Her website now states that it will be back up after a server upgrade and members will get a full never before seen comic.
I've made progress on my current story, "Straight Outta Coxville," and will have time to write Friday and Saturday night and some Sunday as well as Monday. That's a rare bit of time for me.
Does Kaos do much/any creating in the story/comic script side of things? Or does she just do the art for the comic scripts you/others create?
ReplyDeleteSeems to me 'Blacked' are asking the wrong person for script and story advice. And the creative credit is being wrongly administered here.
I'm not Kaos, but certainly her site isn't exclusively based on 'bringer scripts, if that's what you mean.
DeleteI would be more surprised if she *didn't* fancy herself a decent story idea writer (apart from being a talented artist)!
I should explain "decent". AFAIK Kaos wrote Annabelle herself. It's decent in that it touches upon all the right fetishes, much like how blacknwhite do.
DeleteBut there's still a difference between decent and masterful. Just having illicit sex is the means, not the end: the great thing about Stormbringer's best stories is how they truly mindfuck both heroine and reader :-)
Just an FYI, but Annabelle is by Interqueen. Kaos did do the older comics such as the massage.
DeleteThis is excellent news!
ReplyDeleteThankyou!!
What is Straight Outta Coxville about? Like a premise or summary.
ReplyDeleteThank you, wonderful news%
ReplyDeleteSaw the video from Blacked with the Kaos Comics story.
ReplyDeleteIt was great (for a porn) but here are a few improvement suggestions if they ever do more:
1. Have the girl walk up the stairs so we can see she isn't wearing panties
2. Have an employee walk up to her while she's watching the porn, maybe grab her pussy from behind. She's too shocked and shy to respond. Then the main actor tells him to stop, and apologizes.
3. Don't haste through the talk:
Make a bigger point of her being married or drop it entirely
Maybe she can blurt out she's never seen so large cocks as in the video
They ask her if her hubby is as big, at which she must say no, blushing
Then the cock comes out, and when the boss says "Go ahead touch it" he adds "that's not cheating"
Then he says suck it, but she protests. "Okay so just lick it".
When she's licking both of them, they say "use your tongue" and basically shove a cock into her mouth.
Boss gropes her breasts through dress.
After enthusiastically sucking, she pulls out, saying "no, I can't".
At this they say "okay, we can respect that" but boss pulls out one tittie, "sure you don't want to suck the big black cock some more, this is your only opportunity"
She hesitates while boss fondles her tit. Other guy slowly shoves cock into her mouth, and when she starts to suck again, boss removes her backpack.
Then, since this is a porn, we skip right to "let's fuck this bitch".
At least have her ask for condoms.
"We're too big for condoms"
"Okay so pull out then. I'm not on the pill"
After she's squirted, boss tells her "you know I'm not going to pull out"
She says "okay just this once"
Stud doesn't cum in her face, but fucks her
"Pull out"
"Boss didn't need to, so why should I?"
*cums in pussy*
"That felt wonderful, but it can never happen again"
At this boss says "why the hurry? Do you have to go already?"
She looks into the camera with a wink "I guess I could stay here for the night"
(camera scans down her body to the cum dripping down her legs)
:-)
What is this Blacked scene that I keep hearing about? What's the scene and what Kaos comic is it based on?
DeleteNaomi Swann on the BlackedRaw video is stunningly perfect.
ReplyDelete@ Storm : Go for Coxville please. It's been a long 18 months without a single update.
One idea for a story (I believe you haven't done, Storm):
ReplyDeleteThe housewife happens to meet a black stud, like always, goes through all the stages of corruption. She is forced to use ever more ridiculous excuses and explanations for rumpled hair, messy bedsheets, cum on chin etc. She notices how her hubby never seems to catch on (she feels ashamed and realizes this will only end with him catching her), so in frustration she becomes more and more outrageous with daring explanations.
At the end we understand the husband is, for once, having an affair himself, maybe the wife next door, and that he did understand, he just didn't want to confront her about it.
When she's caught bare-assed with a big black cock balls deep in her unprotected pussy, and he STILL buys her ridiculous excuse, she finally breaks down and confesses. They have a heartfelt conversation (with the BBC still pumping away) and kiss and make up, him not revealing his own secret.
Ends with her catching him porking the neighbor's daughter, and "get out of my house you bastard"...
So... Has she kept her word and posted this full never before seen comic?
ReplyDeleteNope. There is absolutely nothing new.
DeleteYes, there's a new comic up, but it's a guest artist. It's called Black Devotion and looks like a Sister Nancy ripoff (which isn't a bad thing). It's a bit raw (not colored and no dialog), but the art is pretty good. The rest of her site appears up and running with the exception of Lessons From the neighbor 3.
DeleteI want you to write story about helping hand sex comic what should happened with ashely plz plz plz
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