Some recent story recommendations

Here's some recent stories posted on lit that caught my eye and I enjoyed.

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This Week

1) Sent Kaos off the 32 page comic samples and suggestions.

2) Will work on Bikini Conspiracy 2 script this week.

3) The two sample scripts are in the comic section. I changed the final page of Hot Tub Hot Wife to having Eric listening to them talking more then just him thinking.

4) Kaos updated Annabelle and Johnpersons just posted some more Rabies Pool Party pics.

5) I got the recent HOCC update posted.

Hot Tub Hot Wife script

Here's the second of the proposed 32pg comics. I'll send them off to Kaos tomorrow to see what she thinks.

Hot Tub Hot Wife

Copyright 2017 by Stormbringer

Characters:

Eric Jones: Average looking white male, early twenties. Brown hair, parted in the middle. Average to smallish penis.

Carla Jones: Eric’s wife. Stunning blonde with huge breasts and a killer body.

Kaleem Payne: Standard hung muscular stud. He is bald with a goatee or he can have any appearance.

Jade Payne: His wife. Stunning with a killer body and ass.

Synopsis:  Eric and Carla, young newlyweds on their honeymoon, are making out in a hot tub in a private deck equipped with a tiki bar when a black woman from the adjoining bungalow asks to join them. She drops her robe revealing her naked body to the young couple’s surprise. She apologizes saying that she assumed the couple was naked too. Carla wants to go, but Eric says just a little longer. He fantasizes of a threesome with both women. He pulls his shorts off underwater, but Carla won’t remove her bikini. Kaleem shows up to Eric’s surprise and drops his robe. Carla stares in awe at his giant black cock as he slips into the water. Jade kisses him and fondles his cock underwater. The white couple get uncomfortable and start to leave, but Jade says one more drink and gets Kaleem to make them. He stands showing his cock is now mostly hard. When he returns, Jade has him stand in the water with his cock sticking out. She comments that Carla clearly hasn’t seen a black man’s cock before. She asks Carla if she wants to touch it. Carla does to Eric’s objection, but she does anyway. Jade tells Carla to thank her husband for letting her touch his cock. Jade fondles Eric under the water and he gets hard. Jade tells Carla to show her respect for the cock by kissing it. Eric says no and Jade leans forward and plants a kiss on the head and tells Carla to do the same. Eric stands and says it’s time to go. Jade puts Carla’s other hand on her husband’s cock and tells her to kiss the superior cock. She kisses the black man. Jade says again, again, now lick it turning into a blow job. Eric asks if Jade would blow him, but she doesn’t suck white boys, their seed is so runny and weak. But there is one thing little white boy dicks are good for, anal sex while reaching over and untying her bikini top. Carla gulps down a load of Kaleem’s seed. Jade asks her if it was good and Carla nods loving it. Jade tells her to thank Kaleem and she does. Kaleem is still hard and she tells Karla to sit down on the edge of the hot tub while Jade unties her panties. Now it’s time for my husband to fuck you. Eric objects, but she pulls him towards the black man and makes Eric hold his penis. She belittles him and has him guide Kaleem’s cock to his wife’s pussy making him ask Kaleem to fuck his wife. Jade lets Eric do her ass while they watch Kaleem give Carla multiple orgasms. Afterwards, Jade makes them both thank her husband and tells Eric that they are leaving in the morning and Carla will be staying with them that evening. He watches through a window while Kaleem pleases both women

Cover: A hot tub in a deck. The view is of Eric and Carla making out. Her arm is wrapped around his neck, hand holding a wine glass and a ring sparkling on her fingers. Jade is approaching behind them. She is wearing a short robe, belted at the waist. She’s showing a lot of cleavage. In the background is a little bar with glasses and a bottle of wine.

Title: Hot Tub Hot Wife

Story by Stormbringer

Art by Kaoscomics

Page 1: 4 square

Panel 1: Shot similar to cover. Jade has walked around while the newlywed couple is looking up at her.

Jade: “Mind if I join you?”

Eric: “Not at all.”

Carla: “We’re about ready to get out anyway.”

Panel 2: The bottom is the back of the white couple’s heads, Eric on left, Carla on right. Centered in the picture is Jade with the robe falling off her shoulders, her voluptuous nude body on display.

Eric (thinking) WOW!

Carla: “You’re nude?”

Jade: “Yes, is that alright?”

Panel 3: The three sitting in the tub. The ladies are sitting up and their breasts are visible above the water. Carla in a bikini, Jade nude. Carla is holding out her hand displaying her ring. A dream bubble is coming off Eric of him nude laying between the nude women. He’s staring at Jade’s tits.

Carla: “I’m Carla, this is Eric, my husband of three days.”

Jade: “Congratulations. I’m Jade.”

Carla: “Eric, quit staring at her boobs.”

Panel 4: The three in the tub. Eric is holding up his shorts. The women are staring at them.

Jade: “This area is private and clothing optional. You should join me.”

Eric: “Alright, I’m in.”

Carla: “Well not me.”

Eric: “Come on babe, this is Las Vegas after all.”

Page 2 4 square

Panel 1: Long view of the hot tub. The white couple on the right. Eric closest. Jade on left across from Eric. Kaleem is approaching wearing a short terry cloth robe. The end of his penis might be dangling under the edge.

Jade: “Here comes my husband, Kaleem.”

Panel 2: Close up of the tub and the upper torsos. Kaleem’s lower torso is visible. He’s stepping down into the tub, huge cock and balls very prominent. Everyone in the tub is staring at it in awe. Jade is smirking.

Jade: “Kaleem, this is Eric and Carla Jones.”

Kaleem: “S’up. Nice to meet you.”

Carla (thinking) I don’t believe it. I thought Eric was big?

Eric (thinking) I wish I’d kept my shorts on.

Panel 3: View between Eric and Carla. They are looking at each other in embarrassment. Between them on the other side, the black couple are making out heavily. Kaleem’s arm is around her back and his big hand is pinching her hard erect nipple. Her hand is between his legs and the end of his cock is sticking out above the water.

Carla: “Um, we should get going.”

Eric: “Yeah, it’s about time to hit the casino.”

Panel 4: Close up of the hot tub with Kaleem standing. His cock is sticking straight out and the head is right in Carla’s face to the point she’s pulled her head back.

Jade: “But it’s early, Kaleem get us some more wine.”

Carla (thinking): I had no idea there were penises that big.

Eric: “We really should go.”

Jade: “One more drink. Why don’t you give Kaleem a hand?”

Page 3  split top and bottom

Panel 1: The women in the tub looking at the two men. Their lower halves are visible. Kaleem’s cock is still fully hard. Eric’s penis has receded into his scrotum making him look smaller. Both men have hands handing out glasses of wine to the women.

Kaleem: “Thanks for the help, little guy.”

Carla (thinking) I’ve never seen anything like it. It’s making my vagina quiver.

Jade: “I don’t think Carla has ever seen a big black cock before, Kaleem.”

Panel 2: The view has shifted to the other end. Kaleem in still standing on the right. Carla is reaching out and tentatively touching the head of his cock. Beyond that, Jade’s hand is in Eric’s lap and he looks startled.

Jade: “Go ahead and touch it, Carla. See what a big cock feels like.”

Eric: “I don’t think that’s a…. WHOA!”

Jade (thinking): Gonna take some coaxing to get this little guy to come out.

Carla: “It’s so big and thick! Really hard too!”

Page 4: 4 panels

Panel 1: Close up of Carla and his crotch. She’s gripping the thick shaft now. One hand is cupping one of his balls what completely fills it.

Carla: “Your balls are like coconuts.”

Jade (off panel): “Thank him for letting you touch his cock.”

Carla: “Thank you for letting me touch you, Kaleem.”

Panel 2: Kaleem’s lower torso angled towards his wife. Carla is on the other side. Her hand is on the base of his cock. Jade is leaning forward, planting a kiss right on the pee slit.

Jade: “You show your respect for it by kissing the head.”

Panel 3: Kaleem has now turned to face Carla. She is still holding it and leaning forward to kiss it. Eric has stood. His little penis is erect.

Jade: “Now your turn.”

Eric: ‘Now wait just a minute.”

Panel 4: Carla between both men. Her other hand is now on Eric’s penis and very little sticks out from her fist. Her head is turned towards Kaleem.

Jade (off panel): “Touch your husband.”

Jade (off panel): “Now respect the superior penis.”

Carla (thinking): It’s not even close. Kaleem’s is superior.

Page 5: long horizontal across top, 4 squares underneath.

Panel 1: Close up of just his long cock with her lips puckered on the tip.

Panel 2: The side of Jade’s head watching Carla sucking the end of Kaleem’s cock.

Jade: “That’s good Carla. Kiss it. Lick it. Now suck that big black cock.”

Carla (thinking): It’s so powerful!

Panel 3: Eric’s lower torso, his penis is pointed at Jade. She looks disgusted by it.

Eric: “Uh.. I don’t suppose you’d uh.. suck me?”

Jade: “Fuck no. White boy seed is so weak and pathetic.”

Panel 4: Carla sucking Kaleem while fondling his balls. Jade is holding up her bikini top and Carla’s breasts are visible for the first time. She’s looking back at Eric.

Jade: “Little white boy dicks are good for one thing. Ass fucking.”

Noise: suk suk suk.

Panel 5: Closer view of Carla. Her cheeks are bulging out with cum. The tip of Kaleem is still in her mouth. Sperm is shooting out her lips and dripping onto her breasts. Jade is leaning into her looking smug.

Jade: “Is it good, honey?”

Carla: “Mmm-hmm.”

Carla (thinking) So good! So thick and rich! I love it!

Noise: gulp gulp

Page 6: 4 square panels

Panel 1: Carla sitting on the edge. Jade is untying her panty and pulling it open. Kaleem is still standing with his still erect cock pointing towards Carla. The head is still dripping cum.

Jade: “Thank Kaleem for letting you suck him.”

Carla: “Thanks for letting me suck you.”

Jade: “And for the gift of his seed.”

Carla: “And for your cum. It was… delicious.”

Panel 2: Long shot. Carla is laying on her back, legs spread. Jade is on the right (Carla’s left.) Her black hand in on Eric’s arm guiding him to her husband’s cock. Eric is holding the large black shaft.

Jade: “Now my husband is going to fuck you.”

Eric: “No way! A blow job is one thing, but…”

Jade: “Here, feel that big black cock.”

Jade: “Not like holding your little white boy dick is it?”

Panel 3: Close up of Carla’s lower torso. Eric’s hand is holding Kaleem’s shaft while the tip of his cock is spreading Carla’s labia open.

Carla (off panel): “Please Eric? I want it.”

Jade (off panel): “Ask my husband to fuck your wife.”

Eric: “P..please fuck my wife, Kaleem.”

Panel 4: God view of Carla screaming in pleasure. Motion lines show Kaleem fucking her hard and fast.

Carla: “YES! GOD YES!”

Carla: “I’M CUMMING!”

Noise: fuk fuk fuk.

Page 7  Split top and bottom

Panel 1: Kaleem’s ass on the right fucking Carla. She’s angled so that you can see her body and tits. Jade is leaning over the side of the tub beside her, looking at her. Jade’s ass is large and prominent. Eric is standing on the far side. Still hard. His little penis is pointing at Jade’s ass.

Carla: “I’m cumming! I’m cumming so HARD!

Jade: “Now it’s time to put that little penis to work. Fuck my ass, white boy!”

Panel 2: Jade is in the front of the image. She is leaning over the water, grabbing the rim. Her breasts are dangling. Eric is fucking her ass from behind. Slightly above her and too the right. Carla is now on all fours with Kaleem standing in the water, fucking her doggy style.

Noise: fuk fuk fuk

Carla: “Fuck me! Fuck me with that big black cock!”

Jade: “Your wife looks so hot fucking my husband.”

Eric: “Yes. Yes, she does.”

Page 8 top half and two square bottoms

Panel 1: Long shot. On the left. Kaleem is now sitting on the edge. Carla is in the water riding him reverse cowgirl. One black hand is on her hip and one is pinching a nipple. Jade is on the right leaning over the railing. Her ass is still on display. Her anus has a drop or two of cum on it. Eric’s limp spent cock is laying on her cheek.

Kaleem: “Is your wife protected?”

Eric: “No. Pull out.”

Kaleem: “Fuck no.”

Carla: “No way, cum in me. I want it.”

Panel 2: Close up of Carla’s front sitting in Kaleem’s lap. X-ray shows him filling her womb. Cum is leaking out their crotches, dripping off his balls and into the water. He’s looking over her shoulder, maybe evilly.

Carla: “CUMMING! SEED ME!

Kaleem: “Here it cums slut, take every drop.”

Carla: “YES! I LOVE IT! I LOVE YOU!

Panel 3: Eric standing in the tub looking up at the others. They are standing on the deck. Carla is in Kaleem’s arms. Her hand is on his spent cock. Jade’s arm is around Carla, grabbing on ass cheek.

Kaleem: “Come on. I want to fuck you some more.”

Eric: “But?”

Jade: “Don’t worry white boy, we’ll have your wife back in the morning.”

Page 9:

Panel 1: Side view of both women 69ing. Beyond them, Eric’s face is visible peering in the window.

Noise: Slurp, slurp

Panel 2: Angled view of Carla laying on Jade, kissing. Kaleem is fucking Carla again.

Noise: fuk fuk fuk.

Panel 3: Outside view. Eric’s hand is on his penis and it is squirting a couple drops. In the window, Kaleem is laying with both women in his arms in a mirror image of what Eric had fantasized the women doing with him earlier.

Eric (thinking) I hope they fuck again.

Eric (thinking) Carla looked so hot with that black cock.

Eric (thinking) She’s hooked now. Couldn’t stop her if I wanted to.

Eric (thinking) Oh well, as long as I get to watch.

The End