Tuesday, October 18, 2016

This week

1) Should finish the next part of Unwanted Houseguest this week.

2) Kaos updated Flag Girls, though the update appears messed up to me. There's a couple pics out of order and some missing panels including showing them in the shower together. I dropped her an email about it.

UPDATE: The missing pics have been corrected and we have the girls showering together. There is an important line of dialog missing from one scene though. When Gage hands the girls the BBC tees, he's supposed to offer to let them stay with his roommates over the weekend. It makes some follow up lines confusing.

3) For Yair fans, Poker Game 2 is finished, They've been blowing through Art Class and Detention 2 is up next.


And just as an FYI, I've been enjoying WORD. The spelling and pronunciation correcting seems to be better the open office.

Monday, October 10, 2016

This week

1) Kaos updated Flag Girls. The shower scene is coming up.

2) Some progress with Unwanted Houseguest. About to work some more on it now and I will have time later this week.



Random pic


Monday, October 3, 2016

This week.

1) Kaos updated Flag Girls. The girls are now talking to Gage about their robbery.

2) I'm working on Houseguest. It's a rewrite of the first BJ scene from the original story.

3) Thinking about stopping Curse 3 at the end of the day I'm currently chronicling. Part 4 would go through Halloween. Still to go Long/Kat anal scene, Long leaving for New Orleans and getting a call from Candy about his friend's dying. Todd being pulled from the game and replaced by Samson, and Long's tarot card reading mixed up with a bonfire by the lake post game celebration.

There was a planned scene with Jenny deciding to be faithful to just her husband and the Coach, returning to the coach's house, climbing into the bed with him and fucking him. He calls her Shondra pissing her off. She turns on the lights and finds she's with his twin. Coach would join in later for her first threeway. I liked that she broke her promise almost immediately without realizing it. However, Ota thought it interfered with his ending for Housewives.

Instead, I'm going to make the Bonfire party a bigger event with more cheerleaders. Coach and Jenny stopping by to congratulate the team and having their own separate encounters, and some new women.

4) Just got WORD so I'm going to try it out for writing.


Found this interesting Coxville reddit.
<a href=https://m.reddit.com/r/johnpersonsthepit/wiki/index"">here</a>