I really like how the Extra Credit chapter came out and it turned into the longest chapter.
Next up I'll work on the Coxville Curse 3 chapter I've been promising.
Added The Adventures of Big Mack to the unfinished stories section.
I may update this with some more little notes over the next two days so keep
I'm really looking forward to more Coxville Curse.
ReplyDeleteyeeeeeah, you're welcome for everything you write!
ReplyDeleteabout lessons comic, i think you missed to describe this scene, after megan tried anal sex:
"Jamal had scared her the last couple times they had been together. The
first time, he had roughly grabbed her head and fucked her face like she
was just an object designed to make him cum. Last time, he had slammed
his entire cock into her ass, telling her that it was her purpose to
serve men and calling her a slut. He had spanked her cheeks and she had
told him how much she loved having his cock in her ass. Megan had felt
completely used and humiliated by his treatment of her. Worse,
she wanted him to do it again.
Megan decided at that moment, that if Jamal didn't butt fuck her again,
she'd go insane. She ran upstairs and took a quick shower. After drying
her hair, she put some make-up on and grabbed her bath robe. She put the
robe on over her nude body and walked out the back door.
Jamal answered his door after several knocks. He didn't look the least
bit surprised to see her and he stepped aside so that she could come in.
"So Megan," he said, sitting down on the couch. "What can I do for you?" =
Megan let the robe fall to the floor and said, "I want you to fuck my
ass again."
"But, I've already taught you how to do that," he replied.
"The doctor won't do it. I NEED you to shove your big cock in my ass
again."
"Get on your hands and knees."
Megan flushed with excitement and dropped to all fours,
turning around so that her cute little ass was pointed at him.
"Not yet," he said. "First, I want you to crawl over to me and beg me to
fuck your ass like the slut you are. Then I want you to suck my cock
until I tell you I've had enough."
Megan felt humiliated, but her body was automatically responding to his
commands. She felt the moistness between her legs as she crawled over
towards him, but then she was always wet around Jamal.
"Please Jamal, fuck my ass," she begged. "I need you to fuck my ass
again. I need your big black cock inside me."
"Why?" he asked.
"Because I loved it," she said, crying now, "and because my husband won't
do it."
Jamal looked down at Megan. She was between his legs now and unbuttoning
his pants. "Your husband's a loser," he said as she began pulling his
trousers off. "He'll never satisfy you with that little worm of his. He
doesn't even know how to kiss a woman."
Megan nodded, it was all true. She yanked down his briefs, unconsciously
licking her lips as his big cock came into view. She watched it grow a
little more with each beat of his pulse, before taking it once again
into her mouth.
Jamal grabbed her blonde hair and held it off her face so that he could
watch her suck him off. It felt great having a well-built woman kneeling
before him, while swallowing his black monster into her pretty white
face. He let her suck him for about twenty minutes before telling her
to turn around.
Megan eagerly complied and quickly spun around. She felt him kneel
behind her and then his cock's plump head was nudging at her back door.
"Oooww," she jumped when he pushed the head in.
Jamal yanked it out and ran to the bathroom to get more lubrication. Her
saliva wasn't enough and he grabbed a bottle of skin cream out of the
medicine cabinet. He was already rubbing it into his cock when he
returned to her. He made sure it was completely covered and then rubbed
some into her ass. His cock went in a lot easier this time".
is it simply your choice to give another prospect to your comic version or did you forget to write the comic version of this scene?
Conscientious choice. I make little changes here and there and bigger ones from time to time. I copy the story into a new word page and write the comic at the beginning, deleting paragraphs of story text as I convert them, so I read every bit of line. Some dialogs are too long for comic word balloons, etc. I added a little more reluctance during the first actual intercourse chapter "just this once" and the new chapter is very heavy on sex pinup pictures. Plus you try to make them as easy as you can on the artist. I estimate a page has 3.5 pictures on it and this total series comes out to 332.5 illustrations. That puts this at about 42 weeks of postings. I'm sure she'll break it up with comics in between chapters. Can't wait to see the new chapter illustrated, but it's probably years off.
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