Hot Tub Hot Wife
Copyright 2017 by Stormbringer
Characters:
Eric Jones: Average looking white male, early twenties.
Brown hair, parted in the middle. Average to smallish penis.
Carla Jones: Eric’s wife. Stunning blonde with huge breasts
and a killer body.
Kaleem Payne: Standard hung muscular stud. He is bald with a
goatee or he can have any appearance.
Jade Payne: His wife. Stunning with a killer body and ass.
Synopsis: Eric and
Carla, young newlyweds on their honeymoon, are making out in a hot tub in a
private deck equipped with a tiki bar when a black woman from the adjoining
bungalow asks to join them. She drops her robe revealing her naked body to the
young couple’s surprise. She apologizes saying that she assumed the couple was
naked too. Carla wants to go, but Eric says just a little longer. He fantasizes
of a threesome with both women. He pulls his shorts off underwater, but Carla
won’t remove her bikini. Kaleem shows up to Eric’s surprise and drops his robe.
Carla stares in awe at his giant black cock as he slips into the water. Jade
kisses him and fondles his cock underwater. The white couple get uncomfortable
and start to leave, but Jade says one more drink and gets Kaleem to make them.
He stands showing his cock is now mostly hard. When he returns, Jade has him
stand in the water with his cock sticking out. She comments that Carla clearly
hasn’t seen a black man’s cock before. She asks Carla if she wants to touch it.
Carla does to Eric’s objection, but she does anyway. Jade tells Carla to thank
her husband for letting her touch his cock. Jade fondles Eric under the water
and he gets hard. Jade tells Carla to show her respect for the cock by kissing
it. Eric says no and Jade leans forward and plants a kiss on the head and tells
Carla to do the same. Eric stands and says it’s time to go. Jade puts Carla’s
other hand on her husband’s cock and tells her to kiss the superior cock. She
kisses the black man. Jade says again, again, now lick it turning into a blow
job. Eric asks if Jade would blow him, but she doesn’t suck white boys, their
seed is so runny and weak. But there is one thing little white boy dicks are
good for, anal sex while reaching over and untying her bikini top. Carla gulps
down a load of Kaleem’s seed. Jade asks her if it was good and Carla nods
loving it. Jade tells her to thank Kaleem and she does. Kaleem is still hard
and she tells Karla to sit down on the edge of the hot tub while Jade unties
her panties. Now it’s time for my husband to fuck you. Eric objects, but she
pulls him towards the black man and makes Eric hold his penis. She belittles
him and has him guide Kaleem’s cock to his wife’s pussy making him ask Kaleem
to fuck his wife. Jade lets Eric do her ass while they watch Kaleem give Carla
multiple orgasms. Afterwards, Jade makes them both thank her husband and tells
Eric that they are leaving in the morning and Carla will be staying with them
that evening. He watches through a window while Kaleem pleases both women
Cover: A hot tub in a deck. The view is of Eric and Carla
making out. Her arm is wrapped around his neck, hand holding a wine glass and a
ring sparkling on her fingers. Jade is approaching behind them. She is wearing
a short robe, belted at the waist. She’s showing a lot of cleavage. In the
background is a little bar with glasses and a bottle of wine.
Title: Hot Tub Hot Wife
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaoscomics
Page 1: 4 square
Panel 1: Shot similar to cover. Jade has walked around while
the newlywed couple is looking up at her.
Jade: “Mind if I join you?”
Eric: “Not at all.”
Carla: “We’re about ready to get out anyway.”
Panel 2: The bottom is the back of the white couple’s heads,
Eric on left, Carla on right. Centered in the picture is Jade with the robe
falling off her shoulders, her voluptuous nude body on display.
Eric (thinking) WOW!
Carla: “You’re nude?”
Jade: “Yes, is that alright?”
Panel 3: The three sitting in the tub. The ladies are
sitting up and their breasts are visible above the water. Carla in a bikini,
Jade nude. Carla is holding out her hand displaying her ring. A dream bubble is
coming off Eric of him nude laying between the nude women. He’s staring at
Jade’s tits.
Carla: “I’m Carla, this is Eric, my husband of three days.”
Jade: “Congratulations. I’m Jade.”
Carla: “Eric, quit staring at her boobs.”
Panel 4: The three in the tub. Eric is holding up his
shorts. The women are staring at them.
Jade: “This area is private and clothing optional. You
should join me.”
Eric: “Alright, I’m in.”
Carla: “Well not me.”
Eric: “Come on babe, this is Las Vegas after all.”
Page 2 4 square
Panel 1: Long view of the hot tub. The white couple on the
right. Eric closest. Jade on left across from Eric. Kaleem is approaching
wearing a short terry cloth robe. The end of his penis might be dangling under
the edge.
Jade: “Here comes my husband, Kaleem.”
Panel 2: Close up of the tub and the upper torsos. Kaleem’s
lower torso is visible. He’s stepping down into the tub, huge cock and balls
very prominent. Everyone in the tub is staring at it in awe. Jade is smirking.
Jade: “Kaleem, this is Eric and Carla Jones.”
Kaleem: “S’up. Nice to meet you.”
Carla (thinking) I don’t believe it. I thought Eric was big?
Eric (thinking) I wish I’d kept my shorts on.
Panel 3: View between Eric and Carla. They are looking at
each other in embarrassment. Between them on the other side, the black couple
are making out heavily. Kaleem’s arm is around her back and his big hand is
pinching her hard erect nipple. Her hand is between his legs and the end of his
cock is sticking out above the water.
Carla: “Um, we should get going.”
Eric: “Yeah, it’s about time to hit the casino.”
Panel 4: Close up of the hot tub with Kaleem standing. His
cock is sticking straight out and the head is right in Carla’s face to the
point she’s pulled her head back.
Jade: “But it’s early, Kaleem get us some more wine.”
Carla (thinking): I had no idea there were penises that big.
Eric: “We really should go.”
Jade: “One more drink. Why don’t you give Kaleem a hand?”
Page 3 split top and
bottom
Panel 1: The women in the tub looking at the two men. Their
lower halves are visible. Kaleem’s cock is still fully hard. Eric’s penis has
receded into his scrotum making him look smaller. Both men have hands handing
out glasses of wine to the women.
Kaleem: “Thanks for the help, little guy.”
Carla (thinking) I’ve never seen anything like it. It’s
making my vagina quiver.
Jade: “I don’t think Carla has ever seen a big black cock
before, Kaleem.”
Panel 2: The view has shifted to the other end. Kaleem in
still standing on the right. Carla is reaching out and tentatively touching the
head of his cock. Beyond that, Jade’s hand is in Eric’s lap and he looks
startled.
Jade: “Go ahead and touch it, Carla. See what a big cock
feels like.”
Eric: “I don’t think that’s a…. WHOA!”
Jade (thinking): Gonna take some coaxing to get this little
guy to come out.
Carla: “It’s so big and thick! Really hard too!”
Page 4: 4 panels
Panel 1: Close up of Carla and his crotch. She’s gripping
the thick shaft now. One hand is cupping one of his balls what completely fills
it.
Carla: “Your balls are like coconuts.”
Jade (off panel): “Thank him for letting you touch his
cock.”
Carla: “Thank you for letting me touch you, Kaleem.”
Panel 2: Kaleem’s lower torso angled towards his wife. Carla
is on the other side. Her hand is on the base of his cock. Jade is leaning
forward, planting a kiss right on the pee slit.
Jade: “You show your respect for it by kissing the head.”
Panel 3: Kaleem has now turned to face Carla. She is still
holding it and leaning forward to kiss it. Eric has stood. His little penis is
erect.
Jade: “Now your turn.”
Eric: ‘Now wait just a minute.”
Panel 4: Carla between both men. Her other hand is now on
Eric’s penis and very little sticks out from her fist. Her head is turned
towards Kaleem.
Jade (off panel): “Touch your husband.”
Jade (off panel): “Now respect the superior penis.”
Carla (thinking): It’s not even close. Kaleem’s is superior.
Page 5: long horizontal across top, 4 squares underneath.
Panel 1: Close up of just his long cock with her lips
puckered on the tip.
Panel 2: The side of Jade’s head watching Carla sucking the
end of Kaleem’s cock.
Jade: “That’s good Carla. Kiss it. Lick it. Now suck that
big black cock.”
Carla (thinking): It’s so powerful!
Panel 3: Eric’s lower torso, his penis is pointed at Jade.
She looks disgusted by it.
Eric: “Uh.. I don’t suppose you’d uh.. suck me?”
Jade: “Fuck no. White boy seed is so weak and pathetic.”
Panel 4: Carla sucking Kaleem while fondling his balls. Jade
is holding up her bikini top and Carla’s breasts are visible for the first
time. She’s looking back at Eric.
Jade: “Little white boy dicks are good for one thing. Ass
fucking.”
Noise: suk suk suk.
Panel 5: Closer view of Carla. Her cheeks are bulging out with
cum. The tip of Kaleem is still in her mouth. Sperm is shooting out her lips
and dripping onto her breasts. Jade is leaning into her looking smug.
Jade: “Is it good, honey?”
Carla: “Mmm-hmm.”
Carla (thinking) So good! So thick and rich! I love it!
Noise: gulp gulp
Page 6: 4 square panels
Panel 1: Carla sitting on the edge. Jade is untying her
panty and pulling it open. Kaleem is still standing with his still erect cock
pointing towards Carla. The head is still dripping cum.
Jade: “Thank Kaleem for letting you suck him.”
Carla: “Thanks for letting me suck you.”
Jade: “And for the gift of his seed.”
Carla: “And for your cum. It was… delicious.”
Panel 2: Long shot. Carla is laying on her back, legs
spread. Jade is on the right (Carla’s left.) Her black hand in on Eric’s arm
guiding him to her husband’s cock. Eric is holding the large black shaft.
Jade: “Now my husband is going to fuck you.”
Eric: “No way! A blow job is one thing, but…”
Jade: “Here, feel that big black cock.”
Jade: “Not like holding your little white boy dick is it?”
Panel 3: Close up of Carla’s lower torso. Eric’s hand is
holding Kaleem’s shaft while the tip of his cock is spreading Carla’s labia
open.
Carla (off panel): “Please Eric? I want it.”
Jade (off panel): “Ask my husband to fuck your wife.”
Eric: “P..please fuck my wife, Kaleem.”
Panel 4: God view of Carla screaming in pleasure. Motion
lines show Kaleem fucking her hard and fast.
Carla: “YES! GOD YES!”
Carla: “I’M CUMMING!”
Noise: fuk fuk fuk.
Page 7 Split top and
bottom
Panel 1: Kaleem’s ass on the right fucking Carla. She’s
angled so that you can see her body and tits. Jade is leaning over the side of
the tub beside her, looking at her. Jade’s ass is large and prominent. Eric is
standing on the far side. Still hard. His little penis is pointing at Jade’s
ass.
Carla: “I’m cumming! I’m cumming so HARD!
Jade: “Now it’s time to put that little penis to work. Fuck
my ass, white boy!”
Panel 2: Jade is in the front of the image. She is leaning
over the water, grabbing the rim. Her breasts are dangling. Eric is fucking her
ass from behind. Slightly above her and too the right. Carla is now on all
fours with Kaleem standing in the water, fucking her doggy style.
Noise: fuk fuk fuk
Carla: “Fuck me! Fuck me with that big black cock!”
Jade: “Your wife looks so hot fucking my husband.”
Eric: “Yes. Yes, she does.”
Page 8 top half and two square bottoms
Panel 1: Long shot. On the left. Kaleem is now sitting on
the edge. Carla is in the water riding him reverse cowgirl. One black hand is on
her hip and one is pinching a nipple. Jade is on the right leaning over the
railing. Her ass is still on display. Her anus has a drop or two of cum on it.
Eric’s limp spent cock is laying on her cheek.
Kaleem: “Is your wife protected?”
Eric: “No. Pull out.”
Kaleem: “Fuck no.”
Carla: “No way, cum in me. I want it.”
Panel 2: Close up of Carla’s front sitting in Kaleem’s lap.
X-ray shows him filling her womb. Cum is leaking out their crotches, dripping
off his balls and into the water. He’s looking over her shoulder, maybe evilly.
Carla: “CUMMING! SEED ME!
Kaleem: “Here it cums slut, take every drop.”
Carla: “YES! I LOVE IT! I LOVE YOU!
Panel 3: Eric standing in the tub looking up at the others.
They are standing on the deck. Carla is in Kaleem’s arms. Her hand is on his
spent cock. Jade’s arm is around Carla, grabbing on ass cheek.
Kaleem: “Come on. I want to fuck you some more.”
Eric: “But?”
Jade: “Don’t worry white boy, we’ll have your wife back in
the morning.”
Page 9:
Panel 1: Side view of both women 69ing. Beyond them, Eric’s
face is visible peering in the window.
Noise: Slurp, slurp
Panel 2: Angled view of Carla laying on Jade, kissing.
Kaleem is fucking Carla again.
Noise: fuk fuk fuk.
Panel 3: Outside view. Eric’s hand is on his penis and it is
squirting a couple drops. In the window, Kaleem is laying with both women in
his arms in a mirror image of what Eric had fantasized the women doing with him
earlier.
Eric (thinking) I hope they fuck again.
Eric (thinking) Carla looked so hot with that black cock.
Eric (thinking) She’s hooked now. Couldn’t stop her if I
wanted to.
Eric (thinking) Oh well, as long as I get to watch.
The End
Hi, can you please update the hocc story and comment when it is done?
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