This week

1) Kaos got a Gardeners 2 update pretty quickly. The next update should see them stripping for the camera.

2) Kaos wants me to go ahead and convert Lessons From the Neighbor and Me and Mrs. Jones into comic scripts. Lessons should be pretty straight forward. Jones will need some fiddling as it's not an IR story.

3) Here's a couple stories I enjoyed reading this week on literotica.

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2961345&page=submissions

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=2775687&page=submissions



Just an upcoming project list from Kaoscomics. I don't know what order she'll do them and someone mentioned that she was converting another writer's story or two for her site. From me:

Wife and the Black Gardeners 3
Son's Best Friend's Dad
The Flag Girls Get Fucked (5 parts)

Flag Girls Comic 5

Here's the final chapter for the comic version of the Flag Girls. It ends with them driving off to Miami. It's up to Kaos whether or not she'll do the epilogue to the story.

The Flag Girls Get Fucked 5

Characters

Dixie Meriwether: Blonde in the confederate flag bikini. Tall at nearly 6’ with big DD breasts. Pierced navel with confederate flag pin (google confederate flag belly button ring). Tramp stamp of a confederate flag on back. Age 26. She is tanned, toned, and lithe. Her large breasts make her appear top heavy.

Rose Clark: Reddish brown haired woman in American flag bikini. She’s fair skinned. Pierced navel with sparkly diamond stud.. Shorter then Dixie, but wears high heeled sandals to appear the same height. DD breasts look bigger on her smaller frame. Age 27

Amir: Deshawn’s dad. He is heavier then his son with a beer gut, but muscular arms. His cock is about the size of Gage’s, but Amir has an unusually round knobby head.

Deshawn: Big and well muscled with a military style flat top and blue tribal tattoos. Somewhat brutish  looking. He is circumcised and the longest of the group at 14” His cock head is an elongated serpent head.

Jamon: Big Jamaican bartender and roommate. He isn’t attractive. His skin is very dark and he has long dreadlocks. He also has a gold tooth. His cock is as long as Mark’s and as thick as Gages. He is uncircumcised. He is thinner and wiry, but all muscle.

Siobhan: Classic Irish red head with redder hair then Rose and paler skin with freckles. Her tits are almost as big as the flag girls. Her areolas are bigger then the girls, but fainter. She has a black spade belly button pin.

Marley: Lead singer of Rasta with Meatballs. He’s average looking and build. He has dreads and maybe one of those multicolored Rasta hats. His teeth are yellowed. Penis 13” uncircumcised. Very dark skinned.

Sammy: Band member. Short and thin. Mid thirties. Average looking. Slicked back hair and a mustache. Shortest cock of the bunch, but it’s thick and stubby, a fat 9” uncircumcised. His balls remain very big and he cums a lot. Coal black.

Reno: Band member. Best looking of the band. Fit and muscular, but not as big as Gage. He is bald, but has black sideburns that meet as a mustache, but no beard. 14” uncircumcised penis as big as Deshawn’s. The pee slit is bigger and his balls are the biggest.  He’s a heavy cummer. Very dark skinned.

Unnamed band member: Unimportant.

Mark: Handsome young and muscular. Shaved bald. Perfectly streamlined 12” cock.

Gage: Big and tough looking. He looks like a weightlifter. He has a flat top hair cut. His cock is darker and slightly smaller at 11”, but thicker.

Jake: Rose’s fiance

Billy Ray: Dixie’s older husband at 42. Redneck. He wears a baseball cap and maybe a jean vest with a confederate flag on it. The cap might have the flag too. He has a big mustache but no beard.

Rod: Captain of the Big Rod. He is dark brown. He is bald, big and muscular maybe with a gut

Stan: Leader of the black panther motorcycle gang. He is hugely muscular and bald. Stan's features are very African, dark black, flat nose, and big lips. His arms have blue tribal tattoos. He wears goggles when riding and pulls them on his head when stopped.

Cover: Side view of a motorcycle with Deshawn steering and Dixie sitting behind him in her spade bikini. Behind the image and following slightly behind Deshawn's bike is another motorcycle with Amir steering and Rose behind. If you want to jazz up the picture, Dixie could be leaning tight against Deshawn who has his cock out while she jerks it and Rose could be looking at the viewer waving her bikini top and showing her bare breasts.

Header: The Flag Girls Get Fucked 5
Story by Stormbringer
Art by Kaos comics.

Page 1    2 vertical panels and horizontal bottom

Panel 1: Rear image of the girls on the backs of the bikes. Their rear ends are essentially bare with their thongs on. The motorcycles are going over a bridge. Off to the left the sun is coming up over blue water.

Panel 2: Front image of Deshawn holding the handle bars while steering. Dixie's head is over his shoulder. One of her hands is outlined under his tee shirt. The other hand is under his pants or squeezing his bulge.

Panel 3: Distant image of both bikes pulling off the highway to a sandy parking areas with palm trees and blue water. Maybe there's a campsite grill

Page 2: horizontal top and 2 vertical bottoms with the final vertical split into two panels.

Panel 1: Dixie nude leaning over the motorcycle while Deshawn fucks her from behind.

Dixie: “Give it to me Shawn. Fuck me! FUCK ME!”

Noise: Fwop Fwop Fwop

Panel 2: Amir nude sitting on his bike's seat while a nude Rose rides his cock facing him. She is leaning back, her breasts thrust out and he is sucking one nipple.

Rose: “CUMMING!”

Panel 3: Close up of Dixie's rear with most of Deshawn's cock buried in it. His sperm is shooting out and dripping down.

Panel 4: God view down of Rose and Amir's conjoined crotches. Sperm is shooting out of her too.
Page 3: horizontal top and 2 split bottom panels.

Panel 1: The two nude girls standing waist deep in the blue clear water, cleaning themselves up.

Amir (off panel): “Hurry up girls.”

Panel 2: Distant view of the bikes riding past a palm treed beach with lots of people.

Panel 3: Rear view of the girl's ass on the bikes as they drive down busy Duval street.

Page 4: Pinup collage picture. The girls now in their spade dresses dancing closely to the black men. There are images of Key West around them such as the lighthouse (they may be at the top in their bikinis), the Hemingway House, and Mallory Square watching the sunset or a juggle/street performer.
You can google image them.

Page 5: horizontal top and split bottom panels. From here on it's dark out.

Panel 1: The foursomes upper torsos outside. It's dark out. Rose is pulling her dress up over her shoulders to reveal her spade bikini. Amir is checking his watch or looking at a smart phone. Dixie is yawning. Deshawn is watching her.

Dixie: “So tired. You guys don't let us sleep much.”

Shawn: Sleeping is what you do in bed with white men. Black men use them to fuck.”

Rose: “Why do you keep checking the time?”

Amir: “Got somewhere to be in five minutes. Now get that dress stowed.”

Panel 2: Night scene of the Southernmost Point (google image search the buoy). A man is leaning on a car nearby.

Panel 3: Close up of the man handing off a duffle bag to Amir.

Page 6: horizontal top and split bottom panels.

Panel 1: Rose sitting on Amir's bike. He's stowing the bag.

Rose: “What's that?”

Amir: “It's nothing.”

Rose: “Is it drugs? You guys dealing drugs?”

Amir: “We ain't drug dealers.”

Panel 2: Close up of Amir on his bike with Rose behind him.

Rose: “Then what's in the bag?”
Amir: “Probably a kilo of coke, pot, and probably some heroin.”

Rose: “Jesus! You are dealers!”

Amir: “No we're mules. We run the stuff up to Miami. Get a grand per trip.”

Panel 3: Front view of both bikes with the men steering. The women are behind them staring at each other. The wind is blowing their hair. The look concerned.

Rose: “I'm not comfortable with this.”

Dixie: “Me neither.”

Amir: “Tough shit! Get off and walk then.”

Shawn: “And give us back our bikinis.”

Page 7: 2 small squares at the top and two horizontal panels under them.

Panel 1: Close up of Dixie's face laying against Deshawn's back.

Dixie (thinking): We're in deep shit if we get caught.

Panel 2: Same picture only her eyes are closed now.

Dixie(thinking) Can't keep my eyes open.

Dixie (thinking) What's that noise?”

Noise: VROOM! VROOM!

Panel 3: Looking down view. They are surrounded by a dozen motorcycles.

Noise: Vroom Vroom Vroom

Panel 4: View of Rose's rear behind Amir. She's looking over his left shoulder. On their left and slightly ahead so that she sees his back is another motorcycle. The man's arms are cut out. The black vest has a snarling panther on the back. The man Stan is looking at Amir. He isn't wearing a helmet, but he has goggles on.

Stan: “Pull over.”

Page 8: 2 horizontal panels. Smaller at the top.

Panel 1High not too detailed view of the group of motorcycles pulling into a beach parking lot. The full moon is reflecting in the water. There are some palm trees and two picnic tables near the water.

Panel 2: Dixie and Rose in spade bikinis looking scared surrounded by black motorcycle cycle gang members. All have the vests on, bare arms, and about half with helmets. More shadowy figures are behind them. A few have hands reaching out squeezing a breast or ass on the girls.

Comments coming from the men: Dayumn!
                                                       Hot white bitches!
                                                       Dems some big ass white titties!
                                                       Look at these fucking sluts!

Page 9  2 vertical panels

Panel 1: Front view of Rose pushed slightly forward. Hands have reached around and are squeezing her bare breasts. Another hand is ripping her bottom off.

Voice: “These panties are soaked.”

Another voice: “Bitch is wet for us, bro.”

Panel 2: Close up frontal view of Dixie with shadowy men around her. A hand behind her is pulling away her bikini top. Black hands in the front are pinching her nipples.

Dixie: “Hey!”

Man:  “Fuck never touched pink nipples before.”

Voice off panel: “Me first.”

Panel 10:  2 vertical panels.

Panel 1: Side view of Dixie facing Stan. A man behind her is kneeling and pulling her panty down. Rose is looking down in awe and touching Stan's enormous cock.

Man behind Dixie: “Aw, come on Stan.”

Stan: “Wait your fucking turn.”

Panel 2: View of Dixie's ass bent over a motorcycle seat as Stan pushes his cock into her. Her back is arched and her head is sideways.

Noise by Dixie's mouth: UNH!

Dixie: JESUS! That... is... a... big... COCK!

Stan: “You like big nigger cock, doncha slut?”

Dixie: “I love big nigger cock

Page 11:  spilt page top and bottom

Panel 1: Side view of Dixie getting fucked from behind by Stan. Behind them a shadowy black figure has thrown Rose over his shoulder and is carrying her off. Stan is spanking Rose's ass.

Noise from Rose: Squeal!

Noise by Dixie's ass: SPANK!

Dixie: “Fuck my white pussy hard with that big nigger cock.”

Stan: “Now that's what I'm talking about.”

Panel 2: Side view of Rose sitting on a picnic table. Her legs are wrapped around a man as he fucks her. Her back is arched and he is sucking a nipple while her hands are in his hair.

Rose: “GAWD! FUCK ME! I”M CUMMING!”

Page 12  2 vertical panels

Panel 1: God view of Rose laying length wise on the picnic table. A huge cock is fucking her pussy. Her head is hanging down over the edge sucking another.

Noises: fuk fuk fuk   and slurp slurp slurp

Panel 2: View of Stan's cock spearing Dixie and looking down her back as an ugly older black man with gray hair, bad teeth, and a fat belly is pulling her head up by her hair and aiming his cock at her face. His penis is one of the shortest, but the thickest like a beer can.

Page 13   horizontal top and 2 square bottoms.

Panel 1: Side view of Dixie bent over the bike. She's sucking the thick old cock under the man's belly. An x-ray shows Stan cumming in her womb.

Noise by her mouth: Gak!

Dixie (thinking) I'm cumming!

Panel 2: Close up of Dixie's face with sperm shooting out around the fat man's cock.

Noise: gulp gulp gulp

Panel 3: Stan and Amir's upper torso's talking maybe smoking a joint or drinking beers.

Stan: “Where'd you find these sluts, Amir?”

Amir: “Just around.”

Page 14  2 vertical panels
Panel 1: God view of Rose. The man fucking her has pulled out and is shooting cum over her belly and breasts. The man she's blowing has pulled out and is blowing the opposite way.

Noises: Splooge!

Panel 2: God view of Dixie now on her back on a picnic table. A man is holding her legs spread open and fucking her. Her head is underneath a big cock resting on her face. Her arms are reaching out stroking two more cocks.

Page 15  horizontal top and 2 square bottoms.

Panel 1: Side view of Rose's upper torso. Her head is bent down licking a man's huge balls. The man's cock is between her tits and she is squeezing them together. His cock is cumming.

Panel 2: Close up of a man in Rose's pussy. His sperm is shooting out around their crotches. The other man's cock head is visible between her breasts shooting and the sperm is striking the man fucking her.

Man fucking her: “You getting yo shit in my pubes.”

Panel 3: Dixie's head hanging down with a huge cock shoved down her throat.

Noise: SLURP!

Page 16   vertical left and 2 square right.

Panel 1: God view of Dixie's torso. Four cocks are above her all shooting. Two she is stroking with her hands and shooting over her breasts. Another is shooting over her belly. The last's sperm is fanning out over her face.

Noise: Splooge! (around all four)

Panel 2: Close up of Rose's crotch. Her pussy is splayed open and pouring out sperm. Stan's big cock head is poised at her rosebud.

Panel 3: Same picture only her anus is now stretched out around his cock.

Page 17  2 horizontal panels.

Panel 1: Side view of Rose on her back. Her mouth is facing the view, open with sperm dribbling out. A spent cock is above her head dripping sperm. Stan is holding her legs straight up maybe licking a foot, still fucking her ass.

Rose: “FUG MY ASH!”

Header: AND SO IT WENT ALL NIGHT...

Panel 2: Side view of Dixie. A man is on his back on the table fucking her ass and squeezing her tits while another man leans over her fucking her pussy sandwiching her between them.

Header: FOR HOURS AND HOURS.

Page 18: 4 square panels

Panel 1: Rose's upper torso. Her breasts are shaking up and down. Her eyes are closed. She's crusted in sperm. It's light out now.

Noise: Zzzzzz

Rose (thinking) Will somebody turn out the light.

Panel 2: Dixie's upper torso. Her breasts also shaking. Also crusted in sperm. One eye is blinking open and one is crusted shut.

Panel 3: View from Rose's perspective of a man cupping her knees and thrusting forwards, sperm coming out of their crotches. The sun is visible behind him, low on the horizon.

Panel 4: View from Dixie's perspective of a man jacking sperm out of his cock just above her blonde pubes. Amir is over his shoulder looking at her.

Amir: “Hurry and clean up.”

Page 19   2 horizontal panels

Panel 1: View behind the girls. They are thigh deep in water. Rose is squatting rubbing an arm. Dixie is bent down picking sand up. Her pussy is dripping sperm. Beyond them the men are leaving on their bikes.

Noise: Vroom vroom vroom

Rose: “It won't come off.”

Dixie: “Try scrubbing with sand.”

Panel 2: Front of the girls standing. They are scrubbing their bodies clean with sand.

Rose: “So much sperm.”

Dixie: “There were more then 20 of them and I think each fucked us twice.”

Amir (off panel): “Hurry, we got to be in Miami soon.”

Page 20  horizontal top, 2 square bottoms

Panel 1: Side view of Rose in her spade bikini behind Shawn with Dixie behind Amir visible beyond them. Both girls are laying their heads against the men's back's trying not to sleep.

Rose (thinking): So tired!

Dixie (thinking): Gotta stay awake.

Panel 2: Distant view of the bikes pulling up to the condo.

Rose (thinking) Thank god!

Amir: “I'll let them in, keep the bikes' running.”

Panel 3: Rose and Dixie, so tired they're leaning against each other, helping to pull their bikinis off each other just in the door of the condo. Maybe a window shows the motorcycles riding away with vroom by them.

Voice (off panel) Where have you been?”

Voice (off panel) You look exhausted. Fucking Amir!”

Page 21   3 horizontal panels

Panel 1: Living room scene near bottom of the stairs. Gage is standing near the two nude girls. His pants are tenting out.

Gage: “Damn! Got a stiffy that won't go down and you two been fucked raw.”

Gage: “Fucking Amir!”

Panel 2: Gage ascending the stairs carrying Rose in his arms. She looks half asleep.

Gage: “What happened?”

Rose: “Can't remember, only motorcycles and black cats.”

Gage: “Damn! The Black Panthers. There's 23 members of that gang.”

Panel 3: Mark carrying Dixie the same way.

Mark: “You took them all on?”

Dixie: “Yes, rule one, our bodies belong to the black man.”

Page 22  Horizontal top and bottom with 2 squares in the middle

Panel 1:  Amir and Deshawn's room. The men are setting the girls down on the beds or tucking them in.

Rose: “And they were scary thugs.”

Dixie: “All ex-convicts.”

Mark: “Bullshit! Stan's a high school principal. The others are all Miami city employees.”

Gage: “They only pretend they're tough.”

Panel  2: Close up of Dixie's head on a pillow, eyes closed asleep. Zzzzz maybe by her mouth.

Panel 3: Same image only Rose.

Panel 4: Gage standing over a sleeping Rose. He's waking her.

Gage: “Wake up. I made you dinner.”

Page 23   square top and bottom on left, vertical panel on right.

Panel 1: The girls nude seated at the table eating while Mark sets a plate in front of them.

Dixe: “Can't believe we slept all day.”

Mark: “Work was boring without you two today.”

Panel 2: Close up of Rose and Dixie at the table.

Mark (off panel): “As soon as you're done, get cleaned up, hair nails, shave, the whole shebang.

Dixie: “Sure, but we're still sore from...”

Gage (off panel): Do as you are told sluts.”

Panel 3: The girls under the shower. Dixie's front is pressed against Rose's back and Dixie is washing Rose's hair.

Rose: “I hope we can handle whatever they got planned.”

Dixie: “We've handled a lot this week.”

Page 24   horizontal top, 2 square bottoms.

Panel 1: The girls standing before a big mirror curling their hair, putting eyeliner, and lipstick on etc. There's faint spade tan lines around their nipples.
Note: Dixie's using red lipstick and dark eyeliner. Rose is green eye shadow, nails, etc.

Rose: “Look we have spade tan lines.”

Panel 2: The two girls looking great still by the mirror, Gage has opened the door and is talking.

Gage: “Go to my room and get on the bed.”

Panel 3: Dixie and Rose standing by the bed looking down at it. It's covered in plastic.

Dixie: “What the fuck?”

Rose: “They're planning on killing us.”

Page 25   2 horizontal panels

Panel 1: The girls lying side by side on the plastic. They look nervous. Gage is standing in the doorway with shadowy figures behind him.

Dixie: “Sounds like a lot of people downstairs.”

Rose: “Oh God! I can't take another gangbang.”

Panel 2: View from girl's perspective, nude black men are streaming through the door and filling the room. The men can be anyone from the series except the motorcycle gang plus new characters, one old and one overweight.

Page 26   2 horizontal panels.

Panel 1: View down of Gage's erect cock. He's squeezing lube along the shaft. His cock is pointed at Rose and Dixie is leaning towards her ear.

Gage (off panel): “We're not here to gangbang you, we're going to baptize you.”

Dixie (whisper): “They're going to jerk off on us.”

Panel 2: View from girl's perspective of the bed surrounded by Black men, most pulling their cocks to full erection. Gage is standing by Rose, stroking his cock. Mark is by Dixie. The room is crowded with familiar faces in the front, Robert, Marley, Sammy, etc, and strangers over their shoulders.

The men are saying things like: “Dayumn!”  “Dese bitches are fine” “Nigga gonna tap dat shit.”

Gage: “No, they are off limits tonight.”

Page 27    2 vertical panels that connect to form one pinup with the bed in the middle.

Panel 1: Rose's upper torso looking left at Gage jerking off near her face.

Gage: “As the first black man to enter this woman, I demand the right of first baptism.”

Voices off panel: “Granted!”   Some of the granted may come together and even connect with the second panel.

Panel 2: Mirror image only Dixie is looking right while Mark jerks off near her face.

Mark: “As the first real man to enter this woman, I demand right of first baptism.”

Voices off panel: “Granted!”

Page 28    2 square top and horizontal bottom

Panel 1: Rose's face, mouth open and tongue out. The tip of Gage's cock is blowing a wad into her mouth. Other wads already cover her face and nose.

Gage (off panel): “I baptize you a slut for black cock.”

Noise: Splooge!

Panel 2: Mirror image similar to the last two panels. Dixie is looking right while Mark's cock explodes all over her.

Mark (off panel): “I baptize you a slut for nigger cock.”

Noise: “Splorf!

Panel 3: Both nude women lying side by side, faces dripping. One maybe licking sperm around her lips. Erect black cocks of various shades, lengths, widths, cut, and uncut surround them with men jerking off. A few might be squirting.

Noises: Stroke stroke stroke.

Page 29  2 vertical rectangles top and two square bottoms.

Panel 1: View up Rose's body. A man off panel is holding her ankle up. His hand is visible holding her ankle and another hand holding the base of his cock. It is bent down aimed at her labia and ejaculating on her pussy. On the side of the bed is a fat man with an enormous cock sticking out under his gut shooting his load across her breasts. Her hand is on the cock of another man aiming and taking his load in her face. Her mouth is open, tongue out.

Noises around cocks: splooge!

Panel 2: Same angled shot of Dixie. Her feet dominate the lower half. A man's hands are holding her ankles and using her feet to jerk his cock off. Motion lines can show movement. It's squirting up to her belly. Dixie is jerking off the  large cock with white pubes of a stooped over old black man. It is cumming on her breasts.

Dixie: “Let me give you a hand old timer.”

Panel 3: Rose's upper torso, covered in sperm. Her head is turned sucking the tip of Robert's cock. Her cheeks are bulging and sperm is shooting out around her lips. Her eyes are closed with sperm on them.

Rose (thinking): Tastes like Robert.

Panel 4: Close up of Dixie's breasts and belly with sperm everywhere. Jamon's cock is filling her belly with a pool of sperm and the confederate flag pin is disappearing.

Jamon: “Ja mon, I drown dat racist shit wit my black seed.”

Page 30  2 panels, split top and bottom

Panel 1: Side view of the bed from Dixie's side. Gage and Amir are standing on the other side.

Gage: “Thou art baptized. We welcome two new slut for black cock.”

Group off panel: “WELCOME SLUTS!”

Rose (meekly): “thank you.”

Dixie: “Yes, thank you.”

Panel 2: Gage, Jamon, and Amir's upper bodies grinning evily. There may be shadow heads behind them to show the group.

Gage: “Since this is the first time we baptized two women, I motion that they lick the seed of the superior black man off each other.”

Jamon: “I second dat motion, mon.”

Amir: “As do I.”

Page 31: vertical left panel  top and bottom square on right

Panel 1: Rose and Dixie laying on their sides, kissing. Rose is pinching one of Dixie's nipples and Dixie is fingering Rose. They are covered in sperm.

Gage (off panel): “Motion passed. Start licking sluts.”

Man (off panel): “Dayumn!”

Panel 2: Dixie licking sperm around Rose's erect nipple.

Panel 3: Rose slurping up the sperm on Dixie's belly with the pin more visible.

Noise: Slurp!

Page 32:  horizontal top and 2 square bottom.

Panel 1: Side view of Rose on top of Dixie 69ing. Rose is licking sperm off Dixie's pelvic mound.
Dixie's head is going to town in Rose's pussy.

Noise Dixie: munch munch munch

Noise Rose: lick!

Panel 2: Close up of Rose's head above Dixie's pelvic mound. The old man with gray pubes cock is rampant and Rose is licking the head.

Panel 3: Rose guiding the old man's cock into Dixie's pussy.
Old man (off panel): “I need to tap this pussy.”

Page 33:   horizontal top and two square bottoms.

Panel 1: View down the bed from Dixie's head. Her tongue is in Rose's anus. Rising above Rose's hair is the old man fucking Dixie. Amir is standing beside him and one of Rose's hands is stroking his cock.
The cocks and hands of other men might be near by jerking off again.

Amir: “How ya likin dat pussy, pop?”

Old man: “This is some fine fuckin white pussy, son.”

Panel 2: The old man's cock shooting a stream of sperm into Rose's mouth. Sperm is gushing out of Dixie's pussy under them.

Panel 3: Rose's face now lapping fresh sperm from Dixie.

Noise: lap lap lap

Page 34:  2 square top and horizontal bottom

Panel 1: Rose's head sucking Dixie's clit between her lips. Dixie's pussy is more upturned now and a black cock is poised to enter her ass.

Panel 2: Rose's ass. Now on her knees no longer straddling Dixie. A man's hands are on her hips pulling her off Dixie. His cock is erect. Dixie's head is facing the viewer and a black cock being stroked is cumming into her open mouth.

Panel 3: Side view of the bed from Dixie's side showing a man doing her ass and another man kneeling on the bed doing Rose on all fours. Rose has a cock in her mouth too.

Page 35   pinup

Panel 1: God view down. Rose's back on all fours getting fucked from behind while she suck a man in front of her. Beside that man is the man pushing Dixie's thighs back and fucking her ass. Dixie's head is turned sucking another man. A hand stroking a cock is cumming across the small of Rose's back while another hand stroking a cock is cumming on Dixie's breasts.

Page 36  2 square tops with a horizontal bottom.

Panel 1: Rose's face, eyes closed as a man cums in her ear from the side and the cock she's been sucking cums in her face.

Rose (thinking) Yikes! My ear!

Panel 2: Dixie's lower half, her ass is gaping and trickling sperm while the man's cock shoots more sperm up her mound and over her belly. Another cock is making another pool of sperm on her belly drowning her pin.

Panel 3: Side view of Gage standing over Rose now laying on her back still facing opposite from Dixie. Dixie is rubbing sperm into her breasts and maybe lifting one breast up to lick her own nipple. Gage is holding their spade bikinis.

Gage: “That's enough boys.”

Rose: “God, we're a mess.”

Gage: “Normally we only do one woman. Siobhan looked like she'd taken a bath in white pudding.”

Gage: Meet us outside with the tarp. Try not to get too much sperm on the carpet.

Page 37:  horizontal top and 2 square bottoms

Panel 1: Rose and Dixie outside in the spade bikinis. They are holding the tarp between them. Jamon is hosing off the tarp. There is another condo visible beyond them with some shadowy people in a screened in porch.

Voice from neighbor's house: “What's going on next door?”

Panel 2: Close up of Rose holding the tarp getting sprayed with the hose.

Jamon (off panel): When you leaving tomorrow?”

Rose: “Early.”

Panel 3: Jamon holding the hose with one hand and grasping his crotch with another. The neighbor's porch is visible behind him.

Jamon: “If this hose ain't good enough, I got a bigger one right here.”

Neighbors: “Get the kids inside, now!”

Page 38  4 square

Panel 1: Rose and Dixie in the house. They are wet. They are taking their tops off.

Voice (off panel): “Bikinis off girls. Rules are still in effect.”

Dixie: “Lets get a shower.”

Panel 2: Both women in the shower. Dixie is squeezing Rose's breasts. They are close enough their nipples are touching.

Dixie: “I'm glad this weekend happened Rosie.”

Rose: “Me too, Dix.”

Panel 3: The girls under the shower, embracing and kissing passionately.
Panel 4: Rose's front with Dixie behind her. Dixie is running a soapy sponge on Rose's belly with one hand and squeezing her nipple with another. She is leaning down and kissing Rose's neck. Rose's hand are up and she is washing her soapy hair.

Dixie: “What are you doing after this?”

Rose: “I think I'll pay Gage a visit.”

Page 39  horizontal top 2 square bottoms

Panel 1: Gage nude on his back on a weight bench lifting a weight. Rose is approaching him.

Gage: “S'up girl?”

Panel 2: View from Gage's perspective. His hands are on the weight bar and under the bar is Rose sucking half his cock.

Gage: “You come a long way, girl.”

Gage: “Lets move to the bed.”

Panel 3: Side view of Rose mounted on Gage while he squeezes her breasts.

Rose: “OH GOD! I love your cock!”

Rose: “I love it! I love you! I LOVE YOU! Why can''t Jake be like you?”

Gage: “You gonna marry him?”

Rose: “Not sure. I love him, but he will never satisfy me.”

Page 40  large top panel and 2 square bottoms

Panel 1: View from Gage's perspective of Rose riding him. His hands are squeezing her breasts.

Gage: “Tell him you're a whore for nigger cock. He might like it.”

Rose: “Shut up, Gage.”

Gage: “Tell him your pussy's built for big nigger cock.”

Rose: “Stop it.”

Gage: Tell him you like swallowing nigger cum.”

Rose: “NO!”

Gage: “Any you  like nigger cock in your ass.”

Rose: “YYEESS!! I want all those things. I'm a WHORE! Give me your nigger cumMMINNGG!”

Panel 2: Dixie kneeling before Mark. She's got cum dripping from her chin and Mark's spent cock is dripping more.

Dixie: “I love your black cock, Mark, but I love two even more.”

Dixie: “Come with me.”

Panel 3: Jamon laying in bed holding his hard cock up. Dixie is coming towards him, leading Mark by his cock.

Jamon: “About time.”

Page 41: 2 horizontal panels

Panel 1: Dixie on all fours sucking Jamon while Mark fucks her from behind.

Noise: fuk fuk fuk

Noise: suk suk suk

Panel 2: Dixie riding Jamon while Mark is fucking her ass. X'rays show both men cumming.

Dixie: “CUMMING!”

Page 42:  2 square top and horizontal bottom

Panel 1: Nude Rose laying on a bed asleep. Her legs may be parted with sperm leaking out. She has dried sperm elsewhere. Dixie is leaning over her shaking her arm.

Dixie: “Wakey wakey, Rosie.”

Rose: “Wha...?”

Dixie: “It's morning, we got to get going.”

Panel 2: Rose in the shower. Dixie is before the mirror in her confederate bikini applying make up.

Panel 3: Full shot of living room and kitchen. Gage is eating cereal in the kitchen. Mark is seated on the couch. The girls are dressed in the outfits they wore when they first arrived. Rose in a sundress and Dixie in a tank top and cut off jean shorts. They are picking up their spade bikinis.

Gage: “Keep the bikinis. Bring them next time ya visit.”

Dixie: “Thanks, I'd like to make this a yearly thing.”

Rose: “Me too.”

Mark: “C'mere. We got you a going away present.”

Page 43  horizontal top, large rectangle bottom left and smaller on the right.

Panel 1: View from older the shoulder of both men seated in the couch. Dixie is before Mark and Rose before Gage. Dixie is taking out her confederate flag pin. Rose is holding her dress up.

Mark: “Hold the dress up and take your pins out.”

Dixie: “Mines gold.”

Rose: “And mines a diamond. Jake bought it for me.”

Gage: “Good, it'll help cover your rent when I hock them at the pawn shop.”

Mark: “Tell them you're sluts for niggers. I don't care.”

Panel 2: Close up of both girls stomachs. Black hands are putting their new pins in.

Panel 3: Close up of one navel with a new pin. The spade with a Q in it.

Page 44   horizontal top and 2 square bottoms

Panel 1: Outside the girls are leaning on their jeep. Mark is holding Dixie and gazing at her. Gage and Rose are kissing.

Mark: “When ya gets the itch, just show those pins to any black man and they'll give you what you need.”

Panel 2: The girls seated in the jeep. Dixie at the wheel. The men are waving behind them.

Mark: “Anytime you want to visit.”

Gage: “Can't guarantee you much sleep though.”

Panel 3: Elevated view of the jeep driving down the overseas highway.

Rose: “God, what do I tell Jake?”

Dixie: “Get married and find something on the side. I already have some ideas.”

Rose: “I don't want to cheat.”

Dixie: “What about vacation?”

Rose: “Vacations won't count, long weekends either.”

Rose and Dixie: Ha ha ha ha...

Page 45:

Panel 1: Side view of the jeep. A passing car with some young guys in it is honking at them.

Rose: So much cock this week, yet I'm horny. I think I got that itch they were talking about.”

Dixie: “Me too! You know what might help? A dildo. A big black dildo.”

Rose: “That place in Miami. The BBC LOVERS BOUTIQUE. I bet they have dildos.”

Panel 2: Rear end view or side view of the jeep. A green road sign is on the right. It reads
MIAMI
30 miles

Dixie: “I'm going to buy two. You know what else Miami has?”

Rose: “What?”

Dixie: “Black men... lots and lots of black men.”

Rose: “I bet Jake would let me stay another weekend.”

Dixie: “Miami here we come!”

THE END
                                                                                                                                               

This week...

Kaos was on the ball again with another Gardeners 2 update. If you're following the script, she's on about page 12.

I expect to finish the Flag Girls comic script this week. Then I'll begin the next segment of Curse 3. I also got a little side tracked with a story idea I had and spent some time working on it.