2) Didn't get much writing done this week. I'm on vacation next week and only going away for an overnight so I hope to finish the BC2 comic script.
3) I had an idea I want to run by Kaos based on the fact that turning many of my stories into comics makes a huge comic or even my current script for BC2 is large. I loved her Flag Girls, but it took a long time to finish Part 1. The idea is for a 32 page comic. They would be posted between longer comics. At 8 pages a day, that would mean the entire story is finished in 4 weeks. I sketched out some ideas and wrote synopsis for two of them as well as the images I want on the 32 pages. It was surprisingly easy. Turning them into comic pages will be a little harder, but not too bad. I'm not going to send them to her to see what she thinks until I'm done the two samples. Here they are if you want to see them.
The Taxi Driver’s Tip
Characters:
Leonard: Good looking white man. He’s in a tux and very
drunk.
Penny: Gorgeous buxom blonde. She’s wearing a little black
dress that shows a lot of boob. She’s wearing heels.
Djimon Kerekou: Taxi driver from Benin. I’m thinking ugly,
white haired and out of shape with bad teeth (like the homeless man from Dr
Bitch).
Synopsis: The white couple is drunk and leaving a crowded
club following a wedding. Maybe they comment that there were too many blacks at
the club. They wave down a taxi and are picked up by Djimon. Leonard passes out
in the back seat. Penny reads the driver’s ID badge and sees his name, age 65,
and that he’s African. She realizes that they don’t have any money on them and
asks the driver if he would take a credit card or a check, but that she’d need
to get it from her room. Djimon is ogling her boobs and gets angry threatening
to drive them to the police. He pulls over and asks for a blow job. She’s
horrified, but he tells her that she can spend the night in jail or blow him.
She might have some marijuana in her purse and fear getting arrested.
Disgusted, she agrees. He pulls over off the road and she kneels outside the
cab with her dress pulled down while he leans against it. She’s shocked by his
cock size. He holds her head so that she swallows his cum and is surprised she
likes the taste. At the hotel, Djimon helps her carry Leonard into the room. He
drops the drunk husband on the couch and starts stripping Penny. She fights a
little and he says that the blow job was just his tip, now he wants to get paid
for the cab ride. They have sex on the bed in multiple positions with Djimon
failing to pull out each time he cums. He breaks in her ass then goes to
shower. She joins him, lovingly kissing him and kneeling to blow him one last
time.
1)
Leaving club, waving down a taxi.
2)
Back seat of the cab
3)
Hubby passes out. Wife realizes no money.
4)
Drivers id badge, she’s thinking yech.
5)
She’s leaning over asking check or cc he says
no, cash only.
6)
He’s yelling, stop cop drunk and stealing a
ride. She’s crying.
7)
He pulls over homeless and druggies around.
Gimme a bj
8)
She’s disgusted, hubby wont wake. He opens door
abandon them both. She agrees
9)
She’s kneeling disgusted.
10)
Cock popping up over yellow stained inderwear.
11)
Sucking half fondling balls
12)
He pulls dress straps down while she deep
throats it.
13)
Her cheeks are bulging over bared breasts.
14)
Her licking her lips in back seat.
15)
Hotel. Asks him to help carry drunk husband.
16)
Deposits hubby on couch, grabs wife pulls out
tits again
17)
He’s stripping that was my tip, this is payment
for the cab ride
18)
Him entering her shes wet
19)
Fucking her hard, shes cumming.
20)
Him squirting all over her.
21)
Her messy and lowering herself over him.
22)
Bouncing in his lap. He’s cumming agin
23)
One more in me. On all fours shes cumming
24)
Him pulled out raising to anus
25)
Stretching out anus
26)
Fucking her ass she loves it
27)
Cumming over ass and back anus stretched and
leaking
28)
He goes to shower
29)
She joins him
30)
Hugging and kissing under shower
31)
Shes kneeling blowing him
32)
Face coated, cock spent. Says she’ll need a ride
to get their car in the morning.
Hot Tub Hot Wife
Copyright 2017 by Stormbringer
Characters:
Eric Jones: Average looking white male, early twenties.
Brown hair, parted in the middle. Average to smallish penis.
Carla Jones: Eric’s wife. Stunning blonde with huge breasts
and a killer body.
Kaleem Payne: Standard hung muscular stud. He is bald with a
goatee or he can have any appearance.
Jade Payne: His wife. Stunning with a killer body and ass.
Synopsis: Eric and
Carla, young newlyweds on their honeymoon, are making out in a hot tub in a
private deck equipped with a tiki bar when a black woman from the adjoining
bungalow asks to join them. She drops her robe revealing her naked body to the
young couple’s surprise. She apologizes saying that she assumed the couple was
naked too. Carla wants to go, but Eric says just a little longer. He fantasizes
of a threesome with both women. He pulls his shorts off underwater, but Carla
won’t remove her bikini. Kaleem shows up to Eric’s surprise and drops his robe.
Carla stares in awe at his giant black cock as he slips into the water. Jade
kisses him and fondles his cock underwater. The white couple get uncomfortable
and start to leave, but Jade says one more drink and gets Kaleem to make them.
He stands showing his cock is now mostly hard. When he returns, Jade has him
stand in the water with his cock sticking out. She comments that Carla clearly
hasn’t seen a black man’s cock before. She asks Carla if she wants to touch it.
Carla does to Eric’s objection, but she does anyway. Jade tells Carla to thank
her husband for letting her touch his cock. Jade fondles Eric under the water
and he gets hard. Jade tells Carla to show her respect for the cock by kissing
it. Eric says no and Jade leans forward and plants a kiss on the head and tells
Carla to do the same. Eric stands and says it’s time to go. Jade puts Carla’s
other hand on her husband’s cock and tells her to kiss the superior cock. She
kisses the black man. Jade says again, again, now lick it turning into a blow
job. Eric asks if Jade would blow him, but she doesn’t suck white boys, their
seed is so runny and weak. But there is one thing little white boy dicks are
good for, anal sex while reaching over and untying her bikini top. Carla gulps
down a load of Kaleem’s seed. Jade asks her if it was good and Carla nods
loving it. Jade tells her to thank Kaleem and she does. Kaleem is still hard
and she tells Karla to sit down on the edge of the hot tub while Jade unties
her panties. Now it’s time for my husband to fuck you. Eric objects, but she
pulls him towards the black man and makes Eric hold his penis. She belittles
him and has him guide Kaleem’s cock to his wife’s pussy making him ask Kaleem
to fuck his wife. Jade lets Eric do her ass while they watch Kaleem give Carla
multiple orgasms. Afterwards, Jade makes them both thank her husband and tells
Eric that they are leaving in the morning and Carla will be staying with them
that evening. He watches through a window while Kaleem pleases both women
1)
White couple making out in hot tub.
2)
Black woman in robe asking to join
3)
Black woman robe open nude
4)
The three in tub talking married for a day hubby
fantasizing threesome from later scene
5)
Hubby pulls off shorts but wife wint take off
bikini
6)
Black man in robe
7)
Black man nude slipping into tub while wife
introduces
8)
Black couple making out wifes hand clearly in
his lap white offer to leave
9)
Jade says one more drink, hubby will get it. His
cock head is rising above water
10)
Kaleem stands cock sticking straight in white’s
face
11)
He returns with drinks. Jade fondles eric
underwater has kaleem stand
12)
Carla touches it comments on powerful jade tells
her to thank kaleem
13)
Jade kisses the head telling karla to do the
same to show repsect
14)
Eric standing stopping his wife. His cock is
pathetic
15)
Jade has Karla touch both penises and to kiss
the superior cock
16)
Karla kisses kaleems head
17)
Jade says kiss it again now lick it, suck it.
18)
Karla sucking kaleem eric asks jade she insults
his weak seed.
19)
Jade untying karlas top telling eric white boy
dicks are good for anal
20)
Karla gulping down cum jade asks if it was good
mmmm hmmm
21)
Karla sitting on rim. Jade untying panty telling
her to thank kaleem for his seed
22)
Karla laying back. Jade saying kaleem will fuck
her putting erics hand on kaleem while he objects
23)
Eric guiding kaleem into wife while jade makes
him ask kaleem to fuck her
24)
God view of karla screaming in pleasure
25)
Jades ass spread for eric
26)
Foursome fucking karla now doggy
27)
Erics spent dripping cock over jades anus while
karla rides kaleem now screaming she loves him
28)
Xray kaleem cumming in her
29)
Karla embracing kaleem jade hugging her eric
looking dejected. Back in morning
30)
Women 69ing
31)
Kaleem fucking karla on jade.
32)
Eric stroking spent penis while watching kaleem
with both women in arms grabbing cock. Thinking how hot his wife looks with
black men.