Thursday, December 17, 2015

My Plans for Coxville Curse 3

The following contains MAJOR spoilers for the events of CC3. Don't read further if you like being surprised. My outline alone was nearly 30 pages. This story will be big and utilize as many Pit pinups as I could fit in. If there are any loose ends let me know.

Complete
1) Sister Nancy based on Rabies' comic
2) Bobbie Sue and Despre in the library

Future
3) Principal Long and Candy interlude (in progress)
4) Jenny goes to Black's apartment to get him out of her system. They get interrupted by Shondra.
5) Flashback to 1991 Jenny's high school encounter with Shondra.
6) Jenny has a threesome with the Coach and Shondra.
7) Melvin arrives at library after Bobbie Sue's encounter with Despre. BS receives email from Boston library about an early Cox diary from the first Cox immigrant in their collection.
8) Football game where Samson dominates and replaces Todd as quarterback
9) Candy has her second encounter with George at the Westside Healthcare.
10) Kat drives to her mom's and is shocked to find Long there getting ready to drive to New Orleans. They have sex.
11) Candy meets Long's friend Kielbasa from his CB days in the Westside Healthcare
12) COCKS hold victory bonfire party at the lake with everyone treating Samson as a hero. A strange white boy asks Stacy out and she accepts.
13) Long arrives in New Orleans and gets a tarot reading with Adela Leaveaux to commune with Damballah.
14) Stacy on date with her white boyfriend. They enjoy each other's company and keep seeing each other.
15) Long fucks Adela on the tarot card table discussing the tarot reading. She calls Brooks afterwards and tells him he needs to learn his heritage. They're going to buy land in Coxville.
16) Jenny has quick morning sex with Black before going home to Harold. She moves into the guest room.
17) Long drives back from New Orleans and stops buy his house for some things. He's shocked to find Grandmother Tituba waiting for him in his house. She is the priestess of Damballah Island. They discuss recent events and Damballah. Stacy checks in on her grandfather.
18) Long and Black have a meeting with Long trying to convince Black the curse is real.
19) The events of HUNT
20) Bobbie Sue gets a call from Adela asking her to research Brook's family line.
21) Jenny leaves school in a daze. She feels different after being with Long. She invites 5 black members of the team home for another (one woman) pool party.
22) Long calls Black back into his office and shows him the days videos of Jenny and Kitty. Black is convinced the curse is real.
23) Kitty tells mom she's sick and stays home, but actually ordered a black LD dildo delivered. A Black STUDS driver delivers it. (pinups)
24) Bobbie Sue drives Melvin home and asks his mom's permission to take him to Boston with her to help with research. She leaves and bumps into LD who asks for a ride to the store. They have sex.
25) Jenny's 37th birthday. Harold gives her flowers, Kitty the LD dildo and angrily tells her to use it so that she won't cheat on her dad. Black just gives her his cock as present and gets angry when he hears about Kitty's present. He vows to teach the little slut a lesson.
26) Jenny gets texted the anal sex video and told to go somewhere. She's scared at first, but believes Black did it and must have a surprise for her birthday after all.
27) Bobbie Sue and Melvin arrive in Boston. They fuck, but he can't go balls deep anymore.
28) Jenny is told to dress like a whore and gets caught up in a revenge plot by Hercules. She gets spanked.
29) Black takes Kitty in his office and spanks her with a ping pong paddle reminding her that her mom's infidelity is her fault.
30) Bobbie Sue goes to the Boston library and reads of the first Cox immigrant Cotton arriving in Salem and encountering the witch Tituba.
31) Jenny is fucking the coach and he can't go balls deep. She's afraid she's pregnant with Samson's baby.
32) After visiting the Salem witch museum with Melvin, she pees on a pregnancy strip at the airport and it comes back positive.
33) The Bank Robbery- The Big 3 gang rob Kat's bank, taking her and a Latina Coxvillian employee hostage. They threaten to rape the Latina, but Kat wanting their big cocks offers to service them. The Latina gets turned on watching the action.
29) Harold goes to Jenny's school to tell her about the kidnapping.
30) Kat convinces the Latina to try double penetration with the kidnappers.
31) Melvin goes to Susan's house to tutor her and is surprised when she goes for his cock. She agrees to go to the Halloween dance with him
32) Nathan gets a call that his wife and the Latina were found wondering down the road naked and covered in sperm. He's horrified at his wife's rape. Kat confesses she to Jenny that she willingly had sex with her kidnappers. Harold was so helpful during the crises that he and Jenny reconcile.
33) Black catches Deon going hard on Pamela and Miko. He calls Deon doughboy, tells him to get in shape and sends him away while he goes for Pam and Miko.
34) College recruiter is impresses by Samson at away game.
35) Halloween Dance (major event like pool party) Students surprised no rule for costumes. Jenny dressed as slave Leia and Black as Lando. Samson is the big bad wolf to Kitty's red riding hood. Patty in a leopard bikini top and loincloth playing Jane to a black player's Tarzan. Miko in a bare midriff anime outfit. Ivana as a sexy nurse. Long is Blackula. One black football player is Blade the vampire hunter. Melvin owns it as Urkel with Susan as a sexy genie. Bobbie Sue in a black wig as Elvira. Mrs. Reynard (French teacher) is a mime. Harold hovers around Jenny preventing her fun. Patty's mom is chaperoning horrified by the costumes, she threatens Long and Long tells Black to go change her mind.
36) Pool Party 3: Jenny, Kat, and their mom are enjoying the indian summer around the pool when Kitty shows up with the black teammates.
37) Kat and Latina are back at the bank when the get a call that the police caught a suspect in their kidnapping. They go to Coxburg to meet Officer Anderson at a lineup. The men were masked, but Kat says they'd recognize their cocks. The men drop their pants and recognize one of them, but don't tell officer Anderson.
38) Jenny takes a pregnancy test and is horrified top think that Samson knocked her up.
39) Kat and the Latina wait in an alley near the police station. They see their kidnapper leaving and call him over. The Latina fucks him in the alley with Kat about to join in when a dirty homeless man takes her from behind.
40) Long catches Miko and Patty on tape and makes them service him. He tells them to volunteer at the healthcare place helping Candy.
41) Another blowout game for Samson. Two recruiters approach him competing. the female recruiter gives him something special. He decides he needs some spending cash for college and decides to mow lawns around town.
42) A new cheerleader turns eighteen and wants to join Kitty's click. They tell her she can join them, but she has to have sex with the black rooster mascot. She's disgusted as the mascot is a nerdy guy. They tell her that they'll get her boyfriend to wear the outfit, but instead get a black player.
43) Miko and Patty go to volunteer at the Westside healthcare. Patty gets involved with an old blind man. Miko gets attacked by an old cousin of Coach Black's who believes the Korean war is still going on.
44) Jenny goes to the OBGYN and finds she's been pregnant longer then she thought. She confronts Black, but becomes thrilled to be having his baby(s).
45) Veterans Day. Candy and Long go on a date. She strips for him at a club. They hold hands and are seen in public together.
46) Kitty and Samson go to the healthcare center to visit his grandfather who is near death. Samson leaves after text from Herc and Kitty ends up pleasing the old man.
47) Samson goes to Kat's house to join Herc in a threesome.
48) Amami goes to pick up Miko and encounters the Korean Vet. He thinks he's recovering in a Japanese hospital and Miko ends up servicing him.
49) Tyrone gets hired as a janitor and becomes smitten with Jenny. The other janitors promise him that she will fuck him.
50) Nathan catches Kat with a pregnancy test and is horrified to think her kidnappers impregnated her. They find it's from before the kidnapping and she realizes it must be Hercules.
51) Final football game where Samson makes MVP and the Cocks will go to the semi finals.
52) Kitty and Samson go to the black iron gym with Kitty returning for the hung studs.
53) Huge crowd at the semi-finals against another Coxville school in Coxburg. This is an all black school and the players are true ghetto beasts. The QB nicknamed Taurus for a gold ring in his nose bets Samson the winner gets the loser's bitch. They win and the beasts all throw the cheerleaders over their shoulder and take them back to the locker-room. Many complain the white bitches are too tight as their cocks won't penetrate their cervixes.
54) The cheerleaders now out of uniform and dressed slutty are still sore from the beasts. They are all pregnant.
55) The basket ball game from Housewives of Coxville County. Jenny leaves with Tyrone and gets caught by Ivana.
The cheerleaders are making fun of the basketball cheerleaders and their Coach Mrs. Reynard. Giselle Reynard is Coxvillian, but French obsessed and married a Frenchman on a trip to Paris. After them game her cheerleaders are showering when they notice a hole drilled in the wall and scream as a big black cock comes through it. Reynard runs in a grabs it, cursing only to have it blow on her.
56) Thanksgiving play with Jenny blowing the black Indians. Based on a recent Pit pinup.
57) Thanksgiving a Susan's house with her two older sisters trying to help her with her recent wildness. She leaves for a bonfire at the lake and her sisters follow watching her leave with a black man and getting seduced themselves.
58) The bookclub meeting from HOCC takes place.
59) Team goes to watch the championship game and cheer on Taurus and the Pheanus J Cox Highschool team.
60) Black and Jenny sneak off for a sonogram. It's twins. He gives her the gold hear with a spade necklace seen in the Christmas pinups.
61) After Ivana discusses her penis size survey with Long, Mrs. Reynard comes to a meeting with Black and Long about getting the men who drilled the hole in the showers. She accuses the janitors, but says for all she knows it might be Long and Black. They ask if she'd recognize the cocks and Long pulls out his with Black following. Reynard can't resist them.
62) Pam tells Deon he needs to lose weight after Black yelled at him. They go to the gym and ask Sammy for help. This leads to a threesome.
63) Stacy fucks her white boyfriend at the lake and they exchange I love you's. She's happier with him then any other man, but misses the black monster cocks. She has a weird dream that night.
64) Harold and Jenny shopping in Coxburg after church. They notice Felicia and a Latina that Jenny swears worked with Kat at the bank hooking. Jenny sees some black studs hanging out. (pinup)
65) Kitty goes to the Coxburg mall to play Santa's helper (different students do it every weekend). They pulled a homeless black man (the same that fucked Kat) off the street and dressed him as Santa (pinups)
66) Candy getting ready fro Brook's party.
67) Tituba stands outside Brook's party and speaks with Adela. The old woman waits while waves of sexual energy burst out from the mansion from the orgy inside.
68) Vignettes of people affected by the energy waves.
69) Stacy at her boyfriend's redneck families trailer out in West Coxville. The waves of sex energy hit and Stacy gets ganged by the inbred rednecks with bigger cocks. She's impregnanted by men with a rainbow of colors red and blonde hair, green and blue eyes. Her boyfriend joins in, but dumps her afterwards.
70) Tituba walking from Brook's mansion sees Stacy crying use her keys to enter the school gym. She follows and joins Stacy in the showers using the waters of Damballah on the distraught woman.
Only one of them leaves the showers.
71) Candy wakes up on her 56th birthday with a spotty period.
72) Long meets with his granddaughter and finds she's now Tituba. Stacy tells him she's returning to Damballah Island.
73) Todd is out jogging past Ivana's house during the end of the BBQ in HOCC. He peeks in the window and catches his hated stepmom making out with Coach Black (Richard).
74) Todd's real mom is sunbathing while Samson mows her lawn. She can't resist the handsome black teen. Todd comes by to tell his mom he saw Anya with a black man and catches them.
75) A day in the life of Willie Long. Long's sexual escapades on the last day of school before winter break.
76) Harold realizes Jenny has a baby bump on Christmas. He insults her. Black comes over and Jenny blows him while Harold can't help not masturbating while watching. (Pinup) Harold leaves her.
77) Harold comes home and finds Jenny in lingerie serving Black breakfast while Kitty also eats. Jenny fucks him and leaves to shower. Black insults Harold again and pours syrup along his hard cock making Kitty suck him to her dad's horror.
77) Candy Cox's Strange Day- Candy has a strange series of sexual encounters that match the tarot card reading.
78) Harold comes home alone from church to find Jenny in lingerie serving Black and his brother. Maybe tie in with the freaks and giants pinup.
79) Bobbie Sue showing
80) New Year's Eve Party: Jenny kisses Black instead of Harold at midnight in front of everybody. Harold drives them home while they make out in the backseat. They arrive home and he cums in his pants watching them fuck. Black kisses her belly and the bulge under her abdomen. Harold can't take it anymore and leaves for good.
81) Kitty and the cheerleaders are showing.
82) Long and Candy get married by Despre with a strange ceremony involving lots of Caribbean and African symbols. Candy is showing. Black is with Jenny and Kitty with Samson. Nathan whispers to his pregnant wife that her whole family are mud sharks.
83) Pregnant Prom A mom complains to Long about the large number of pregnant seniors at school. She tells him the media will find out about this. He replies, "Good" let the media report about the superiority of our black men. He seduces and fucks her.
84) An 8 month pregnant Bobbie Sue discusses the penis survey with a 5 month pregnant Ivana and speculate on whether slave breeding could be the result.
85) Kitty mentions how different this prom (new beginnings) is from last year's (Summer's End) when she was with Todd.
86) Jenny and Kitty's water breaks and they are rushed to the hospital. Bobbie Sue is there too.
87) A nurse is reeling from the seeing Richard Kindle discover his wife had a black baby. She can't get how beautiful the little chocolate baby was. She's still shocked when she wanders into a black patients room and fucks him wanting her own black baby.
88) Midwife helps Jenny give birth to twins and realizes Black is the father. He wants to stay with Jenny so she offers to help him find a cot. In the supply room, the midwife rips Black's clothes off and fucks him wanting him to knock her up too.
89) Jenny recovering when Kitty wheeled in holding her baby, Ka-lel.
90) 4th of July pool party. Jenny and Kitty back to back in flag bikinis (pinup) proud how their bodies bounced back. Pregnant Candy and Kat are there. Nathan refused to come over knowing there'd be black men there. Kat is starving for sperm and sucks Black and Long off.
91) Jenny breast feeding twins (pinup) when Mom calls and tells her Kat had baby. She convinced Nathan that the timing must be off and it is the kidnappers. He demands she give the baby up and leaves her when she refuses. At the hospital, cheerleaders are being wheeled in.
92) Another nurse does a black man after Susan gives birth.
93) Black comes downstairs after an exhausting night. Jenny mention she's finally healed enough for sex after giving birth. He asks her to marry him and she realizes she doesn't even know his first name.
94) Long and Black are watching this years team training. They mention the black members are getting bigger every year. Kitty and Jenny jog past and head to the MLKjr trail. (pinups)
95) Melvin fucking Bobbie Sue just before he leaves for college. Their baby giggles He he he. She's finishing her first book, The Coxville Curse.
96) Todd White Goes to College: Todd goes to college. He's becoming confident again. He meets a nice girl. He walks into the dorms showers and stares a some black male's normal sized penises. He decides at the last minute to try out for the team and gets in. When he goes to the locker room showers, the other members are all gathered around talking to a man with a huge dangling black cock. Todd looks up to see Samson. He goes back to the dorm to discover his roommate has arrived and it's Samson. That night Todd can't fuck his girlfriend listening to Samson fuck in the next room. He finally gets hard picturing Samson fucking his new girlfriend and decides to make it happen.
97) Bobbie Sue giving a radio interview about her book and future book plans.
98) A year after the fog, Stacy/Tituba gives birth to her half white baby on Damballah Island and names her Ayeda Wedo, the Rainbow.
99) Long with Candy when she gives birth. It's a black featured baby, but the child is albino. Damballahs sacred color is white. They name him Don Pedro Long.
100) Long meets friends and family outside the delivery room. Brooks gives him a check for five million dollars for the baby. He shows them the baby and they all kneel. Despre promises to teach him history and religion, Adela will teach him magic. Adela tells Black that he must train his twins (all of them) as Damballah's heralds and protectors. She says there is a man at Black's gym named Dwight that will teach the babies how to fight.
101) Lots of curse vignettes
102) The nuns are gathered around the old statue of Jesus. They have painted the skin black and replaced the cross with a noose while attaching a LD dildo to the front.
103) Thanksgiving break. Everyine arrives on Damballah Island for Black and Jenny's wedding. Jenny and Kitty arrive first and have some fun on their own. (pinups).
104) Long visits his granddaughter/Tituba who is walking funny after sex with her master three days ago. He is the result of the continued breeding program. They discuss the future of the curse and the world that will be reborn provided Damballah (Don Pedro) and Rainbow mate at the site of the hanging fifty years after the last fog.
105) Jenny gets married on the beach. They women all wear white bikinis and the black men white shorts. A voodoo priest marries them. The master asks Tituba who the women are and that he has not seen their like. He becomes interested in this place called "Coxville".
106) Wedding banquet. Black lifts Jenny and carries her to the honeymoon suite. The master is waiting in their room. He was to be "Black Mamba" from the pinups, but I might not be able to use the name which is a shame cause I had him the fifth in his line so I could do a ladies and gentlemen, this is Mamba number 5 joke. He demands the right of Prima Noctae and takes Jenny impregnating her despite her being on the pill. He then takes all the Cox women also knocking them up with his superior seed. The sexual energy causes a huge orgy to break out with all the guests and natives.
105) In their cribs, Damballah and Ayeda Wedo's hands touch and hold each other. The serpent and the rainbow together.


31 comments:

  1. Wonderful piece of art, that's what comes to mind after reading this, this is just too good to be true and perhaps the major drawback here is the time that will you take to have it completed, I'm not a fan of a few of the "things" that will happen there in Coxville but nevertheless is an awesome project and no doubt I'll be waiting to see it completely finished.
    BTW thanks a lot for all your hard work.

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    1. Just out of curiosity, what aren't you a fan of? Nothing is set in stone and the story will probably change a little.

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  2. For starters I'm not the biggest fan of the constant swapping of couples although certainly I've been enjoying it in this Coxville saga more than I thought I would.
    Besides I've become a big fan of the Bobby Sue/Melvin couple but if its not bound to happen I think it can't be helped.
    Finally, having been raised catholic is a bit weird the last part with the nuns, actually not unpleasant but definitely something unusual XD.

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  3. Very cool, I am looking forward to all of it. I do have a hope that you will include a detailed scene that started at the end of HOCC 2 by Otaku-Ogre. The one with Long, Bianca, and Daphne. But, if not, all of it still looks great.

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  4. Looks good, only thing I don't like is Jenny getting back together with Harold around the Halloween party. Just think it would be better if Jenny was free to have a good time without Harold watching over her.

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  5. Stormbringer it all sounds amazing keep up the brillant work i love your stuff. I can not wait for later down the line when harold is simply accepting jenny fucking the coach. Also the next chapter with a threesome will be hot.

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  6. You are an amazing talent. As someone who reads a ton of smut (and writes a bit as well), your talent is truly unique and I always look forward to reading whatever you post.

    Since you invited comments, I thought I'd share what I liked and didn't like.

    Frankly I liked most of it. I especially liked the Pamela/Deon storyline with the idea of Pamela using her body as incentive for Deon getting into shape. I also liked the Kat storyline, because she is such a slut. Mostly I liked the way that all the girls get knocked up but they are all so slutty that nobody knows who the fathers actually are.

    What I didn't like:

    I didn't like the fate of Stacy Brown. She is one of your best characters and I think the plat isn't really true to her character. Stacy is funloving and slutty and has taken more black dick than any other woman in Coxville. It is not credible that she would suddenly get depressed and switch to white guys. Besides, she deserves better than to get raped and knocked up by a bunch of rednecks and then lose her soul as she becomes a vessel for Tituba.

    I was also disapponted to see no Bianca Blackwood - with that ass, she is the hottest character you've written for Coxville. There is a clear attraction between her and Richard Black (Coach's brother) in HOCC that should be followed up. I think that Bianca is different from the other Coxville women. Her body is the hottest of all, but she is more mature and controlled and less of a slut.

    Lastly, Damballah as an albino just strikes me as kind of weird. It doesn't make sense to me.


    Here's a thought:

    In the aftermath of the lightning strike, the cheerleaders discover black cock, and Stacy Brown's star really rises. Her fellow cheerleaders realizes that she has taken more black dick than the rest of them put together and they respect Stacy for the admiring way their black studs talk about her. Pretty soon Stacy Brown has suplanted Kitty at the head cheerleader and it is now Stacy who directs their social lives, guiding them on who and how to fuck. In particular, she takes Patty under her wing, teaching the voluptuous PAWG how to be as big a gangbang slut as Stacy herself is. Principal Long takes full advantage of this by controlling the cheerleaders through his daughter, bestowing their sexual favors on whoever he chooses. Sensing something special about her, Father Despre conducts a mysterious ritual (with her father's blessing) on Stacy. All the white, Stacy's sexual appetite continues to grow as she insatiably gangbangs the biggest black cocks in Coxville until she is eventually knocked up. Her unborn child is the incarnation of Damballah.

    We also learn that Coach's brother, Richard, has spent the last decade practicing advanced tantric methods which give him the latent ability to be one of the most powerful sexual performers in the world. His sexual powers are noticed by Tituba, who enlists him to chose a mate with whom he will sire the next Ayeda Wedo. Not only must she give birth to Ayeda Wedo but she must also birth an entire retinue of heralds and maidens to serve the next Damballah. Richard choses Bianca Blackwood for this honor, noting that she has many fine qualities for the mother of a queen and she has the most auspicious posterior in all of Coxville. Bianca does not want to cheat on her husband and is adamant about not wanting to bear a child from her adultery. But ultimately, she is unable to resist the will of Richard Black and he claims her, keeping Bianca pregnant almost continuously over the next five years. Her humiliated husband divorces her, but by that point Bianca no longer cares.

    So Stacy becomes the mother of Damballah and Bianca is the mother of Rainbow. Jenny, Bobby Sue, Kat and the cheerleaders all give birth to members of a growing entourage for their future king and queen. Why not?

    Or, Father Despre impregnates Sister Nancy and their daughter becomes Rainbow. That could work too.

    Anyway, that is just my 2 cents. I know whatever you write will be great.

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    1. For the record, Bianca is under Ota's purview and he has plans for her to appear in the future. I've also never done anything really with Stacy, she's just based on a pinup Pit drew of a black cheerleader. I'm not necessarily wedded to the albino idea except that they are thought to have magical powers in some African cultures (and killed to this day for it).

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    2. This @non has a point with which I am specially agree, that end for Stacy feels anticlimactic, specially after read the last update of this story "The next Coxville Curse 3 chapter" in which seems to be made very clear the deep feelings of Principal Long towards her granddaughter.
      Please don't misunderstand me, from what I read here I loved his arc and the development up to the point where she is basically replaced (and I think at that point we can suppose she is dead?), that contrast between the hottest (and practically only) black girl and the rednecks against the blondes and the black guys is totally wonderful and fits absolutely perfect in this last part of the story (if there is something that needs remain the same regardless of any changes just that), is just the last part with Stacy leaving her body to someone else which seems to be out of sync with the rest of the story, I mean, she could be some kind of heir of the knowledge of Tituba without losing herself in the process, right?
      Besides she deserves a "happy" ending too.

      Also the albino baby part is one more good detail that actually fits perfectly with all ypur awesome Coxville universe universe, is one thing more that should remain the same.

      Finally, I'd love to know more about the future for such awesome characters like Bianca, Sammy, Anya and specially Ivana Swallows (BTW is Ivana a character of Ota authorship?), but if you say Ota is working with them I think we will have to wait (nevertheless any hint is really appreciated).

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    3. Yes, Ivana is under Ota's purview. It doesn't mean I can't use her, it just means we have to coordinate any plans.

      As for Tituba, Stacy and all the prior Tituba's share her body, so Stacy is not dead or gone. In fact, she's the dominant personality. I have her feeling quite happy with the situation in my notes.

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    4. Thank you for the clarification, if she is happy then I think that everything is fine.

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  7. Thanks for clearing that up about Bianca. I am looking forward to those stories.

    Just please be nice to Stacy. What makes her interesting is that she is very slutty while never losing her self respect. I guess I always saw her as a strong character with a confident personality, eventually maybe domming the other cheerleaders once they got turned onto black cock. So reading the plot, where she basically collapses psychologically, was a bit jarring for me.

    I know she isn't yours, but Sister Nancy is also a great character with the element of guilt over breaking her religious vows making her story more powerful than cheating on a husband or boyfriend.

    With everything that has been written about Jenny and Kitty with all the swapping their situations are getting very complicated and I often wonder if certain stories, like "Judged", are even part of the Coxville canon.

    At any rate, it would be very interesting for me to learn more about the less developed characters.

    I know whatever you write will be hot ... but I do have my favorites!

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  8. I have started Stormbringer stories only recently and really think you are doing such an amazing job. Congrats! I like the Coxville stories, in particular Jenny and Kat. I was thinking that after the pool party, Jenny would be willing to fuck Stubby again at some point. And after seeing Deon doing Kitty, she would consider trying Deon too as she was impressed by his cock. Maybe this could happen on Coxville curse 3 in chapter 21 or 36 with an intense threesome or one after another.
    Also, Deon doing Susan sometimes. Like the idea of those two opposite characters and Susan going crazy and suddenly addicted to him. Anyway looking forward to the story!

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    1. I meant to say : I have started 'reading"..:)

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  9. All of it seemed great and I'm really looking forward to it. Will you continue to write in the Coxville universe after this? I love the universe and the characters and would hate for it to end. Also if any other writers write stories in the universe will you also add them here?

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  10. I noticed you didn't have "The Lesson" the pinup in any of your chapters.

    http://salm6n7djbooy.tumblr.com/post/68051173303/thelesson

    Any chance you could fit that in?

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  11. The problem with the Lesson was that I couldn't get in touch with the author for permission. He doesn't post much on the forums anymore. I'll give it another try and maybe just post it anyway.

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  12. After finding the Hot Blondes comics, I found your stories and have been a huge fan of them since, especially the Coxville stories. I do also agree with the anon who said that Richard and Bianca have the potential for an awesome story for themselves, what with Rich being (in my opinion) a more likeable version of Coach and Bianca's maturity level combined with her inner freakiness...not to mention her physical description playing the hell up out of the "beautiful, big-booty teacher" fantasy that a lot guys have had at least once. Just my two cents that hopefully get deposited.

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    1. The problem is still that Bianca is Ota's character and he has plans for her after Housewives is finished. Thickwil is writing more Sister Nancy stories. Any crossover involves closely working together so as not to step on each other's toes. I had intended a scene where Jenny vows to keep her love for Harold and her cheating confined to the Coach only. She sneaks into the Coach's house and has sex with him only to discover it's Richard and she broke her vow almost as soon as she made it. The Coach arrives and joins them in a threesome, but then Ota had him arriving for the end of Housewives and we couldn't reconcile the two.

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  13. Damn. Woulda been nice to see. Every time Bianca shows in one of these, I get excited. And she and Rich seem to be a damn good fit.

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  14. What about some more Ivanna Swallows? I always liked the idea of her and Jenny being rivals and trying to out do each other in terms of sluttiness. Is she also Ota's character?

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  15. Ivana is under Ota's control as are the other Housewives.

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  16. I like Jenny divorcing Harold and marrying Coach. They look perfect together. Besides she's having his baby.

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  17. Finally Kitty fucks Coach Black!!

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  18. Look, normally I don't comment on an outline because you as the author already have a plan in motion and would like to stick to it. That being said, your idea for Stacy is sadistic and bordering on the psychotic.

    What I mean by this is that The moment Hughe (damn these names) and Stacy got together it felt as a genuine human moment. It was like a strong clean wind blowing through the quagmire that had been festering. It also makes sense from the Curse point, because then consequences could start to build. Say that some people are getting wise to it, playing with their own magic, and it's screwing up Damballah's curse. But for Stacy to be raped by inbreads, impregnated, dumped and then become a vessel for a demon is horrifying. She's Stacy Brown not Yvraine from 40K.

    The rest I don't really care about, you can do whatever you like. Their proportions are so over exaggerated that I'm shocked that the women don't have massive back problems.

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    1. Totally disagree with most of this. I'm glad you like the relationship between the two. She's not going to get raped. She'll enjoy the sex, but feels guilty afterwards and finds happyiness when she becomes a vessel for Tituba. Ayida-Wedo isn't a demon, but the voodoo goddess of fertility and the voodoo equivalent of the immaculate conception of the virgin Mary. I'm a DD man myself, but Pit drew them as EE to GG not to mention going a little overboard on the cocks. I like to think Coxville women have reinforced spines.

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  19. DOWNLOAD $12,234 in 2 months Betting Software?

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  20. Any chance of the Halloween dance happening as a one off soon?

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    1. No. The Halloween dance will occur at the ending of the next CC story.

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    2. Excellent, can’t wait to read it! Cheers!

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  21. Please give Patty a gangbang at the Halloween dance. She should get at least five cocks to herself and maybe get a double anal and vaginal experience. I can’t wait to see how nasty she can get and how much of a mega Milf her mom is.

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