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The Boob Job 3
Comic script by Stormbringer
Cast of Characters:
Pearl- The black nurse from The Boob
Job
Doc “Ali Hakim”- Black doctor from
The Boob Job
Eve- The woman that gets the Boob Job.
Doc “Benjamin Booker Cleveland”
(BBC)- The false doctor from The Boob Job 2
Linda- Star of The Bikini Conspiracy.
George- Linda's husband.
Robert Marsh- Older businessman from
The Bikini Conspiracy. Mandy's husband.
Mandy- Robert's wife from The Bikini
Conspiracy.
Ty- Black lawyer from The Bikini
Conspiracy
Cover: Mandy sitting in her underwear
on an examination table. Both doctors are on either side giving her
an examination. They are wearing the white lab coats, but the coats
are open and their hard chests are visible. One is listening to her
heart with a stethoscope. One is checking her blood pressure.
Title: The Boob Job 3
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaos comics.
Page 1: vertical rectangle on top
left. Larger panel on top right. 2 square on bottom.
Panel 1: Mandy and Robert holding
hands entering the clinic.
Mandy: “I can't believe you own a
breast enhancement clinic.”
Robert: “I own lots of things.”
Panel 2: Mandy shaking hands with Doc
Hakim. Pearl and Robert are in the picture.
Robert: “Mandy, this is Doctor Hakim,
head researcher and director of the Clinic.”
Hakim: “Nice to meet you, Mrs.
Marsh,”
Hakim: “Lets go do the exam.”
Panel 3: Mandy nude but for a panty.
Hakim is examining her breasts. Pearl is behind them. Somewhere in
the exam room is a large window reflecting the scene. It's a one way
mirror.
Hakim: “Sensitive nipples I see. The
pills will increase their sensitivity.”
Mandy: “Umm... yes. Robert tells me
this is hormone therapy.”
Hakim: “Correct. The pills trick your
body into thinking you are pubescent and pregnant, thus triggering a
new round of growth. Usually two cup sizes.”
Panel 4: Same scene, but Hakim isn't
examining her anymore. Pearl is opening her top to show her bra.
Hakim: “You're not pregnant are you?”
Mandy: “No.”
Hakim: “Good. The treatment can
trigger vast growth in pregnant women.”
Hakim: “Pearl, show Mrs. Marsh your
breasts while I speak with Mr. Marsh.”
Page 2: 4 square.
Panel 1: Robert and Hakim talking.
Maybe a window behind them shows Mandy feeling Pearl's breasts.
Robert is smiling.
Hakim: “You're fully aware of the
side effects?”
Robert: “Quite aware.”
Hakim: “I presume she is for your
enjoyment alone?”
Robert: “On the contrary, give her
the full treatment. I want both Ben and you to take her when she's
ready.”
Panel 2: A still mostly nude Mandy
hefting Pearl's bare breasts.
Mandy: “These are perfect. Just about
Linda's size.”
Pearl: “So Linda's breasts get a lot
of male attention and you're...”
Mandy: “Yep, I'm jealous. It didn't
bother me before, but she suddenly started showing them off.”*
Header: * See The Bikini Conspiracy
Panel 3: Robert and Mandy at the
counter while Pearl hands her the pills.
Pearl: “One in the morning and
afternoon. We'll see you in two weeks for a follow up.”
Panel 4: View from Robert's perspective
of Mandy riding his cock. His hands are squeezing her breasts.
Mandy: “Fuck me! Fuck me!”
Robert: “Bye bye B-cups.”
Page 3 4 squares
Panel 1: Robert and Mandy in the
bathroom. He's nude, big cock hanging down and drying his hair. She's
also nude and has a towel around her head. She's looking in the
mirror and holding up the pill bottle.
Robert: “Don't forget to take your
pills.”
Mandy: “You sure you don't want
morning sex?”
Robert: “Always, but I've got to go.”
Mandy: “A quickie blow job then? Two
weeks is along time.”
Panel 2: Same scene only Mandy is
holding Robert's cock and it's sticking out, erect.
Mandy: “I'm starting to think you're
having an affair.”
Robert: “Baby, I'd never cheat on
you. I love you too much.”
Mandy: “Plus, there's the adultery
clause in the prenup.”
Robert: “Never crossed my mind.”
Mandy: “At least you'll be with
George. He'll keep you in line.”
Panel 3: Inside car scene with George
driving and Robert sitting beside him.
Robert: “Something's come up with
another client and I have to cancel.”
George: “That's the third trip in a
row, boss.”
Robert: “Because I have complete
faith in you.”
George: “Thanks sir. It's just hard
being away from Linda and the baby for so long.”
Panel 4: Partial back side view of
Robert at a door. The door is open and Linda is posing in super sexy
lingerie.
Linda: “So I hear that big black cock
is all mine for two weeks?”
Page 4: 4 squares
Panel 1: Mandy under the shower, her
breasts are slightly bigger and her nipples are hard. She's hefting
them.
Header: the next day
Mandy (thinking): Wow! The pills work
fast.
Panel 2: Angled down view of Linda on
her back, legs spread. Robert is between her legs. His spent cock is
laying across her belly and sperm is all over her face and tits. He's
talking on a cell phone.
Mandy (jagged lines through phone): My
nipples are really sensitive too. Please hurry home. I'm so horny.”
Robert: “As soon as I can baby. I'll
save you up a big load.”
Panel 3: Mandy standing nude at a full
length mirror. She's turned so that her much bigger breasts are
facing the viewer and her bigger rounder ass is reflected in the
mirror.
Mandy: “They didn't say nothing about
having a bigger ass.”
Header: One week later
Panel 4: Side view of Robert on his
back on a bed on the phone. Linda is riding his cock. Ty is behind
her fucking her ass. Milk is squirting from her nipples.
Noise: fuk fuk fuk
Robert: “Seriously dear, your ass was
rather bony. It's probably just balancing out your breasts.
Mandy (Jagged lines) “What's that
noise?”
Robert: “Just working out with Ty.
Say hi Ty/”
Ty: “Hey Mandy, looking forward to
seeing your new boobs.”
Page 5 top half and bottom half.
Panel 1: View down Mandy's body. She's
fingering herself and pinching one long nipple. Her phone is propped
up on a breast and a picture of Robert's cock is on it. Fluids
squirting out around her finger.
Mandy: “Fuck me with that big black
cock, baby.”
Mandy: “Oh god! My nipples are so
sensitive.”
Mandy: “I'm cumming!”
noise around finger: spew!
Panel 2: View down Robert's body. Linda
is sucking the end of his cock. Cheeks bulging and sperm is flying
out around her lips. Robert's hand is holding his phone with a pic of
Mandy's nude body on it.
Robert: “I'm cumming too. Filling up
your mouth with my hot seed.”
Mandy (jagged lines) Damn Robert, my
tits are driving me mad. I need the real thing.”
Robert: “One more week, dear.”
Page 6 4 squares
Panel 1: Mandy talking to Pearl.
Mandy's pulling up a tee shirt and her breasts are springing free (no
bra). She's wearing short shorts and her ass is filling it out really
good. Somewhere in the exam room is a large mirror reflecting some
scenes.
Mandy: “How do you handle it, Pearl?”
Pearl: “They settle down, but you'll
want sex all the time and your nipples will make you cum easier.
Pearl: Doctor Hakim will be in
shortly.”
Panel 2: Mandy sitting up on exam table
while Hakim stands before her. He's pinching her nipples and she
looks uncomfortable.
Hakim: “Lets test the sensitivity.”
Mandy: “Please doc, it's too much. I
can take it.”
Panel 3: Same pic only he's squeezing
her breasts and her nipples have expanded and look like their about
to pop. She's staring cross eyed at them.
Mandy: “Doctor Hakim, please. I'm
going to...”
Panel 4: Same pic only now her nipples
are spraying milk all over his face.
Mandy: “CUM!!!”
Noise by nipples: splurt!
Page 7 rectangle top and 2 square
bottoms.
Page 1: Front view of the doc's head,
licking milk from around his lips. Mandy is in the background looking
frazzled with milk dripping from nipples.
Hakim: “I'm afraid the lactation has
become a common side effect.”
Mandy: “I didn't sign on for big
mommy titties or a bigger ass.”
Hakim: “You could quit, but your
breasts might deflate to smaller then before.”
Page 2: Mandy laying on the exam table
in only panties. Hakim is leaving through the door. Pearl is coming
in carrying a box.
Hakim: “Pearl will help with a
treatment plan.”
Page 3: Mandy still laying on the exam.
Pearl is holding up a large lifelike black dildo.
Pearl: “This will help settle you
down.”
Mandy: “I had the exact one, but I
got rid of it when I met Robert.”
Pearl: “Yes, the real thing is much
better, but he's not always around is he?”
Mandy: “No and I'm starting to
suspect he's having an affair.”
Pearl: “Well your new body should
reignite the spark.”
Page 8 top and bottom panels.
Panel 1: Hakim on the phone in a room.
A glass window (the other side of the mirror) shows Pearl showing
Mandy a flexible double dildo.
Hakim: “Yes Mr Marsh, the new pill
has kicked her Prolactin hormone into high gear as well as tripling
the number of alveolar glands.”
Panel 2: Side view of Robert fucking
Linda doggy style talking on the phone and holding her hair. Milk is
squirting from her nipples.
Robert: “Excellent doctor.”
Hakim (jagged lines): “How is the
married woman you were secretly dosing while pregnant?”
Robert: “She's perfect, absolutely
perfect.”
Linda: “CUMMING!”
Page 9 4 panels
Panel 1: Pearl with her hair down using
the dildo on Mandy. The panty is around her ankles.
Mandy: “Pearl! What are you...?”
Pearl: “Relax honey.”
Panel 2: View from Mandy's pussy up.
Mandy is using the dildo with both hands. Pearl is leaning over and
sucking one nipple while pinching the other one. Milk is shooting up
and out from the pinched nipple and into Pearl's mouth.
Noise (around dildo) squish squish
Panel 3: The front of the clinic. Mandy
is leaving dressed like she came in. Pearl is walking away from her
dressed like a slut and showing off her boobs. Her hair is down and
she's lost the glasses. Two black studs are leaning on a car waiting
for her.
Pearl: “Eventually during the day,
you can control yourself at work.”
Pearl: “But nights, they're for fun.
Care to join me?”
Mandy: “Oh no I couldn't.”
Pearl: “Good, more cock for me then.”
Panel 4: Mandy nude on her bed. The TV
is playing an IR porn or maybe a home movie and showing the scene in
the beginning from Bikini Conspiracy. She's using the dildo and
pinching her nipple. The phone is on the bed beside her.
Robert (jagged) Sorry babe, I'm gonna
be another week.”
Mandy: “But I NEED you home?”
Mandy: “I NEED your big black cock
right NOW.”
Mandy: “Honey, I'm going crazy.”
Page 10 4 square
Panel 1: Robert sitting looking down in
his lap. Linda is kneeling and titty fucking him.
Linda: “George will be back
tomorrow.”
Robert: “I know, I'll stay with Ty.
Sneak over and we'll use his hot tub.”
Linda: “I can tell him my mom is
sick.”
Panel 2: Mandy on all fours. The dildo
is in her ass. The double headed one is in her pussy and she's
holding the other end.
Mandy: “Oh god, it's not working. I
need the real thing. I need a big black cock!”
Panel 3: Pearl at work, glasses on,
hair down. She's leaning back nude in her swivel chair at her desk.
Hakim is dressed in his lab coat,
kneeling between her legs and munching on her pussy.
Mandy (jagged): “I need to see the
doctor.”
Pearl: “Dr Hakim is busy at the
moment. Dr. Cleveland, our mobile doctor, can stop by your house
later today.”
Panel 4: Eve from Boob Job nude on a
stage with money in her garter dancing. Ben is seated and on the
phone.”
Ben: “Another one for me, Ali? I'll
wire you the usual fee.”
Hakim (jagged): “Just your stud
services on this one, Ben. It's for Mr. Marsh's wife.”
Page 11 4 even panels
Panel 1: Mostly Eve doing a stripper
squat against the pole. She's squeezing her tits. The side of Ben's
head is in the frame on the phone.
Ben: “The BOSS wants me to fuck his
wife?”
Hakim (jagged): “He wants us both.
I'll meet you at his house in an hour.”
Panel 2: Linda bent over in the hot tub
with Ty fucking her while she sucks Robert. Rob is on the phone.
Robert: “Good job, doc. Just make
sure it's in the master bedroom.”
Panel 3: Robert's front, his cock spent
and leaking sperm facing the viewer and walking away from the hot
tub. Linda is visible in the hot tub, reverse cowgirl in Ty's lap.
His hands are squeezing her breasts and she's squirting milk.
Robert: “I need to get some work
done. Be back later.”
Panel 4: Two cars parked next to each
other. Cleveland is at his trunk putting on a lab coat. Hakim is
already wearing his.
Cleveland: “Mr. Marsh really wants
this?”
Hakim: “He wants proof of adultery
should they divorce.”
Page 12 3 vertical top panels and 2
squares on bottom.
Panel 1: Front view of Mandy outside in
a bikini. Maybe it's the blue one from the end of Bikini Conspiracy.
It's too small for her new body. The cups barely cover her nipples
and the panty has slid into her ass crack.
She's by the pool.
Mandy: “My old bikini is way too
tight now.”
Panel 2: Front view of her having
removed the top and is tossing it aside.
Mandy: “That's better.”
Panel 3: Rear view of Mandy bent to
dive in the pool.
Panel 4: Front view of Mandy's wet body
climbing up a pool ladder.
Panel 5: Rear view of her standing on
the ladder. Hakim and Ben's lower bodies are standing before her
with bulges in their pants.
Mandy: “Oh shit!”
Hakim (off panel): We're here about the
sensitivity problem, Mrs. Marsh.”
Page 13 full top and two square
bottoms.
Panel 1: Ben squeezing her nipples
while she stands by the pool. Hakim is stooping behind her pulling
her bottom down and her pubes are visible.
Mandy: “Oh...um... yes... very
sensitive.”
Hakim: “Dr. Cleveland is our nipple
specialist. May I pull down your thong?”
Mandy: It's not a thong, it's my old
bikini before your damn pills made my ass fill out.”
Ben: “Your breasts seem fine. They
look great.”
Hakim: “Your ass looks amazing.”
Panel 2: Side view with Mandy's back
arched. Ben is pulling on her nipples. Hakim is standing again and
has just spanked her. Her ass is jiggling and has a light print on
it.
Noise: Slap!
Mandy: “Ouch! Why'd you spank me?”
Hakim: “Did it distract you from you
nipples?”
Mandy: “Yes... no, stop, I'm going
to....
Panel 3: Same side view only Her
breasts are blowing milk all over Ben. Hakim is squeezing her ass
cheek with one hand and has his finger in her pussy.
Mandy: “CUM!”
Page 14 4 panels
Panel 1: Ben without his lab coat
pulling his wet shirt over his head. Robert is squeezing her breasts
from behind and humping her still dressed.
Ben: “Wow! You soaked my shirt good.”
Mandy: “Sorry.”
Hakim: “Your problem is simple.
You're not getting enough sex.”
Mandy: “I agree. I really need my
husband.”
Hakim: “No, you just need some big
black cock.”
Panel 2: Front view of Mandy kneeling
framed between the two men's legs with a hard cock in each hand.
Hakim (off panel): “Lets test my
theory and see if this solves your problem.”
Panel 3: Same view only closer. Mandy
is sucking more then half one cock and motion lines show her stroking
the other.
Noise: slurp!
Noise: jerk jerk jerk
Panel 4: Side view of Robert sitting
and staring at his lap top. He's still nude. The picture on the lap
top shows a high view of the sex by the pool.
Robert (thinking) Damn! That pill is
amazing.
Page 15 4 squares
Panel 1: Close up of a kneeling Mandy,
slurping on the end of the other cock while fondling his balls. Her
hand is now jerking the opposite cock.
Noises: more slurp and jerk jerk.
Ben: “This slut knows how to suck
cock.”
Panel 2: She's switched cocks again.
She's not blowing the one, but it is shooting cum on her face and in
her open mouth. The one she's jerking off is exploding all over her
tits.
Noises: spurt by both cocks.
Panel 4: Close up of Mandy sperm
covered in the same position. Her hands are on both cocks and she's
using the heads to rub sperm into her nipples.
Mandy: “Oh that's nice. Your sperm
feels so good on my nipples.”
Hakim (off panel): “There's six mood
elevating compounds in male semen.”
Page 16 vertical left. 2 square on the
right.
Panel 1: Mandy standing, still messy.
She's rubbing sperm into her breasts with her hands.
Hakim: “Makes you feel really good,
doesn't it?”
Mandy: “Yessss!”
Ben: “Vaginal contact with semen
feels even better.”
Panel 2: Mandy between the two black
men being dragged into the house.
Hakim: “Where's the bedroom?”
Mandy: “Upstairs, but I'm feeling
better now and my husband will be back tomorrow.”
Panel 3: Side view of the stairs.
Mandy is on a stair facing up. Ben is behind her. His cock is between
her thighs and sticking out under her pussy. He has reached around
and is tugging her nipples. Hakim is standing several stairs higher
and facing down so that his cock is sticking in her face.
Hakim: “You sure you're feeling
better?”
Ben: “Or do you want more cock?”
Mandy: “Ohhhh! M...more cock,
please.”
Page 17 4 squares
Panel 1: Mandy crawling onto her bed.
Hakim has just spanked her ass and it is jiggling. The black dildo is
laying on the bed.
Noise: spank!
Hakim: “Get on all fours.”
Mandy: “Can we use the guest
bedroom?”
Hakim: “No, here's perfect.”
Panel 2: Side view of Mandy on all
fours. Hakim's cock is resting on her ass cheeks. Ben is kneeling at
the head of the bed with his cock pointing at her mouth. Hakim has
picked up the black dildo.
Hakim: “This thing looks well used.”
Mandy: “Three times today already.”
Ben: “Not the real thing though.”
Panel 3: Same view only Hakim has
entered her and she's sucking Ben. Hakim is holding the dildo above
her ass.
Noise: fuk fuk fuk
Noise: slurp slurp
Hakim: “Hmmm, not an anal virgin I
see.”
Panel 4: Side view of Robert in a chair
looking at his laptop. His cock is hard and he's holding it. The
screen shows the previous scene split into four images (her face
sucking Ben, her ass with Hakim's cock half in her pussy and the
dildo pointed at her rectum, the side view from above, and an up view
of Hakim's dangling balls and his cock piercing her pussy.
Robert: “Dayumn Mandy, didn't take
much to turn you into a slut.”
Page 18 4 square.
Panel 1: View from Hakim of the dildo
pushing into her ass, his cock in her pussy and down her back with
Ben's cock sticking over her shoulder being jerked off while she
looks back over the other shoulder.
Noise: jerk jerk
Mandy: “Robert keeps it well
stretched.”
Mandy: “Oh.. um... ahhh! Gonna cum!”
Panel 2: Side view of Mandy. She's
rearing up, head thrown back and her nipples are spraying all over
Ben's chest. Ben's cock is rearing up between her breasts.
Mandy: “It's so good!”
Panel 3: Close up of Hakim's cock in
Mandy's pussy. Sperm is shooting out around the shaft. The dildo is
still in her ass.
Hakim: “This is gonna feel real
good.”
Panel 4: Close up of Ben's cock between
her tits. It's exploding all over her face. Her hands are squeezing
her breasts so that her nipples are swollen and shooting milk out.
Mandy: “Oh fuck! Cumming again!”
Page 19 4 squares.
Panel 1: View down Ben's body of Mandy
squatting over his cock and guiding it into her pussy.
Mandy: “Gonna fuck this big black
cock good, Doc.”
Ben: “Take your medicine, whore.”
Panel 2: Mandy's ass riding Ben's cock.
Hakim's cock is in his hand, it's huge, but slightly limp and spent.
He's removing the dildo with his other hand.
Hakim: “Time for the real thing, Mrs.
Marsh.”
Panel 3: View from Ben's perspective of
Mandy looking very orgasmic and her breasts shooting again.
Hakim is looming over her.
Panel 4: Side view of the threesome
with Mandy at a 45 degree angle between the two men. Her breasts and
shooting again and an x-ray shows both their cocks cumming inside
her.
Page 20 2 big panels up top and a
horizontal on the bottom.
Panel 1: Front view of Mandy. She's
straddling Ben's legs. His cock is rising up her pubes, blowing a
large load of sperm over her body and breasts as she jerks it.
Hakim's cock is off to the side and his hand is on it. It's cumming
on her face and breasts.
Noise around both cocks: jerk jerk and
splurt splurt.
Mandy: “Give me all your seed. I want
every last drop.”
Mandy: “This is just what I need.”
Panel 2: Ty sitting on the edge of the
hot tub. Linda is impaled on his cock, legs wrapped around him and
breasts mashed into his chest. They are on one side. Robert is behind
the hot tub, now dressed wearing a tie and carrying his laptop in a
case.
Linda: “You're not leaving are you?”
Robert: “Going to the office to edit
a video. Then I'm going to spend some time with my wife.”
Panel 3: Mandy laying on the bed,
looking wiped out and slutty. She's rubbing sperm into her body and
nipples again. The men dressed, lab coats visible on either side of
the bed.
Hakim: “Feel better, Mrs. Marsh?”
Mandy: “God yes, but I may need some
more medicine.”
Ben: “Call whenever Mr. Marsh is out
of town for another house call.”
Mandy: “I will and maybe even when
he's at work.”
The End
Very good follow-up to two great stories, but I have personnaly seen two points in your story that made me somewhat sad ... Firstly: second time that you are teasing us with Nurse Pearl without concluding the scene with full sex, shame on you ^^ Secondly: why so few of Eve, if she have no sex scenes, I would rather have her pregnant or caring for a gaggle of black brats... So much unprotected sex and cum and no consequences ^^...
ReplyDeleteIt's a great script. Amazing scenes, especially the house call. We can see again all the characters from the Boob Jobs and Bikini Conspiracy, all the girls get some attention.
ReplyDeleteAs much as I'd like to see Nurse Pearl and Eve in sex scene I think It'd be too much for one comic. For 20 pages it's packed enough with hot action and as a prologue to Bikini Conspiracy 2 it fulfills this role perfectly. Maybe there's a chance that in the future we'll see the Boob Job 4 with more of Pearl and Eve (fingers crossed).
Thanks. This is really Mandy's story. Maybe Pearl should have an origin story of her own?
DeleteI like it. Mandy turned into a BBC slut by her own husband is a dream come true. Hope for more in Bikini Conspiracy II and yeah Pearl deserves her own story.
ReplyDeleteGives me great joy, to see that characters reappear;
ReplyDeleteLinda (conspiracy bikini) and Eva (Boob)
Ojala They continue to appear in many more stories, as they are beautiful.
1. question Will you continue writing the adventures of Eva?
I'd like you to tell us your first few times:
Does Anal Sex? (SodomizarÃan)
¿Sex with two more black men?
Well it seems to me still a very cute character (naive)
2. In the case of Linda, she would like to see the most perverted!
Linda = "HOT"
Tell from today as one more of your readers satisfied.
Federico de Mexico.
I've no plans for Eva as she's really Kaos Gals' character, but it's a maybe. The Bikini Conspiracy 2 will pick up where this left off, but doesn't have any boob job characters. It will feature Linda's sister. This story pretty much turns Robert into a Solomon King type character. It might be interesting if he is turning women into horny sluts for his and other black male's pleasure. He could call them Kaos gals in honor of our illustrator.
Delete1. Thank you for taking the time to answer the questions.
Delete2. Linda (conspiracy bikini) is an amazing character.
And I find it a great idea, create a sister "minor?" Also become addicted to black men.
3. now expect the day to enjoy the little sister Linda arrives.
4. Please if you can send him greetings from us, the illustrator Kaos, his work is wonderful, we are their fans.
Federico de Mexico.
I lot of people seemed to be surprised, but Kaos is a woman and goes by Kaos Gal. I will send her greetings the next time I email her or you can contact her yourself via twitter (kaos comics) or her website.
DeleteThe idea of making Robert a Solomon King type character sounds interesting. Haha Kaos gals, I like it.
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