An early this week. I'll update it later if there's any additional news.
Too early for Kaos, but I'll assume we'll have an 8 page update from her by Monday morning EST. No, I haven't heard back from her about the 32 page comic idea. I'll bring it back up when I send off Bikini Conspiracy 2 to her. If she's not interested, I'll send them to blacknwhitecomics. They could probably use some short comics also.
RogueAlan was inspired to do story versions of the two Son's Best Friend and Son's Best friend's Dad comics. They are in the story section at the bottom labeled fanfic. You can let him know what you think in the comments section there. I've already done a story version for the first and probably will do one for the second when the comic gets posted.
BC2 nears completion. Here's the synopsis. I'm at the part in the end where Toni essentially takes on all five guys.
For those that don't want to read a comic script, here's the synopsis for BC2. It's long and I broke it up into 3 parts. Each will have a lot of sex with the big bang coming in part 3.
The Bikini Conspiracy 1: Linda gets tricked into wearing a skimpy bikini while on the boat ride and seduced by her husband's boss, Robert and his lawyer friend Ty.
The Boob Job 3: A jealous Mandy wants breasts as big as Linda's and Robert takes her to The Boob Job clinic which it turns out he secretly owns. Mandy gets double teamed by the doctor at the clinic and the fake doctor (Hakeem and BBC).
The Bikini Conspiracy 2: Mandy goes to show Linda her new breasts and catches her having sex with Ty. She's relieved as she suspects Robert is cheating on her. They agree to get together at Mandy's the next day. When Mandy leaves, Robert comes out of the bathroom and there's some MMF action. Linda's sister, Toni calls, distraught over her husband Vince cheating on her. Linda invites her sister to join her and Mandy the next day.
The three women get together and sunbath. Linda and Mandy take their tops off. Toni thinks that if her breasts were bigger, Vince might be more interested in her. She also thinks that having a baby might save their marriage. Mandy has some left over pills and offers them to Toni. Linda thinks the pills look a lot like her prenatal vitamins that she took while pregnant. Toni is a little turned off to see a picture showing Mandy is married to a black man. She leaves with the pills. Linda and Mandy examine each other's breasts which turns them on and they end up in bed together for some FF action. They are caught and joined by Robert turning into an MFF scene. Robert and Mandy agree to start sharing and swinging, after Mandy starts taking birth control and they have a baby.
End Part 1
Toni's breasts are growing and Vince notices. Vince is a hunky muscular fireman and great looking, but with an inferior penis. She's getting hornier and hornier as her breasts grow. They fool around some, but it's unrewarding and he's upset to find she quit taking birth control. Then when Vince is in the shower, she checks his phone and finds messages from multiple women. She gives him an ultimatum and ends up throwing him out. Linda gives her Ty's phone number to be her divorce lawyer. They have a separation hearing and Ty destroys Vince's lawyer. Ty invites her for a celebratory dinner at his house to include enjoying his hot tub.
Ty wants to double down on Vince. He asks Mandy to help set Vince up. Mandy wears a wig and Vince picks her up in a bar. They go back to a hotel where Ty hides in the closet filming it. Mandy ends up getting aroused when Vince plays with her sensitive breasts and ends up going to far with him actually having sex. She kicks Vince out afraid Vince might have knocked her up and begs Ty to fuck her to kill off the white boys seed. MF
End Part 2
Vince begs Toni's forgiveness and she agrees to take him back, but wants to tell Ty in person at their dinner. She visits Linda's first who secretly swaps out her lame swimsuit with a skimpy bikini. Toni leaves for Ty's and is impressed by his beach house and dinner. She thanks him, but tells him she's getting back with her husband. She's pissed at her sister for swapping bathing suits on her, but joins Ty anyway in the hot tub. Ty is nude and she starts getting turned on by his huge penis. Things heat up a little, but she resists until Ty shows her the video of Vince with the disguised Mandy. She realizes Vince will never change and gives in to the hunky black man. She finally gets the sex she needs to satisfy her breasts and they do everything. She's thrilled when she realizes Ty actively wants to give her a baby when her own husband wouldn't.
It concludes with Robert throwing a private pool party at the club. All three women are given new (surprisingly modest) bikinis. The women are talking together by the pool. Mandy is a little embarrassed to see Hakeem and BBC show up. Then Sledge (from the Undercover comic) arrives. He's a gangster and loaned Robert money to get started and still gets pay offs as well as having BBC recruiting new girls for his strip clubs. He wasn't invited and Mandy hates him. Robert calls the girls to race across the pool, but Toni walks around and gets sprayed with a hose while the other two race. Their bikinis were made of dissolving thread and fall off leaving them naked. The black men start stripping too. Robert, Sledge, and Mandy go inside so Robert can pay Sledge his cut. Mandy insults him and Sledge demands her as interest. They hate fuck with Robert taking her ass. The others all have sex swapping partners with Sledge taking Toni last. While riding Sledge, another comes up and does her ass, another sticks his penis in her mouth. The remaining two approach and she grabs their dicks, jerking them off. Mandy and Linda sixty-nine while watching Linda's sister go cock crazy.
Sunday, April 30, 2017
Monday, April 24, 2017
This week
1) I updated Ota's HOCC yesterday. The new part starts with “OooOOOOH!”
The tight-bodied ginger’s little white hole
2) Made some progress on BC2. I'm at the end scene which is a Pool Party style orgy with all three women and 5 black men. I added a trick where the men supply them with new bikinis made of dissolving thread sort of a second bikini conspiracy.
3) Kaos updated Annabelle today. I'm assuming you still want weekly Annabelle updates since someone requested that I do so for part 1.
The tight-bodied ginger’s little white hole
2) Made some progress on BC2. I'm at the end scene which is a Pool Party style orgy with all three women and 5 black men. I added a trick where the men supply them with new bikinis made of dissolving thread sort of a second bikini conspiracy.
3) Kaos updated Annabelle today. I'm assuming you still want weekly Annabelle updates since someone requested that I do so for part 1.
Wednesday, April 19, 2017
Some recent story recommendations
Here's some recent stories posted on lit that caught my eye and I enjoyed.
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Guidance
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Monday, April 17, 2017
This Week
1) Sent Kaos off the 32 page comic samples and suggestions.
2) Will work on Bikini Conspiracy 2 script this week.
3) The two sample scripts are in the comic section. I changed the final page of Hot Tub Hot Wife to having Eric listening to them talking more then just him thinking.
4) Kaos updated Annabelle and Johnpersons just posted some more Rabies Pool Party pics.
5) I got the recent HOCC update posted.
2) Will work on Bikini Conspiracy 2 script this week.
3) The two sample scripts are in the comic section. I changed the final page of Hot Tub Hot Wife to having Eric listening to them talking more then just him thinking.
4) Kaos updated Annabelle and Johnpersons just posted some more Rabies Pool Party pics.
5) I got the recent HOCC update posted.
Saturday, April 15, 2017
Hot Tub Hot Wife script
Here's the second of the proposed 32pg comics. I'll send them off to Kaos tomorrow to see what she thinks.
Hot Tub Hot Wife
Copyright 2017 by Stormbringer
Characters:
Eric Jones: Average looking white male, early twenties.
Brown hair, parted in the middle. Average to smallish penis.
Carla Jones: Eric’s wife. Stunning blonde with huge breasts
and a killer body.
Kaleem Payne: Standard hung muscular stud. He is bald with a
goatee or he can have any appearance.
Jade Payne: His wife. Stunning with a killer body and ass.
Synopsis: Eric and
Carla, young newlyweds on their honeymoon, are making out in a hot tub in a
private deck equipped with a tiki bar when a black woman from the adjoining
bungalow asks to join them. She drops her robe revealing her naked body to the
young couple’s surprise. She apologizes saying that she assumed the couple was
naked too. Carla wants to go, but Eric says just a little longer. He fantasizes
of a threesome with both women. He pulls his shorts off underwater, but Carla
won’t remove her bikini. Kaleem shows up to Eric’s surprise and drops his robe.
Carla stares in awe at his giant black cock as he slips into the water. Jade
kisses him and fondles his cock underwater. The white couple get uncomfortable
and start to leave, but Jade says one more drink and gets Kaleem to make them.
He stands showing his cock is now mostly hard. When he returns, Jade has him
stand in the water with his cock sticking out. She comments that Carla clearly
hasn’t seen a black man’s cock before. She asks Carla if she wants to touch it.
Carla does to Eric’s objection, but she does anyway. Jade tells Carla to thank
her husband for letting her touch his cock. Jade fondles Eric under the water
and he gets hard. Jade tells Carla to show her respect for the cock by kissing
it. Eric says no and Jade leans forward and plants a kiss on the head and tells
Carla to do the same. Eric stands and says it’s time to go. Jade puts Carla’s
other hand on her husband’s cock and tells her to kiss the superior cock. She
kisses the black man. Jade says again, again, now lick it turning into a blow
job. Eric asks if Jade would blow him, but she doesn’t suck white boys, their
seed is so runny and weak. But there is one thing little white boy dicks are
good for, anal sex while reaching over and untying her bikini top. Carla gulps
down a load of Kaleem’s seed. Jade asks her if it was good and Carla nods
loving it. Jade tells her to thank Kaleem and she does. Kaleem is still hard
and she tells Karla to sit down on the edge of the hot tub while Jade unties
her panties. Now it’s time for my husband to fuck you. Eric objects, but she
pulls him towards the black man and makes Eric hold his penis. She belittles
him and has him guide Kaleem’s cock to his wife’s pussy making him ask Kaleem
to fuck his wife. Jade lets Eric do her ass while they watch Kaleem give Carla
multiple orgasms. Afterwards, Jade makes them both thank her husband and tells
Eric that they are leaving in the morning and Carla will be staying with them
that evening. He watches through a window while Kaleem pleases both women
Cover: A hot tub in a deck. The view is of Eric and Carla
making out. Her arm is wrapped around his neck, hand holding a wine glass and a
ring sparkling on her fingers. Jade is approaching behind them. She is wearing
a short robe, belted at the waist. She’s showing a lot of cleavage. In the
background is a little bar with glasses and a bottle of wine.
Title: Hot Tub Hot Wife
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaoscomics
Page 1: 4 square
Panel 1: Shot similar to cover. Jade has walked around while
the newlywed couple is looking up at her.
Jade: “Mind if I join you?”
Eric: “Not at all.”
Carla: “We’re about ready to get out anyway.”
Panel 2: The bottom is the back of the white couple’s heads,
Eric on left, Carla on right. Centered in the picture is Jade with the robe
falling off her shoulders, her voluptuous nude body on display.
Eric (thinking) WOW!
Carla: “You’re nude?”
Jade: “Yes, is that alright?”
Panel 3: The three sitting in the tub. The ladies are
sitting up and their breasts are visible above the water. Carla in a bikini,
Jade nude. Carla is holding out her hand displaying her ring. A dream bubble is
coming off Eric of him nude laying between the nude women. He’s staring at
Jade’s tits.
Carla: “I’m Carla, this is Eric, my husband of three days.”
Jade: “Congratulations. I’m Jade.”
Carla: “Eric, quit staring at her boobs.”
Panel 4: The three in the tub. Eric is holding up his
shorts. The women are staring at them.
Jade: “This area is private and clothing optional. You
should join me.”
Eric: “Alright, I’m in.”
Carla: “Well not me.”
Eric: “Come on babe, this is Las Vegas after all.”
Page 2 4 square
Panel 1: Long view of the hot tub. The white couple on the
right. Eric closest. Jade on left across from Eric. Kaleem is approaching
wearing a short terry cloth robe. The end of his penis might be dangling under
the edge.
Jade: “Here comes my husband, Kaleem.”
Panel 2: Close up of the tub and the upper torsos. Kaleem’s
lower torso is visible. He’s stepping down into the tub, huge cock and balls
very prominent. Everyone in the tub is staring at it in awe. Jade is smirking.
Jade: “Kaleem, this is Eric and Carla Jones.”
Kaleem: “S’up. Nice to meet you.”
Carla (thinking) I don’t believe it. I thought Eric was big?
Eric (thinking) I wish I’d kept my shorts on.
Panel 3: View between Eric and Carla. They are looking at
each other in embarrassment. Between them on the other side, the black couple
are making out heavily. Kaleem’s arm is around her back and his big hand is
pinching her hard erect nipple. Her hand is between his legs and the end of his
cock is sticking out above the water.
Carla: “Um, we should get going.”
Eric: “Yeah, it’s about time to hit the casino.”
Panel 4: Close up of the hot tub with Kaleem standing. His
cock is sticking straight out and the head is right in Carla’s face to the
point she’s pulled her head back.
Jade: “But it’s early, Kaleem get us some more wine.”
Carla (thinking): I had no idea there were penises that big.
Eric: “We really should go.”
Jade: “One more drink. Why don’t you give Kaleem a hand?”
Page 3 split top and
bottom
Panel 1: The women in the tub looking at the two men. Their
lower halves are visible. Kaleem’s cock is still fully hard. Eric’s penis has
receded into his scrotum making him look smaller. Both men have hands handing
out glasses of wine to the women.
Kaleem: “Thanks for the help, little guy.”
Carla (thinking) I’ve never seen anything like it. It’s
making my vagina quiver.
Jade: “I don’t think Carla has ever seen a big black cock
before, Kaleem.”
Panel 2: The view has shifted to the other end. Kaleem in
still standing on the right. Carla is reaching out and tentatively touching the
head of his cock. Beyond that, Jade’s hand is in Eric’s lap and he looks
startled.
Jade: “Go ahead and touch it, Carla. See what a big cock
feels like.”
Eric: “I don’t think that’s a…. WHOA!”
Jade (thinking): Gonna take some coaxing to get this little
guy to come out.
Carla: “It’s so big and thick! Really hard too!”
Page 4: 4 panels
Panel 1: Close up of Carla and his crotch. She’s gripping
the thick shaft now. One hand is cupping one of his balls what completely fills
it.
Carla: “Your balls are like coconuts.”
Jade (off panel): “Thank him for letting you touch his
cock.”
Carla: “Thank you for letting me touch you, Kaleem.”
Panel 2: Kaleem’s lower torso angled towards his wife. Carla
is on the other side. Her hand is on the base of his cock. Jade is leaning
forward, planting a kiss right on the pee slit.
Jade: “You show your respect for it by kissing the head.”
Panel 3: Kaleem has now turned to face Carla. She is still
holding it and leaning forward to kiss it. Eric has stood. His little penis is
erect.
Jade: “Now your turn.”
Eric: ‘Now wait just a minute.”
Panel 4: Carla between both men. Her other hand is now on
Eric’s penis and very little sticks out from her fist. Her head is turned
towards Kaleem.
Jade (off panel): “Touch your husband.”
Jade (off panel): “Now respect the superior penis.”
Carla (thinking): It’s not even close. Kaleem’s is superior.
Page 5: long horizontal across top, 4 squares underneath.
Panel 1: Close up of just his long cock with her lips
puckered on the tip.
Panel 2: The side of Jade’s head watching Carla sucking the
end of Kaleem’s cock.
Jade: “That’s good Carla. Kiss it. Lick it. Now suck that
big black cock.”
Carla (thinking): It’s so powerful!
Panel 3: Eric’s lower torso, his penis is pointed at Jade.
She looks disgusted by it.
Eric: “Uh.. I don’t suppose you’d uh.. suck me?”
Jade: “Fuck no. White boy seed is so weak and pathetic.”
Panel 4: Carla sucking Kaleem while fondling his balls. Jade
is holding up her bikini top and Carla’s breasts are visible for the first
time. She’s looking back at Eric.
Jade: “Little white boy dicks are good for one thing. Ass
fucking.”
Noise: suk suk suk.
Panel 5: Closer view of Carla. Her cheeks are bulging out with
cum. The tip of Kaleem is still in her mouth. Sperm is shooting out her lips
and dripping onto her breasts. Jade is leaning into her looking smug.
Jade: “Is it good, honey?”
Carla: “Mmm-hmm.”
Carla (thinking) So good! So thick and rich! I love it!
Noise: gulp gulp
Page 6: 4 square panels
Panel 1: Carla sitting on the edge. Jade is untying her
panty and pulling it open. Kaleem is still standing with his still erect cock
pointing towards Carla. The head is still dripping cum.
Jade: “Thank Kaleem for letting you suck him.”
Carla: “Thanks for letting me suck you.”
Jade: “And for the gift of his seed.”
Carla: “And for your cum. It was… delicious.”
Panel 2: Long shot. Carla is laying on her back, legs
spread. Jade is on the right (Carla’s left.) Her black hand in on Eric’s arm
guiding him to her husband’s cock. Eric is holding the large black shaft.
Jade: “Now my husband is going to fuck you.”
Eric: “No way! A blow job is one thing, but…”
Jade: “Here, feel that big black cock.”
Jade: “Not like holding your little white boy dick is it?”
Panel 3: Close up of Carla’s lower torso. Eric’s hand is
holding Kaleem’s shaft while the tip of his cock is spreading Carla’s labia
open.
Carla (off panel): “Please Eric? I want it.”
Jade (off panel): “Ask my husband to fuck your wife.”
Eric: “P..please fuck my wife, Kaleem.”
Panel 4: God view of Carla screaming in pleasure. Motion
lines show Kaleem fucking her hard and fast.
Carla: “YES! GOD YES!”
Carla: “I’M CUMMING!”
Noise: fuk fuk fuk.
Page 7 Split top and
bottom
Panel 1: Kaleem’s ass on the right fucking Carla. She’s
angled so that you can see her body and tits. Jade is leaning over the side of
the tub beside her, looking at her. Jade’s ass is large and prominent. Eric is
standing on the far side. Still hard. His little penis is pointing at Jade’s
ass.
Carla: “I’m cumming! I’m cumming so HARD!
Jade: “Now it’s time to put that little penis to work. Fuck
my ass, white boy!”
Panel 2: Jade is in the front of the image. She is leaning
over the water, grabbing the rim. Her breasts are dangling. Eric is fucking her
ass from behind. Slightly above her and too the right. Carla is now on all
fours with Kaleem standing in the water, fucking her doggy style.
Noise: fuk fuk fuk
Carla: “Fuck me! Fuck me with that big black cock!”
Jade: “Your wife looks so hot fucking my husband.”
Eric: “Yes. Yes, she does.”
Page 8 top half and two square bottoms
Panel 1: Long shot. On the left. Kaleem is now sitting on
the edge. Carla is in the water riding him reverse cowgirl. One black hand is on
her hip and one is pinching a nipple. Jade is on the right leaning over the
railing. Her ass is still on display. Her anus has a drop or two of cum on it.
Eric’s limp spent cock is laying on her cheek.
Kaleem: “Is your wife protected?”
Eric: “No. Pull out.”
Kaleem: “Fuck no.”
Carla: “No way, cum in me. I want it.”
Panel 2: Close up of Carla’s front sitting in Kaleem’s lap.
X-ray shows him filling her womb. Cum is leaking out their crotches, dripping
off his balls and into the water. He’s looking over her shoulder, maybe evilly.
Carla: “CUMMING! SEED ME!
Kaleem: “Here it cums slut, take every drop.”
Carla: “YES! I LOVE IT! I LOVE YOU!
Panel 3: Eric standing in the tub looking up at the others.
They are standing on the deck. Carla is in Kaleem’s arms. Her hand is on his
spent cock. Jade’s arm is around Carla, grabbing on ass cheek.
Kaleem: “Come on. I want to fuck you some more.”
Eric: “But?”
Jade: “Don’t worry white boy, we’ll have your wife back in
the morning.”
Page 9:
Panel 1: Side view of both women 69ing. Beyond them, Eric’s
face is visible peering in the window.
Noise: Slurp, slurp
Panel 2: Angled view of Carla laying on Jade, kissing.
Kaleem is fucking Carla again.
Noise: fuk fuk fuk.
Panel 3: Outside view. Eric’s hand is on his penis and it is
squirting a couple drops. In the window, Kaleem is laying with both women in
his arms in a mirror image of what Eric had fantasized the women doing with him
earlier.
Eric (thinking) I hope they fuck again.
Eric (thinking) Carla looked so hot with that black cock.
Eric (thinking) She’s hooked now. Couldn’t stop her if I
wanted to.
Eric (thinking) Oh well, as long as I get to watch.
The End
Thursday, April 13, 2017
Tuesday, April 11, 2017
Sketch repost from Son's Best Friend's Dad
This is the reason I said, my fingers were crossed for Best Friend's Dad/ I shared this sketch some time ago for the upcoming comic and it got me excited for the full story. I'll ask for more sketches from Kaos next time I talk to her.
Monday, April 10, 2017
This Week
1) Kaos started the sequel to Annabelle today. I was a little disappointed. My fingers were crossed for Son's Best friend's Dad. The good thing is that I haven't read the story and get to be surprised as I read it. The cover is pretty hot.
2) Didn't get much writing done this week. I'm on vacation next week and only going away for an overnight so I hope to finish the BC2 comic script.
3) I had an idea I want to run by Kaos based on the fact that turning many of my stories into comics makes a huge comic or even my current script for BC2 is large. I loved her Flag Girls, but it took a long time to finish Part 1. The idea is for a 32 page comic. They would be posted between longer comics. At 8 pages a day, that would mean the entire story is finished in 4 weeks. I sketched out some ideas and wrote synopsis for two of them as well as the images I want on the 32 pages. It was surprisingly easy. Turning them into comic pages will be a little harder, but not too bad. I'm not going to send them to her to see what she thinks until I'm done the two samples. Here they are if you want to see them.
2) Didn't get much writing done this week. I'm on vacation next week and only going away for an overnight so I hope to finish the BC2 comic script.
3) I had an idea I want to run by Kaos based on the fact that turning many of my stories into comics makes a huge comic or even my current script for BC2 is large. I loved her Flag Girls, but it took a long time to finish Part 1. The idea is for a 32 page comic. They would be posted between longer comics. At 8 pages a day, that would mean the entire story is finished in 4 weeks. I sketched out some ideas and wrote synopsis for two of them as well as the images I want on the 32 pages. It was surprisingly easy. Turning them into comic pages will be a little harder, but not too bad. I'm not going to send them to her to see what she thinks until I'm done the two samples. Here they are if you want to see them.
The Taxi Driver’s Tip
Characters:
Leonard: Good looking white man. He’s in a tux and very
drunk.
Penny: Gorgeous buxom blonde. She’s wearing a little black
dress that shows a lot of boob. She’s wearing heels.
Djimon Kerekou: Taxi driver from Benin. I’m thinking ugly,
white haired and out of shape with bad teeth (like the homeless man from Dr
Bitch).
Synopsis: The white couple is drunk and leaving a crowded
club following a wedding. Maybe they comment that there were too many blacks at
the club. They wave down a taxi and are picked up by Djimon. Leonard passes out
in the back seat. Penny reads the driver’s ID badge and sees his name, age 65,
and that he’s African. She realizes that they don’t have any money on them and
asks the driver if he would take a credit card or a check, but that she’d need
to get it from her room. Djimon is ogling her boobs and gets angry threatening
to drive them to the police. He pulls over and asks for a blow job. She’s
horrified, but he tells her that she can spend the night in jail or blow him.
She might have some marijuana in her purse and fear getting arrested.
Disgusted, she agrees. He pulls over off the road and she kneels outside the
cab with her dress pulled down while he leans against it. She’s shocked by his
cock size. He holds her head so that she swallows his cum and is surprised she
likes the taste. At the hotel, Djimon helps her carry Leonard into the room. He
drops the drunk husband on the couch and starts stripping Penny. She fights a
little and he says that the blow job was just his tip, now he wants to get paid
for the cab ride. They have sex on the bed in multiple positions with Djimon
failing to pull out each time he cums. He breaks in her ass then goes to
shower. She joins him, lovingly kissing him and kneeling to blow him one last
time.
1)
Leaving club, waving down a taxi.
2)
Back seat of the cab
3)
Hubby passes out. Wife realizes no money.
4)
Drivers id badge, she’s thinking yech.
5)
She’s leaning over asking check or cc he says
no, cash only.
6)
He’s yelling, stop cop drunk and stealing a
ride. She’s crying.
7)
He pulls over homeless and druggies around.
Gimme a bj
8)
She’s disgusted, hubby wont wake. He opens door
abandon them both. She agrees
9)
She’s kneeling disgusted.
10)
Cock popping up over yellow stained inderwear.
11)
Sucking half fondling balls
12)
He pulls dress straps down while she deep
throats it.
13)
Her cheeks are bulging over bared breasts.
14)
Her licking her lips in back seat.
15)
Hotel. Asks him to help carry drunk husband.
16)
Deposits hubby on couch, grabs wife pulls out
tits again
17)
He’s stripping that was my tip, this is payment
for the cab ride
18)
Him entering her shes wet
19)
Fucking her hard, shes cumming.
20)
Him squirting all over her.
21)
Her messy and lowering herself over him.
22)
Bouncing in his lap. He’s cumming agin
23)
One more in me. On all fours shes cumming
24)
Him pulled out raising to anus
25)
Stretching out anus
26)
Fucking her ass she loves it
27)
Cumming over ass and back anus stretched and
leaking
28)
He goes to shower
29)
She joins him
30)
Hugging and kissing under shower
31)
Shes kneeling blowing him
32)
Face coated, cock spent. Says she’ll need a ride
to get their car in the morning.
Hot Tub Hot Wife
Copyright 2017 by Stormbringer
Characters:
Eric Jones: Average looking white male, early twenties.
Brown hair, parted in the middle. Average to smallish penis.
Carla Jones: Eric’s wife. Stunning blonde with huge breasts
and a killer body.
Kaleem Payne: Standard hung muscular stud. He is bald with a
goatee or he can have any appearance.
Jade Payne: His wife. Stunning with a killer body and ass.
Synopsis: Eric and
Carla, young newlyweds on their honeymoon, are making out in a hot tub in a
private deck equipped with a tiki bar when a black woman from the adjoining
bungalow asks to join them. She drops her robe revealing her naked body to the
young couple’s surprise. She apologizes saying that she assumed the couple was
naked too. Carla wants to go, but Eric says just a little longer. He fantasizes
of a threesome with both women. He pulls his shorts off underwater, but Carla
won’t remove her bikini. Kaleem shows up to Eric’s surprise and drops his robe.
Carla stares in awe at his giant black cock as he slips into the water. Jade
kisses him and fondles his cock underwater. The white couple get uncomfortable
and start to leave, but Jade says one more drink and gets Kaleem to make them.
He stands showing his cock is now mostly hard. When he returns, Jade has him
stand in the water with his cock sticking out. She comments that Carla clearly
hasn’t seen a black man’s cock before. She asks Carla if she wants to touch it.
Carla does to Eric’s objection, but she does anyway. Jade tells Carla to thank
her husband for letting her touch his cock. Jade fondles Eric under the water
and he gets hard. Jade tells Carla to show her respect for the cock by kissing
it. Eric says no and Jade leans forward and plants a kiss on the head and tells
Carla to do the same. Eric stands and says it’s time to go. Jade puts Carla’s
other hand on her husband’s cock and tells her to kiss the superior cock. She
kisses the black man. Jade says again, again, now lick it turning into a blow
job. Eric asks if Jade would blow him, but she doesn’t suck white boys, their
seed is so runny and weak. But there is one thing little white boy dicks are
good for, anal sex while reaching over and untying her bikini top. Carla gulps
down a load of Kaleem’s seed. Jade asks her if it was good and Carla nods
loving it. Jade tells her to thank Kaleem and she does. Kaleem is still hard
and she tells Karla to sit down on the edge of the hot tub while Jade unties
her panties. Now it’s time for my husband to fuck you. Eric objects, but she
pulls him towards the black man and makes Eric hold his penis. She belittles
him and has him guide Kaleem’s cock to his wife’s pussy making him ask Kaleem
to fuck his wife. Jade lets Eric do her ass while they watch Kaleem give Carla
multiple orgasms. Afterwards, Jade makes them both thank her husband and tells
Eric that they are leaving in the morning and Carla will be staying with them
that evening. He watches through a window while Kaleem pleases both women
1)
White couple making out in hot tub.
2)
Black woman in robe asking to join
3)
Black woman robe open nude
4)
The three in tub talking married for a day hubby
fantasizing threesome from later scene
5)
Hubby pulls off shorts but wife wint take off
bikini
6)
Black man in robe
7)
Black man nude slipping into tub while wife
introduces
8)
Black couple making out wifes hand clearly in
his lap white offer to leave
9)
Jade says one more drink, hubby will get it. His
cock head is rising above water
10)
Kaleem stands cock sticking straight in white’s
face
11)
He returns with drinks. Jade fondles eric
underwater has kaleem stand
12)
Carla touches it comments on powerful jade tells
her to thank kaleem
13)
Jade kisses the head telling karla to do the
same to show repsect
14)
Eric standing stopping his wife. His cock is
pathetic
15)
Jade has Karla touch both penises and to kiss
the superior cock
16)
Karla kisses kaleems head
17)
Jade says kiss it again now lick it, suck it.
18)
Karla sucking kaleem eric asks jade she insults
his weak seed.
19)
Jade untying karlas top telling eric white boy
dicks are good for anal
20)
Karla gulping down cum jade asks if it was good
mmmm hmmm
21)
Karla sitting on rim. Jade untying panty telling
her to thank kaleem for his seed
22)
Karla laying back. Jade saying kaleem will fuck
her putting erics hand on kaleem while he objects
23)
Eric guiding kaleem into wife while jade makes
him ask kaleem to fuck her
24)
God view of karla screaming in pleasure
25)
Jades ass spread for eric
26)
Foursome fucking karla now doggy
27)
Erics spent dripping cock over jades anus while
karla rides kaleem now screaming she loves him
28)
Xray kaleem cumming in her
29)
Karla embracing kaleem jade hugging her eric
looking dejected. Back in morning
30)
Women 69ing
31)
Kaleem fucking karla on jade.
32)
Eric stroking spent penis while watching kaleem
with both women in arms grabbing cock. Thinking how hot his wife looks with
black men.
Thursday, April 6, 2017
Addendum to This Week
In case you didn't catch the update for Monday's this week, Rabies added some Pool Party pics at Johnpersons.
Also, I plugged Cockhole's stories last year at literotica. He's just posted a new one I found particularly good.
Katy's Double Life
Also, I plugged Cockhole's stories last year at literotica. He's just posted a new one I found particularly good.
Katy's Double Life
Monday, April 3, 2017
This week
1) Kaos finished Flag Girls 1, but sadly no new comic.
2) A bad week at work turned into a little free time last weekend and I got some work done on BC2. If you read the synopsis, I'm at the point where Toni is about to join Ty in the hot tub.
Wed update: Johnpersons posted some new Pool Party pinups by Rabies today.
2) A bad week at work turned into a little free time last weekend and I got some work done on BC2. If you read the synopsis, I'm at the point where Toni is about to join Ty in the hot tub.
Wed update: Johnpersons posted some new Pool Party pinups by Rabies today.
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