Sunday, April 24, 2022

Author to check out

 Check The My Wife Becca story out. One of the best I've read in a long time.


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2 comments:

  1. I read it. It was clearly well written by a good writer. It was a bit too... entry-level? for my taste. Not hardcore enough, I mean.

    As a gateway to, let's just pick a random example, Stormbringer content, I'm sure it will do fine :)

    As something that tides us over until the next Stormbringer update, I'm afraid it didn't quite scratch the itch :) It was too gentle, too realistic.

    The same story with the following minor tweaks could, on the other hand, be awesome!

    a) make Ted black, with a freak 18 inch horsecock for a dick that he's sensitive about and doesn't like to talk about
    b) increase Becca's ambivalence and hesitation
    c) have Ted be assertive, not passive. Steve can remain as-is: secretly enthusiastic about exhibiting his wife; selfishly trying to downplay her misgivings for selfish pleasure. Of course, he's completely oblivious to the saying "Give someone an inch and he'll take a yard" and completely misevaluates his ability to control Ted once events are set into motion.

    While on the subject of dream scenarios, I would of course take the opportunity to have Becca and Steve trying for a baby; neither being particularly pleased about the prospect of a black baby :)

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  2. Thanks for the mention on your blog. This is Bridgekicker. Yeah, I just started writing a couple months ago, and I'm thinking of more scenarios for both of my series. I'm not done with them by any means.

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