This Week

1) Kaos started the sequel to Annabelle today. I was a little disappointed. My fingers were crossed for Son's Best friend's Dad. The good thing is that I haven't read the story and get to be surprised as I read it. The cover is pretty hot.

2) Didn't get much writing done this week. I'm on vacation next week and only going away for an overnight so I hope to finish the BC2 comic script.

3) I had an idea I want to run by Kaos based on the fact that turning many of my stories into comics makes a huge comic or even my current script for BC2 is large. I loved her Flag Girls, but it took a long time to finish Part 1. The idea is for a 32 page comic. They would be posted between longer comics. At 8 pages a day, that would mean the entire story is finished in 4 weeks. I sketched out some ideas and wrote synopsis for two of them as well as the images I want on the 32 pages. It was surprisingly easy. Turning them into comic pages will be a little harder, but not too bad. I'm not going to send them to her to see what she thinks until I'm done the two samples. Here they are if you want to see them.

The Taxi Driver’s Tip

Characters:

Leonard: Good looking white man. He’s in a tux and very drunk.

Penny: Gorgeous buxom blonde. She’s wearing a little black dress that shows a lot of boob. She’s wearing heels.

Djimon Kerekou: Taxi driver from Benin. I’m thinking ugly, white haired and out of shape with bad teeth (like the homeless man from Dr Bitch).

Synopsis: The white couple is drunk and leaving a crowded club following a wedding. Maybe they comment that there were too many blacks at the club. They wave down a taxi and are picked up by Djimon. Leonard passes out in the back seat. Penny reads the driver’s ID badge and sees his name, age 65, and that he’s African. She realizes that they don’t have any money on them and asks the driver if he would take a credit card or a check, but that she’d need to get it from her room. Djimon is ogling her boobs and gets angry threatening to drive them to the police. He pulls over and asks for a blow job. She’s horrified, but he tells her that she can spend the night in jail or blow him. She might have some marijuana in her purse and fear getting arrested. Disgusted, she agrees. He pulls over off the road and she kneels outside the cab with her dress pulled down while he leans against it. She’s shocked by his cock size. He holds her head so that she swallows his cum and is surprised she likes the taste. At the hotel, Djimon helps her carry Leonard into the room. He drops the drunk husband on the couch and starts stripping Penny. She fights a little and he says that the blow job was just his tip, now he wants to get paid for the cab ride. They have sex on the bed in multiple positions with Djimon failing to pull out each time he cums. He breaks in her ass then goes to shower. She joins him, lovingly kissing him and kneeling to blow him one last time.

1)      Leaving club, waving down a taxi.

2)      Back seat of the cab

3)      Hubby passes out. Wife realizes no money.

4)      Drivers id badge, she’s thinking yech.

5)      She’s leaning over asking check or cc he says no, cash only.

6)      He’s yelling, stop cop drunk and stealing a ride. She’s crying.

7)      He pulls over homeless and druggies around. Gimme a bj

8)      She’s disgusted, hubby wont wake. He opens door abandon them both. She agrees

9)      She’s kneeling disgusted.

10)   Cock popping up over yellow stained inderwear.

11)   Sucking half fondling balls

12)   He pulls dress straps down while she deep throats it.

13)   Her cheeks are bulging over bared breasts.

14)   Her licking her lips in back seat.

15)   Hotel. Asks him to help carry drunk husband.

16)   Deposits hubby on couch, grabs wife pulls out tits again

17)   He’s stripping that was my tip, this is payment for the cab ride

18)   Him entering her shes wet

19)   Fucking her hard, shes cumming.

20)   Him squirting all over her.

21)   Her messy and lowering herself over him.

22)   Bouncing in his lap. He’s cumming agin

23)   One more in me. On all fours shes cumming

24)   Him pulled out raising to anus

25)   Stretching out anus

26)   Fucking her ass she loves it

27)   Cumming over ass and back anus stretched and leaking

28)   He goes to shower

29)   She joins him

30)   Hugging and kissing under shower

31)   Shes kneeling blowing him

32)   Face coated, cock spent. Says she’ll need a ride to get their car in the morning.

Hot Tub Hot Wife

Copyright 2017 by Stormbringer

Characters:

Eric Jones: Average looking white male, early twenties. Brown hair, parted in the middle. Average to smallish penis.

Carla Jones: Eric’s wife. Stunning blonde with huge breasts and a killer body.

Kaleem Payne: Standard hung muscular stud. He is bald with a goatee or he can have any appearance.

Jade Payne: His wife. Stunning with a killer body and ass.

Synopsis:  Eric and Carla, young newlyweds on their honeymoon, are making out in a hot tub in a private deck equipped with a tiki bar when a black woman from the adjoining bungalow asks to join them. She drops her robe revealing her naked body to the young couple’s surprise. She apologizes saying that she assumed the couple was naked too. Carla wants to go, but Eric says just a little longer. He fantasizes of a threesome with both women. He pulls his shorts off underwater, but Carla won’t remove her bikini. Kaleem shows up to Eric’s surprise and drops his robe. Carla stares in awe at his giant black cock as he slips into the water. Jade kisses him and fondles his cock underwater. The white couple get uncomfortable and start to leave, but Jade says one more drink and gets Kaleem to make them. He stands showing his cock is now mostly hard. When he returns, Jade has him stand in the water with his cock sticking out. She comments that Carla clearly hasn’t seen a black man’s cock before. She asks Carla if she wants to touch it. Carla does to Eric’s objection, but she does anyway. Jade tells Carla to thank her husband for letting her touch his cock. Jade fondles Eric under the water and he gets hard. Jade tells Carla to show her respect for the cock by kissing it. Eric says no and Jade leans forward and plants a kiss on the head and tells Carla to do the same. Eric stands and says it’s time to go. Jade puts Carla’s other hand on her husband’s cock and tells her to kiss the superior cock. She kisses the black man. Jade says again, again, now lick it turning into a blow job. Eric asks if Jade would blow him, but she doesn’t suck white boys, their seed is so runny and weak. But there is one thing little white boy dicks are good for, anal sex while reaching over and untying her bikini top. Carla gulps down a load of Kaleem’s seed. Jade asks her if it was good and Carla nods loving it. Jade tells her to thank Kaleem and she does. Kaleem is still hard and she tells Karla to sit down on the edge of the hot tub while Jade unties her panties. Now it’s time for my husband to fuck you. Eric objects, but she pulls him towards the black man and makes Eric hold his penis. She belittles him and has him guide Kaleem’s cock to his wife’s pussy making him ask Kaleem to fuck his wife. Jade lets Eric do her ass while they watch Kaleem give Carla multiple orgasms. Afterwards, Jade makes them both thank her husband and tells Eric that they are leaving in the morning and Carla will be staying with them that evening. He watches through a window while Kaleem pleases both women

1)      White couple making out in hot tub.

2)      Black woman in robe asking to join

3)      Black woman robe open nude

4)      The three in tub talking married for a day hubby fantasizing threesome from later scene

5)      Hubby pulls off shorts but wife wint take off bikini

6)      Black man in robe

7)      Black man nude slipping into tub while wife introduces

8)      Black couple making out wifes hand clearly in his lap white offer to leave

9)      Jade says one more drink, hubby will get it. His cock head is rising above water

10)   Kaleem stands cock sticking straight in white’s face

11)   He returns with drinks. Jade fondles eric underwater has kaleem stand

12)   Carla touches it comments on powerful jade tells her to thank kaleem

13)   Jade kisses the head telling karla to do the same to show repsect

14)   Eric standing stopping his wife. His cock is pathetic

15)   Jade has Karla touch both penises and to kiss the superior cock

16)   Karla kisses kaleems head

17)   Jade says kiss it again now lick it, suck it.

18)   Karla sucking kaleem eric asks jade she insults his weak seed.

19)   Jade untying karlas top telling eric white boy dicks are good for anal

20)   Karla gulping down cum jade asks if it was good mmmm hmmm

21)   Karla sitting on rim. Jade untying panty telling her to thank kaleem for his seed

22)   Karla laying back. Jade saying kaleem will fuck her putting erics hand on kaleem while he objects

23)   Eric guiding kaleem into wife while jade makes him ask kaleem to fuck her

24)   God view of karla screaming in pleasure

25)   Jades ass spread for eric

26)   Foursome fucking karla now doggy

27)   Erics spent dripping cock over jades anus while karla rides kaleem now screaming she loves him

28)   Xray kaleem cumming in her

29)   Karla embracing kaleem jade hugging her eric looking dejected. Back in morning

30)   Women 69ing

31)   Kaleem fucking karla on jade.

32)   Eric stroking spent penis while watching kaleem with both women in arms grabbing cock. Thinking how hot his wife looks with black men.