2) My pics of the day stash have all been posted. Updates will go up irregularly from here on out.
3) Current poll results:
The Boob Job 3 48pts
Flag Girls 46
Son's Best Friend's Dad 43
Black Gardeners 3 35
Naughty Pictures 33
Lessons From the Neighbor 26
Annabelle 2 23
Doctor Bitch 2 22
Again only 8 pages from the Kaos. After almost 3 weeks being absent she gave us only 8 additional pages :( I'm disappointed. Also I think the quality of her works, the details also decreased.
ReplyDeleteI thought this since she finished flex. They are still good, but they aren't the same quality.
DeleteYes, Flex was still good, but from The Gardeners 2 with every next comic I observe the steady decline in the quality. The drawings feel rushed and the background is almost empty. With the monthly price increasing to $39 I'd expect the other way, more updates and better pages. Sadly it's not the case here.
DeleteBut didn't Flex sequel get more votes? why didn't you say anything in your list?
ReplyDeleteI haven't written Flex 2 or the Bikini Conspiracy 2 yet so they aren't in the running. I'll just make a note that people are eager for them. I'm sure The Boob Job 3 hasn't been drawn yet either.
DeleteWhy wasn't Patriotic Duty in the running? Is it because someone else is doing it?
ReplyDeleteYeah, Blacknwhite is the site considering illustrating it.
DeleteStorm, sorry for my personal request, but i'd like to know if you just had an idea for Flex 3 (or 2 i don't remember), because some time ago you said that you posted here a work line for the sequel.
ReplyDeleteWell, can you post please? Only for our appreciation.
Second request: as we see, boob job 3 is a part of a new comic called BikiniConspiracy 2. So, is the story complete to be illustrated or there's only boobjob3 part? Have you got a work line for complete comic to post here?
thanks very much in order to your answer
I posted the BC2 plot earlier. It remains mostly unchanged though the debate on it led to the crossover with the Boob Job. Kaos has contacted me and was looking forward to The Boob Job 3. Flex is a little more up in the air. Right now, I'm planning to show it as flashbacks. Flex pulls up to Marissa's house and catches her outside with her black lover from the office. He joins them for a threesome. Afterwards, he asked how they hooked up and there's a flashback to that story. Marissa asks him about the mom and two daughters and there's a partial flashback about them. He then goes to visit Candace and she tells him about her lover and he tells a little more about the mom and daughters. It's a little more complicated then that, but that's the gist. Maybe I'll post a longer outline soon.
Deletewell, i can't wait to read your outline as soon as it's ready.
ReplyDeletebut in my opinion, there's a thing i don't understand: Candace character mustn't be so important or better she would count only for Marissa (their lesbo idea with strapon) and not involve flex. In fact, in all of your story, Candace is a kind of object to fuck only because she caught flex and marissa, but not because flex loves fucking her; in this way, you can argue when flex says that Candace is too far from him for fucking.
So, it would be great to go on with real protagonists Marissa and here's my personal suggest:
1) Flex pulls up to Marissa's house and there's a threesome, afterwards she tells to Flex about her flashback, while the lawyer comes back to office/his own house
MARISSA FLASHBACK: what did you think of? can i suggest?
1) in Flex3 comic there's a baloon where Marissa gives some papers to the lawyer showing her cleavage, but in the comic version she says to have his tel number: so you could use both of versions. Marissa comes back to work after her pregnancy dressed sexy and finds out to be designated as personal secretary of black lawyer (NAME?) (between almost every secretary smirks, who hate black lawyer because he's black, boring and flirting). She's happy while the lawyer remembers only that in his past flirting she was pissed. Marissa plans to seduce his lover in 3 days (dressing slutty,showing her cleavage whens she brings him coffee and work files/papers), as long as the third day she has her chance. it's her black lawyer birthday, so she plans to make a surprise party and while all of firm's employees is inside a dark room, she waits for his boss coming and when he comes in his office she shows him her naked boobs with ice cream on singing as Marylin Monroe and then zipping his trousers she starts a fantastic tittyfuck+blowjob with final cumswallowing. then, after saying "this is my personal birthday present now and forever" she brings him to the others for the mini party. When the night came, after finishing to feed his baby, MArissa phones to his boss, starting to sing again sexy happy birthday (in MArylin way) and then they plan to see eachothers in half an hour to her place. So she dresses more slutty than ever and says hubby "only girl night!", going out with a small kiss. The lovers go to the firm empty and they fuck in every way possible
i must add a particular, very important to understand Marissa seduction on her black lawyer.
DeleteYet the first day MArissa comes back to firm, she dresses a bra, both to push to the limit her boobs and to prevent every milk spot on her nipples. But when she finish to say hello to all of firm employees, before starting her new rule of black lawyer secretary, she goes to the bath and take off the bra so, the first time black lawyer asks for an helping from her, she shows her boobs and big spots on her blouse near his eyes. When she come back to her desk, the lawyer with a big smile stands up and goes to coworkers for the bet on her tits (from Flex 1 kaoscomic). Marissa hears voices and understands that his black lawyer won the bet and wants her revenge. So the day after, as soon as she has got a free minute, she comes into black lawyer office and, standing in front of him, looking at him seductively, starts to unbutton blouse, till she shows her naked boobs and says "this regard is for your win, because i see how it is difficult working with a big breasted woman like me without being able to touch. but i can assure to you i'm not the only person with something big and spots". Then she pulls herself together, while black lawyer is gobsmacked and with an hard on between his trousers.
the day after (the second from her coming back) the revenge will be total.
she is again without bra, when she comes into black lawyer office with organizer, crossing her legs to the corner of the desk and showing cleavage. He can't concentrate and when she asks what's the problem he gestures towards big milk spots. Marissa, with a smirk, stands up and bending over, reach the second drawer of the desk to catch a paper handkerchief, then unbutton her blouse and starts to clean her naked boobs in front of his boss, while he opens wide his eyes, motionless. Marissa game is going very well but she wants to speed it so she says:"Do you like my boobs?" and he nodds; Marissa, nearing to his ear, whisper "would you like to touch them?" and he nodds, while Marissa has yet taken his hand to her right boob with a moan "ooooh yeeeeaah, touch it" and then she says "do you feel how it is heavy and big? this is why i have big spots" and he nodds with lust in his eyes. Finally Marissa helps black lawyer to stand up (he's like an hypnotized) and sees the bulge in his trousers, saying seductively "Oh my, oh poor boy" touching and stroking the bulge "yeeah, i feel you too are big and heavy here" he nodds but you can see his legs shudder and then Marissa goes on "oooooh, it's so big and heavy that i bet it is going to explode in a minute" and he nodds. Marissa keeps in check his boss, stroking and massaging his bulge, but without taking out his cock. After one minute, the man groans and suddenly a biggest spot comes into view on his trousers. Marissa stops to stroke, stands up and says "i won my bet, but i hope you enjoyed my treat", buttoning up her blouse and coming back to her desk.
the third day, was black lawyer birthday....
before starting with birthday description, the scene could show Flex thinking of MArisa changing (baloon) and her new whore ability.
DeleteMArisa keeps on explaining her adventure:
BLACK LAWYER BIRTHDAY
the third day is the last one in Marisa plan to seduce her boss. She arrives to lawfirm early with a cake in a box and while she is entering, she notices a new black young janitor, well built and quite nice "i wonder if he has got a cock as much big as his muscles" she thinks. When other employees and secretaries arrive, she explains her plans for a mini birthday party for her black lawyer (and the others agree), so they hide in the meeting room and she asks them not to speak or clamour. Then she runs to her desk and starts to change her blouse and skirt in a short black skirt with high heels, naked boobs and only a spade necklace on her chest, waiting for her boss arriving. When he comes and doesn't see anyone around is worried, but as soon as he sits to his place and asks for his secretary, he has a heavenly vision:"Marissa....what....what are you doing dressed in this way?". She sees the lust in his eyes, but she is resolute to finish her game with a complete victory:"well, mr. X, i'm very glad to be you secretary, because i can care of any your need" she stops for a moment to catch a cylinder full of whipped cream and starts to spray a bit on her boobs, then she walks seductively towards black lawyer singing "happy birthday to you, happy birthday mr X" she is now towering him (completely stunned), then she kneels in front of him and singing last verse, she starts to unzip and lower his trousers, offering him her boobs creamed to eat (and he voraciously accepts, incredulous for his dream coming real). When he eats all of the whiped cream from the boobs, Marissa kneels and freeing his cock from the prison, starts to stroke it and lick around the tip, while lots of precum comes out, then she says "this is my personal present for your birthday, but from tomorrow it will be my personal duty of secretary of yours taking care of every your need. But now, enjoy the present" and she starts to bob her head, more and more quickly (because she is afraid that anyone from the meeting room come out) and to increase his boss arousal says "i'd like to give you my best blowjob, but we haven't got so much time so" and she puts his cock between her boobs "so, baby, ready to cum like you never did in your life?" and wrapping her red lips to the crown, she moves her boobs up and down along the wet shaft, for his best pleasure. After few minutes he's ready to cum ("omg, cuuuuuming yeeeaaah") and she's ready too ("mmmmh...mmmmmh" looking in his eyes with approval), her cheeks swelling with cum for almost 4 times, without spilling any drop and swallowing all of his tasty and delicious nectar ("good...good...almost as Flex cum"). After cleaning the head of his cock for every last drop, she stands up and says him "now compose yourself and hurry to the meeting room, where there are all of people, but don't forget that i'm your personal secretary from now on".
at this point the focus is again on Marissa+Flex, they're laughing at the story flashback and Flex is quite horny so Marissa fucks him, riding him while he asks "and then, what's happened?" and she starts again with flashback:
ReplyDeletethe night after their first fucking, she developed a new work ruling with morning blowjob and another blowjob during coffee break, both with Marissa under the table, fucking at the end of the workingday with empty firm. Two night a week they came out with excuses for their spouses and fucked in motels or around.
After two weeks, MArissa started to grow used to her whoring, increasing the number of black lovers (a black client of his black lawyer is a plumber: she makes a copy of his schedule with tel number and after work date, she phones him for a fixing work at her house, but she ends to be fucked hard; she gives a blowjob to the new black janitor of the firm, with excuse she had forgetten study keys).
Now the focus is again on Flex cumming hard inside marissa
Flex and MArissa lieing in the bed, with marissa story goes on (3rd flashback):
ReplyDeleteone time black lawyer invites Marissa for a boat trip on sunday with a friend of him (maybe Ty from Biini Conspiracy, what do you think? Both of them are lawyers...) and she agrees. She says John a lie and when she is in black lawyer's car she makes him a blowjob while he drives. The boat really is a yacht full of booty women and black men (total 6 people, 2 women - Linda and sister from Bikini Conspiracy - and 4 men - Ty, Robert a white captain and a black sailor). Linda and sister go with Marissa to change in skinny bikini and then the party starts: Robert starts fucking Linda and Ty her sister in front of Marissa, who fucks black lawyer together with sailor. Then they switch with Ty+Robert and Marissa, black lawyer+Linda and sailor the sister.
After this strange party Marissa, fearing to have a pregnancy, only in order to have a prominent position in case of a separation from John, she asks Candace to see eachother for a only girl nightout (lesbo scene) and afterwards MArissa plans Candace to go bed with John and MArissa is going to bed with Grant; in both of cases, the girls film every scene of adultery and, before eachother of them can fuck their fake lovers, they show up. So they can go on fucking their real black lovers (Candace in this time tells Marissa about his mini adventure at model agency).
from now on there's room for Flex flashback, with Marissa jealous about the mother (so she wants to be assfucked by Flex, asking to his lover "is better my ass than mother's?" or while Flex speaks of daughter blowjobs and tittyfuck she makes the same thing to Flex, sitting on the couch, hoping he's enjoying this more than the three sluts).
ReplyDeleteMaybe Flex could say, before going out, that he knows two black friends, bikeriders and football players, who'd like to know Marissa and she agrees, thinking of how she could plan to fuck them.
Then Flex leaves to fuck Candace, but really he wants only give her a list of black friends to fuck for the future, as for Marissa.
can i ask you what do you think of my personal vision of new Flex Appeal?
ReplyDeleteI think that yes Flex's seduction of the 3 girls should be told to Marissa, and then this inspires her to try to outdo him because she wants to compete with him, is actually competing with the girls in his flashbacks because she wants him to prefer her. So the 1st thing she does to get back at him is by having group sex with her, Marissa, and their two lovers. She wonders if this will make Flex jealous, so they start a "game" trying to outdo each other. I think this is the best way to keep the focus on Flex (the title character), and Marissa (for now).
ReplyDelete**groupsex with Marissa, Candace, and their two lovers.
DeleteWhile all these games are going on, Marissa could hire a sexy babysitter that breastfeeds her baby that she knows Flex will be attracted to. Her boobs are bigger than Marissa's. Flex can become friends with the lawyer and the other black lover, but also brings out his personal trainer friend. He has twin sons who are virgins. Marissa should have sex with those 3 because she remembers Flex bragging about the 18 year out daughters he was with. Marissa sends Candace on a mission to seduce the babysitter to hook her black cock, but for their own advantage because they know she's sexy, so Candace uses a black dildo. Candace's lover or Flex's personal trainer friend could catch them and starts a blackmail chain. 1st the twins seduce the babysitter (or Candace's lover) then the dad (like in Son's Best Friend and Son's Best Friend's Dad). Flex joins in for a threesome and eventually has her alone.
ReplyDeleteOr better yet she can be blackmailed like this: Candace's lover blackmails her lesbian sex, then the babysitter gets addicted to BBC, so she seduces the twins. So the dad wants to show her what real BBC is so he seduces her with Flex joining them then taking over.
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ReplyDelete@ $h@wn M00re
ReplyDeletein your opinion Marissa and flex starts a kind of competition, but we don't have to forget that Marissa became a whore after long steps in previous story.
So, in a realistic story progression, this competition could come after flashbacks both of Marissa and Flex, but always as Marissa trying to bring Flex attention to her and not other women and maybe, at the end, she realizes that she would like to have Flex forever with her (so she could be like Lola).
In this new background, Candace could have a proper space and babysitter too (but this is a new character, far from original story).
Very good the idea of dad+twins (it acts as a counterpart to mother+twins), but only as a challenge and i mean: Flex understands that Marissa is a completely whore, but to tell the truth MArissa hopes again that Flex will love her. So Flex, astutely, in order to seduce Marissa and promising his love to her, asks a last favour. He has got a poker debt with a man (twins' dad), but he hasn't got as much money as he wants, even if Flex knows that the man had a weakness for Lola in past (and Marissa becomes jealous at Lola name...) and, before Lola leaving alone, Flex says he was able to convince Lola to fuck the man. Marissa at the beginning is silence, then speaks:"If you want i'll fuck this man in order to cancel your debt" and Flex, witha smirk, says "i love you so much Marissa, i appreciate it" (and here Marissa give a blowjob saying "i'd make anything for you and our love"). Flex take advantage of the situation and explains her what Lola agreed to do, according to man's desires (blowjob, missionary, riding, tittyfuck) BUT no mention to anal sex! MArissa nodd and Flex goes to speak with the man (really a friend of him). When he comes back, marissa is at home breastfeeding baby and John with a beer jokes with Flex. Then, Marissa says JOhn that she is going to supermarket with a friend from work and Flex, who is leaving, gives her a ride. When they're out of john sight, he stops the bike and explains to Marissa that now the deal is changed: in order to cancel the debt, Marissa will fuck the man+virgin twins while the interests will be cancelled by anal sex. "What???" says Marissa "do you think i'm a whore to be given to every man you choose from your past???" and Flex answers "no no don't be silly! you're only my personal slut remember? but it's so or our love will never start" and Marissa, thinking of love word, agrees with a stupid smile on her face. They go to a remote place where Marissa changes her dresses into something more slutty and then they go to man's house.
From now on only sex scenes, firstly with MArissa and the man and then Marissa goes to twins room and they fuck hard.
Who is Lola?
DeleteOMG!!!! Lola is ex girlfriend from original Flex comic.
ReplyDeleteIf you read back both story and comic, you'll find her name. Above all, in kaos Flex comic3, at the end, when marissa reads her tel, she speaks of Lola.
I'm open to anything at this time. I've got some ideas at this time. Little sketchy on what I want to happen to Candace with the guy from the modeling agency. I've thought of sending her to the boob job place in the end or a separate story. I'll try to get my ideas posted soon.
ReplyDeletesorry storm, i need to know what do you think of my ideas on Flex story sequel.
DeleteI tried to stay as much as possible near to your original story and in this sense i thought about a MArissa's seduction (as Flex said her to fuck him)+revenge (in first comic on the beach, when she explains to Candace her hyperlactation situation, she speaks about a bet in lawfirm) with black lawyer.
Again, after black lawyer's seduction, Marissa increases her lovers' number (a new janitor at lawfirm, a black plumber from lawfirm, but he could be a drug-dealer client of the black lawyer) and finally i thought about a reunion between Marissa and other characters from other comics (so she knows at a boat party LInda and her sister, Ty and Robert from Bikini Conspiracy+sequel).
in my opinion, if you could continue the story following previous concepts, without too much new characters, i think there could be a very good prospective of success.
I have no ideas about Candace and Flex flashbacks, but i imagine you've got really clear what you need to write.
Deleteit's unnecessary saying that this is my favourite story (i hope kaoscomics will illustrate it, with so much attention to every detail), but i'd like this story could be as much as possible near to reality, even if it's only a fantasy erotic story.
sorry storm, can i have please your personal mail address to have your opinion about lots of ideas for Flex sequel (other than what i've written here) and other projects? i'd prefer to share with you pvt....
ReplyDeleteClick on view profile under the about me section on the right for my email. Shorter one paragraph messages are better as I tend to sit on longer ones until I have time to read them which can take days. Your idea is good, but it would be better as a separate Marissa story. I like the idea of Marissa as the aggressor in the story. I'm thinking reverse sexual harassment at this time. I set up a possible sequel in the original story to be about Flex and the new conquests, but I got a lot of demand for more Marissa and Candace. Also this will be a comic script and needs to be kept simple. A story version will probably come later.
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