Tuesday, August 16, 2016

Follow up idea to Doctor Bitch.

As most of you know, I prefer big muscle men to be the studs of my stories and if not a fit stud, then I go completely opposite and make the male as nasty as possible, someone the female character would never consider as a sex partner. Think Coach Black vs. Principal Long and the janitors. After seeing Kaos' progress on Doctor Bitch, I got to thinking that I'd like to see the old nasty homeless black man with the bad teeth get laid more then I'd like to see Kat with Big D ( I know some of you don't like this). After some thought this idea occurred to me.

Sister Bitch

1) Kat's younger sister and her handsome fiancé arrive for a visit. Sister is snobby and narcissistic and a bitch. She's surprised to see how happy Kat is acting especially with her dumpy husband. They lay out in bikinis along with the hunky fiancé and see Horse and D working in yard. Kat explains their presence with the sister disparaging black men.

2) Sister having sex with fiancé. She's riding him, she's almost there, but he cums leaving her frustrated. He's asleep before she even dismounts. She puts on a robe thinking she needs to cool off.

3) Sister skinny dipping. Hears noise. Sees Kat sneaking out in skimpy lingerie, see thru nighty. Kat hurries past and raps three times on H and D's room. Rap music starts blaring from apartment.

4) Sister sneaks over nude and peeks thru window watching in horror at Kat taking both black men in several positions. She's thinking how disgusting it is, but her nipples are popping out and her clit is dripping. She returns to get her robe and goes back to her room. She pulls aside the covers showing her fiancé's great body, but tiny penis with the condom still on and the image of Horse or D's cock's pop into her mind.

5) In car on way to the beach with fiancé driving. Kat in separate car. Kat has to stop at the homeless shelter. Old black man from shelter (the old one with bad teeth) is going thru a trash can in the alley. Kat tells sister it's busier then expected and she'll have to catch up with her and the fiancé on the beach. Sister is disgusted by the dirty nasty homeless.

6) Sister and fiancé walk to the beach, they find a secluded dune and nude sunbath. She kneels in bikini and blows him after he promises to also go down on her. He gets a call from the hospital calling him in (he's a resident not yet a doctor). She's mad he has to leave. He tells her there was an 8 car pile up and the emergency room is flooded. She says "but what about me" concerned only with herself. She'll need to walk back and ride home with Kat. Maybe she wonders what is taking Kat so long and there's a scene of Kat jerking off the homeless black man with old jumbo.

7) The nasty black homeless man is watching thru some trees. He comes out into the dunes and strips off his clothes, stroking his cock. She's on her stomach when he starts eating her out even her asshole which is nasty but new to her and feels good. She cums and thanks him profusely, while he pulls her ass up and fucks her with his cock. she can't believe the size and cums all over it several times, never having been fucked so hard or long. He turns her over and kneels fucking her. She's blind with the sun behind him, telling him to keep fucking her and how she loves his cock and that she'll dump her loser fiancé to be with him, not even caring he's not wearing a condom believing he must have great genes. The sun goes behind a cloud revealing the nasty homeless just as he unloads in her triggering the biggest orgasm yet. He pulls out and sticks his cock in her mouth turning into a blow job with her getting into it but turned off by the smell and loving the rich taste of his seed. She rides him to multiple orgasms with him sucking her tits and her eventually kissing him. She passes out when he cums inside her again and he starts fucking her anally to her disgust but ultimately pleasure. He dresses and wonders off into the woods again. She is in her bikini in the water washing sperm off when Kat shows up in her bikini.

8) Kat and hubby leave for anniversary weekend. They're staying at Kat's house. Kat fucking fiancé again trying to get the stench on the homeless man from her nostrils, but wishing he could fill her like the homeless man had. She's unfulfilled and frustrated again wondering why he doesn't have a man sized dick to satisfy her.

9) Sisters skinny dipping again maybe even fingering herself thinking of the homeless man when she hears loud rap music next door. She puts her robe on and goes to Horse and D's. She raps three times and D opens saying he thought she was going away. He surprised to see the sister and asks if the music was too loud. She drops her robe and walks in doing a three-way with Horse and Dunnell.

ALT: Kat doesn't go away and her sister follows her to Horse and D's apartment with scenes of the four of them. Kat and her sister grow closer and she agrees to visit Kat more often.

7 comments:

  1. I like the idea of the twist, for the skinnier, dirty old black man to get a prize!

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  2. I prefer the Alt ending, just seems right to share! Also, you left out the word sister in paragraph 8, so it reads like Kat is screwing her sister's fiancé (shouldn't you give sis a name?)

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    1. She'd have a name for the actual comic. No sense putting too much detail into sketching out an idea.

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  3. My opinion may be biased against the thought because i'm disgusted by disgusting characters as I'm reading along with me having a dislike for characters such as Principle Long and the Janitors who get in the way and bother me. But I did see the homeless man and he's quite impressive, it's pretty big, too bad he stinks so much, I saw the odor coming from him.

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  4. I feel the same, the uglier and cleverer the better, old (not that old) and intelligent, like the blacks guys in Welcome to the neighbourhood, my favourite comic.. i wish Kaos did that one

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  5. I love this new idea. Same as for you my two types of black men who I like to see in the stories are either big and powerful or old and disgusting. The first type is preferable for the kind and faithful women. The second type for those with bitchy, racist characters.
    As for the ending I'd love the mix of the first with the alternative. Something like the sister going to them alone and doing a three-way with Horse and Dunnell, but Kat returns sooner than planned from the anniversary weekend for some reason and catches them in the act. Instead of getting angry at her sister for playing with her lovers she joins them and the four of them resume the fucking. "Kat and her sister grow closer and she agrees to visit Kat more often."

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  6. i think old ugly black dudes should be in these comics more often, it would also be amazing to know a little about their life story, making them clever and just generally unlucky in life coz of how hard it is to be an afroamerican

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