Just back from vacation, so no updates. I'll post the next one when I finish the glory hole scene.
I've heard some feedback to describe Dawn's clothing more and I can touch that up in the final version.
I also had one comment about the mention of Ron Jeremy who has had some recent accusations brought against him. Anyone else think I should drop him? He's a pretty famous name for the date the story is set. I could easily just use an obvious parody name like Tom Laramie.
Peter north maybe? King of the cumshots. Did quite a few scenes with sean michaels back in the day. I think the one with sarah lousie young started my interracial fetish
ReplyDeleteAny plans to continue Coxville?
ReplyDeleteYou getting more writing time in these days? Or you still working hard at life? Wish you had some more time to work on Jane Stalwart, but any update from you is good. Hope the pandemic is treating you well.
ReplyDeleteWe need Coxville.
ReplyDeleteI REALLY don't think your hardcore fetish sex stories need to worry about political correctness, Storm...
ReplyDeleteKeeping Ron is fine. It's not that he's the hero of the story!
I also vote to keep Ron Jeremy, he was a perfect choice for the role. Don't be anachronistic, please.
ReplyDeleteI hope you could finish the 2 part of the Stalwart saga soon.
Ditch Ron Jeremy for sure... He is gross to think about anyway. Peter North is a good idea.
ReplyDeletei think Ron Jeremy is perfect for your story given the time period and his overall appearance (i.e. he's known primarily for his dick). The idea that someone is reading an INTERRACIAL piece of erotica, sees his name, and is so put off by PC/social justice concerns is absolutely laughable IMO.
ReplyDeleteKeep Ron Jeremy please
ReplyDeleteI am not of fan of real people characters per se. I like sort of relatively timeless qualities in Stories.
ReplyDeleteAny update this week ?
ReplyDeleteProbably not. I did make a little progress, but not really enough to post.
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DeleteCan we please get some N-word use in this????????
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