out. His penis is shrunken and shriveled. A baby monitor is on the table nearby.
Monitor: “cough”
Panel 3: Marisa slipping the dress over her head.
Panel 4: Marisa walking past the picnic table between cabins carrying the baby monitor.
Page 12 2 panels page split diagonally.
Panel 1: Marisa standing in Flex’s doorway. She’s set the baby monitor down on a nearby stand. She’s pulling the dress back off. It’s even with her shoulders. Her breasts are visible. Her head is still visible. The view is mostly from Flex’s perspective. Over his shoulder. He is sitting up in bed. His lower half is visible. His cock is plump, soft, and laying over his thigh.
Marisa: “I want you again.”
Flex: “I know.”
Panel 2: Same view only Flex’s cock has now risen. Marisa is crawling on the foot of the bed to it.
Flex: “Stay like that. I’m gonna hit you doggy style.
Marisa(thinking): Feels so natural to obey him.
Page 13 Large top rectangle and two bottoms squares.
Panel 1: Flex standing behind bed taking her from behind. His hands are on her hips and maybe one is wrapped around her red hair, pulling it like a bridal.
Marisa: “Fuck me. Fuck your pussy.”
Flex: “You like this cock, slut?”
Marisa: “I love it. I love your big black cock.”
Flex: “Better then John’s?”
Marisa: “YES!”
Marisa (thinking): I’m cumming!
Panel 2: Rear view shot of their crotches. Flex’s cock is mostly out. Her labia is spread around his cock head.
Flex: “Will you do anything for this cock?”
Marisa: “Yes, anything.”
Panel 3: Similar view only his cock head is now pushing her anus open.”
Marisa: “WAIT! It’s too biiig! I’ve never…AAAARRGH!”
Page 14 2 horizontal rectangles and two squares
Panel 1: Long view of Candace’s cabin. She’s emerged from the door wearing only a tee shirt that barely covers her crotch.
Panel 2: Close up view of Candace by the picnic table smoking. Flex’s cabin is off to the side.
Candace (thinking) So frustrated. Damn you Grant!
Noise through window of Flex’s cabin: “TOO BIG!”
Noise: “Take that black cock slut!”
Noise: “Hurts.. So good. Fuck my ass.”
Candace (thinking) Oh my god! Flex is sodomizing some slut.”
Panel 3: lower torso view of Candace. Her foot just stepped in a pool of semen where Flex and Marisa had sex outside earlier.
Candace: “YECH!
Candace (thinking) What the hell is this sticky stuff?
Panel 4 Candace’s upper torso near Flex’s cabin. Her ear is cocked listening. Her hand is holding the cigarette in her mouth.
Flex(in cabin): “Here it cums!”
Marisa (in cabin) “Seed my ass!”
Candace (thinking) I’d better get out of here.
Page 15 2 panels small horizontal rectangle and larger one on bottom
Panel 1: Candace in her cabin, peeking out the window, holding the curtain up. She’s got a view of Flex’s cabin.
Candace (thinking): How’d he get a slut so quickly?
Candace (thinking): Must have called a prostitute earlier.
Candace (thinking): Doesn’t look like she’s leaving any time soon.
Panel 2: Candace lying on bed beside husband. He’s under the covers. She’s on top. The tee shirt is bunched above her breasts and she’s fingering herself and pinching one nipple.
Candace (thinking) I’m so fucking horny!
Candace (thinking) Why can’t you last longer Grant?
Page 16 2 horizontal rectangles and two squares.
Panel 1: View from rear of Marisa on the bed. Her head is down on her arms, but her ass is still thrust up. Her anus is stretched open and filled with sperm, pouring out and down over her crotch. And dripping off her clit. Sperm also covers her ass cheeks.
Marisa: “My ass feels squishy.”
Flex: “Roll over on your back.”
Panel 2: Marisa on her back. Flex is straddling her belly. His hard cock is rearing up above her breasts.
Marisa: “God, your insatiable.”
Flex: “I wanna titty fuck dese big bitches.”
Panel 3: Close up side view of Marisa’s upper torso with Flex’s cock between her breasts. The head is above her nose.
Panel 4: Close up god view of Flex’s cock between her breasts. Half the head is in her mouth. Flex is pinching both nipples and jets of milk are shooting out to lubricate his shaft. The black shaft is covered in milk.
Page 17 4 square panels.
Panel 1: Odd view from Marisa’s perspective looking down her nose the head of his cock is thrust up over her mouth. The urethra is long and clearly visible.
Panel 2: Same view only the cock has pulled back nearly to disappear between her breasts. The nipples are seen still squirting milk.
Panel 3: Same view only the cock is thrust forward again and the urethra has opened. Maybe there’s a white dot in the center.
Panel 4: Same view of the cock thrust forward with a large jet of sperm shooting from the tip.
Page 18 3 horizontal panels
Panel 1: God view of Marisa’s upper torso. Flex’s cock is between her breasts. She’s still shooting milk. Her face is covered in cum and more is shooting out from the tip.
Panel 2: Same view only she’s now wrapped her lips around the head. Her cheeks are bulging and some sperm is flying out the sides.
Panel 3: Same view from the side. Flex’s cock is now above her face. A long strand up sperm is dripping from the head to her tongue.
Page 19 2 panels top and bottom
Panel 1: Marisa sitting up in bed, still a mess. Flex is sitting beside her. His cock is dangling over the side of the bed, limp, but plump.
Marisa: “God! I needed that.”
Flex: “What do you mean?”
Marisa: “You milked me so good, my breasts don’t feel like they’re going to explode anymore.”
Panel 2: Marisa in the bathroom. She’s standing looking in the mirror with her back to it, ass thrust out. She’s looking over her shoulder at her reflection. Flex’s sperm is clearly visible dripping from her anus, and her pussy as well as one her face and breasts. Flex is visible through an open door still sitting. He’s holding the baby monitor.
Marisa: “Can I use the shower?”
Baby monitor: WHAAAAA!
Marisa: “SHIT! The baby will wake John.”
Page 20 Top horizontal rectangle. 2 square on left, and 1 vertical rectangle.
Panel 1: Marisa racing between cabins. She’s nude, but holding her dress bunched up and the monitor.
Panel 2: Marisa holding Jack up to her breast.
John (off panel) “Isa! The baby!”
Marisa: “I got him.”
Panel 3: Marisa under the shower scrubbing herself.
John (off panel): “It’s 5:30, why are you taking a shower?”
Panel 4: Marisa climbing into bed beside John.
Marisa: “Because your son spit up on me.”
John: “God, my head hurts. Lets sleep in tomorrow.”
Marisa: “No argument from me.”
Page 21 3 Panels, top rectangle and two square.
Panel 1: Marisa standing in the cabin. She’s got the bikini on and she’s trying to stretch the little eye patches over her nipples. John is in the doorway to the bathroom nude looking like he just got a shower.
Marisa (thinking): I really need a new bikini.
John: “Happy anniversary!”
Marisa: “Happy anniversary to. I love you.”
Panel 2: The happy couple are embracing kissing. John’s hand is behind her back holding a jewelry box.
Panel 3: Marisa’s hand holding the open jewelry box. It is a gold necklace. The pendant is a two gold figures one larger, for the male, holding a gold figure between them to represent a baby. The baby’s heart is a diamond.
Marisa: “John! I love it.”
Page 22 2 square panels, 3 small rectangles the same size, one larger rectangle on the bottom.
Panel 1: Back at the beach. Flex, Grant, and Candace are already there. John and Marisa are joining them. John is carrying Jack.
Grant: “Glad you could make it.”
Candace: “Happy anniversary!”
Panel 2: Candace and Marisa’s upper torso facing each other. Marisa is holding up her pendant so that it’s dangling. Candace is checking it out. Flex is between them, but behind. His eyes are on her breasts. Her nipples are visible, but not that hard.
Candace: “Lovely.”
Flex: “They sure are.”
Panel 3: Closeup of Marisa’s breasts. Her nipples are pushing out the bikini top more than in the previous picture. Maybe Flex’s face is visible as he’s leering at them.
Panel 4: The nipples are fully hard now and the areola have swollen around them. The bikini top barely covers them.
Panel 5: Same view, but the nipples have started to leak.
Panel 6: Marisa and Candace standing in the water. Marisa is bent over dangling Jack so that his feet are in the water. John and Grant are behind them with fishing rods. Flex may or may not be in the picture. He could be watching the men fish, but staring at the girls or in the far background doing pushups on the sand.
Page 23 3 horizontal rectangles.
Panel 1 Marisa holding Jack and picking up a diaper/beach bag. Candace is tanning. The three men are together.
Marisa: “I’m gonna go get me and Jack out of the sun.”
Flex: “I’ll walk with ya. Might take the bike out.”
Panel 2: Close up of the three men’s upper torsos talking.
Grant: “Getting antsy for some pussy?”
Flex: “Shit. I always wants the pussy.”
Flex: “If you two were real men, you’d want pussy all the time to.”
Panel 3: Grant and John watching Marisa and Flex recede down the beach trail.
Grant: “Dude, your wife’s smoking hot.”
John: “Yeah, I got lucky unwrapping that package.”
Grant: “Don’t tell Candy I said that.”
Grant: “She likes being the center of attention.”
Grant: “Still, I’d kill to see her with tits like your wife’s.”
Page 24 2 horizontal rectangles.
Panel 1: Full torso side view of Flex walking behind Marisa perhaps past the spot they first hooked up in. His cock is noticeably hard beneath his briefs and he’s staring at her ass.
Flex: “Wanna duck back in the dunes?”
Marisa: “No! It’s my anniversary. Besides, we can’t risk it anymore.”
Flex: “You can swallow it if you don’t want it in yo pussy anymore.”
Sound beside Marisa’s belly: GROWL
Marisa: “It was amazing, but it’s over.”
Panel 2: Marisa near her trailer. Flex is by the picnic table.
Flex: “Where ya going? Stay and talk with me.”
Marisa: “I gotta feed Jack.”
Flex: “Do it out here. No one’s around and I seen yo tits already.”
Page 25 4 square and one bottom rectangle.
Panel 1: Jack in a blanket on the picnic table. Marisa is near him, pulling her top off.
Flex: “Whip the girls out.”
Panel 2: Marisa is bent over the table holding herself up with her hands. Her breasts are dangling and Jack is reaching up for one nipple.
Marisa: “This is called the dangling method.”
Panel 3: Upper torso of Marisa bent over. Jack is sucking one nipple or if you prefer not showing a baby breast feeding, her nipples aren’t visible, but maybe a little hand grabbing her breast is.
Marisa: “It AH helps prevent AH blockage.
Panel 4: Flex standing near her ass as she breast feeds. His arms are crossed.
Flex: “You sure we over? I could shove my cock up that pussy right now.”
Marisa: “No more. I might already be pregnant.”
Panel 5 Marisa topless carrying Jack to her door. Flex is right behind her.
Flex: “Our baby would be gorgeous.”
Marisa: “John would leave me and I’d be stuck with raising two babies.”
Flex: “Move in with me. I’d fuck you every night.”
Marisa (thinking): Wow! Every night with that cock.”
Page 26: 2 small squares, 4 vertical rectangles.
Panel 1: Inside the cabin. Marisa is putting Jack down. Flex is in the doorway.
Flex: “Then lets have one last kiss.”
Panel 2: Torso shot of her looking up at him, their lips parted and approaching for their final kiss.
Panel 3: Full body shot of them kissing. His hands are untying her bikini bottoms.
Panel 4: They are still kissing. Her bottoms are falling or at her feet. Her hand is in his shorts pulling his cock out.
Panel 5: Still kissing. She’s stroking his cock. He’s fingering her. Juice is shooting out from her pussy.
Marisa (thinking) I’M CUMMING!
Marisa: “AAAaahhh!”
Panel 6: She’s now kneeling and sucking his cock.
Flex: “UNH!”
Page 27 1 vertical rectangle. 2 squares.
Panel 1: Marisa lying back on the bed. Her legs are spread and she’s holding Flex’s cock, guiding it into her pussy.
Flex: “Put it in you.”
Panel 2: Close up of her crotch. Her hand is on his shaft. The head is pushing her labia inside her.
Marisa (off panel) “So big…”
Panel 3: Close up of her crotch only the head is now inside her. She’s soaked and leaking.
Marisa (off panel): So full… Fuck me. FUCK ME!”
Page 28 Pinup.
Panel 1 God view of Flex’s back. He’s on Marisa. Her head is visible over his shoulder looking orgasmic. His head is turned kissing near her mouth. His legs are spread and her crotch is upturned so that his balls are visible as is her fully penetrated crotch. If you can, show one breast off his side with him pinching her nipple, milk squirting out as always.
Marisa: “FUCK ME!”
Flex: “No. This time I’m making love to you.”
Marisa: “No. Not that. Fuck me.. faster… harder…”
Marisa (thinking) I’m cumming!
Flex: “I love this white pussy.”
Marisa (thinking) No! John, I’m so sorry.”
Marisa: “I love your big cock.”
Marisa: “I love it.”
Marisa (thinking) Cumming again.
Marisa: “I LOVE YOU!”
Page 29 3 horizontal panels. The middle one should be the largest.
Panel 1: Close up from the rear of their crotches and Flex’s ass. His balls are contracting and fluid is dripping from them.
Marisa: “Give me your seed!”
Panel 2: Over the shoulder view of Flex now kneeling. His cock is rampant and blowing his sperm all over Marisa from chin to tits to belly. Sperm is pouring from her splayed open pussy.
Panel 3: Marisa’s upper torso and Flex’s cock. His hand is squeezing out more sperm which is dripping on and soaking her family pendant. Marisa’s head is leaning up and she looks horrified.
Marisa: “OH NO!”
Page 30 Pin up
Panel 1: Sperm covered Marisa still on the bed looking up at the doorway to the cabin in horror. Flex is kneeling beside her, cock still fully hard and dripping sperm. He to is looking at the door. Candace is standing in the doorway in her bikini, mouth open, eyes wide, staring in horror at what she just witnesses.
GOOD STOPPING POINT FOR PART 2
Cover: Another magazine cover type shoot.
Page 31 2 horizontal panels, smaller on top.
Panel 1: Marisa in the bathroom wearing a robe. She’s applying makeup, lipstick and blue eyeliner. She’s looking in the mirror. The door is visible in the mirror.
John (through door): “You Okay? You seem upset.”
Marisa: “Just nervous about tonight.”
John: “Why are you nervous about tonight?”
Panel 2: View over John’s shoulder or from his back. John is wearing khaki pants and a black collared shirt. Marisa is standing in the doorway to the bathroom. She has on a short tank top displaying her ample cleavage. Nipples visible, no bra. The top stops halfway down her ribs, showing her belly. She’s got white shorts on, slightly heeled sandals, and her nails are painted green.
Marisa: “Nervous about wearing this.”
John: “You are fucking HOT!”
Marisa: “The bra was bothering me.”
John: “I ain’t complaining.”
Page 32 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Grant and Flex playing cards at the picnic table. A bottle of tequila between them. John is standing near Grant with Marisa behind him closer to her cabin. Candace is coming through the door to her cabin. She’s got a straw hat on, cutoff jean shorts, and a plaid shirt tied up between her breasts to show off her belly. Flex is shirtless.
Flex: “DAYUMN! Isa you look fucking hot.”
John: “Candace feeling any better?”
Candace: “I’m fine.”
Marisa: “Let me show you Jack’s stuff.”
Panel 2: Marisa and Candace near Jack’s crib in her cabin. The baby is asleep. Candace looks mad.
Marisa: “I’m sorry about earlier.”
Candace: “Sorry for doing it or getting caught?”
Marisa: “It’s not what you think.”
Candace: “I think you’re a adulterous slut fucking a black man.”
Page 33 2 square, a large horizontal rectangle, and a smaller rectangle.
Panel 1: Close up of Marisa and Candace’s upper torso’s talking.
Candace: “How did it happen?”
Marisa: “It started yesterday on the beach….”
Panel 2: Similar panel with Candace looking angry.
Candace: “That’s it. You left out how he sodomized you last night.”
Marisa: “You heard that?”
Candace: “I didn’t know it was you.”
Panel 3: Similar shot, wider angle showing more of their bodies and the room. Marisa might look sad and be crying.
Candace: :You’re going to hell.”
Marisa: “I know.”
Candace: “I don’t know how you took that monster in your vagina let alone your ass.”
Marisa: “He’s very dominant.”
Marisa: “You do what he tells you.”
Panel 4: Zoomed back in on their upper torsos. Candace’s eyes are wide with disbelief.
Marisa: “I’ve had more orgasms over the last tow days, then my entire life.:
Marisa: “He lasts for hours.”
Candace: “HOURS!”
Page 34 3 horizontal panels. The bigger one is in the middle.
Panel 1: Candace holding the baby. He’s awake and looking at Marisa who is standing at the door.
Marisa: “Please don’t tell John.”
Candace: “I don’t know.”
Candace: “I share everything with Grant.”
Candace: “I’ll think about it.”
Panel 2: John at his car door. It is open. Marisa is at the passenger side. Her door is closed. Flex is handing Marisa a 50 dollar bill.
Flex: “Happy anniversary. Buy a bottle of wine on me.”
John: “Hey, thanks Flex.”
Panel 3: Flex leaning close to Marisa on the passenger side. John is now behind the wheel, door closed.
Flex: “Candy gonna tell on us?”
Marisa: “I don’t know. Maybe.”
Flex: “ Don’t worry. I’ll take care of it.”
Panel 3: Front view of car. Flex holding the door open as Marisa slides in. John behind the wheel.
Flex: “Have fun.”
John and Marisa: “Thanks.”
Page 35 4 square panels.
Panel 1: Close up of Grant and Flex’s torso at the table. Grant is throwing back a shot.
Flex: “I win. DRINK MUTHAFUCKER!”
Panel 2: Similar close up. Flex is now lighting a joint. Candace is behind them carrying Jack.
Candace: “Since you two insist on behaving like you’re still in college..”
Candace: “I’m gonna move Jack away from the smoke.”
Panel 3: Candace near her cabin door away from the men. She’s looking at a smiling Jack.
Candace (thinking): “How could your mom do that to you?”
Candace (thinking): “Such a good boy. Maybe it’s time I start a family?”
Panel 4: View over Candace’s shoulder showing her looking at Flex playing cards. Grant is doing another shot.
Candace (thinking): He’s so confident. So manly.”
Page 36 pinup
Panel 1: Candace staring off into space sitting on the step to her door. Holding the baby. He’s reaching up for her nipple. She’s surrounded by image bubbles showing previous scenes
Bubble 1: Her oiling Flex’s chest from the other day.
Bubble 2 Close up of Flex’s cock buried in Marisa’s pussy.
Bubble 3 Close up of Flex’s cock, shooting sperm.
Bubble 4. Marisa’s body, pale, big breasts. Her pussy is leaking sperm. His cock is over it ejaculating.
Bubble 5 Same image only now it’s Candace’s body. Her hand is on Flex’s spurting cock, pulling it back towards her pussy.
Candace: “Give me more.”
Flex (head off panel): You okay honey?”
Page 37 2 square. Large bottom rectangle.
Panel 1: Candace is blushing. Grant is looking at her, holding a shot.
Grant: “I said, are you okay honey?”
Candace: “Fine. Just fine. I’m fine. Why?”
Grant: “You looked pale.”
Candace: “I’m fine. Jack’s hungry.”
Panel 2 Upper torso of Candace holding Jack in Marisa’s cabin. Candace has a baby bottle feeding Jack.
Panel 3 Candace feeding Jack looking over at the bed. A ghostly image of Flex, kneeling on the side of the bed. His cock is hosing sperm all over Marisa. Marisa’s mouth is open and some semen is flying in. She’s rubbing cum all over her nipple and her other hand is running down her belly towards her splayed open, sperm filled pussy.
Marisa: “Oh God Candy!”
Marisa: “It’s so gooooood!
Candace (thinking) “I must have gotten a contact high.”
Page 38 2 square and one large bottom
Panel 1: Candace sitting down at the picnic table with Grant and Flex. Grant looks drunk. John and Marisa’s car is pulling up behind them.
Candace: “Deal me in.”
Panel 2: The three at the table playing cards. John and Marisa standing beside them. Marisa now has a green sparkle in her belly button.
Candace: “Jack just went down.”
Candace: :What the hell is that?”
John: “It’s my anniversary present.”
Flex: “It’s sexy as fuck.”
Panel 3 View over Candace’s shoulder focusing on Marisa’s body and Flex’s head looking at the emerald in her belly. Marisa’s body is reacting to Flex’s gaze, nipples hard and leaking.
Marisa: “Not sure about sexy, but it hurts like fuck.”
Candace (thinking) She’s acting like a bitch in heat around Flex.
Candace (thinking) Is he really that good?
Page 39 6 squares
Panel 1: John leading his wife by the hand to his cabin. The others still playing cards.
Flex: “Deal ya in?”
Marisa: “Sure.”
John: “No we need to go to bed early.”
Marisa: “Well good night ya’ll.”
Panel 2: Candace and Grant tossing back shots. Flex is grinning at them.
Flex: “Three kings. Drink.
Panel 3: The three still playing cards. Candace is taking a hit from a joint.
Candace: “Don’t drink too much. I want to have fun later.”
Flex: “Guess I’m the only one not having fun.”
Candace: “Wouldn’t surprise me, you found some slut this trip.”
Flex: “Wouldn’t surprise me either.”
Panel 4: Candace standing behind a drunk Grant. Flex holding up nearly empty bottle of Tequila.
Candace: “That’s it lets hit the sack.”
Grant: “Naw, let’s play a few more hands.”
Flex: “Go ahead. I can wait a few minute for you to get back.”
Panel 5: Grants arm and Flex’s toasting two shots of tequila. Candace going into her cabin behind the arms.
Candace: “Well hurry up Grant.”
Panel 6: Flex pouring filling Grant’s shot glass from the nearly empty tequila bottle. Candace’s upper torso is silhouetted in the lit window of her cabin pulling her shirt open.
Flex: “TAKE IT OFF CANDY!”
Page 40 2 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Candace laying nude on the bed. Her cross necklace, piercing, diamond stud piercing, and wedding ring are all she has on. Near her head is a window.
Flex (through window): “KILL IT! KILL IT!”
Panel 2: Same picture only now Candace is pinching one nipple and her other hand is fingering herself.
Candace (thinking): “Maybe if I get a head start…”
Candace (thinking) “The minute man might finish me off.”
Page 41: Pinup
Panel 1: Candace on the bed fingering herself. Her orgasm is squirting out around her fingers. Again she is surrounded by thought balloons.
Candace: “CUMMINNG!”
Balloon one: Grant is between her legs. His nice sized penis is hard.”
Grant: “Is this what you want?”
Balloon two: Same image only Grant now has Flex’s cock between his legs.
Grant: “Is this what you want?”
Balloon three: Flex fucking Candace who now has Marisa’s body.
Balloon four: Flex’s cock pulled out shooting cum all over Marisa upper torso. The head is now Marisa.
Balloon five: Marisa on her back, squeezing her breasts together while Candace now with Flex’s cock shoots sperm all over them.
Page 42: 6 squares.
Panel 1: Grant with his head in his arms passed out at the picnic table. Flex is seen in the background going into Candace’s cabin.
Panel 2: Candace on the bed, seemingly asleep, a smile on her face. The door outside is opening.
Panel 3: Extreme close up of her pussy, labia and clit slightly engorged. She’s wet. Her anus is visible low near the mattress.
Panel 4: Similar to the last only her crotch has lifted up some (anus higher off mattress) and Flex’s tongue is lapping her. Maybe motion lines or ghost tongues show he’s licking her from anus to clit.
Panel 5: Close up of the tip of his tongue rimming her anus.
Panel 6: Candace’s upper torso. She looks ecstatic.
Candace: “That’s good Grant. Eat me honey. Gonna cum…”
Page 43 Pinup
Panel 1: Shot from over Flex’s shoulder of his head sucking her clit while two fingers are in her pussy. She’s squirting around his fingers. Her legs are spread. You can see her belly, and her breasts are up thrust as her back is arched.
Candace: “CCUUMMIINNGG!”
Page 44: rectangle, 2 squares, rectangle.
Panel 1 God or high view showing all of Candace’s body. Some of Flex is visible on the end. His cock is big and hard rising up between her legs.
Candace: “Oh Grant baby, that was amazing.”
Panel 2: Close up of the big cock head pushing against her labia in. Her pussy is opening for it.
Panel 3: Same view only the head has now slipped inside.
Candace (off panel): “You feel huge baby.”
Panel 4: God view of Candace. Flex has his strong arms under her knees, lifting her ass up. Half his cock is inside her.
Candace: “It’s sooo biigg!”
Candace (thinking) Too big. I must still be stoned. Fantasizing it’s Flex.”
Page 45 3 horizontal rectangle, smaller at top, biggest at bottom.
Panel 1: Close up of Candace’s belly and vagina. His cock is now buried. An X-ray view shows it’s past her cervix.
Candace (off panel thinking) It’s in my womb!
Panel 2 Side view of the two lovers. Flex is still kneeling, but leaning lower. She’s sitting up a little. Her far hand is feeling his hard chest. He’s got one mighty hand virtually covering her breast.
Candace (Thinking) Jesus! I’m cumming again.
Candace: “AAAAHHHH!”
Panel 3: Candace is now sitting up more, legs wrapped around him. Her arms are around his neck and she looks about to kiss him.
Candace: “Thank you!”
Flex” “Want me to take it out?”
Candace: “Hell no. I want you to fuck me.”
Page 46 1 horizontal rectangle and three vertical ones.
Panel 1: View over John’s shoulder. He’s having sex with his wife, kneeling between her legs. Her new piercing is sparkling. The view is of him looking down at her body. His penis is hard and has popped out of her pussy. It’s small and pathetic compared to Flex’s.
Marisa: “What’s wrong?”
John: “Nothing. My penis just keeps popping out.”
Panel 2: View from John’s perspective of Marisa mounting him. His hand is holding his penis up and she is lowering herself down on it.
John: “Try riding me.”
Panel 3: Similar view only now his penis has popped out again.
Marisa (thinking): Too loose. Better just rub him off.
Panel 4: View from Marisa’s perspective. She’s looking down between her breasts. John’s hands are squeezing each nipple and they are squirting a little jet of milk. The underside of his cock can be seen sticking out from her pussy. It is squirting a small jet of seed.
John: “CUMMING!”
Marisa (thinking) How’d did I ever get pregnant from so little sperm?
Page 47 4 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Marisa standing wearing only one of John’s white tee shirts. Her finger is on the light switch. It is off and the room is dark, lit by outside lights. Jack is near her in his crib. John is snoring on the bed.
Marisa (thinking) I think I will step outside for some fresh air.
Panel 2: Marisa looking towards Flex’s cabin trailer. It is dark. The picnic table is between them. Grant is passed out there, head in his arms, with the empty tequila bottle tucked under and arm. Behind him is the end of his cabin. The lights are off, but noise is coming from the cabin.
Noise: “Fuck me with that big cock.”
Noise: “What kind of cock?”
Noise: “Your cock. I don’t know what you want.”
Noise: “Turn the light on slut.”
Panel 3: Marisa outside near the window. Flex’s head or upper torso can be seen through it.
Candace: “Don’t pull it out.”
Flex: “What kind of cock?”
Candace: “Black cock.”
Panel 4: God view of Candace’s body with Flex’s cock half buried in her. Flex is kneeling, cupping her knees over his arms.
Candace surrounded by multiple word balloons: Big black cock. Black cock so good. Your black cock is making me cum.
Flex: “You learn fast, slut.”
Page 48: 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Side or angled view showing them still fucking and possibly Marisa’s head or eye in the window.
Candace: “Black cock better then white cock.”
Flex: “No. Real men have cocks. White men have little boy penises.”
Flex: “What do I have?”
Candace: “A real man’s cock.”
Flex: “And Grant?”
Candace: “A little boy’s penis.”
Flex: “Gonna seed that white pussy good now.”
Panel 2: God view showing an x-ray of Flex’s cock filling her womb.
Candace: “YYEESS! Seed me good…no wait, pull out.”
Flex: “Shut up and take my cum, bitch.”
Candace: SHIT! YES! CUM IN ME! AAAARRRGGH!”
Page 49 pinup
Panel 1: Similar angle looking down or god view.
Flex has pulled out. His cock is rampant still shooting some cum. Candace’s mouth, tits, and belly are covered in it. Semen is pouring from her pussy. The cross around her neck is covered in cum. She’s licking her lips and rubbing some around her nipple.
Candace: “So good. So good. I can’t believe you came in me.”
Candace: “You’re the first man to cum bareback inside me.”
Candace: “Now that I felt it, I like it.”
Flex: “Don’t worry baby. I got snipped after my last baby.”
Flex: “I can come in dat pussy all you want.”
Candace: “Really? We can do it again?”
Page 50 2 vertical panels, 2 square
Panel 1: View from Flex’s perspective of him holding his cock up while Candace lowers herself over it. She still has sperm all over her.
Flex: “What about now? Mount this big black cock.”
Panel 2: Same view only now Candace is fully impaled. Her head is back a little, eyes closed, enjoying the feeling of being completely stuffed. Her hands are on his chest.
Candace: “Black cock so good.”
Flex: “Call me a nigger.”
Panel 3: Close up of Candace’s head looking horrified.
Candace: “I can do that.”
Flex (off panel) SAY IT!
Panel 4: Close up of Flex’s head.
Candace (off panel) “You’re a nigger!”
Flex: “Keep talking shit, but say nigger instead of black.”
Page 51: 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Side view of Candace bouncing in Flex’s lap.
Flex: “What kind of cock do you like?”
Candace: “Nigger cock. My pussy likes big nigger co…OH! YES! CUMMING!”
Panel 2: View outside the trailer. Marisa is still peeking in. Flex can be seen now taking Candace doggy style.
Word balloons are coming from the windows: Give me that nigger cock. CUMMING! I love big black nigger cocks. SEED MY PUSSY NIGGER!
Page 52: 2 horizontal rectangles and two squares.
Panel 1: View of the picnic table with Marisa sitting on the bench facing away from the table, but towards Candace’s cabin. Flex is approaching her from the cabin. His clothes are bunched under one arm and he is nude, big banana cock swinging between his legs.
Flex: “Candace won’t be a problem.”
Marisa: “So I hear. You turned her into a nigger loving slut.”
Panel 2: Marisa standing beside Flex. He is carrying Grant in his arms or over his shoulder near the door to Candace’s cabin.
Marisa: “You gonna fuck the slut again?”
Flex: “Don’t be jealous. Plenty more for you.”
Panel 3 Flex and Marisa sitting down. He is in one of the beach chairs. She could be in one to or on the bench.
Flex: “Minute Man must be a really lame fuck.”
Flex: “Body like Candy’s needs to be serviced regular. Know what I’m saying?”
Marisa: “Do you like her better then me?”
Panel 4: Same scene, but from a different angle.
Flex: “Fuck no! I prefer real women to skinny models.”
Flex: “Body like yours belongs on the pole.”
Marisa: “Thanks I think.”
Page 53 2 horizontal and three square.
Panel 1: View over Candace’s shoulder. Flex is sitting nude, legs spread, cock plump and so long it nearly hit’s the sandy ground.
Flex: “Tomorrow, we fuckin all day. You and me. Gonna do it all.”
Marisa: “So am I better then Candace?”
Flex: “Depends. Slut forgot to clean my cock off. Why don’t you do it?”
Panel 2: Side view of Marisa on all fours. She is low to the ground licking the tip of Flex’s cock in her mouth. He is plump, but semi-limp. The outline of her tits is clear through the tee shirt. It has ridden up, exposing her ass. View could also be angled from the rear, showing her wet pussy and ass.
Flex: “Even I have my limits.”
Marisa: “I’m in love.”
Flex: (thinking) Here we go.
Flex: “We just fuck buddies Isa.”
Marisa: “I don’t love you, jerk.”
Panel 3: View from Flex’s perspective of Marisa holding his cock. It is a plump monster, but limp and falling over.
Marisa: “I love your big nigger cock.”
Panel 4: Same view only his cock has straightened more. Marisa is kissing the crown.
Marisa: “Your big nigger cock turned me into a slut.”
Panel 5: Same view, cock now fully hard and Marisa has wrapped her mouth around the head.
Flex (off panel) “Now that’s what I’m talking about.”
Page 54 1 large horizontal panel and two square.
Panel 1: Side view of Marisa on all fours with half his cock down her throat. He is leaning forward. The tee shirt is bunched above her tits. He is reaching down and squeezing her breasts. Milk is squirting down to the sand.
Marisa (thinking) God forgive me, but I do love him.
Panel 2: View from Flex’s perspective of his cock. Marisa’s mouth is open and the cock head is visible filling her mouth with cum.
Marisa (thinking) Barely a mouthful. Stud really is spent.”
Panel 3: Marisa leaning over Flex’s body in the chair. Their lips are about to meet.
Marisa: “You don’t mind kissing me after I sucked your cock?”
Flex: “You mind kissing me after I tongued Candy’s pussy and asshole?”
Marisa: “Ass!”
Page 55 2 horizontal rectangles.
Panel 1: Flex standing outside Marisa’s cabin. She is standing outside at the door in a green two piece dress. The top is spaghetti straps and shows cleavage. It stops on her rib cage showing her belly and new piercing. The skirt stops above her knees. John is elevated above her with a towel around his waist.
Flex: “Dayum Isa, you looks good.”
John “You bet she does. What’s up?”
Flex: “I chattered a boat to take you out to the reef as an anniversary present.”
John: “Wow!”
Panel 2: Another view of the group. Candace wearing makeup in her skimpiest bikini yet has her arm around Flex’s bicep looking at him lovingly. Grant is stumbling behind them wearing sunglasses, hair disheveled and unshaved.
Grant (thinking) Will someone turn out the lights?
Flex: “I’m don’t like boats, so I’m gonna take my bike for a spin.”
Marisa: “I don’t think the sun is good for me or Jack.”
Flex: “Sorry Isa, I wasn’t thinking.”
Marisa: “It’s a great gift, but I’ll just go shopping in Key West.”
Flex: “John you gotta go. They guarantee seeing rays, sharks, and maybe a turtle.”
Page 56 4 square
Panel 1: Marisa breastfeeding Jack. John and she are in their cabin.
John: “You’re the best wife in the world.”
Marisa: “Have fun. I’d honestly rather go shopping.”
Panel 2: The side of the boat. Flex is holding a cooler, passing it from the dock to Grant who is in the boat.
Grant: “I swear you got me drunk just to make me miserable today.”
Flex: “I can honestly say, that’s not why I got you drunk.”
Panel 3: Candace standing on the dock by the boat. An old Cuban Captain is on the boat staring at her body. Flex is in the distance waving from his bike.
Candace (thinking) There he goes to fuck his big titted slut.”
Cuban (thinking) Hot damn!
Panel 4: Candace looking in the boat at Grant and John.
Candace: “This isn’t my thing. Care if I join Marisa?”
John: “I’d rather have someone there to keep an eye on her.”
Page 57 small horizontal rectangle, a larger rectangle and two squares.
Panel 1: Flex on his motorcycle pulling into the cul-de-sac with their three trailers
Panel 2: View over Flex’s shoulder of Marisa laying nude on his bed. Her legs are spread and she’s holding her pussy lips apart.
Marisa: “Jack’s napping. Hurry before he wakes.”
Panel 3: Flex bent at the waist pulling his pants down. His cock is sticking straight out.
Marisa (off panel): Looks like the nights rest did you good.
Panel 4: Close up of Flex’s erect cock, he’s kneeling between her legs. She’s grabbed the tip.
Marisa: “Gimme that nigger cock.”
Panel 5: Another close up. Her hand is on the shaft, guiding him into her pussy. The head is spreading apart her labia.
Page 58 2 horizontal rectangles.
Panel 1: God view of Flex’s back and Marisa’s head over his shoulder. He could be angled such that one of her tits is visible with him pinching a squirting nipple.
Marisa: “I love your cock so much.”
Flex: “I know.”
Marisa: “Why didn’t you tell me you had a vasectomy?”
Marisa: “I’ve been scared to death you knocked me up.”
Flex: “Yet you kept on fucking me.”
Marisa: “It feels so good when you cum inside me.”
Panel 2: Side view of Flex laying over her, cock fully impaled. They look very intimate.
Flex: “Wish I could put a black baby in dat belly.”
Marisa: “I wish you could to.”
Marisa (thinking) This is so hot!
Flex: “Then I’m gonna do it. I’m gonna put a nigger baby in dat belly, bitch.”
Marisa: “DO IT! Seed me! Plant your nigger baby in my belly.”
Page 59 1 horizontal rectangle, 2 squares, 1 horizontal rectangle.
Panel 1: X-ray god view of Flex’s cock spurting inside Marisa’s, filling her womb. Her nipples are shooting milk (maybe the most drawn yet as she’s having a really big orgasm). Her head is back and she’s screaming in pleasure.
Marisa: “Aaaaargh!”
Panel 2: Close up X-ray of her belly. His cock is still fully penetrating her, but no longer ejaculating. Her womb is so full of sperm it looks bloated.
Panel 3: Close up side view of her belly and his buried cock. Her belly looks bloated almost like she’s several months pregnant.
Panel 4: View over Candace’s shoulder of the two lovers still copulating on the bed. Marisa’s legs are wrapped around his back. His cock is still impaling her. Marisa is looking at Candace in surprise. Flex is also staring at her.
Marisa: “Oh shit!”
Flex: “What are you doing here?”
Page 60 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: View still from Candace’s perspective, but now Flex has pulled out. His cock is still rock hard and at it’s most swollen. Sperm has started to pour from Marisa’s pussy. Candace is pointing at Marisa’s sperm filled pussy.
Candace: “I was hoping for more of that.”
Panel 2: Flex pushing Candace’s head down between Marisa’s legs. Her legs are spread wide and she looks shocked.
Flex: “Your in luck. It’s still fresh.”
Marisa: “What the…?”
Page 61 2 squares and a large rectangle
Panel 1: Close up of Marisa’s pussy with Candace’s tongue in it. Sperm is still gushing out.
Marisa (off panel): Candace?”
Candace (thinking): It’s still hot.
Panel 2: Close up with Candace’s tongue flickering over Marisa’s swollen clit and two fingers in her pussy.
Panel 3: God view or elevated angle showing Marisa’s full body and Candace’s upper torso. The blonde’s head is still buried in Marisa’s pussy. Marisa’s knees are bent and she’s lifting her crotch into Candace’s face.
Candace: “Mmmmm”
Candace (thinking): Haven’t done this since college.”
Marisa: “Aaaahh!”
Page 62 2 horizontal rectangles and 2 squares.
Panel 1: Artsy view from Candace’s perspective between Marisa’s legs in perspective, showing first her red pubes, undulating belly with the new emerald piercing, her breasts, nipples hard and shooting milk, and her head between the breasts, mouth open, eyes rolled up in her head.
Candace (thinking): She looks so hot cumming.
Panel 2: Side view of all three. Flex is now standing behind Candace, untying the sides of her bikini bottoms or pulling the down her ass. It’s down enough to expose her pussy, wet with arousal. Marisa is still cumming, back arched, shooting milk.
Flex: “Now that’s what I’m talking about.”
Panel 3: Flex’s cock head lined up with Candace’s pussy, starting to push in.
Panel 4: View of Marisa’s red pubic hair with Candace’s nose sitting on it. Flex’s torso can be seen over Candace’s head.
Candace: “Oooomph!”
Page 63 1 rectangle and 6 squares
Panel 1: God view from Flex’s perspective. His cock is mostly in Candace’s pussy. One hand is squeezing her ass cheek and the other is untying the bikini top from around her neck.
Panel 2: Close up of Candace’s tongue inside Marisa’s pussy. There is almost no sperm now.
Marisa (off panel): “No more. Too sensitive.”
Panel 3: Close up of Candace’s head from Marisa’s perspective. Candace has raised her head up above Marisa‘s red bush. Marisa’s juices are dripping from her mouth and chin.
Panel 4: Close up of Candace’s head. Her lips are puckered and she’s kissing Marisa’s red pubes.
Panel 5: Same view only, she’s now kissing the green emerald in her belly.
Panel 6: Candace is now licking up Marisa’s breast towards her swollen nipple.
Panel 7: Candace’s lips are now sucking the nipple. X-ray view shows milk shooting into her mouth.
Page 64 Long rectangle, two squares, long rectangle
Panel 1: Long shot of both women. Candace is lying on top of Marisa and they are now kissing. Their boobs are mashed together. Flex’s crotch can be seen with his cock buried.
Panel 2: Close up of both women’s pussies. Their different colored pubes are mashed together. Only the head of Flex’s cock is inside Candace. Her juices are dripping down onto Marisa’s labia.
Panel 3: Same shot only now Flex has buried his cock and his balls are slapping against Marisa’s pussy.
Noise (coming off his testicles): Slap!
Panel 4: Another long shot of both women’s bodies. This time their lips are parted.
One word balloon coming from both women’s mouths: “CUMMING!”
Page 65 3horizontal panels 1 big, 1 smaller in the middle, 1 big.
Panel 1: View from above both women’s heads. Candace is rearing up, arching her back above Marisa. She looks ecstatic. Flex can be seen behind her grinning or looking intense.
Flex: “Gonna seed dat pussy good.”
Candace: “Give me your nigger cum!”
Panel 2: Long X-ray view of the side of his cock, shooting into her womb.
Panel 3: View from over Marisa’s shoulder. Candace has buried her head in the pillow beside Marisa’s head or her head is turned, lips pressed against Marisa’s cheek. Flex’s lower torso is visible. He has pulled his cock out and it is hosing cum all over Candace’s back. Some is striking Marisa’s face.
Page 66 Large vertical panel and 2 square
Panel 1: Flex lying down between the women. One arm is under Marisa, the hand coming around to squeeze her breast. Candace is leaning into him, her hand hefting his now swollen, but limp cock.
Flex: “If you’re hungry, why don’t you rustle up some black sausage to eat.”
Candace: “Gladly.”
Flex: “You to, Isa.”
Marisa: “Yes Flex.”
Panel 2: Close up of Flex’s cock, now erect from Flex‘s persepctive. Candace is staring at the viewer. Her lips are wrapped around the head. Marisa is licking lower on the shaft.
Panel 3: Close up of the bottom of Flex’s cock, showing his balls. Candace is now licking one ball. Marisa has swallowed half his shaft.
Page 67 4 squares
Panel 1: Close up of both women’s tongues licking around his cock head. One might be teasing his pee slit and one licking the crown.
Panel 2: Close up of both women kissing. They each have a hand on his shaft, stroking it.
Panel 3: Close up of Candace’s rear end. Marisa is fingering her.
Panel 4: Close up of Flex’s cock between both women’s faces’ He is cumming, hitting both women.
Page 68 2 top squares and 2 vertical rectangles
Panel 1: Both women have sperm on their faces. Candace now has her lips around his cock head. Her cheeks are bulging, semen is leaking out around her lips.
Panel 2: Same view only now Marisa is sucking the tip and her cheeks are bulging out. Candace’s cheeks are no longer bulging, but sperm is covering her chin.
Panel 3 View from Flex’s perspective. His cock is limp and spent. The women are standing close side by side. Both have sperm on their chins and scattered elsewhere.
Flex (off panel): “Why don’t you girls clean up in my shower?”
Marisa: “Okay.”
Candace: “Quicker if we shower together.”
Panel 4: The women facing each other in the shower. It’s small and cramped. Candace is running soap over Marisa’s breasts.
Candace: “Please say we can get together again.”
Marisa: “I’d… I’d like that.”
Page 69 Pin up
Panel 1: The lower part of the page is a close up of the girls upper bodies. Their nipples are touching. Candace has her arms around Marisa affectionately, staring in her eyes. Two thought balloons are coming off Candace’s head. The first image is of Candace with a strap on black dildo fucking Marisa doggy style. Candace is pulling Marisa’s hair. The second is of Marisa riding the strap on while Candace squeezes her breasts.
Candace: “Girls only weekend.”
Candace: “I’ll buy a black strap on dildo.”
Marisa: “Maybe.”
Page 70 3 vertical rectangles
Panel 1: View over Flex’s shoulder of both women under the shower, bodies closely pressed together passionately kissing.
Flex: “I had to watch this.”
Panel 2: Same view. Candace is behind Marisa peeking over her shoulder. Candace is reaching around the red head and hefting her breasts.
Candace: “You like these big white titties?”
Flex: “Fuck yeah.”
Panel 3: Same view only Candace is now pinching Marisa’s nipples and milk is shooting out.
Candace: “Look at that nigger cock grow.”
Flex: “Get your asses back on the bed.”
Page 71: 2 horizontal rectangles, the second is smaller and two square.
Panel 1: Wide shot of the room. Marisa is reaching for her dress. Flex is pushing Candace down on the bed. His cock is indeed hard again. The baby monitor is visible.
Monitor: “Whaaaaa…”
Marisa: “Shit! He’s hungry.”
Flex: “Leave the dress. I want you to go naked.”
Panel 2: Marisa walking nude in the sun past the picnic table on the way to her cabin.
Panel 3: Marisa sitting feeding Jack. The other baby monitor is beside her.
Monitor: “Whoa! Wrong hole!”
Panel 4: Close up of just the monitor.
Monitor: “It’s too big!”
Monitor: “You ain’t a true slut until you’ve had nigger cock in all three holes.
Page 72 2 square and large horizontal rectangle
Panel 1: Close up god view of Candace’s ass. Flex is squeezing one cheeks and the first few inches of his cock are spreading her anus open.
Candace (off panel): “OW! FUCK!”
Flex: “Isa took it, you can to.”
Panel 2: Another close up only now half his cock is inside and her ass looks like it’s straining.
Candace (off panel) “fuckfuckfuckfuck.”
Panel 3: Full side view on Candace on all fours and Flex fucking her ass from behind.
Candace: “fuckfuckfuck FUCK! Yes! Do it! Fuck my ass.”
Page 73 3 horizontal rectangles, the middle one is the smallest.
Panel 1: Marisa placing a sleeping Jack back in his crib. The monitor is visible nearby.
Monitor: “I’ve done it. I’m a true slut now and I like it.”
Monitor: “Fuck your white slut’s ass, nigger.”
Monitor: SLAP
Monitor: “OH GOD! Spank you slut’s ass, master.”
Monitor: SLAP
Panel 2: Small shot of a naked Marisa walking back to Flex’s cabin.
Panel 3: View over Marisa’s shoulder of her standing in the door. Flex and Candace are on the bed. A red mark is on her ass cheeks shaped like a hand. Flex has half his cock in her ass and sperm is dripping down her pussy.
Candace: “Fill me ass with nigger cum, master.”
Page 74 2 horizontal rectangles and 2 square
Panel 1: Flex collapsed on the bed on his back. His cock is plump, but soft, laying over his thigh and still leaking sperm. Candace is near comatose on all fours, her ass sticking up, sperm pouring from it, red marks on both cheeks. Marisa is near the bed.
Flex: “I’m spent ladies.”
Marisa: :I want you one more time.”
Flex: “Jesus Isa! I’m only human.
Marisa: “No you’re not, Flex.”
Panel 2: Side view of Flex on his back. Marisa is Lowering herself over his cock. She is squeezing it to make it hard enough to enter her. Candace is behind them either in the same position or more settled down on her stomach.
Marisa: “You are a god!”
Marisa: “Let me worship your black cock with my white pussy, master.”
Panel 3: Close up view down Flex’s chest of Marisa sitting in his lap with only a little of the root of his shaft showing. Her eyes are closed and her head is thrown back.
Flex (off panel): “FUCK! Now that’s what I’m talking about.”
Panel 4: Close up side view of their upper torsos. Marisa is leaning over him and he’s sucking one nipple.
Marisa: “I want your nigger seed in my womb again, master.”
Flex (thinking): You’ll get it slut.
Page 75: 4 squares
Panel 1: Close up of Flex’s balls, splayed out on the bed while most if Marisa’s pussy is taking his shaft. Candace is now licking his balls.
Flex (off panel): “That’s it. Lick my balls, slut.”
Panel 2: Same view only Marisa has now moved higher exposing more shaft and Candace is licking the base of his shaft.
Panel 3: Same view only Marisa has now ridden it so high, that part of the head has emerged. Candace is now licking just under the head.
Panel 4: Same view only more of the shaft is impaling Marisa and Candace is tonguing Marisa’s anus.
Page 76 2 vertical rectangles
Panel 1: Full rear view of Candace’s head licking his balls and Marisa’s back. Flex’s hands might be visible on her hips. She is fully impaled.
Marisa: “Please tell me we can fuck again.”
Flex (off panel from around Marisa): “I plan on fucking you both a lot.”
Marisa: “I’m your slut, Flex.”
Panel 2: The same view only now from the front. Marisa is orgasming, Her nipples are huge and squirting milk. An x-ray cutout shows him seeding her womb.
Flex: “Take my seed in the white pussy, slut.”
Marisa: “EVERY…Aaaahh…LAST….Ooohhh… DROP… Unnnhhhh!!
Page 77 1 vertical panel and 2 square
Panel 1: God view of Marisa laying on top Flex with her head on his chest. His cock is still in her and cum is now leaking out. Candace is on the bed next to Flex. He has his arm around her.
Panel 2: Marisa sitting up, back arched and boobs outthrust. Flex is sucking one nipple.
Panel 3: Same view only now Candace is sucking the other nipple or both Flex and Candace are tonguing the swollen nipples and milk is shooting out.
Page 78 2 vertical panels
Panel 1: Flex lying back with both women in the crook of his arms. Candace is reaching down and hefting his sticky cock. It is full size but completely limp. Marisa has one hand on his chest.
Candace: “I could use one more load.”
Flex: “I’m spent. Isa wore me out with that last fuck.”
Marisa: “My pleasure and I mean that.”
Panel 2: Same view only now both women are kissing his chest.
Flex: “I can swing by and fuck you about once a month Isa. Candy’s a little more out of the way.”
Candace: “NO! I want it more often.”
Marisa: “Me too.”
Page 79 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: The three upper torsos next to each other. Marisa and Candace are squeezing each others hands across his chest.
Candace: Next month John and Grant have that fishing trip.”
Flex: “I was invited but I have a competition.”
Candace: “Maybe you and I can get together for some fun, Isa.”
Marisa: “Yes, I’d like that.”
Panel 2: Similar view only now it’s their lower torsos. The tow panels line up closely almost forming one big panel. Both women now have their hands on Flex’s cock which remains a monster, but limp.
Marisa (off panel): “I need this more than once a month.”
Candace (off panel): “Me too.”
Flex: “Dayumn. Got me some addicts.”
Marisa: “Once you’ve had Flex…”
Page 80 3 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Upper torsos again looking cozy.
Flex: “If you need it that bad, maybe you should turn out them pussies for some other Niggas.”
Candace: “You’re not suggesting…”
Marisa: “No way.”
Flex: “Why not? None out there like me, but if ya knows any, big hands, nig feet, nig all around.”
Panel 2: The heads and upper torso of just Flex and Marisa.
Marisa: “There’s a lawyer at work, big ex-football player. He’s flirted with me, but I found it unprofessional.”
Flex: “You should fuck him.”
Marisa: “No way. I couldn’t. He’s almost sixty.”
Marisa (thinking): Maybe?
Panel 3: Similar view only Candace and Flex’s head.
Candace: “You’re lucky. The only big black guy I know works for the agency doing odd jobs. He was hired through some handicapped firm. I think he’s got a mild case of Downs. Probably still a virgin.”
Flex: “Brotha needs some pussy bad then.”
Page 81 Pinup
Panel 1: The lower left is the upper quadrant of Candace’s face or fully half her face showing one eye, ear, her hair etc. The lower right is the opposite quadrant of Marisa’s face. Both eyes are wide and they have thought balloons showing them imagining fucking the men they just described. Marisa’s balloon shows her on her back on an office desk. She is nude getting fucked by the older black man. He’s dropped his pants, but is wearing a shirt and tie to show he’s professional. Candace is in a janitorial closet leaning forward while getting it from behind by her guy. He’s got a tee shirt on with overalls over it. His cock is sticking out through an opening in the front.
Page 82 small horizontal rectangle and two vertical rectangles.
Panel 1: Long view of the bed. Marisa is sitting up. The monitor is in the foreground. Noise is coming from it.
Monitor: Waaaaaa
Marisa: “Better get going and get cleaned up.”
Panel 2: Both women nude near the picnic table. Flex is in the doorway of his cabin, nude. His banana cock dangling down.
Flex: “This was fun. I love you both.”
Marisa and Candace together: “I love you too.”
Panel 3: The rear view of both women standing at the dock as their husband’s boat comes back in. Grant and John are waving and look happy.
Page 83 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Group shot at night of all five sitting around a pit fire, laughing and drinking. Both women are staring at Flex or his shorts. His cock is plump and visible under his shorts.
Panel 2: Grant throwing a suitcase in the back of his car. Marisa is beside him holding Jack. She is in short shorts and a belly baring halter top. Her bra strap is visible. An older man, hippy type, hair pulled back in a pony tail, maybe in a Hawaiian shirt, very laid back looking. A car is pulling up behind him with the three blonde women in it.
Hippy: “Trust you had a good time.”
Marisa: “It was wonderful.”
Hippy: “My next rental flew out early to avoid a snowstorm. Don‘t mean to rush ya.”
Panel 3 The three blonde women are looking around Flex is staring at them by his bike. Mom is about 40, daughters 18.
Sister: “This is awesome.”
Mom: “You betcha.”
Other twin: “Lets get changed and hit the beach.”
Page 84 1 smaller horizontal panel and one larger one.
Panel 1: Flex standing by the hippy. Grant and Candace are loading their car.
Hippy: “Just flew in to Miami. From Minnesota.”
Flex: “No husband?”
Hippy: “Overseas military, I think.”
Panel 2: The woman standing outside the cabins. They are all blue eyed blondes. The twins look alike, but aren’t identical, are in bikinis and have breasts as magnificent as Marisa’s. The mom is in a more modest two piece suit. Her breasts are huge, bigger then the girls. She is very fit and her abs are visible on her belly. Flex’s head and the Hippys are visible.
Hippy: “I’ll change the linens while your on the beach.”
Flex: “Is my cabin available if I stay another week?”
Hippy: “Sure is.”
Page 85 horizontal rectangle and two squares
Panel 1: Grant, John, and Flex standing together. Grant and Flex are shaking hands. Flex is watching the new women disappear down the beach trail.
Grant: “Which one? The Mother or one of the daughters?”
Flex: “Yes.”
Panel 2: The couples are together by their cars and Flex is standing by himself.
John: “Good luck with that lot. Mom’s married and the girls are to young.”
Marisa: Snort!
Candace: Snort!
Panel 3: Flex hugging Marisa as John gets in the car. She’s holding the muscle mags with him on the cover.
Marisa: “Here, leave these on the picnic table. Put ideas in their heads.”
Flex: “Isa, you’re a delight.”
Page 86 1 horizontal rectangle and 4 squares.
Panel 1: Marisa and John in front seat driving. Marisa has a thought bubble showing her in a mini skirt, an low buttoned white blouse handing a file to the black lawyer who’s eyes are on her cleavage.
John: “Promise me you’ll wear that home.”
Marisa: “Sure. I plan on dressing a lot sexier now. If ya got it, flaunt it.”
Marisa: “I’ll do even better now.”
Panel 2: Marisa is pulling the top over her head. Showing her bra.
Panel 3: Marisa is unhooking her bra and her boobs have sprung free, nipples hard and dripping.
John: “WOW!”
Marisa: “Stupid bra keeps rubbing my nipples.”
Panel 4: Marisa topless hefting her big boobs.
Marisa: “I hope Jack’s thirsty soon. They’re feeling heavy.”
John: “I’m a little thirsty myself.”
Page 87 small horizontal rectangle and larger one.
Panel 1: Angled side view of Marisa in the seat with John behind her. The top is back on, but now her nipples are visible through it and poking it out. She’s checking her cell phone.
John: “Who is it?”
Marisa: “Lola. I texted her a few days ago saying I was sorry about her and Flex.”
Panel 2: Close up of Marisa reading her text. Her eyes are wide and she looks upset.
Marisa: “Says she misses us. Don’t feel bad. She still loves the big asshole, but he couldn’t stay faithful.”
John (off panel): “She knew that. She was the other woman once.”
Marisa: “It’s not the cheating. It’s his obsession with knocking up white women.”
Page 88 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1 Close up of John driving. He’s got one finger to his head making circular motions.
John: “Yeah, something wrong with his head. He knocked up three women in college. Told me he poked holes in the condoms to make them pop.”
Marisa (off panel): “And your friends with this guy?”
Panel 2: Marisa and John riding together. She’s still reading the phone.
Marisa: What kind of man does that?”
Marisa (thinking) He’s a monster… no, he’s a real man.
Marisa: “Flex knocked up her best friend Melissa.”
John: “Another female bodybuilder.
Panel 3 Roughly same image only Marisa looks horrified again.
Marisa: “He told her.. OHMYGOD!”
John: “What?”
Marisa: “He told her he had a vasectomy.”
Page 89 2 square and a large final rectangle.
Panel 1: John driving looking over at Marisa concerned.
John: “You sure you’re okay?”
Marisa: “Yeah, just my boobs are aching pull over so I can feed Jack.”
Panel 2: View of Marisa’s face looking out the window. Maybe palm trees are reflected in the glass. A tear is running down her cheek.
Marisa (thinking): I’m right between cycles… my most fertile time. Candace too I think.
Marisa (thinking): Jesus! I even helped enable him to fuck that mom and her daughters.
Panel 3: Nearly full view of Marisa sitting in the seat. Her cheeks still look teary, but she’s smiling now. Her hand is on her womb just under the emerald navel stud. Her nipples are poking out her top and wet marks have appeared.
Marisa (thinking): There’s life growing there, I can feel it.
Marisa (thinking): So much sperm in my womb, but it felt so good…
Marisa (thinking): Getting horny just thinking about him.
Marisa (thinking): What a man. What a cock.
Marisa (thinking): We’re lucky Flex wants to fuck us and put babies in our bellies. That mom and her twins should thank me. Candace too.
Marisa (thinking): No regrets.
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