Got a new laptop and will be playing around to get used to it this week.
Kaoscomics has updated Flex. Getting real close to the end now. She's added the part where the mother and two daughters from Minnesota arrive as Flex and the gang are leaving. One of the daughters is so hot it gave me the itch to write a sequel (an itch I don't have time to scratch).
Did some more work on CC3, but progress is slow with work.
Added the Unfinished stories section to pages. It's a duplicate of what's at asstr.
Added the E&I concordance info to pages.
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Flag Girls 4 comic script
Here's the script for Flag Girls part 4. It's not worth reading unless you're into these things. The story is more entertaining. There'll be one more part ending with the girls leaving the keys. I'll run it by Kaos to see is she wants to do the epilogue too. The driving off from the Keys is a perfect ending point, but some interesting things do happen in the epilogue.
The Flag Girls Get Fucked 4
Characters
Dixie Meriwether: Blonde in the confederate flag bikini. Tall at
nearly 6’ with big DD breasts. Pierced navel with confederate flag
pin (google confederate flag belly button ring). Tramp stamp of a
confederate flag on back. Age 26. She is tanned, toned, and lithe.
Her large breasts make her appear top heavy.
Rose Clark: Reddish brown haired woman in American flag bikini.
She’s fair skinned. Pierced navel with sparkly diamond stud..
Shorter then Dixie, but wears high heeled sandals to appear the
same height. DD breasts look bigger on her smaller frame. Age 27
Amir: Deshawn’s dad. He is heavier then his son with a beer gut,
but muscular arms. His cock is about the size of Gage’s, but Amir
has an unusually round knobby head.
Deshawn: Big and well muscled with a military style flat top and
blue tribal tattoos. Somewhat brutish looking. He is circumcised
and the longest of the group at 14” His cock head is an elongated
serpent head.
Jamon: Big Jamaican bartender and roommate. He isn’t attractive.
His skin is very dark and he has long dreadlocks. He also has a
gold tooth. His cock is as long as Mark’s and as thick as Gages.
He is uncircumcised. He is thinner and wiry, but all muscle.
Siobhan: Classic Irish red head with redder hair then Rose and
paler skin with freckles. Her tits are almost as big as the flag
girls. Her areolas are bigger then the girls, but fainter. She has
a black spade belly button pin.
Marley: Lead singer of Rasta with Meatballs. He’s average looking
and build. He has dreads and maybe one of those multicolored Rasta
hats. His teeth are yellowed. Penis 13” uncircumcised. Very dark
skinned.
Sammy: Band member. Short and thin. Mid thirties. Average looking.
Slicked back hair and a mustache. Shortest cock of the bunch, but
it’s thick and stubby, a fat 9” uncircumcised. His balls remain
very big and he cums a lot. Coal black.
Reno: Band member. Best looking of the band. Fit and muscular, but
not as big as Gage. He is bald, but has black sideburns that meet
as a mustache, but no beard. 14” uncircumcised penis as big as
Deshawn’s. The pee slit is bigger and his balls are the biggest.
He’s a heavy cummer. Very dark skinned.
Unnamed band member: Unimportant.
Mark: Handsome young and muscular. Shaved bald. Perfectly
streamlined 12” cock.
Gage: Big and tough looking. He looks like a weightlifter. He has
a flat top hair cut. His cock is darker and slightly smaller at
11”, but thicker.
Jake: Rose’s fiance
Billy Ray: Dixie’s older husband at 42. Redneck. He wears a
baseball cap and maybe a jean vest with a confederate flag on it.
The cap might have the flag too. He has a big mustache but no
beard.
Rod: Captain of the Big Rod. He is dark brown. He is bald, big and
muscular maybe with a gut
Cover: View up from the bottom of the ocean. Rose and Dixie are
swimming nude above the viewer. They are wearing masks, snorkels,
and flippers. Fish and/or other sea life are swimming around them.
Rose and Dixie in their new spade bikinis. The bottom shows a
poker table with chips. Several black hands are holding cards. One
may be holding up one card, the Queen of Spades. Maybe a nice
touch would be to make the cards all spades. The girls are serving
the guys, holding beers out for them or a bag of chips.
Sensationalist tags: Take a ride on the BIG ROD!
Title: The Flag Girls Get Fucked 4
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaosgal.
Page 1: Large to horizontal with 2 smaller squares on bottom.
Panel 1: Wide shot of the kitchen. Dixie is entering the room
nude. Gage is sitting on the far end of a table wearing his
security tee shirt and shorts. Jamon is sitting on the right the
table. There are plates of pancakes and bacon in front of both.
Jamon’s chair is pushed back and he is angled facing the viewer
with a nude Rose on her knees sucking his cock. His shirt is
pulled up and his shorts down around his legs.
Dixie: “Smells good!”
Jamon: “OH FUCK!”
Noise around blow job: SLURP!
Panel 2: Close up of food plate with Dixie’s hand reaching for a
slice of bacon. Gage’s hand is hitting her hand.
Noise: SMACK!
Panel 3: Front view of Gage seated with Dixie leaning over him
holding her hand.
Gage: “You cane at when the laundry’s done.”
Page 2: horizontal top with smaller square on tight. Large
horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Nude Dixie bent in front of a washing machine filling it
with sheets.
Panel 2: Close up of Dixie’s ass with the tattoo. Gage’s hard
black cock is resting on her crack. His hands are on her hips.
Panel 3: Dixie sitting on washing machine while Gage lines his
cock up with her pussy.
Gage: “Gotta bust a nut before work.”
Gage: “You want this black cock?”
Dixie: “You know I want that big nigger cock, stud.”
Noises around washing machine: Whrrr! Whrrr!
Page 3: Two vertical top panels with a long horizontal on bottom
Panel 1: Dixie sitting on machine her legs wrapped around his
waist. Gage is fucking her and you can see his cock in her. Her
head is thrown back.
Noises around machine: Whrr! Whrr!
Noises around cock: “Fwap! Fwap!
Dixie: “Your big nigger cock is making me cum!
Gage: “Cum on that black dick, slut.”
Panel 2: Same shot only Gage is leaning over her sucking one erect
nipple. She is still screaming. Maybe an xray shows him cumming in
her.
Dixie: “OHGAWD!”
Dixie: “CCUUMMIINNGG!!”
Panel 3: Dixie sitting back on the machine, legs spread and sperm
dripping out of her pussy. Gage is pulling his shorts up. His cock
is still sticking out semi erect and leaking.
Dixie: “Mmmm, that was some fuck, lover.”
Gage: “Thanks. Get this cleaned up before you leave.”
Dixie: “Yes sir!”
Page 4: horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: Dixie strolling with a purpose back into the kitchen.
Rose is in the same position, but now she is sucking Mark’s cock.
He is eating pancakes from a plate.
Dixie (thinking): Need some paper towels.
Noise around Rose’s mouth: Slurp! Slurp!
Panel 2: Kitchen table with Dixie now on the opposite side eating
from a plate. Rose is sitting back in the blow job chair. Her
hands are on her belly and it might be bulging out some from the
two loads of sperm she’s swallowed. Rose isn’t eating.
Dixie: “Finally, I’m starved!
Rose: “None for me, my belly’s full.”
Panel 3: The two girls by the front door dressing in their spade
bikinis.
Dixie: “Let’s go.”
Page 5 vertical left side, 2 squares on right.
Panel 1: Front view of the girls in their bikinis walking through
the resort. A few men might be ogling them.
Dixie: “Lets go look at the fish and then lay out.”
Rose: “Maybe take a little nap.”
Dixie: “YAWN! Sounds great. Neither of us have slept much.”
Panel 2: View over Dixie’s shoulder of her looking down into the
clear water and some fish swimming around.
Panel 3: Backsides of Dixie and Rose standing on the dock. They
are looking at the back of the boat. The name BIG ROD is between
their legs on the back of the boat. Standing on the deck above is
Rod. His shirt is open. His boat appeared in Part 2.
Rod: “Allo ladies.”
Dixie and Rose: ‘Hello.”
Page 6 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Side view of Rod helping the women on his boat.
Rod: “No business today. Let me take you for a ride.”
Rod: “I know a reef for snorkeling.:
Rod: “Your new bikinis are tres bien.”
Panel 2: Side view of the boat moving through the water. Rod is at
the wheel. Dixie and Rose are behind him. The islands may be in
the background.
Dixie: “I’m Dixie, this is Rose.”
Rod: “Rodolph, but call me Rod.”
Rose: “You’re Haitian?”
Rod: “Oui!”
Page 7 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: The back of the boat. Rod is passing out snorkeling gear.
He is shirtless now.
Rose: “Very kind of you.”
Rod: “Well I do expect to get paid.”
Dixie: “Umm… we didn’t bring much…
Rod: “You sluts can start blowing me, then snorkel before I fuck
you.”
Panel 2: Close up of Rod’s crotch. He’s pushing his shorts under
his balls. His cock is a big one, cut, streamlined, and a s thick
as Gage.
Panel 3: The girl’s upper torso’s. Both are looking down. Rose is
licking her lips.
Dixie: “What makes you think we’ll suck that thing?”
Page 8 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: View over Rod’s shoulder. One hand is pinching Rose’s
nipple trough her spade covering. The other hand is untying
Dixie’s top.
Rod: “You know what the outfit means, non?”
Dixie: “Our bodies belong to the black man.”
Rose: “They can take any hole they want.”
Rod: “Tres bien.”
Panel 2: Nude Rod sitting in fishing chair or captain’s chair. A
nude Dixie is sucking his cock. Rose is behind her stripping her
bikini off.
Noise: Slurp!
Panel 3: Close up of Rod’s cock and balls, rampant and wet. Dixie
is licking around the head while Rose is on the other side licking
above his balls.
Noises around tongues: Lap lap lap
Page 9 4 square panels with a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Side view of Rod’s cock with Dixie swallowing about half.
Noise: GACK!
Panel 2: Flipped side view of Rod’s cock with Rose swallowing
slightly less.
Noise: “ACK!”
Panel 3: Side view of Dixie again sucking it. His hands are in her
hair now. Motion lines show movement.
Noise: Suk suk suk
Dixie (thinking) Ha! Rose can’t swallow as much as me
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie still. Her lips are wrapped around the
head and her cheeks are bulging out. Sperm is flying out around
her mouth.
Noise: Gulp gulp gulp
Panel 5: Side view of his cock straight out and Rose’s head. Her
tongue is out, mouth open. She is stroking his cock rapidly with
motion lines showing she’s jerking him. Some sperm is shooting out
over her tongue and into her mouth.
Rose (thinking): Greedy slut didn’t leave enough for me.
Page 10 large horizontal top panel and two square bottom
Panel 1: Rod standing with his cock sticking out and down,
somewhat deflated. It’s dripping sperm to the deck. The girls are
on either side. Rose might be giving Dixie a mean stare. Dixie is
reaching down and hefting a testicle.
Dixie: “Jesus, these things hold a lot of cum. I never swallowed
so much.
Rose (thinking): Bitch!
Rod: “Go swimming and I’ll recharge.”
Panel 2: View down of the backs of the girls heads in the water,
with mask straps and snorkels. The water is clear and fish might
be visible.
Panel 3: Side view of Rose under water. Bubbles are coming up from
her snorkel. She’s holding a starfish or conch shell.
Page 11: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: View down of a nude Dixie and Rose swimming with bubbles
coming out the snorkels. Dixie is pointing at a large manta ray.
Panel 2: View up of a nude Rose and Dixie swimming along the
surface.
Page 12 2 square top and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Dixie underwater kneeling on the sand. She’s holding up a
shell
Dixie (thinking) Where’s Rose?
Panel 2: Side view of Dixie climbing up the ladder over the side
of the boat.
Panel 3: Angled down view of the deck of the boat with Rose on
all fours getting fucked from behind by Rod. Dixie’s head has
appeared above the side of the boat watching them.
Noise: Slap slap slap.
Rose: “Fuck me! Fuck me! I’m cumming!
Page 13 4 even panels
Panel 1: Side view of the ladder with Dixie falling backwards,
hands out in a dive.
Panel 2: View over Dixie’s shoulder of Rose treading water, a
white trail of semen is leaking out from her pussy.
Panel 3: Dixie on the ladder, Rod is on deck. She’s reaching out
and stroking his cock.
Dixie: “Is it my turn yet?”
Panel 4: A dripping wet Dixie kissing Rod while stroking his cock.
Page 14 large horizontal top. 2 smaller horizontal bottoms
Panel 1: Similar angled down view of the deck, but with Dixie now
riding Rod’s cock. He is mauling her breasts. Rose’s head is above
the ladder. Her mask is pulled up on her hair.
Dixie: “Cumming! CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Side view of them in the same position. Dixie is leaning
forwards so that he can suck her nipples.
Panel 3: Rear end view of her riding his cock. Her fluids are
shooting out.
Noise: Fuk fuk fuk
Page 15 vertical left panel and two squares on the right.
Panel 1: View from Rod’s head of Dixie in his lap. Her head is
thrown back. An xray shows him erupting in her pussy. A dripping
nude Rose stands behind her.
Panel 2: Rose floating on her back in the water. She’s trying to
scoop sperm out from her pussy.
Rod (off panel): “Get cleaned up.”
Panel 3: Side view of Rose on all fours, scrubbing the sperm off
the deck with a big sponge. Rod’s feet and legs are in the
picture.
Rod: “Swab that deck good, girl.”
Rose: “Yes, sir.”
Page 16 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: View over Rose’s shoulder. Rod is steering. Dixie is
standing nude beside him. He has an arm wrapped around her waist
and is sucking one nipple.
Rose (thinking) Still mad the slut didn’t share that big load with
me.
Rose (thinking) Rod’s got some tasty sperm.
Rose (thinking) Maybe he’ll let me suck his cock again?
Dixie: “You haven’t fucked my ass yet?”
Panel 2: View from the same and, but Rose is now steering the
boat. Dixie is bent over the railing. Rod is lining his cock down
to her ass cheeks while looking behind him and talking to Rose.
Rod: “Just aim the boat for those two islands.”
Page 17 vertical left side with two squares on the right and a
horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Down view from Rod’s perspective. His cock head is
pushing into her anus. He has both hands on her waist, thumbs
pressing into her flag tattoo.
Dixie: “Fuck my ass!”
Panel 2: Close up of her rear end with more of his cock stretching
out her ass.
Panel 3: Close up of her face looking strained.
Dixie (thinking) Damn! He’s ripping me open.
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie holding the railing, breasts dangling
while Rod fucks her ass from behind.
Dixie: “Fuck that ass, Rod. Give me that big black cock!”
Page 18: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: View from the rear of the boat of Dixie getting her ass
fucked. Rose is steering looking over at them. A sailboat or the
islands are close by. An X-ray shows him cumming.
Rose: “Ugh guys… we’re getting close.
Rod: “I’m nuttin her ass now.”
Panel 2: Rose on all fours scrubbing up their sperm again while
Dixie stands behind her putting her bikini on and Rod is pulling
his shorts up.
Rod: “Clean that up good, Rose.”
Page 19 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Side view of the boat back at dock. Rose and Dixie are
climbing off. Rod is watching them.
Rod: “Hurry back, Dixie.”
Panel 2: Split view of Dixie and Rose in a shower. They aren’t
showering together. A thin divider separates them. Both women are
rubbing soap over their bodies.
Dixie: “I hope you don’t mind, but Rod wants to party with me some
more.”
Rose: “That’s fine. I’ll find Gage.”
Rose (thinking) Funny, I miss being crammed into the shower with
her.
Page 20 large top half and two square bottoms.
Panel 1: The girls standing in the shower changing area. They are
in various stages of putting their bikinis on.
Dixie: “I’m not sure how long Rod will want me, even black men
have limits.”
Rose: “I’ll get a ride with one of the boys.”
Panel 2: The girls upper torsos. They are kissing on the lips,
friendly, not passionate.
Noise: Smack!
Panel 3: Rose in front of the security room abut to go in.
Rose (thinking) I’m no lezzie, but it feels good touching Dix.
Rose (thinking) These black men have awakened something in me.
Rose (thinking) Let’s see if Gage is here.
Page 21 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Rose in the empty security office. She’s bent over a
computer screen that shows Rod holding Dixie on the back of the
boat. She is topless and they are kissing. She is stroking his
cock. The door to the conference room is cracked open and noises
are coming out
Noise from conference door: “Fuck me! Fuck me! FUCK ME! I’m
CUMMING!
Noise from door: “Me too slut!”
Panel 2: Siobhan sitting on the edge of a conference table leaning
back against a pile of luggage (the stolen luggage). Her legs are
wrapped around Gage and his cock is still buried in her with sperm
dripping down his balls. Rose is in the open door behind them,
They are both looking at her.
Siobhan: “Hi Rose!”
Gage: “Yeah hi. You want something?”
Rose: “Sorry, I… Hey, that’s my LUGGAGE!”
Page 22 horizontal top and two square bottoms.
Panel 1: Gage standing facing the viewer. His cock is plump,
sticking out and dripping. Siobhan is beside him smiling. She’s
still sitting on the edge, legs spread and a river of semen
pouring from between her legs.
Gage: “Cops caught the thief red handed. It’s all here.”
Rose (off panel): “This is great! Wait.. How long you have it?”
Gage: “Just a few hours. Saw you leave on the boat, then Siobhan
distracted me.”
Panel 2: Rose standing by Gage with Siobhan still seated.
Gage: “Glad to help. Now why are you looking for me?”
Gage: “Tell the truth. Siobhan’s a spade girl too”
Rose: “I wanted to suck you off.”
Panel 3: Gage pushing Rose’s head down between Siobhan’s legs.
Gage: “I’m a bit spent, but here’s a fresh load of cum.”
Rose: “GAGE! WAIT!
Page 23 4 small squares and a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of Rose’s face smashed in Siobhan’s pussy. Her
nose is between Siobhan’s pussy lips and Gage’s hand is still on
her head.
Panel 2: Close up of Rose pulled back. Her tongue is out and
wiggling between Siobhan’s folds. Sperm is on Rose’s tongue.
Gage’s hand isn’t holding her head down any more.
Rose (thinking): Her pussy’s keeping his sperm hot!
Panel 3: Same close up with Rose fingering her while pulling
Siobhan’s clit out between her legs.
Panel 4: Same close up with Rose’s tongue stuck straight out
between Siobhan’s labia.
Siobhan (off panel): Fuck my pussy with your tongue.”
Panel 5: View of the back of Rose’s head between Siobhan’s spread
legs and up Siobhan’s body. Siobhan is moaning and maybe pulling
Rose’s hair out like reins.
Siobhan: “CUMMING!”
Rose (thinking): There’s some more sperm!
Page 24 horizontal top and bottom with two squares in the middle
Panel 1: Side view of Siobhan lying back on the table with Rose
bent down between her legs. Gage is behind them stroking his erect
cock. Siobhan might be squeezing her own breasts.
Siobhan: “Rose is loving this, Gage. She‘s good too.”
Rose (thinking): Damn! I am loving this.
Gage: “Fuck this is hot!”
Panel 2: Close up of Gage pushing his cock into Rose’s pussy.
Fluid is squirting out around it.
Noise: Squish!
Panel 3: Close up of Rose’s head rearing up above Siobhan’s bush.
Her face is wet and messy. Her eyes are closed.
Rose: “YES! FUCK ME!”
Panel 4: Side view of the threesome. Gage is going hard into her
pussy.
Noise: Fuk fuk! Fuk!
Noise: “Slurp slurp slurp
Page 25 horizontal top and two vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: God view down of Rose’s back. Gage is buried in her pussy
with an xray showing his cumming. Her face is still in Siobhan’s
pussy.
Gage: “Take every drop of that nut!”
Siobhan and Rose running together: “CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Rose kneeling on the floor between Rose and Gage. She
licking sperm off Gage’s spent cock. Siobhan is wearing spade
panties and pulling a halter that reads Black Owned down over her
tits.
Panel 3: Rose still kneeling. Siobhan is pulling up scandalously
short shorts while bending over and kissing Rose on the lips.
Siobhan: “Thank you!”
Page 26 4 even panels
Panel 1: Rose still kneeling nude on the floor of the conference
room. Siobhan is gone. Gage is dressed in his security uniform.
Gage: “Get this mess cleaned up. I’m late for my rounds.”
Panel 2: Rose on all fours scrubbing up sperm off the floor.
Rose (thinking) I’ve turned into some sort of cum cleaning lady.
Panel 3: Rose standing nude before her luggage. She’s going
through her wallet over a purse.
Rose: “Thank god, everything’s here.”
Panel 4: Rose wearing her spade bikini under the shower again.
Page 27 2 vertical panels and two smaller square bottom panels.
Panel 1: Rose seated at the bar while Siobhan sets a margarita in
front of her. Rose is holding up a bill.
Rose: “Look, I’ve got money.”
Panel 2: Side view of Rose in her bar stool while Dixie comes up
taking a seat by her.
Dixie: “These black men are amazing. Rod fucked me twice more and
I just sucked him off.”
Panel 3: Close up of Dixie’s upper torso. She’s got a big wad of
sperm on her lip. Rose’s finger is scooping it up.
Rose: “You got a bit…”
Panel 4: Close up of Rose’s upper torso sucking the sperm off her
finger.
Rose: “Yummy!”
Page 28 top and bottom panels.
Panel 1: Back shot of the flag girls at the bar facing each other.
Siobhan is between them, setting a margarita down in front of Dix.
Dixie: “No decrease in volume until his last load.”
Siobhan: “You talking abut Rodolph? That nigger’s got some good
tasting jizz.”
Dixie: “He sure does.”
Rose: “They all do.”
Panel 2: Back view of Siobhan’s side of the bar. Her ass cheeks
practically pop out of her short shorts. Rose and Dixie’s upper
torsos are above the other side of the bar.
Siobhan: “The bigger balls produce thicker tastier pudding.”
Siobhan: “If you ever go back to white men and I don’t know why
you would, you’ll find their little teaspoon of runny semen tastes
like crap.”
Siobhan: “Ten bucks for the drink.”
Rose: “I got it.”
Page 29 2 vertical panels, horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of the flag girls facing each other on the
stools.
Dixie: “Where’d ya get the money?”
Rose: “Gage found our luggage!”
Panel 2: The flag girls in the clothes they showed up wearing
pushing a shopping cart down a supermarket alley.
Dixie: “Let’s fix the boys a nice dinner.”
Panel 3: Gage and Mark arriving home to find the flag girls nude
holding plates of food (chicken and potatoes)
Gage: “Something smells delicious.”
Mark: “Something looks delicious too.”
Page 30 horizontal top on left and smaller vertical top on right,
half page bottom
Panel 1: Gage and mark seated and eating while Rose and Dixie blow
them under the table.
Noises: slurp slurp slurp
Panel 2: Side view of a nude Rose at the sink doing the dishes.
Panel 3: Full view of the living room. Dixie is between Mark and
Gage, she’s nude. They’re dressed, but she may have pulled out
their cocks and is stroking them. They are watching tv. Rose is
strolling towards them. The front door has been thrown open and
Amir is standing there staring at Rose and looking delighted.
Amir: “Fuck yeah! That’s what I like coming home to.”
Page 31 horizontal top on left and smaller vertical top on right,
half page bottom
Panel 1: Side view of the stairs with Amir climbing them and Rose
thrown over his shoulder. Deshawn is following them.
Panel 2: Rose kneeling before Amir, pulling his pants down and his
cock is springing up, not fully hard.
Panel 3: Rose on all fours on a bed. Amir is fucking her from
behind. She’s sucking on Deshawn’s cock.
Noise: Slurp slurp.
Noise: Fuk fuk fuk
Amir: “So baby, how’d ya like a ride down to Key West tomorrow?”
To be continued….
The Flag Girls Get Fucked 4
Characters
Dixie Meriwether: Blonde in the confederate flag bikini. Tall at
nearly 6’ with big DD breasts. Pierced navel with confederate flag
pin (google confederate flag belly button ring). Tramp stamp of a
confederate flag on back. Age 26. She is tanned, toned, and lithe.
Her large breasts make her appear top heavy.
Rose Clark: Reddish brown haired woman in American flag bikini.
She’s fair skinned. Pierced navel with sparkly diamond stud..
Shorter then Dixie, but wears high heeled sandals to appear the
same height. DD breasts look bigger on her smaller frame. Age 27
Amir: Deshawn’s dad. He is heavier then his son with a beer gut,
but muscular arms. His cock is about the size of Gage’s, but Amir
has an unusually round knobby head.
Deshawn: Big and well muscled with a military style flat top and
blue tribal tattoos. Somewhat brutish looking. He is circumcised
and the longest of the group at 14” His cock head is an elongated
serpent head.
Jamon: Big Jamaican bartender and roommate. He isn’t attractive.
His skin is very dark and he has long dreadlocks. He also has a
gold tooth. His cock is as long as Mark’s and as thick as Gages.
He is uncircumcised. He is thinner and wiry, but all muscle.
Siobhan: Classic Irish red head with redder hair then Rose and
paler skin with freckles. Her tits are almost as big as the flag
girls. Her areolas are bigger then the girls, but fainter. She has
a black spade belly button pin.
Marley: Lead singer of Rasta with Meatballs. He’s average looking
and build. He has dreads and maybe one of those multicolored Rasta
hats. His teeth are yellowed. Penis 13” uncircumcised. Very dark
skinned.
Sammy: Band member. Short and thin. Mid thirties. Average looking.
Slicked back hair and a mustache. Shortest cock of the bunch, but
it’s thick and stubby, a fat 9” uncircumcised. His balls remain
very big and he cums a lot. Coal black.
Reno: Band member. Best looking of the band. Fit and muscular, but
not as big as Gage. He is bald, but has black sideburns that meet
as a mustache, but no beard. 14” uncircumcised penis as big as
Deshawn’s. The pee slit is bigger and his balls are the biggest.
He’s a heavy cummer. Very dark skinned.
Unnamed band member: Unimportant.
Mark: Handsome young and muscular. Shaved bald. Perfectly
streamlined 12” cock.
Gage: Big and tough looking. He looks like a weightlifter. He has
a flat top hair cut. His cock is darker and slightly smaller at
11”, but thicker.
Jake: Rose’s fiance
Billy Ray: Dixie’s older husband at 42. Redneck. He wears a
baseball cap and maybe a jean vest with a confederate flag on it.
The cap might have the flag too. He has a big mustache but no
beard.
Rod: Captain of the Big Rod. He is dark brown. He is bald, big and
muscular maybe with a gut
Cover: View up from the bottom of the ocean. Rose and Dixie are
swimming nude above the viewer. They are wearing masks, snorkels,
and flippers. Fish and/or other sea life are swimming around them.
Rose and Dixie in their new spade bikinis. The bottom shows a
poker table with chips. Several black hands are holding cards. One
may be holding up one card, the Queen of Spades. Maybe a nice
touch would be to make the cards all spades. The girls are serving
the guys, holding beers out for them or a bag of chips.
Sensationalist tags: Take a ride on the BIG ROD!
Title: The Flag Girls Get Fucked 4
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaosgal.
Page 1: Large to horizontal with 2 smaller squares on bottom.
Panel 1: Wide shot of the kitchen. Dixie is entering the room
nude. Gage is sitting on the far end of a table wearing his
security tee shirt and shorts. Jamon is sitting on the right the
table. There are plates of pancakes and bacon in front of both.
Jamon’s chair is pushed back and he is angled facing the viewer
with a nude Rose on her knees sucking his cock. His shirt is
pulled up and his shorts down around his legs.
Dixie: “Smells good!”
Jamon: “OH FUCK!”
Noise around blow job: SLURP!
Panel 2: Close up of food plate with Dixie’s hand reaching for a
slice of bacon. Gage’s hand is hitting her hand.
Noise: SMACK!
Panel 3: Front view of Gage seated with Dixie leaning over him
holding her hand.
Gage: “You cane at when the laundry’s done.”
Page 2: horizontal top with smaller square on tight. Large
horizontal bottom.
Panel 1: Nude Dixie bent in front of a washing machine filling it
with sheets.
Panel 2: Close up of Dixie’s ass with the tattoo. Gage’s hard
black cock is resting on her crack. His hands are on her hips.
Panel 3: Dixie sitting on washing machine while Gage lines his
cock up with her pussy.
Gage: “Gotta bust a nut before work.”
Gage: “You want this black cock?”
Dixie: “You know I want that big nigger cock, stud.”
Noises around washing machine: Whrrr! Whrrr!
Page 3: Two vertical top panels with a long horizontal on bottom
Panel 1: Dixie sitting on machine her legs wrapped around his
waist. Gage is fucking her and you can see his cock in her. Her
head is thrown back.
Noises around machine: Whrr! Whrr!
Noises around cock: “Fwap! Fwap!
Dixie: “Your big nigger cock is making me cum!
Gage: “Cum on that black dick, slut.”
Panel 2: Same shot only Gage is leaning over her sucking one erect
nipple. She is still screaming. Maybe an xray shows him cumming in
her.
Dixie: “OHGAWD!”
Dixie: “CCUUMMIINNGG!!”
Panel 3: Dixie sitting back on the machine, legs spread and sperm
dripping out of her pussy. Gage is pulling his shorts up. His cock
is still sticking out semi erect and leaking.
Dixie: “Mmmm, that was some fuck, lover.”
Gage: “Thanks. Get this cleaned up before you leave.”
Dixie: “Yes sir!”
Page 4: horizontal top, 2 square bottoms
Panel 1: Dixie strolling with a purpose back into the kitchen.
Rose is in the same position, but now she is sucking Mark’s cock.
He is eating pancakes from a plate.
Dixie (thinking): Need some paper towels.
Noise around Rose’s mouth: Slurp! Slurp!
Panel 2: Kitchen table with Dixie now on the opposite side eating
from a plate. Rose is sitting back in the blow job chair. Her
hands are on her belly and it might be bulging out some from the
two loads of sperm she’s swallowed. Rose isn’t eating.
Dixie: “Finally, I’m starved!
Rose: “None for me, my belly’s full.”
Panel 3: The two girls by the front door dressing in their spade
bikinis.
Dixie: “Let’s go.”
Page 5 vertical left side, 2 squares on right.
Panel 1: Front view of the girls in their bikinis walking through
the resort. A few men might be ogling them.
Dixie: “Lets go look at the fish and then lay out.”
Rose: “Maybe take a little nap.”
Dixie: “YAWN! Sounds great. Neither of us have slept much.”
Panel 2: View over Dixie’s shoulder of her looking down into the
clear water and some fish swimming around.
Panel 3: Backsides of Dixie and Rose standing on the dock. They
are looking at the back of the boat. The name BIG ROD is between
their legs on the back of the boat. Standing on the deck above is
Rod. His shirt is open. His boat appeared in Part 2.
Rod: “Allo ladies.”
Dixie and Rose: ‘Hello.”
Page 6 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Side view of Rod helping the women on his boat.
Rod: “No business today. Let me take you for a ride.”
Rod: “I know a reef for snorkeling.:
Rod: “Your new bikinis are tres bien.”
Panel 2: Side view of the boat moving through the water. Rod is at
the wheel. Dixie and Rose are behind him. The islands may be in
the background.
Dixie: “I’m Dixie, this is Rose.”
Rod: “Rodolph, but call me Rod.”
Rose: “You’re Haitian?”
Rod: “Oui!”
Page 7 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: The back of the boat. Rod is passing out snorkeling gear.
He is shirtless now.
Rose: “Very kind of you.”
Rod: “Well I do expect to get paid.”
Dixie: “Umm… we didn’t bring much…
Rod: “You sluts can start blowing me, then snorkel before I fuck
you.”
Panel 2: Close up of Rod’s crotch. He’s pushing his shorts under
his balls. His cock is a big one, cut, streamlined, and a s thick
as Gage.
Panel 3: The girl’s upper torso’s. Both are looking down. Rose is
licking her lips.
Dixie: “What makes you think we’ll suck that thing?”
Page 8 horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.
Panel 1: View over Rod’s shoulder. One hand is pinching Rose’s
nipple trough her spade covering. The other hand is untying
Dixie’s top.
Rod: “You know what the outfit means, non?”
Dixie: “Our bodies belong to the black man.”
Rose: “They can take any hole they want.”
Rod: “Tres bien.”
Panel 2: Nude Rod sitting in fishing chair or captain’s chair. A
nude Dixie is sucking his cock. Rose is behind her stripping her
bikini off.
Noise: Slurp!
Panel 3: Close up of Rod’s cock and balls, rampant and wet. Dixie
is licking around the head while Rose is on the other side licking
above his balls.
Noises around tongues: Lap lap lap
Page 9 4 square panels with a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Side view of Rod’s cock with Dixie swallowing about half.
Noise: GACK!
Panel 2: Flipped side view of Rod’s cock with Rose swallowing
slightly less.
Noise: “ACK!”
Panel 3: Side view of Dixie again sucking it. His hands are in her
hair now. Motion lines show movement.
Noise: Suk suk suk
Dixie (thinking) Ha! Rose can’t swallow as much as me
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie still. Her lips are wrapped around the
head and her cheeks are bulging out. Sperm is flying out around
her mouth.
Noise: Gulp gulp gulp
Panel 5: Side view of his cock straight out and Rose’s head. Her
tongue is out, mouth open. She is stroking his cock rapidly with
motion lines showing she’s jerking him. Some sperm is shooting out
over her tongue and into her mouth.
Rose (thinking): Greedy slut didn’t leave enough for me.
Page 10 large horizontal top panel and two square bottom
Panel 1: Rod standing with his cock sticking out and down,
somewhat deflated. It’s dripping sperm to the deck. The girls are
on either side. Rose might be giving Dixie a mean stare. Dixie is
reaching down and hefting a testicle.
Dixie: “Jesus, these things hold a lot of cum. I never swallowed
so much.
Rose (thinking): Bitch!
Rod: “Go swimming and I’ll recharge.”
Panel 2: View down of the backs of the girls heads in the water,
with mask straps and snorkels. The water is clear and fish might
be visible.
Panel 3: Side view of Rose under water. Bubbles are coming up from
her snorkel. She’s holding a starfish or conch shell.
Page 11: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: View down of a nude Dixie and Rose swimming with bubbles
coming out the snorkels. Dixie is pointing at a large manta ray.
Panel 2: View up of a nude Rose and Dixie swimming along the
surface.
Page 12 2 square top and horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Dixie underwater kneeling on the sand. She’s holding up a
shell
Dixie (thinking) Where’s Rose?
Panel 2: Side view of Dixie climbing up the ladder over the side
of the boat.
Panel 3: Angled down view of the deck of the boat with Rose on
all fours getting fucked from behind by Rod. Dixie’s head has
appeared above the side of the boat watching them.
Noise: Slap slap slap.
Rose: “Fuck me! Fuck me! I’m cumming!
Page 13 4 even panels
Panel 1: Side view of the ladder with Dixie falling backwards,
hands out in a dive.
Panel 2: View over Dixie’s shoulder of Rose treading water, a
white trail of semen is leaking out from her pussy.
Panel 3: Dixie on the ladder, Rod is on deck. She’s reaching out
and stroking his cock.
Dixie: “Is it my turn yet?”
Panel 4: A dripping wet Dixie kissing Rod while stroking his cock.
Page 14 large horizontal top. 2 smaller horizontal bottoms
Panel 1: Similar angled down view of the deck, but with Dixie now
riding Rod’s cock. He is mauling her breasts. Rose’s head is above
the ladder. Her mask is pulled up on her hair.
Dixie: “Cumming! CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Side view of them in the same position. Dixie is leaning
forwards so that he can suck her nipples.
Panel 3: Rear end view of her riding his cock. Her fluids are
shooting out.
Noise: Fuk fuk fuk
Page 15 vertical left panel and two squares on the right.
Panel 1: View from Rod’s head of Dixie in his lap. Her head is
thrown back. An xray shows him erupting in her pussy. A dripping
nude Rose stands behind her.
Panel 2: Rose floating on her back in the water. She’s trying to
scoop sperm out from her pussy.
Rod (off panel): “Get cleaned up.”
Panel 3: Side view of Rose on all fours, scrubbing the sperm off
the deck with a big sponge. Rod’s feet and legs are in the
picture.
Rod: “Swab that deck good, girl.”
Rose: “Yes, sir.”
Page 16 2 horizontal panels.
Panel 1: View over Rose’s shoulder. Rod is steering. Dixie is
standing nude beside him. He has an arm wrapped around her waist
and is sucking one nipple.
Rose (thinking) Still mad the slut didn’t share that big load with
me.
Rose (thinking) Rod’s got some tasty sperm.
Rose (thinking) Maybe he’ll let me suck his cock again?
Dixie: “You haven’t fucked my ass yet?”
Panel 2: View from the same and, but Rose is now steering the
boat. Dixie is bent over the railing. Rod is lining his cock down
to her ass cheeks while looking behind him and talking to Rose.
Rod: “Just aim the boat for those two islands.”
Page 17 vertical left side with two squares on the right and a
horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Down view from Rod’s perspective. His cock head is
pushing into her anus. He has both hands on her waist, thumbs
pressing into her flag tattoo.
Dixie: “Fuck my ass!”
Panel 2: Close up of her rear end with more of his cock stretching
out her ass.
Panel 3: Close up of her face looking strained.
Dixie (thinking) Damn! He’s ripping me open.
Panel 4: Side view of Dixie holding the railing, breasts dangling
while Rod fucks her ass from behind.
Dixie: “Fuck that ass, Rod. Give me that big black cock!”
Page 18: 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: View from the rear of the boat of Dixie getting her ass
fucked. Rose is steering looking over at them. A sailboat or the
islands are close by. An X-ray shows him cumming.
Rose: “Ugh guys… we’re getting close.
Rod: “I’m nuttin her ass now.”
Panel 2: Rose on all fours scrubbing up their sperm again while
Dixie stands behind her putting her bikini on and Rod is pulling
his shorts up.
Rod: “Clean that up good, Rose.”
Page 19 2 horizontal panels
Panel 1: Side view of the boat back at dock. Rose and Dixie are
climbing off. Rod is watching them.
Rod: “Hurry back, Dixie.”
Panel 2: Split view of Dixie and Rose in a shower. They aren’t
showering together. A thin divider separates them. Both women are
rubbing soap over their bodies.
Dixie: “I hope you don’t mind, but Rod wants to party with me some
more.”
Rose: “That’s fine. I’ll find Gage.”
Rose (thinking) Funny, I miss being crammed into the shower with
her.
Page 20 large top half and two square bottoms.
Panel 1: The girls standing in the shower changing area. They are
in various stages of putting their bikinis on.
Dixie: “I’m not sure how long Rod will want me, even black men
have limits.”
Rose: “I’ll get a ride with one of the boys.”
Panel 2: The girls upper torsos. They are kissing on the lips,
friendly, not passionate.
Noise: Smack!
Panel 3: Rose in front of the security room abut to go in.
Rose (thinking) I’m no lezzie, but it feels good touching Dix.
Rose (thinking) These black men have awakened something in me.
Rose (thinking) Let’s see if Gage is here.
Page 21 top and bottom panels
Panel 1: Rose in the empty security office. She’s bent over a
computer screen that shows Rod holding Dixie on the back of the
boat. She is topless and they are kissing. She is stroking his
cock. The door to the conference room is cracked open and noises
are coming out
Noise from conference door: “Fuck me! Fuck me! FUCK ME! I’m
CUMMING!
Noise from door: “Me too slut!”
Panel 2: Siobhan sitting on the edge of a conference table leaning
back against a pile of luggage (the stolen luggage). Her legs are
wrapped around Gage and his cock is still buried in her with sperm
dripping down his balls. Rose is in the open door behind them,
They are both looking at her.
Siobhan: “Hi Rose!”
Gage: “Yeah hi. You want something?”
Rose: “Sorry, I… Hey, that’s my LUGGAGE!”
Page 22 horizontal top and two square bottoms.
Panel 1: Gage standing facing the viewer. His cock is plump,
sticking out and dripping. Siobhan is beside him smiling. She’s
still sitting on the edge, legs spread and a river of semen
pouring from between her legs.
Gage: “Cops caught the thief red handed. It’s all here.”
Rose (off panel): “This is great! Wait.. How long you have it?”
Gage: “Just a few hours. Saw you leave on the boat, then Siobhan
distracted me.”
Panel 2: Rose standing by Gage with Siobhan still seated.
Gage: “Glad to help. Now why are you looking for me?”
Gage: “Tell the truth. Siobhan’s a spade girl too”
Rose: “I wanted to suck you off.”
Panel 3: Gage pushing Rose’s head down between Siobhan’s legs.
Gage: “I’m a bit spent, but here’s a fresh load of cum.”
Rose: “GAGE! WAIT!
Page 23 4 small squares and a horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of Rose’s face smashed in Siobhan’s pussy. Her
nose is between Siobhan’s pussy lips and Gage’s hand is still on
her head.
Panel 2: Close up of Rose pulled back. Her tongue is out and
wiggling between Siobhan’s folds. Sperm is on Rose’s tongue.
Gage’s hand isn’t holding her head down any more.
Rose (thinking): Her pussy’s keeping his sperm hot!
Panel 3: Same close up with Rose fingering her while pulling
Siobhan’s clit out between her legs.
Panel 4: Same close up with Rose’s tongue stuck straight out
between Siobhan’s labia.
Siobhan (off panel): Fuck my pussy with your tongue.”
Panel 5: View of the back of Rose’s head between Siobhan’s spread
legs and up Siobhan’s body. Siobhan is moaning and maybe pulling
Rose’s hair out like reins.
Siobhan: “CUMMING!”
Rose (thinking): There’s some more sperm!
Page 24 horizontal top and bottom with two squares in the middle
Panel 1: Side view of Siobhan lying back on the table with Rose
bent down between her legs. Gage is behind them stroking his erect
cock. Siobhan might be squeezing her own breasts.
Siobhan: “Rose is loving this, Gage. She‘s good too.”
Rose (thinking): Damn! I am loving this.
Gage: “Fuck this is hot!”
Panel 2: Close up of Gage pushing his cock into Rose’s pussy.
Fluid is squirting out around it.
Noise: Squish!
Panel 3: Close up of Rose’s head rearing up above Siobhan’s bush.
Her face is wet and messy. Her eyes are closed.
Rose: “YES! FUCK ME!”
Panel 4: Side view of the threesome. Gage is going hard into her
pussy.
Noise: Fuk fuk! Fuk!
Noise: “Slurp slurp slurp
Page 25 horizontal top and two vertical bottoms.
Panel 1: God view down of Rose’s back. Gage is buried in her pussy
with an xray showing his cumming. Her face is still in Siobhan’s
pussy.
Gage: “Take every drop of that nut!”
Siobhan and Rose running together: “CUMMING!”
Panel 2: Rose kneeling on the floor between Rose and Gage. She
licking sperm off Gage’s spent cock. Siobhan is wearing spade
panties and pulling a halter that reads Black Owned down over her
tits.
Panel 3: Rose still kneeling. Siobhan is pulling up scandalously
short shorts while bending over and kissing Rose on the lips.
Siobhan: “Thank you!”
Page 26 4 even panels
Panel 1: Rose still kneeling nude on the floor of the conference
room. Siobhan is gone. Gage is dressed in his security uniform.
Gage: “Get this mess cleaned up. I’m late for my rounds.”
Panel 2: Rose on all fours scrubbing up sperm off the floor.
Rose (thinking) I’ve turned into some sort of cum cleaning lady.
Panel 3: Rose standing nude before her luggage. She’s going
through her wallet over a purse.
Rose: “Thank god, everything’s here.”
Panel 4: Rose wearing her spade bikini under the shower again.
Page 27 2 vertical panels and two smaller square bottom panels.
Panel 1: Rose seated at the bar while Siobhan sets a margarita in
front of her. Rose is holding up a bill.
Rose: “Look, I’ve got money.”
Panel 2: Side view of Rose in her bar stool while Dixie comes up
taking a seat by her.
Dixie: “These black men are amazing. Rod fucked me twice more and
I just sucked him off.”
Panel 3: Close up of Dixie’s upper torso. She’s got a big wad of
sperm on her lip. Rose’s finger is scooping it up.
Rose: “You got a bit…”
Panel 4: Close up of Rose’s upper torso sucking the sperm off her
finger.
Rose: “Yummy!”
Page 28 top and bottom panels.
Panel 1: Back shot of the flag girls at the bar facing each other.
Siobhan is between them, setting a margarita down in front of Dix.
Dixie: “No decrease in volume until his last load.”
Siobhan: “You talking abut Rodolph? That nigger’s got some good
tasting jizz.”
Dixie: “He sure does.”
Rose: “They all do.”
Panel 2: Back view of Siobhan’s side of the bar. Her ass cheeks
practically pop out of her short shorts. Rose and Dixie’s upper
torsos are above the other side of the bar.
Siobhan: “The bigger balls produce thicker tastier pudding.”
Siobhan: “If you ever go back to white men and I don’t know why
you would, you’ll find their little teaspoon of runny semen tastes
like crap.”
Siobhan: “Ten bucks for the drink.”
Rose: “I got it.”
Page 29 2 vertical panels, horizontal bottom
Panel 1: Close up of the flag girls facing each other on the
stools.
Dixie: “Where’d ya get the money?”
Rose: “Gage found our luggage!”
Panel 2: The flag girls in the clothes they showed up wearing
pushing a shopping cart down a supermarket alley.
Dixie: “Let’s fix the boys a nice dinner.”
Panel 3: Gage and Mark arriving home to find the flag girls nude
holding plates of food (chicken and potatoes)
Gage: “Something smells delicious.”
Mark: “Something looks delicious too.”
Page 30 horizontal top on left and smaller vertical top on right,
half page bottom
Panel 1: Gage and mark seated and eating while Rose and Dixie blow
them under the table.
Noises: slurp slurp slurp
Panel 2: Side view of a nude Rose at the sink doing the dishes.
Panel 3: Full view of the living room. Dixie is between Mark and
Gage, she’s nude. They’re dressed, but she may have pulled out
their cocks and is stroking them. They are watching tv. Rose is
strolling towards them. The front door has been thrown open and
Amir is standing there staring at Rose and looking delighted.
Amir: “Fuck yeah! That’s what I like coming home to.”
Page 31 horizontal top on left and smaller vertical top on right,
half page bottom
Panel 1: Side view of the stairs with Amir climbing them and Rose
thrown over his shoulder. Deshawn is following them.
Panel 2: Rose kneeling before Amir, pulling his pants down and his
cock is springing up, not fully hard.
Panel 3: Rose on all fours on a bed. Amir is fucking her from
behind. She’s sucking on Deshawn’s cock.
Noise: Slurp slurp.
Noise: Fuk fuk fuk
Amir: “So baby, how’d ya like a ride down to Key West tomorrow?”
To be continued….
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