Jenny Richardson- age 25 Curly brown hair. Jenny is very fit and lean. She spends her days working out and tanning, so she should have some musculature such as defined abs. Her breasts are DD. She should have a noticeably hairy bush in the beginning as there is a shaving scene later.
Charles Richardson- age 30 Short brown hair. He is not much to look at. He can be pudgy with a beer belly or very lean with no muscles and a slight gut. His penis is very small at 5” with small balls to match.
Mark Stanford- Older black man in his late fifties to early sixties. He is very fit and muscular, but his body shape is leaner. His hair is gray. Maybe he has a bald patch or is completely bald, but has a gray goatee to help show his age. His cock is a standard huge foot long or so.
Jerome Stanford- Marks’s son. He can resemble his father, maybe also bald, but his goatee is black. He is in his late thirties to early forties. He is recently out of prison where all he did is lift weights so his torso and muscles are all bigger and more defined then his dad’s. His cock is also slightly longer and thicker then his dad’s. Jerome can be drawn to look more thuggish, do-rag, prison tats, etc.
Donna Miller- Jenny’s best friend about the same age. She can have any features or hair you desire. I wouldn’t mind a slightly heavier woman that’s got a plump ass and big tits (bigger then Jenny‘s), but still looks great in a bikini. Either way, she’s a hot little number also.
Bill Miller- Donna’s husband. Good looking and fit, but Jerome towers over him and makes him look small. He’s a good match for his wife.
Janice Silverstein- The Miller’s neighbor. She will be the star of part 3. She is an older woman, mid-sixties, amazingly fit and sexy for her age. Her hair is white and she wears black rimmed glasses. Her breasts are huge and should sag, nipples pointed down, when not supported. She is on a hormonal supplement that is making her horny and has made her already large breasts go up a cup size.
Moshe Silverstein- Janice’s husband. He is in his mid-eighties, 20 yrs older then his wife. He looks his age, thin and frail. They’re a Jewish couple and he might be wearing a yarmulke. He doesn’t appear much.
Deon: Jerome’s friend from prison. He’s big and muscular. He’s darker black, African features like a flat nose. His cock is as big as Jerome’s, maybe thicker.
Cover: Something derivative of the previous two and focusing on Janice, maybe in her yoga outfit.
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaoscomics.
Page 1: horizontal top, 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Janice at the door to her house. She is wearing yoga pants and a top that shows off her belly and hugs her enormous rack. She is blowing her husband a kiss goodbye. He is in a suit and tie, yarmulke on head.
Janice: “Bye. Have a good day at the office, sweetie.”
Moshe: “See you later tonight, Janice.”
Panel 2: Close up of Janice’s upper torso, showing her breasts.
Janice: “My radio’s dead. Pick me up two D batteries on the way home, Moshe.”
Moshe (off panel): “Sure two double D’s.” (either right under or above her breasts as a joke though her breasts are more EE or FF)
Panel 3: Janice in a yoga pose (google yoga poses for ideas. This one should be standing on one foot, other foot folded up, bent at the knee. Hands together in front). She has a nice backyard and is standing on a patio. The background is a wooden fence with spaces to peek through.
Jerome’s voice over the fence: “What about the neighbors?”
Donna’s voice over the fence: “It’s safe. Janice always plays music when she’s doing her yoga.”
Page 2: 4 even panels
Panel 1: Janice in a different pose. Maybe bending sideways or seated.
Donna voice: “Oh god! Fuck me! Give me that big cock.”
Janice (thinking) Sounds like Bill and Donna are going at it.
Panel 2: Same scene, different pose.
Donna over fence: “That’s it stud, make me cum.”
Jerome: “You like that big cock, slut?”
Janice (thinking) Lucky bitch. If I was married to a hunk like Bill, I’d do him every night.
Panel 3: Same scene, different pose
Donna: “AAHH! CUMMING!”
Janice (thinking) Damn! Listening to those two go at it is making me horny.
Janice (thinking) It’s not fair. She’s on her third orgasm already and Moshe hasn’t given me one in 40 years.
Panel 4: Close up side view of Janice’s head and upper torso as she bends down to the fence. Light through a knot hole in the fence is lighting up her eye.
Janice (thinking) I shouldn’t peek, but….
Donna through the fence: “I love your black cock.”
Janice (thinking) BLACK!
Page 3 horizontal top, 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Opposite view. Jerome giving it to Donna doggy style in her backyard. Maybe he’s pulling her hair like reins, maybe he has one hand squeezing an ass cheek and his thumb in her anus. Janice’s eye might be visible through the fence behind them.
Noise around Donna: Unh! Unh! UNH!
Jerome: “Take that black cock, bitch.”
Janice over the fence: “OH MY GOD!”
Panel 2: Donna on her knees before Jerome. His cock is rampant and ejaculating all over her tits and face. Her mouth is open, tongue out to catch it. Janice’s peeping eye is visible through the fence behind them.
Panel 3: Mark standing with a weed eater over his shoulder. Janice is on all fours by the fence (or bent leaning against it). She’s looking up at him embarrassed, maybe her cheeks are red. Her nipples are now hard and visible through the yoga top.
Mark: “AHEM!”
Janice: “Mr. Stanford! Oh yes, it’s yard day. I’ll leave you to your work.”
Page 4: horizontal top and three vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Janice entering her home through a sliding glass door. Mark can be seen over her shoulder peeping through the fence.
Mark: “Heh heh heh.”
Janice (thinking): So embarrassed. Can’t believe she’s cheating on Bill.”
Panel 2: Janice in bedroom. She’s pulled her top off, but is still in her yoga pants. Her breasts are bare, huge, the sag points her nipples down. Her nipples are hard. Maybe some blue vein lines are visible in her breasts to show her age. The bed should have small posts on the four corners as her robe is going to catch on one later.
Janice (thinking): That black man’s penis was so huge.
Panel 3: Janice bent at the waist so that her breasts are dangling. She’s pulling her pants down.
Janice (thinking): Damn, I’m horny!”
Panel 4: Janice laying on her back on the bed. Her pubic hair is white too. She’s holding a normal sized bullet shaped flesh colored dildo.
Janice (thinking): You seem small now old friend.
Page 5 horizontal top, three vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Janice laying back, legs spread, pushing the dildo into herself, while her other fingers spread her pussy lips. Her eyes are closed.
Noise: Mmmmmmm
Janice (thinking): Wish this thing were bigger.
Panel 2: The bottom is the top of Janice’s head, eyes closed with a cloud outlined dream balloon is most of the frame. It shows her and Moshe holding hands on the beach 40 yrs ago. Janice is in a bikini. Her breasts are huge, but a size smaller. Her glasses are the same, but her hair is now dark black. Moshe still wears his yamulke. His shirt is off or he‘s wearing a Hawaiian shit unbuttoned. He is thin and has no muscles to speak of. The couple seem happy and are smiling.
Panel 3: Dream outlined picture of younger Janice sitting on a bed nude, leaning back on her hands. Her breasts don’t sag. Moshe is standing before her, penis hard and sticking straight out, but it’s so small, maybe the smallest of all the husband’s so far.
Panel 4: Exact same view only Moshe has turned into Jerome’s cock.
Page 6: horizontal top, 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Side view or elevated down view between Janice’s spread legs. Her feet are on the bed and her hips are raised off the bed. Fluid is squirting around the dildo in her pussy. There is either a ghost image of Jerome kneeling on the bed between her legs or a thought balloon showing his face or ejaculating cock.
Jerome: “Take that black cock, bitch.”
Janice (thinking): Fuck me with your big black cock.”
Janice: “Aaah! Cumming!”
Panel 2: Nude Janice standing in front of bathroom mirrored medicine cabinet. She’s emptying two pills from a bottle into the palm of her hand.
Janice (thinking): What’s gotten into me? Must be these stupid hormone pills.”
Janice (thinking): They make me horny all the time and Moshe hasn’t had an erection in 20 years.
Panel 3: Janice in front of mirror in bathroom now hefting her breasts. Her nipples are hard and she’s pinching one. She looks like she’s enjoying it.
Janice (thinking) Damn pills made my breasts bigger too.
Janice (thinking) And my nipples are so sensitive.
Page 7 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Janice sitting at a desk looking at a laptop. She can be nude, breasts sagging, back in her yoga outfit, or in a bra and panties. Her dildo is sitting straight up on the desk.
Janice: “Sorry old friend, but I think it’s time for an upgrade.”
Janice: “Should I get a big white dildo or black one? Decisions. Decisions.”
Panel 2: Angled view of the computer screen showing several black dildos and her fingers on the mouse and keyboard.
Janice: “Looks like the big ones only come in black.”
Janice: “I guess that answers that question.”
Panel 3: The outside of a prison. Jerome is leaning against back of the Stanford and son pick up watching a guard open the gate for a big muscles black man.
Deon: “Yo J.”
Jerome: “Deon my man. Welcome back to society bro.”
Page 8 horizontal top, vertical left side, and two squares stacked on the right.
Panel 1: View through windshield of pick up as Jerome drives and Deon is in the passenger seat.
Deon: “Mowing lawns huh?”
Jerome: “Yep, doesn’t pay much, but there’s fringe benefits and I gots plans to makes us some cash.”
Deon: “I aint goin back ta jail, bro.”
Jerome: “This is all on the up and up. Trust me.”
Panel 2: Janice saying goodbye to her husband again at the front door. This time she’s wearing a short terry cloth robe belted around her waist and displaying cleavage.
Janice: “Have a good day, sweetie.”
Moshe: “Bye dear.”
Janice (thinking) Just hurry up and go.
Header: One week later
Panel 3: Janice upper torso tearing open a cardboard box she received in the mail.
Janice (thinking) I can’t wait to try this thing out.
Panel 4: Janice removing a foot long realistic black dildo from the box.
Janice: “Well hello there, stud.”
Page 9 horizontal top and bottom, with 2 squares in middle.
Panel 1: Top down view of Janice on the bed. The robe is open displaying her nude body. Her legs are spread and she’s working the dildo into her pussy.
Janice: “Oh my god this feels amazing.”
Panel 2: Close up of her crotch showing both her hands on the bottom of the dildo forcing it into her pussy. Fluid is shooting out around the didlo.
Janice: “Oh shit! Cumming already.”
Panel 3: Torso shot. She’s taken most of the dildo. Now her hands are squeezing her hard nipples.
Janice (thinking) Nipples so hard and sensitive.
Janice (thinking) Pussy so full… so good.”
Janice (thinking) Gonna cum again…
Panel 4: Side view or angled view showing her crotch. Her hips are off the bed. She’s still squeezing her nipples. The dildo is shooting out of her pussy along with a lot of fluid. PTEW! Is by the dildo.
Janice: “AAAH FUCK!”
Page 10 left vertical panel and 2 square on right.
Panel 1: Janice smiling as she holds the dildo. It’s still dripping.
Janice (thinking) Wow! Two huge orgasms. Never had two with the little white one.
Janice (thinking) Might have kept going too if it hadn’t shot out of my pussy.
Janice: “I think this is the beginning of a beautiful relationship.”
Panel 2: Janet in her yoga outfit by the bed. The dildo is sitting up on the bed leaning against a pillow like a young girl might have a teddy bear sitting. Janet. Is dropping her old dildo in a waste basket by the bed.
Janice: “You were a loyal friend, but I’m sorry, your services are no longer required.”
Janice: “Blackie, I’ll see you after my workout.”
Panel 3: Front view of Janice posing in her yard, her arms are over her head and she’s leaning sideways.
Janice (thinking) If the real thing’s that good, I can see why Donna’s cheating on Bill.
Page 11 2 square top with horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Back view of Janice looking at the fence. She’s in a random yoga pose.
Jerome voice over fence: “Hey baby.”
Donna voice over fence: “Jerome! I was just thinking about you.”
Janice (thinking) Oh my god! He’s back!
Panel 2: Janice bending to look through the hole again.
Janice (thinking) I shouldn’t peep, but…
Donna through fence: “Who’s that?”
Jerome through fence: “Dis is my boy, Deon.”
Panel 3: Donna in her bikini sandwiched between Jerome and Deon, shirtless, in shorts or jeans, work boots. Jerome is squeezing her ass and untying her top. Donna has her hand on Deon’s hard cock sticking out over his pants. Janice’s eye is visible through the fence.
Deon: “I think I like the fringe benefits.”
Page 12 Two square at top, large horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Nude Donna kneeling between the two men. She’s sucking one cock while stroking the other.
Panel 2: Donna’s upper torso rearing back as Deon’s cock explodes all over her face and tits. She’s holding Jerome’s cock.
Noise: SPLURT!
Deon (off panel): Sorry, it’s been five years since a woman sucked me off.”
Panel 3: Donna on all fours, getting it from Deon behind her and sucking Jerome. Janice’s eye is visible behind her through the fence. Motion lines show Deon’s hips moving.
Noises: Slurp! Fwap! Fwap! Fwap!
Page 13: 2 square top, 2 square bottoms, and a horizontal in the middle.
Panel 1: Artsy panel framed by the circular knot hole showing Jenny in a short summer pull over dress. She’s not wearing a bra and her nipples are visible through it.
Jenny: “What have we here?”
Janice not visible (thinking): HA! Slut just got caught.
Panel 2: Same framed panel only Jenny is holding the dress and nude but for panties.
Jenny: “Don’t be so selfish Donna.”
Janice (thinking) What the hell?
Panel 3: Front view of Jenny and Donna both riding one of the men as they lay on her lawn or patio. Between them is the fence and knot hole showing Janice’s eye.
Panel 4: Rear view of Janice’s ass, bent as she stares through the hole. The yoga pants are so tight, they hug her pussy lips. A growing wet spot has spread out from them.
Panel 5: Same view, only now Janice’s hand has appeared between her legs and she’s rubbing her slit through the pants.
Page 14: horizontal top and bottom with 2 squares in the middle.
Panel 1: Side view of Janice bent over looking through the fence. She’s still trying to finger herself. Mark is standing behind her holding the weed eater looking down at her ass.
Mark: AHEM! Need help Mrs. Silverstein?”
Panel 2: View over Mark’s shoulder of Janice now standing, looking wanton and embarrassed. Her hairs mussed. Maybe her glasses are askew on her nose. Her nipples are clearly hard and visible through the top.
Janice: “SHIT! Mr. Stanford? No thanks. I lost a contact… no, I mean I thought I heard something.”
Panel 3: View over Marks’s shoulder of Janet disappearing through her sliding glass door.
Janice: “I’ll just leave you to your work.”
Panel 4: Upper torso view of Jenny and Donna arm to arm, both holding their breasts together while two black cocks cum all over their face and tits. Between their heads is the knot showing Mark’s eye.
Noise: Splurt! Splurt!
Mark (thinking) Heh! Heh! Heh!
Page 15 4 even panels.
Panel 1: Janice sitting on the bed naked, leaning back a little using the black dildo, motion lines or the dildo is blured showing she’s working it hard and fast.
Janice: “Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!”
Panel 2: Close up between her legs of the buried dildo, her hand holding it, and fluid pouring out of her pussy.
Janice (off panel): “YYYEEESSS!”
Panel 3: Janice nude, head back under a shower.
Janice (thinking) What’s gotten into me?”
Janice (thinking) I know what hasn’t gotten into me, a real live penis in 20 years.
Panel 4: Janice in her kitchen with a towel wrapped around her torso. She’s got a pitcher of lemonade and is drinking from a glass while looking out the window at Mark pushing a lawnmower.
Janice (thinking) Poor man, looks hot.
Page 16 4 even panels
Panel 1: Mark all sweaty by the lawnmower with Janice in the background by her sliding glass door. She’s holding a tray with the lemonade on it. She’s wearing her terry cloth robe displaying impressive cleavage, more then when she had it on earlier as she’s now wearing a cupless bra to make her breasts look firm, but that‘s not visible through the robe.
Janice: “Would you like some lemonade, Mr. Stanford?”
Mark: “That would be wonderful.”
Janice: “Come in and get out of the heat.”
Panel 2: Janice in the background setting the tray on her table. Mark is looking at a stereo system with lots of cd’s in a rack.
Mark: “You’re into jazz and the blues? I’ve seen many of these live.”
Janice: “So have I. My dad owned a jazz club.”
Panel 3: Mark and Janice sitting at a table with the pitcher on it. Mark is holding the glass near his lips.
Mark: “Delicious, Mrs. Silverstein.”
Janice: “Call me Janice.”
Mark: “Mark.”
Panel 4: Mark seated holding out his glass. Janice is pouring the lemonade from the pitcher, missing the glass and pouring it in his lap.
Janice: “Refill?”
Mark: “Yes, please…Aaaaaahhh!
Janice: “Oh god! I’m so sorry.”
Page 17 2 horizontal top and 2 square bottom.
Panel 1: The upstairs hallway just outside Janice’s bedroom. Janice is by the door to her bedroom. Mark is standing near her dripping wet from the lemonade. Between them is a picture on the wall showing Janice, her daughter, and granddaughter all posing together in bikinis. The granddaughter is nearly identical to the Janice from the dream sequence even down to the glasses. The daughter is about 40, same hair color with maybe a gray streak, but no glasses. Her breasts are as big as her mom’s. Not too much detail is needed here, but there will be a close up of the picture later.
Mark: “Really, Mrs. Silverstein. I’m fine just hosing off outside.”
Janice: “Nonsense. Use my shower and I’ll throw your clothes in the dryer. I insist.”
Panel 2: Split panel showing a nude Mark in the bathroom and Janice on the other side of the door. He’s reaching through the gap in the door holding his underwear. Janice is already holding his pants and shirt. His underwear is white, but with yellowish stains and holes. Janice is looking at it in distaste.
Janice: “I’ll rinse these off and throw them in the dryer.”
Panel 3: Mark under the shower washing around his penis. It’s hard and sticking out. A picture balloon shows him thinking of Janice in her yoga outfit.
Panel 3: Janice at the kitchen sink rinsing his clothes off.
Page 18 horizontal top, two vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Janice standing near the end of her bed near the small bedpost. Jerome is coming out of the bathroom with a towel around his waist. His penis is bulging it out.
Mark: “That felt good.”
Janice: “Your clothes should be dry in about 40 minutes.
Panel 2: Mark seated on the bed near the post. Janice is just in front of him. He’s reached out and is pulling the belt on her robe.
Janice: “Lets go back downsta…MR. STANFORD?”
Mark: “Just unwrapping my present.”
Panel 3: Mark now standing on the right. Janice is standing by the bed with the bottom of her robe over the bed post. He’s loosened the robe and more cleavage is showing, maybe it’s open down to her navel. She’s pointing angrily at the exit. He’s standing hands up in surrender.
Janice: “Get out now.”
Mark: “You want some black meat woman, quit pretending.”
Page 19 3 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Janice in the same pose, looking down at Mark’s cock. Her hand might be up to her mouth or on her chest is surprise. Mark has dropped the towel and his cock is sticking straight out.
Janice: “I’m a married wom…OH MY GOD!”
Janice (thinking) He’s HUGE!
Mark: “Is this what you want?”
Janice: “No.”
Panel 2: Basically the same pose. More of the bed is in the picture along with her black dildo leaning against the pillows. Janice’s face is red.
Mark: “You watched my son fuck Donna, you spilled the lemonade on purpose, and you left your black dildo out for me to find.”
Janice: “No. I forgot it was there.”
Panel 3: Same scene. Janice has moved towards the door. Her robe is being pulled as it was caught in the bedpost. The cupless bra is supporting her breasts from sagging and she’s wearing sexy little panties.
Mark’s eyes are focused on her breasts.
Janice: “I don’t care if they’re still wet, I’m getting your clothes.”
Word around Janice’s mouth EEK!
Mark: “Dayumn!”
Page 20 4 even panels
Panel 1: They’re upper torsos. Janice is in Mark’s arms. She is rearing back in shock. He is hunched over and has one of her nipples clamped between his lips. He is pulling on it and her nipple is stretched out.
Janice: “OOOH GOD!”
Panel 2: Same scene only she is no longer in shock, but is getting turned on. Her eyes are closed or lidded, mouth slightly open. She is still rearing back. Mark is flickering his tongue over the nipple of her far breast. Motion lines or ghost images might show her nipple moving. Drops of saliva might be flying out around his tongue. His fingers are pinching and tugging the nipple in the foreground.
Janice: “YYEESS!!”
Panel 3: Full scene of them embracing. They are now kissing. His hips are adjusted so that his cock is sticking out and she is stroking it with her hand.
Panel 4: Full scene with Mark pushing down on her head. She is still holding his cock, but not it is rearing up in front of her breasts. Her head is down so that the end of his cock is nearing her lips.
Mark: “Now suck that black cock.”
Janice: “ No, I don’t even do that for my husband.”
Page 21 horizontal, 2 square, horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Angled down view of Janice on her back on the bed, legs hanging over the sides, spread open. Mark is between them, his cock rearing up hard and rampant.
Mark: “We’ll just fuck then.”
Mark: “But if you ever want this cock again, you’re gonna learn to suck it.”
Janice: “This will be the only time.”
Mark: “Whatever you say, baby. You guide it in.”
Panel 2: Close up of her crotch. Her arm is reaching down, hand grabbing his cock as it approaches her pussy.
Panel 3: Same view only his cock head is now pushing into her.
Janice off panel: “Yesssss!”
Panel 4: Side view of Janice on her back, with Mark leaning over her, hips thrust forward, back arched. The base of his cock is visible sticking out of her with a lot of fluid dripping off his balls.
Mark: “How long has it been since you had a real man in yo pussy?”
Janice: “Moshe hasn’t had an erection in 20 years.”
Mark: “I said real man. Little white pencil dicks don’t count.”
Janice: “You’re my first then.”
Page 22 split top and bottom panels.
Panel 1: God view of Janice on her back now with her head on the pillow. Mark is kneeling on the bed between her legs, her knees cupped in his arms. The black dildo is laying against the pillow near her head.
Motion lines show her breasts jiggling. Fluid might be shooting out around the conjoined crotches. Noise around their crotches: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk! Squish!
Janice (thinking) So big. So deep. I’m gonna cum. Finally, a real live cock is making me cum.
Janice: “AAAAHHHH!”
Panel 2: Side view of the same position. Her hips are raised up off the bed and his shaft can be seen penetrating her with fluids spraying out. She is squeezing her own breasts. Noise around crotches: Fwap! Fwap! Fwap!
Janice: “OHMYGOD! I’m having another… AAAAHHHH!”
Mark: “Damn woman, them’s some explosive orgasms.”
Page 23 left side vertical panel and 2 square on right.
Panel 1: Janice now lowering herself over his erect cock.
Janice: “Your cock’s amazing, Mark.”
Panel 2: View down Mark’s body of Janice riding his cock as he lays on his back. His hand may be reaching up squeezing one breast or she may be squeezing her own. Motion lines show her bouncing.
Noise: Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!
Janice: “AH! AH! AH! AAAAHHHH!!!”
Panel 3: Janice mounted on Mark. She is leaning forward so that her tits are dangling in his face and he is running his tongue over a nipple with SLURP! Around it.
Janice: “I love it Mark. I can’t stop… CCUUMMIINNGG!”
Page 24: horizontal top and 4 square bottoms.
Panel 1: Janice on her knees, head in the pillow facing the viewer. Her ass is up. Mark is kneeling behind her, cock hard and rampant, rearing up above her ass, literally dripping from all her orgasms.
Janice: “More. Please? Fuck me more. Please?”
Panel 2: View from his perspective of her ass with the end of his cock pushing back inside her. Her anus is centered. He has one hand on the base of his cock and the other gripping an ass cheek.
Panel 3: Same view with most of his cock buried. He has one hand on the black dildo and is pushing the head of it against her anus.
Panel 4: Close up of her face laying on the pillow. Her eyes are wide in shock.
Janice: “NO! Not my ass. It’s too big…. AAAAAHHHHH!
Panel 5: Another view of her ass. This time the dildo is sticking out if it with most of it buried in her anus.
Page 25: top half horizontal and three square bottoms
Panel 1: Side view of them on the bed. An x-ray shows both his cock and the dildo with his cock spewing sperm into her womb.
Janice: “YYEESS! CUMMING! SO GOOD! STILL CUMMING!
Panel 2: Ass view with his cock still buried, sperm now leaking out around his shaft. The dildo is still buried.
Janice off panel: “CAN”T STOP CUMMING!
Panel 3: Ass view, his cock is out, spent, plump and bending down. Her orgasm and sperm is shooting out from her pussy. The dildo is still in her.
Janice off panel: “Still cumming!”
Panel 4: Ass view without Mark. The dildo is still buried. A flood of sperm is dripping from her pussy.
Janice off panel: “Sooo good.”
Page 26: horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: Near sliding glass door, Mark is dressed. Janice is in her robe, but it hangs open displaying her nude body, but for the cupless bra and her glasses.
Janice: “Are your clothes dry?”
Mark: “They’re fine. You sure this was just a one time thing?”
Panel 2: Janice upper torso in front of his crotch. She’s pulling his zipper or his shorts down.
Panel 3: Janice now sucking the tip of his cock. It’s sticking out, but bent slightly down.
Janice (thinking) This isn’t so bad.
Janice (thinking) I’ll just stop before he cums in my mouth.
Page 27: 2 vertical tops, and a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Janice now with half his cock in her mouth.
Janice (thinking): Mmmm, I’m actually enjoying this.
Janice (thinking): It’s a privilege to suck a cock like this.
Panel 2: Deon standing with his arms around both Donna and Jenny. All three are nude. Both girls have their hands on his plump but soft cock. Jerome is in the foreground dressed.
Jerome: “I’m gonna check on dad. His mower quit over an hour ago.”
Deon: “I’ll keep da ladies company. I gots one or two loads left in me.”
Panel 3: View over Deon’s shoulder of him holding his camera out filming Janice sucking off his dad through the sliding glass door of her house.
Jerome (thinking): You go old man.
Page 28 horizontal top and 4 square bottoms
Panel 1: Long view from the side of Janice’s face staring at Mark’s very engorged cock. She’s cupping his balls with one palm and stroking his shaft with the other. Motion lines show her hand moving or noises around her hand say stroke! Stroke!
Janice: “Thanks for letting me suck you.”
Mark (off panel): Baby, you is a natural.”
Panel 2: View looking down from Mark’s perspective of Janice with just the head of his cock in her mouth. His hands are holding the side of her head.
Mark: “Gonna blow.”
Janice (thinking) Oh no! I can’t pull back.
Panel 3: Side view of her face with an x-ray showing his big cock head spraying it’s load in her mouth.
Janice (thinking) Yech! No, it’s good.
Panel 4: Janice holding his cock, lips around the tip. An x-ray shows her swallowing it down her throat. Gulp gulp is around her throat.
Janice (thinking) I love it. I want more.
Panel 5: Side view of her face, his cock is out now spraying one big load all over her face above her mouth. Her eyes are closed and his sperm is covering them. Her mouth is open and her tongue is out, trying to catch more sperm.
Janice (thinking): I can’t see.
Page 29 2 vertical top panels and 2 horizontal bottoms. The bottoms are side by side not stacked.
Panel 1: Janice standing, eyes closed with sperm still on her face. A black hand is holding her wrist leading her somewhere. It’s Jerome, but she thinks it’s Mark.
Janice: “Slow down Mark, I can’t see.”
Panel 2: Front view of Janice squatting down over Jerome’s cock, but you can’t see that it’s him yet. They are on a couch.
Janice: “How can you be hard again?”
Panel 3: shot of just Janice’s eyes. They are closed and dripping sperm. She is wiping sperm out of one.
Panel 4: Same shot of her eyes only now they are clean and wide eyed in shock.
Page 30 horizontal top, 2 vertical bottoms
Panel 1: Side view showing Janice sitting in Jerome’s lap. She’s still staring at him in shock. He’s grinning. Mark is standing in the background still nude.
Janice: “Jerome! Mark?”
Mark: “I share everything with my son.”
Jerome: “Come on an work that pussy Mrs. Silverstein.”
Panel 2: Side view of Janice leaning forward. Half his dripping cock is visible sticking out of her. Jerome is sucking one nipple or has his face buried in her tits.
Janice: “Gawd! I’m cumming!”
Panel 3: Rear view over Mark’s shoulder of Janice’s ass with Jerome’s cock buried balls deep. Jerome is leaning around her shoulder so that his face is visible. Mark’s cock is in his hand. It’s full size, but soft and floppy.
Jerome: “Damn dad. This slut has some powerful ass orgasms.”
Mark: “That’s Mrs. Silverstein boy. Show the lady some respect.”
Page 31 2 vertical tops and a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: More of a close up view of Janice’s ass riding Jerome’s cock. The base of his shaft and balls are dripping. Motion lines show her riding him with noise Fuk! Fuk! Fuk!. Mark’s fully hard cock in his hand is pointed at it.
Panel 2: Similar view only Mark’s cock head is pressing down hard on her anus which is opening for him.
Panel 3: Side view of Jerome on the couch leaning back. Janice is in his lap, back arched, boobs in his face. He could be sucking or squeezing them. She’s screaming. (Aaaaaahhhhh!) coming from her mouth. Mark is leaning over her with most of his cock in her ass.
Page 32 2 vertical panels, 1 horizontal panel.
Panel 1: View from Mark’s perspective of Janice in his lap leaning back now. Jerome’s hands are on her tits. Her head is turned and Mark is leaning over her shoulder, their tongues teasing each other. Mark’s hands are on her waist or hips.
Janice (thinking) So good. So good. So good.
Panel 2: View from Mark’s perspective of his cock sticking out of her ass. It’s slick and motion lines show it moving. Maybe more fuk! Fuk! Fuk!. His hands are on her hips. She’s leaning down further, head turned and kissing Jerome.
Panel 3: Side view of them on the couch. X-ray’s show both cocks cumming inside her.
Janice: “YES! I LOVE IT!”
Page 33 2 vertical top and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Mark and Jerome dressing. Janice is behind them on the couch, head down, ass sticking up, dripping semen from both holes.
Mark: “Same time next week Janice?”
Janice: (maybe a jagged word balloon) “Yeeessss, Maaaarkkk!”
Jerome: “I’ll be in touch to.”
Panel 2: A close up of Janice’s dripping ass and pussy with Jerome’s hand holding his cell phone out and taking a picture of her.
Jerome (off panel): “I got plans for you.”
Panel 3: A large bed. Donna and Jenny are on it embracing. They could be nude or wearing crotchless panties and garters with nylons.
Donna: “I love you Mrs. White.”
Jenny: “And I love you Mrs. White.”
Header: EPILOGUE
Page 34 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: Angled side view showing Donna and Jenny 69ing. Donna is on top and her tongue is licking Jenny’s clit.
Jenny: “I have a big surprise for my wife.”
Panel 2: Both women kneeling on the bed. Jenny has put on a large strap on black dildo. Donna is staring at it in lust.
Donna: Where’d ya get that thing and why black?”
Jenny: “The big ones only come in black.”
Donna: “If there were men that big, I wouldn’t be a lesbian.”
Page 35 2 vertical and one horizontal
Panel 1: God view down of Donna on her back. Jenny is guiding the strap on between her legs.
Donna: “It’s so big.”
Panel 2: View from Donna’s perspective looking up at Jenny with the dildo sticking out of her pussy. Fluid is squirting out around the dildo.
Donna: “Oh my god!”
Jenny: “You’re soaked? Should I be jealous?”
Panel 3: Side view of the room. Donna is on her back on the bed, Jenny between her legs. Two black men in ski masks have entered the room through the door. It’s Jerome and Deon. They have white tank tops and sweat pants on. Donna and Jenny are looking at the intruders.
Donna and Jenny: “EEEK! THIEVES!”
Jerome: “Well what do we have here?”
Deon: “A couple of Lesbos in need of real men.”
Page 36 horizontal top, 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: Angled view down the bed. Both women are on their backs. Donna still has her legs spread. Jerome nude is climbing on the bed with his cock hard and sticking up. Deon’s cock is hanging down. He is pantless and pulling the shirt over his head. Both men still wear their masks.
Jenny: “Get out NOW!”
Donna: “Look at their cocks Jenny, they’re like the dildo.”
Panel 2: View from Donna’s perspective. She’s raised her hips, lifting herself up for him. Jerome is between her legs, cock hard and rising up above her.
Donna: “Fuck me with that big black cock.”
Panel 2: View from the headboard of Jenny grabbing it. She’s kneeling leaning forward. The dildo still rises from her crotch. Deon is behind her guiding his cock in.
Jenny: “Don’t give in Donna. Fight it.”
Page 37 horizontal top, 2 vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: View from headboard. Donna is now riding Jerome. Deon is kneeling fucking Jenny from behind. She is sitting up so that her breasts and dildo are visible. Her head is turned to look at Deon and he is squeezing one breast.
Donna: “I’m still a dyke, but I love their big cocks.”
Jenny: “Me too. Black men fuck so good.”
Panel 2: Janice entering the room. Her hair is up, glasses on. She’s got a white blouse on and her nipples are visible through it as she is wearing the cupless bra to keep her breasts from sagging. She has a short skirt on.
Janice: “Hey girls, it’s mom. I just stopped by…. OH MY GOD!”
Donna (off panel): “MOM! Get out of here.”
Panel 3: Same view of Janice in the doorway only now Mark in a ski mask is behind her, one hand over her mouth and the other is ripping her blouse open. Buttons flying, boobs visible.
Mark: “I got the old broad, boys.”
Janice: “What the HELL!” Aaaaaahhh!”
Page 38 pinup
NOTE: every scene they keep their ski masks on though they might roll up the bottoms to that their mouths and chins are free.
Panel 1: God view of the entire bed. Janice is now in the middle on her back getting fucked by Mark who is standing at the edge of the bed holding her ankles spread. The skirt is bunched up around her waist. Deon is kneeling on the left doing Jenny from behind. The belt holding her strap on might be visible. He might have his hand in her hair holding it like a rein so that her head is back. Jerome is on the right on his back. Donna is in his lap leaning back so that her breasts and body are visible.
Janice: “Your father can’t fuck like this.”
Deon: “Take that black cock, bitch.”
Donna: “I love it. I love it.”
Jerome: “Here comes the money shot.”
Page 39 3 horizontals
Panel 1: Donna’s torso laying between Jerome’s legs. She’s jerking (motion lines) his cock off and it is blasting all over her face and breasts. The picture might be framed as it through a camcorder with a REC in the corner.
Noise: SPLURT!
Donna: “Oooo, so much cum.”
Panel 2: Angled view down of Jenny, still with the black dildo rearing up between her legs. She’s squeezing her breasts together, mouth open, tongue out. Deon hand is jerking his cock and hosing her face and tits with sperm. Motion lines show it jerking. Also framed through a camera.
Noise: SPLURT!
Jenny: “I want every last drop.”
Panel 3: God view down of Janice on her back squeezing her tits together. Her mouth is open tongue out. Mark’s hand is jerking his cock. A long strand of sperm covers one of the lenses in her glasses and runs down to a nipple. More semen is spraying out and already on her face and tits. Also framed through a camera.
Janice: “It’s raining sperm.”
Page 40 3 vertical panels.
Panel 1: Jerome still nude standing beside Donna’s husband Bill. They are looking at the view screen on Bill’s camera. Jerome has either taken the mask off or rolled it up so that it’s just a knit cap.
Jerome: “Great camera work Bill.”
Bill: “Thanks.”
Panel 2: Nude Jenny and Donna standing together toweling sperm off themselves. Jenny still wears the strap on.
Panel 3: Janice kneeling on the bed, toweling herself or she’s holding her glasses trying to clean the lens. Deon’s erect cock is in the panel.
Deon: “I ain’t had you yet. Lay down.”
Page 41 horizontal top and bottom. 2 squares in the middle. I haven’t done a scene like this before and you can skip this page if you don’t want to show Deon with the dildo in his ass.
Panel 1: Side view of Deon (he’s taken the mask off) leaning over Janice. His cock is in her.
Janice (thinking) Oh god! He’s got me cumming already.”
Panel 2: Deon’s ass and balls. Her pussy is spread wide around his shaft, her orgasm shooting out.
Panel 3: Same view only now Deon’s anus is being spread open by Jenny’s dildo.
Panel 4: Janice on her back, legs up around Deon’s hips. And xray shows him cumming in her womb. Jenny is kneeling behind Deon with the dildo shoved up his ass. Behind them is Bill filming the scene.
Janice: “Aaaaahhh!
Deon: “UNH! Shove it deep.”
Page 42 top and bottom panel
Panel 1: Group scene. Jenny talking to Deon. She’s holding the dildo now. Donna looking at the camcorder in Bill’s hands. Jerome standing in the center. All are nude, but for Bill. Mark is nude standing by Janice who has the skirt pulled down and the white blouse on. The buttons have been torn so she’s holding it closed with one hand.
Deon: “I learned to like it in prison.”
Donna: “Let me see…oooo I look good.”
Jerome: “That’s a wrap people.”
Janice: “Walk me home, Mark.”
Mark: “Sure baby.”
Panel 2: Backside of Janice and Mark (now dressed) walking in her backyard to her sliding glass door. They are holding hands. Her other hand is still holding her blouse closed in the front. Sperm might be leaking from between her legs leaving a trail.
Janice: “I hated it Mark. I don’t want to make adult movies.”
Mark: “Me either. I’ll tell Deon we’re out.”
Page 43 2 vertical panels and 2 square on the right.
Panel 1: View over Deon’s shoulder. Janice is standing at the door to her bedroom. She’s not holding the blouse. It’s open showing her belly and breasts. She might be caressing one breast. The picture is visible on the wall.
Janice: “It made me feel dirty. Come make me feel better.”
Panel 2: Nude Janice embracing and kissing a shirtless Mark. She’s reached in his pants and is stroking his semi hard cock.
Panel 3: View down of Janice’s head with her lips around Mark’s cock.
Noise: Slurp!
Panel 4: View of Janice’s lower body. Her hand is guiding Mark’s cock between her legs
Page 44 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Janice on her back on the bed. Mark in on her in the missionary. They are kissing. There is a heart around Janice’s head.
Janice (thinking): I’m cumming so hard for him.
Panel 2: Side view of Mark on his back. Janice in his lap. She’s leaning forward so that he’s sucking her nipple. Her head is back ecstatic. Moshe is visible in a suit watching them. Multiple hearts are around her head.
Janice: “Aaaahhh!
Mark: “Here it cums.”
Page 45: 2 square top, and a horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: View from Mark’s perspective of Janice sitting up in his lap. Moshe is standing slightly beside her. Her head is turned in horror looking at her husband. An x-ray shows his cock cumming inside her.
Janice: “OH NO! MOSHE!”
Moshe: “Don’t stop on my account.”
Panel 2: Janice standing pulling her robe on. Mark is dressing, Moshe is watching them.
Janice: “Thank you, Mr. Stanford.”
Mark: “Glad to be of service, Mrs. Silverstein.”
Janice: “Wait outside the door while I talk to my husband, please.”
Panel 3: Janice talking to Moshe in her robe. He looks sad, maybe crying.”
Janice: “I’m so sorry, honey.”
Moshe: “It hurt, but I understand. You have needs I can’t satisfy.”
Janice: “I’ll break it off.”
Moshe: “Don’t. You looked happy, but I don‘t want to see it ever again.”
Janice: “Of course.”
Moshe: “Good choice for a lover. You’d never develop feelings for a black man.”
Page 46 3 horizontal.
Panel 1: Janice talking to Mark with the picture right between them. She might have tears running down her cheeks.
Janice: “He’s hurt, but he’s okay.”
Mark: “Good. So same time next week?”
Janice: “Yes.”
Panel 2: Same scene only the view is zooming in on the picture. Their faces are on either side.
Janice: “You’ll talk to your son?”
Mark: “He won’t like it, but no more movies.”
Panel 3: A close up of the picture fills the entire frame. Showing three generations of Silverstein women in their bikinis.
Mark (off panel): He’s looking for new talent anyway.”
THE END
I had originally planned for this series to be a trilogy. As I wrote it, I decided to leave it open to another couple chapters. I don’t plan on writing a part 4 anytime soon and may leave it open to fan demand. Part 4 would start at Moshe’s funeral a few months in the future. Janice is now more lonely then ever and doesn’t like sleeping alone. Mark begins spending more and more time with her, staying the night instead of just having sex. One night she offers to cook him dinner and he shows up in a suit with flowers, courting her. They realize they are in love and get married. Jerome acts as best man and Janice’s daughter and granddaughter are bridesmaids. The daughter gets drunk at the reception as does her husband. Jerome carries him up to his room, seducing his new stepsister. The granddaughter also gets seduced by Deon. Part 5 would follow the granddaughter back to college. She and her two roommates are out sunbathing on the college green when the granddaughter sees a black man throwing a football around. She flirts with him and they start dating with her two roommates listening to them fuck and maybe even catching glimpses of his huge cock. One roommate is very racist and gives the granddaughter a hard time, the other roommate curious, but reluctant. The granddaughter invites them to get away for a weekend at Janice’s house (who lives an hour from the beach), but secretly invites them to meet Jerome and his crew. All three end up making a porno and the racist one drops out to make movies full time.
Not bad, but your best stories combine three strong themes: give-into-temptation (more "reluc" than "coerced"), cuckold and impregnation. This might work better as a stand-alone story; it struggles to meet the skyhigh expectations of Gardeners 1 and especially 2.
ReplyDeleteI like to donna in part 4 too
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