Monday, October 3, 2016

This week.

1) Kaos updated Flag Girls. The girls are now talking to Gage about their robbery.

2) I'm working on Houseguest. It's a rewrite of the first BJ scene from the original story.

3) Thinking about stopping Curse 3 at the end of the day I'm currently chronicling. Part 4 would go through Halloween. Still to go Long/Kat anal scene, Long leaving for New Orleans and getting a call from Candy about his friend's dying. Todd being pulled from the game and replaced by Samson, and Long's tarot card reading mixed up with a bonfire by the lake post game celebration.

There was a planned scene with Jenny deciding to be faithful to just her husband and the Coach, returning to the coach's house, climbing into the bed with him and fucking him. He calls her Shondra pissing her off. She turns on the lights and finds she's with his twin. Coach would join in later for her first threeway. I liked that she broke her promise almost immediately without realizing it. However, Ota thought it interfered with his ending for Housewives.

Instead, I'm going to make the Bonfire party a bigger event with more cheerleaders. Coach and Jenny stopping by to congratulate the team and having their own separate encounters, and some new women.

4) Just got WORD so I'm going to try it out for writing.


Found this interesting Coxville reddit.
<a href=https://m.reddit.com/r/johnpersonsthepit/wiki/index"">here</a>

32 comments:

  1. Omg, I like the threesome better than the bonfire, could you have the threesome as some separate bonus scene? So to reiterate: the Kat/Long scen up until the tarot reading is what we are getting next in CC3? Then after that is CC4?

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    1. Yes on the CC3-4 plan. Jenny may just have to wait two days for her first threesome with the janitors. Unless I have it happen during the bonfire. Both partners are undecided, but most likely will be different football players from the pool party.

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    2. Jenny letting herself be taken by the two brothers would be everything, I've been waiting so long for that, it doesn't even have to be canon. If totally impossible then couldn't someone like Shondra or Kitty take her place?

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    3. A non canon bonus with Jenny or Kitty would be nice seeing as how CC3 seems to be focused on Candy, Long, and his friends.

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    4. PLEASE follow out the Bobbie Sue voodoo priest story line. Jenny, Kitty, and Bobbie Sue could go to New Orleans and end up at a pagan festival.

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  2. Who will Jenny and Kitty be with during the bonfire?

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  4. The bonfire sounds great I would love it if you expanded it more. When are the events of Two Blondes Hunt going to take place?

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  5. If you're going to come up with new cheerleaders you should have one that's kitty's rival. Similar to how Jenny and Ivana are rivals.

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  6. Flag girls is starting to get interesting

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  7. Pleeeeeeeeeease more Jenny!

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  9. I just saw the sketches for the pool party on that reddit link, they look incredible. And the old style of Pits art too which is obviously when it was the best.

    But it says on the link that it's been cancelled...Are these sketches from a long time ago? It looks like he did almost a good quarter worth of that whole storyline. Anyone know why it was cancelled?

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  10. Good with that. He's does what he wants.

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  11. We'll probably never see Pool Party. A lot of it is probably commissioned by JohnPersons and belongs to that site alone. I don't know what JP was paying Pit per drawing, but it's not the 2000+ he gets on his patreon.

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  12. Wow.I see why he left.Still miss his work tho.Wish there was some way to get all you guys working together. With your story telling and the pits art.Man y'all be rolling in it cus y'all got something here that keeps us begging for more.

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  13. I don't know why people pay for the nonsense he is putting out these days.

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  14. What would it take for the pit to get back on board with you Stormbringer in order for y'all to collaborate again? Because the BBQ and The Pool Party was hot and for them both to be left undone.

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    1. If Pit ever contacts me, I'd be happy to work with him again, but I believe he's content doing his own thing. The JohnPersons' comics like Pool Party are probably dead forever unless Pit can get the rights for them back from John.

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  15. Oh.Ok. Should've known legal issues was involved.

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  16. Oh.Ok. Should've known legal issues was involved.

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  17. Am I the only one excited for the 'Unwanted Houseguest' Update? lol jk.

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    1. I'm looking forward to it also.

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    2. Made some progress on it. I'm about halfway done.

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  18. So you just got Word now? What had you been using before, Notepad?

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    1. More jenny please storm. I love kat kitty and the rest. But there is something how you write jenny and coach together is so superb i almost feel sad for harold by how much a slut coach has made her. Please just jenny getting fucked i beg you

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